甘肃高考英语写作分类训练：建议信

这是一份甘肃高考英语写作分类训练：建议信，共15页。试卷主要包含了第三节 书面表达，书面表达等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信1．进入高考复习紧张阶段，为帮助学生健康成长，学校英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑李华，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日由于压力很大，经常发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由：向朋友倾诉，加强户外运动，保持积极心态等。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。Hi, Worried,I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua2．某小学组织家长开会，建议一年级小学生统一购买价值4,000多元的苹果平板电脑iPad， 以帮助学生上“读写”课。此事经媒体披露后，引起人们的关注和热议。你认为一年级学生该不该用iPad上课？请写一篇英语短文，表明你的态度并陈述原因。注意：词数100左右。3．第三节 书面表达下表对比了中国和美国的中学生在寒假期间主要活动，请你根据表格所提供的信息，给某英文报纸写一篇文章，并就中国学生应该如何度过有意义的假期提出合理建议。中国中学生 完成假期作业、看电视、上网等 美国中学生 读书、参加社区活动、参加比赛等 给中国学生的合理建议：1．科学安排假期时间，多读书2．多接触大自然，多外出参观注意：字数在100字左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．进入高考复习紧张阶段，为帮助中学生健康成长，学校英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART“专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Mike，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日由于压力很大，经常发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。要点：1．表示理解并给予安慰；2．提出建议并说明理由：向朋友倾诉，加强户外运动，保持积极心态等。注意：1．词数100左右；2．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：lose one’s temper 发脾气Hi, Worried,I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mike5．众所周知，课堂是每个学生实现梦想的地方，然而，有一部分同学并没有很好地利用它。请以How should we make good use of classes?为题，写一篇文章，应包含以下要点：1简要说明课堂的意义；2目前课堂中存在的主要问题；3分析原因并提出建议。注意：1. 可根据内容需要适当拓展，以使行文连贯；2. 词数100左右。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。写作要点：1．简述过度使用耳机的现象；2．分析过度使用耳机的危害；（至少两点）3．提出你的建议。(至少两条)注意：1．要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；2．字数120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3．可能用到的词汇：过度使用耳机overuse earphone; 注意力不集中less concentration; 记忆力减退bad memoryDear Li Ping,I received your letter yesterday_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.Lin Tao7．书面表达假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数)，但不得抄入答题卡内 。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear William，Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.Li Hua8．假设你叫李华，你的朋友沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 表示理解和关心；2. 提出具体建议。3. 表达希望。要求：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.格式与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear John,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua9．书面表达假如你是李明，你跟你的朋友Paul聊天，他表示学习压力(stress)很大，请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。【写作内容】1． 将自己的问题告诉老师和同学，请求得到他们的帮助。2． 不要总关心考试成绩，要多寻找自己在的优点与进步（progress）， 这样做是非常值得的。3． 多参加体育锻炼，运动不仅可以帮助自己缓解压力，而且有助于睡眠。4． 你对他的祝福。【写作要求】信的开头和结尾已给出，要求句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。Dear Paul,I feel sorry for you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely,Li Ming10．书面表达高一第一学期马上就结束了，但是很多学生还没有适应高中生活。假定你是李华，请根据下面提示，写一篇关于“如何更好地适应高中生活”的短文。1.合理分配学习、锻炼和休息的时间；2.处理好与老师和同学之间的关系；3.积极参加学校各种活动。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当怎加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。Here are some suggestions for you, which I hope may help you enjoy your school life better. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________            1．Hi Worried:I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Li Hua【详解】考查应用文写作。本文属于应用文中的书信，要求你以Jamie的名义给署名为worried的同学回信。要点如下：1.得知对方最近情况不好，表示同情，并给予安慰。2.提出个人建议：和自己信任的人交流，倾述自己的情感。或到户外去和朋友参加各种活动，保持对生活的乐观态度，因为乐观的态度对去除消极情绪是有很大帮助的。3.希望对方能尽快好转。2．Recently a primary school organized parents to have a meeting where the teacher recommended they should buy the iPad for their first-grade students in order to help students to take reading and writing courses. The issue has caused public concern and heated argument in China.As far as I am concerned, it is not wise for parents to equip the first graders with the iPad that is worth more than 4,000 yuan. Here are my reasons. First, it is not necessary for parents to buy computers of the same brand. Second, the computers are too expensive for young children. Third, it is bad for children’s eyes to read a lot on computers. As is known to all, it is better for children to read more printed books.【详解】试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语in order to为了；As far as I am concerned,就我而言；be good for 以。。有好处；Recently a primary school organized parents to have a meeting where the teacher recommended they should buy the iPad for their first-grade students in order to help students to take reading and writing courses这个句子中运用recommend当动词推荐，建议讲时，宾语从句用should +动词原形；First, it is not necessary for parents to buy computers of the same brand这个句子运用it be adj for sb to do 这个句型，it做形式宾语，真正的宾语是后面的不定式；As is known to all, it is better for children to read more printed books.这个句子as引导非限制性定语从句；3．One possible version:In winter/summer holidays, students enjoy various activities. But in different countries students are involved in different things. Middle school students in China usually spend some time on the homework assigned by teachers. Then they prefer to watch TV, or surf the Internet. As for the students in America, reading takes up a considerate amount of time n holidays, Besides, they will take an active part in community service or different matches.In my opinion, students in China should make better use of their holidays. Apart form reading, they may spare more time to get close to nature and learn through experience, for example, visiting museums. In this way, the holidays will be more attractive and meaningful.【详解】4．Hi Worried,I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends, as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Mike【详解】试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，采用三段式，文章格式正确，内容齐全，布局合理，使用高级句子。The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much.when引导的定语从句和so引导的并列句完美结合；The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret.动词不定式作表语，目的状语从句和定语从句巧妙使用；go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.使用原因状语从句；I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.宾语从句用在句中。考点：考查提纲类作文5．As we all know, class is a place where students ought to work hard to realize their dreams. However, there are some students not using class properly, making things go from bad to worse. For example, some students play mobile phones or sleep in class, wasting quantities of precious time. What's worse, some students enjoy chatting with others. Not only does it affect their own study, but also it will do harm to others.As far as I am concerned, the main reason is that they don't realize the importance of study. To solve this problem, they have to understand making full use of class is the best way to improve the efficiency of study. After all, time waits for no man.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。请考生以How should we make good use of classes?为题，写一篇文章，应包含以下要点：1简要说明课堂的意义；2目前课堂中存在的主要问题；3分析原因并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累实现：achieve→realize 例如：For instance →For example影响：influence→affect解决：handle→solve2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： For example, some students play mobile phones or sleep in class, wasting quantities of precious time. 拓展句：For example, some students play mobile phones or sleep in class, which wastes quantities of precious time. 【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, class is a place where students ought to work hard to realize their dreams这个句子运用where引导的非限制性定语从句；[高分句型2] Not only does it affect their own study, but also it will do harm to others这个句子运用到部分倒装。6．Dear Li Ping,I received your letter yesterday. Nowadays many students listen to music and learn English with earphones.As for your trouble with ears and bad memory, I’m afraid you spend too much time listening with earphones. In fact, listening to music while doing your lessons may result in less concentration on your study. Besides, the overuse of earphones does harm to your hearing.There are many ways we can enjoy music and learn English. For instance, a recorder or a radio may be a good choice. However, if you do need to use an earphone, you should rest your ears for at least ten minutes every hour but do not use it more than 2 hours a day. I hope things will get better soon.Best wishes.Lin Tao【详解】试题分析：现在，很多中学生每天长时间用耳机听音乐、学英语。你的英语笔友李平也是如此。最近他在来信中提到感觉头痛、注意力不集中、记忆力减退。请你就此回信谈谈你的观点和建议。写作要点：1．简述过度使用耳机的现象；2．分析过度使用耳机的危害；（至少两点）3．提出你的建议。(至少两条)写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．要点齐全，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；2．字数120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【亮点说明】I have learned that you are looking for an English editor and I am interested in it.宾语从句和并列举的结合；I have a good command of both written and spoken English, so it will be easy work for me to deal with all kinds of English papers.句中运用了so引导的并列句；Besides, I have good computer skills, which plays an important role in editing.非限制性定语从句在句中出现；I am sure you will have a good time working with me.宾语从句和固定句式完美结合；All in all, I believe I am the right person for the job.固定词组和宾语从句巧妙结合；I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。考点：考查话题作文7．Dear William，Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good kind to offer you some advice on  how to study effectively.First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome difficulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.I hope all these can benefit you.Best wishes!Li Hua【详解】本文是一篇建议类的信件文章，讲述的是李华给自己的朋友关于如何放松自己来促进学习的内容。全文结构鲜明，并且用词新颖。文章分成以下几个部分。第一部分题目中给出，讲述了写这封信的目的。第二部分是讲述作者对朋友的一些提议。第三部分送上了作者自己美好的祝愿。文章用大量的两次以及句型将文章层层链接，不显得松散而枯燥，并且在中间部分紧扣题目所给的要点展开，避免了偏题的现象，同时字数控制也是得当，值得我们同学加以学习并运用。8．Dear John,I’m sorry to here that you’re suffering from WeChat addiction. I really understand how you feel and I’d like to offer you some useful advice that I think will benefit you.First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc, which will take your mind off WeChat. Secondly, you’d better make more friends through face-to-face communication. They’ll assist you when you can’t resist the temptation of WeChat. Thirdly, it’s better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life and help you forget WeChat.I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible. Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给沉迷于微信的朋友写一封电子邮件，内容包括：表示理解和关心，提出具体建议，表达希望。【详解】1.词汇积累提供：offer→provide建议：advice→suggestion帮助：assist→helpful摆脱：get rid of = cast off2.句式拓展原句：I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible. 拓展句：I hope you can consider these ideas, which can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible.【点睛】[高分句型1] First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, or playing chess, etc, which will take your mind off WeChat. (运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] Thirdly, it’s better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life and help you forget WeChat. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句及not only...but also结构)9．Dear Paul,I feel sorry for you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from. First of all, I suggest that you should share your trouble with your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them. Secondly, you are not supposed to  care about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out. Instead, you should be in search of your advantages and progress in your study, which is well worthing. In addition, I advise you  to take part in more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress, because sports will also help you sleep better at night.I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【详解】试题分析：这是一篇建议信，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语suffer from遭受；share sth with sb 与某人分享某物；care about关心；Secondly, you are not supposed to  care about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out这个句子运用到be supposed to do 这个句型，还运用到which 引导非限制性定语从句；考点： 提纲类作文10．Here are some suggestions for you ,which may help you enjoy your school life better.As senior high school students, you will be living a very busy life. So first of all ，you should arrange your time properly .You’d better make a timetable so that you know when to study, exercise and rest. Only in this way can you make good use of every minute .Besides ,while in school，it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates .When you have a problem that you can’t work it out alone ,you’d better turn to your teachers or classmates for help .Of course you should lend a helping hand when necessary .Last but not least ,I advise you to take an active part in societies at school ,which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves.I hope the suggestions above will help you go through a rich and colorful school life .I’m sure that a beautiful future is waiting for you.【详解】试题分析：假如你是学生李华,请你用英语就如何更好地适应高中生活写一封建议信。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。【亮点说明】1.文章恰当使用了连词，如：first of all, Besides , Last but not least等，文章层次分明，有条理。2.文章使用了only引导的倒装句：Only in this way can you make good use of every minute ；so that引导的目的状语从句；You’d better make a timetable so that you know when to study, exercise and rest；which引导的非限定性定语从句；以及其它定语从句和状语从句。复合句的使用为文章增色添彩，亮点突出。3. 语言简练，固定短语运用恰当，如：you should lend a helping hand when necessary。考点：考查建议信类的作文写作