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    1.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize in no more than 60 words the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage. Use your own words as far as possible.
    Cities in the Sea
    They may be small, but they build big things! Coral polyps (珊瑚虫), which live in the warm, shallow parts of the Earth’s oceans, are probably the biggest builders on the planet. Coral polyps turn calcium from seawater into a hard material called limestone. Slowly, they build up a hard skeleton (骨架) around their bodies. When polyps die, their skeletons remain. Young polyps attach themselves to the old skeletons and make new skeletons. Over time, weird and wonderful shapes are slowly built up into amazing coral reefs (珊瑚礁).
    Scientists sometimes think of coral reefs as underwater cities. A quarter of all known marine species live in reef habitats―there are nearly a thousand coral species. Reefs are also home to millions of sea creatures, like fish, crabs, turtles, and sharks.
    Humans don’t live in coral reef cities, but we benefit from them. Reefs create jobs for people in the fishing industry and other related businesses. Coral reefs are also popular for divers一many countries benefit from the tourists that they attract. Lastly, chemicals from reef creatures help scientists create new medicines, which help doctors treat different illnesses.
    Coral reefs are very important, yet we don’t take good care of them. Environmental problems have already killed about twenty percent of the world’s reefs. About half of the remaining reefs are dying, and experts believe all of Earth’s coral reefs will be in danger by 2050.
    Why are the reefs in such trouble? For one thing, people catch too many reef fish and often damage the reefs—divers sometimes break off pieces of coral.
    Polluted water also causes problems because reef-destroying algae grows in dirty water. Even air pollution hurts coral reefs. Global warming causes warmer ocean water, which can cause polyps to lose helpful algae. Without that algae, coral turns white. This is called "bleaching”,and if it continues, the coral dies.
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    2.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main points of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own word as far as possible.
    Cooperative learning May Change Your Mind about Group Work
    Two heads are better than one. It means that two people working together have a better chance of solving a problem than one person alone. But not everyone likes working with others  ---especially when that means working in a group.
    There can be a number of reasons why people dislike group work. Some may feel nervous or uneasy in group situations. Others might have had a bad experience with individuals who did not work well as a team. Another criticism is that teachers or supervisors fail to assign roles to group members. This may create a situation where everyone or no one wants to lead. Whatever the issue, the result is the same: the group does not realize its goal.
    Cooperative learning is an educational method that can help to solve this problem. There are many methods of cooperative learning. One of them is to each person in a small group a specific duty to reach a shared goal. For example, if learners are divided into groups of four people each, their roles might be: leader, writer, checker and speaker. The “writer writes down important information from the task. They may also write down the ideas for the speaker to present This structure helps ensure everyone takes part equally in group work. lt also allows each member to play a meaningful part in completing the shared goal.
    Retired educator Michelle Manville has written several books about education and learning standards. Many of her books note that cooperative learning creates a supportive group structure and lessens the problem of competitiveness. Studies have also shown that cooperative learning improves learner achievement. This includes one study by American researcher Robert Slavin.
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    3.阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
    Nowadays, parents are very worried because their children spend hours and hours in front of the TV screen. As this doesn’t happen to only one specific kind of family, many experts warn us that they can be some serious effects on children watching violence on television.
    Children who become addicted to TV turn on the TV as soon as they get home. Although they have lots of homework, they become absorbed in TV programs. Since they spend tons of time watching TV, they have less time to enjoy real life activities, such as playing outdoor sports with friends, or enjoying other kinds of entertainment.
    There are too many violent things on TV, some experts say there are 25 acts of violence per hour on TV. In addition, there are many experiments by psychologists which show how TV violence influences children. Finally, people worry that children tend to imitate what they watch on TV and may start to behave more aggressively.
    What should be done? First of all, the government should regulate TV violence. It should also encourage people to invent and develop new technology which can block violent scenes from the programmes children watch. For example, with a rating system and the V-chip, inappropriate scenes of violence and sex can be blocked out.
    Second, parents should monitor what their children watch. At the same time they should interest their children in real life activities. Then when the children start to spend more time playing with friends or reading books, parents can stop their monitoring.
    It is a fact that there is more violence on TV today than there was ten years ago. Moreover, violent incidents occur more frequently. It’s time to realize how harmful watching TV violence is, and it’s time to save our children from violence.
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    4.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
    Selling your stuff online does not only help to declutter(清理) your home and get rid of things you don’t need, but it can also be a great source of income. Books you’re not planning on reading again taking up space on your shelf? Sell them online. Upgrading your phone? Find a local buyer on social media.Selling online comes with certain pitfalls too, though, and it pays to be diligent when you’re crossing the threshold(门槛) from customer to seller.
    One thing you need to consider carefully is the platform on which you are going to advertise. Most big players in the field are so popular with sellers, not just because they can give you access to a bigger pool of potential customers, but also because they offer insurance both to the seller and the buyer, which gives both buyers and sellers more confidence. The downside, however, is that you will generally need to pay an upfront fee(预付费) for using the platform, and may also have to sacrifice a cut of your profit to the company. What’s more, you need to build up a reputation before buyers can trust you-which means you might have to settle for lower prices until you have a high rating.
    You can use some platforms that either charge a smaller fee for advertising or even no fee at all-but, in that case, what you will need to keep in mind is your safety, especially if the value of the product you’re selling is high. Most prospective buyers will be genuine, but it’s always best to meet during the day at a public place such as a coffee shop, a library, or a supermarket parking lot-anywhere monitored by security cameras is good. Always keep the product close to you, and check that the money has been released into your account or-if you’re being paid by cash-that you have been given the full amount before relinquishing your items.
    A few more things to keep in mind: always be accurate with your descriptions of the items you are selling, especially if advertising on a big platform. The last thing you want is to be accused of fraud and banned from the website. Don’t give out your full name, either- keep your last name private. Identity theft might be rare in such transactions, but it’s always better to be careful.
    You might think many of these sound like common sense rules, and they are, but many first-time sellers naively forget to take precautions when selling their stuff online. At the end of the day, it’s up to you to decide the way in which you are comfortable with conducting business online-but remember that a smart, prepared seller is a happy seller.
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    5.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
    “Digital Hoarding” Could Be an Increasing Problem
    As data storage has become more accessible than ever, the amount of digital “stuff” we all have put aside is on the rise, too.
    In a recent paper published in the journal Information & Management, we have investigated a rising phenomenon called “digital hoarding”, which happens when an individual constantly acquires digital content, feels difficulty in getting rid of it, and gradually gets more and more digital content without an intended purpose.
    Digital hoarding can quickly increase out of control, too — perhaps even more quickly than in the physical world, due to several reasons. First, the digital hoarder is less likely to notice the space limitations in the digital world. While the boundaries of a physical space are clear, such boundaries are less noticeable in digital spaces. Second, hoarding of physical objects happens in fixed boundaries, while digital spaces are “expandable” — you can get additional digital storage with minimum effort at very little or zero cost. Third, to hoard physical items, a person needs to expend some effort, such as purchasing them. By contrast, most digital contents are either self-created, free, or available on a subscription (订阅) basis. Fourth, compared with physical stuff, digital contents can be multiplied, for example, by making copies, with very minimal effort.
    In the modern world, it is unavoidable that digital content plays an important role in our lives. Therefore, the potential of serious mental health impacts from digital hoarding is a real possibility.
    If you think you’re holding onto too much digital content, you can try cleaning your digital footprint, reducing unnecessary digital content, coming up with simple methods to organize your files, pictures and videos. What’s more, reassess the importance of many social networks, including groups in many communication apps, and keep only those essential to you.
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    6.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
    Why Camping Can Be So Much Fun?
    When you go on holiday, where do you like to stay? If you haven’t tried camping, maybe you should join the increasing number of people who are enjoying the simple pleasures of camping.
    By grabbing your tent, and some additional things, it’s easy to head off to the countryside and enjoy a night or two under the stars. Many campers are dumping the trappings of their modern, busy life to do this, encouraged by experts who say a few peaceful nights in the middle of nowhere might be a good way to relax and improve our sleep patterns and well-being. It is also, of course, a good low-budget holiday option.
    For the adventurous, wild camping is an ideal way to escape from reality. Armed with just some food and a sleeping bag, you’re free from rules, away from other people, and able to enjoy the back-to-basics experience. But for those who still want some home comforts, a campsite is a more suitable place to fix your tent. Here you have facilities such as washrooms, a shop and maybe even a restaurant. And for the most luxurious camping experience, you could try glamping, a type of camping associated with extreme comforts and luxury.
    More recently, sales of camping equipment have jumped as more people have chosen a vacation spent at hometown due to travel restrictions caused by the pandemic. One camping retailer, Halfords, reported a sharp rise in demand for products such as stoves, cool boxes and camping chairs. With the addition of soft pillows, powerful torches and lamps to light up your tent and a better selection of easy-to-cook food, you can almost guarantee a comfortable and enjoyable camping expedition. So maybe it’s time to give camping a try.
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    7.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
    The problem of electronic waste
    We have gradually come to realise that in two ways in particular, modern hi-tech can be bad for the planet. The first is its energy use; the worldwide scale of information technology is so enormous that electronics now produce fully two percent of global carbon emissions, which is about the same as the highly controversial emissions of aeroplanes. The other is the hardware, when it comes to the end of its natural life. This, increasingly, is pretty short. We have hardly noticed this important stream of waste, so much so that a Greenpeace report on the untraced and unreported e-waste two years ago referred to it as “the hidden flow”. We need to be aware of it.
    The latest United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP) report estimates that worldwide, electronic waste is mounting by about 40 million tons a year. So what can we do about it?
    The European Union has recognised the problem by adopting a key principle: producer responsibility. In other words, making it the duty of manufacturers of electronic goods to ensure their safe disposal at the end of their lives. In practice, an EU regulation now means that electronics dealers must either take back the equipment they sold you, or help to finance a network of drop-off points, such as public recycling sites. Its main feature is quite ambitious: it aims to deal with “everything with a plug”.
    The new UN report suggests that all countries could do something about the problem with a change in design. Groups such as Greenpeace have led the way in putting pressure on major manufacturing companies to find substitutes for the toxic chemicals inside their products. Encouragingly, they have had some success in forcing them to develop non-poisonous alternatives to these. This may be the real way forward.
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    8.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
    The music in you
    Any party goer can tap her heel to an unfamiliar song without realizing it. Yet when asked on site, she might reply: “Music? I don’t know anything about that.”
    Maybe you’ve heard a variation on this theme: “I don’t have a musical bone in my body.” Most of us make music publicly just a few times a year, when it’s someone’s birthday and the cake comes out. Privately, it’s a different story. We belt out tunes in the shower and create rhythm tracks on our steering wheel. But when we think about musical expertise, we tend to imagine professionals who specialize in performance, people we’d pay to hear. As for the rest of us, our bumbling private efforts, rather than illustrating that we share an irresistible urge to make music, seem only to demonstrate that we don’t enjoy essential musical capacity.
    But the more psychologists investigate musicality, the more it seems that nearly all of us are musical experts, in quite a surprising sense. A lot of the most interesting and substantial elements of musicality are things that we all share. We aren’t talking about instinctive, inborn universals here. Our musical knowledge is the product of long experience; maybe not years spent over an instrument, but a lifetime spent absorbing music from the open window of every passing car.
    In fact, for all its remarkable power, music is in good company. Many of our feelings are governed by a similar rule. We don’t know how we come to like certain food more than others. We don’t know why we fall in love. Yet in the very act of making these choices we reveal the effects of a host of instinctive mental processes. The fact that we respond to music so naturally and normally actually speaks to its strength and universality.
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    9.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize in no more than 60 words the main idea of the passage and how it is illustrated. Use your own words as far as possible.
    Advertising Objectives
    When developing a successful advertising campaign, marketers must first set an advertising objective. The objective is the purpose for the advertising campaign. There are four main advertising objectives—to inform, to persuade, to compare, or to remind.
    Companies use informative advertising to give information about a new type of product. In this case, the purpose is to increase demand for the new product. DVD players are a good example. The first sellers of these products had to tell consumers about the quality and convenience of the new product. Big sales soon followed.
    However, informative advertising doesn’t work so well when there are many companies with the same kind of product. This is because consumers already know the normal features of the product. Instead, they need to see how one company’s version is better than all the others. This kind of advertising is called persuasive advertising. For instance, when DVD players became common, Sony began trying to persuade customers that its brand has the best quality for their money to keep sales high.
    Comparative advertising also tries to persuade. Thus it is really a kind of persuasive advertising. In this, a company compares its brand with one or more other brands. Comparative advertising has been used for products from soft drinks to car rentals and credit cards. An example is Avis, a car rental company, which compared itself with its bigger rival Hertz by claiming, “We’re number two, so we try harder?”
    A different kind of advertising is reminder advertising, which is important for products later in their life. Unlike the other types, its objective is to help to keep strong relationships with customers and to keep them thinking about the product. This is why expensive Coca-Cola television ads mainly build and maintain the Coca-Cola brand relationship, rather than trying to inform or persuade people to buy the drink straight away.
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    10.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.
    When you’re having fun with your friends, you take selfies. When you visit famous places, you take selfies. When you are in beautiful spots, you take selfies. But sometimes you don’t look very attractive in the photos. And, of course, if you’re going to post them, you want to look your best. What can you do?
    Instead of posting a photo you don’t like, you can turn to photo retouching. When you retouch an image, you improve its appearance. Many apps offer you the ability to do that. Their easy-to-use tools help you smooth your skin, make your teeth straighter and whiter, and more. Within the apps, you can also change your facial features. You can make your eyes rounder and brighter. You can change the shape of your face or your nose. You can also change the direction of the light source or add highlights. All in all, you can make yourself look like you wish you looked.
    Now you’ve uploaded your retouched photos to social media. People leave positive comments, and you get a lot of likes. That’s great, right? Maybe not. With so many people sharing personal images of their lives, it’s almost like a contest.
    Who looks the best, takes perfect selfies and lives up to social media’s standard of beauty? You need to be part of that crowd so that you don’t feel left out. Worse yet, you feel if you’re not part of that crowd, you may be criticized for your looks. Maybe you think that if you don’t look like the influencers you follow, you’re not good enough. People generally retouch themselves to have larger eyes, thinner chins and brighter skin. Does everyone now look the same? It seems like a lot of people are trying to match up to unrealistic beauty ideals. That isn’t good for anyone’s self-image.
    Perhaps it’s time to post the real you and only lightly retouched, if at all.
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    1.One possible version:
    Coral reefs, built of skeletons of coral polyps, are called underwater cities, where live many marine species and sea creatures. They provide humans with jobs, scenery and medicines. However, reefs aren’t well protected. One fifth of them have disappeared due to environmental problems. Fishing and diving do harm to them; water pollution and air pollution are to blame too.
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了珊瑚礁的成因及对人类的益处以及珊瑚礁受到威胁的各种各样的原因。
    【详解】1.要点摘录
    ①Young polyps attach themselves to the old skeletons and make new skeletons. Over time, weird and wonderful shapes are slowly built up into amazing coral reefs
    ②Scientists sometimes think of coral reefs as underwater cities. A quarter of all known marine species live in reef habitats.
    ③Humans don’t live in coral reef cities, but we benefit from them.
    ④Coral reefs are very important, yet we don’t take good care of them. Environmental problems have already killed about twenty percent of the world’s reefs.
    ⑤people catch too many reef fish and often damage the reefs—divers sometimes break off pieces of coral.
    ⑥Polluted water also causes problems because reef-destroying algae grows in dirty water.
    2.缜密构思
    将第1、2两个要点进行重组,将第4、5、6三个要点进行整合。
    3.遣词造句
    Coral reefs consists of skeletons of coral polyps, being home to marine species and sea creatures.
    We benefit a lot from them.
    However, we don’t take care of them because they are threatened by environmental problems, fishing, diving and pollution.
    【点睛】[高分句型1]
    Coral reefs, built of skeletons of coral polyps, are called underwater cities, where live many marine species and sea creatures.( 运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第一段和第二段进行了概括。其中where引导的非限制性定语从句,built过去分词作的后置定语等表达高级)
    [高分句型2]
    One fifth of them have disappeared due to environmental problems. (运用了现在完成时表示已经造成的结果,对第四段进行了概括,due to表示原因,表达恰当)
    2.As we all know, working together contributes to solving problems better. But everyone doesn’t like working together. The reason is that some people suffered from different experiences of group work. Whatever it is, it all causes bad results. Fortunately, cooperative learning can handle the issues by playing different roles in group work, which has proved helpful by some experts.
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍团队合作有利于解决问题,但是由于种种原因很多人并不是很喜欢这种工作模式,在教育方法中,合作式学习可以用来帮助解决这一问题,让小组内的每一位成员都有自己的分工,这些都已经得到了很多专家的研究论证。
    【详解】1 要点摘录①Two heads are better than one. It means that two people working together have a better chance of solving a problem than one person alone.
    ②There can be a number of reasons why people dislike group work.
    ③Whatever the issue, the result is the same: the group does not realize its goal.
    ④Cooperative learning is an educational method that can help to solve this problem.
    ⑤Studies have also shown that cooperative learning improves learner achievement. This includes one study by American researcher Robert Slavin.
    2.缜密构思
    将第①要点进行重组,将第②、③两个要点整合,将④、⑤两个要点进行整合。
    3.遣词造句
    As we all know, working together contributes to solving problems better.
    But everyone doesn’t like working together.
    The reason is that some people suffered from different experiences of group work.
    Whatever it is, it all causes bad results.
    Fortunately, cooperative learning can handle the issues by playing different roles in group work, which has proved helpful by some experts.
    【点睛】[高分句型1] As we all know, working together contributes to solving problems better. 用as引导的非限制性定语从句对第一段内容进行总结。
    [高分句型2]:Fortunately, cooperative learning can handle the issues by playing different roles in group work, which has proved helpful by some experts. 用which引导的非限制性定语从句对第三段内容进行总结。
    3.高分范文1
    It’s a common phenomenon that children spend too many hours watching TV. Worse still, experiments carried out by psychologists have proven violent scenes can result in children’s aggressive acts. To prevent this, TV violence should be blocked and children should be monitored when they watch TV. In all, it’s very time for us to become aware of the seriousness of the issue and take measures to encourage children to put more time into real life activities rather than television program.
    高分范文2
    With children spending quantities of time watching TV and less time participating in real life activities, experts point that TV violence can exert a passive impact on children. Moreover, only when TV violence is restricted appropriately and children are taught how to arrange their time reasonably can we well settle the problem. Confronted with such a disturbing situation, it is high time we should take action to prevent children from violence.
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,专家指出,由于儿童花大量时间看电视,而参与实际生活活动的时间较少,电视暴力会对儿童产生消极影响。此外,只有适当限制电视暴力,教会孩子们如何合理安排时间,我们才能很好地解决这个问题。面对如此令人不安的情况,我们是时候采取行动防止儿童暴力了。
    【详解】1 要点摘录
    ①As this doesn’t happen to only one specific kind of family, many experts warn us that they can be some serious effects on children watching violence on television.
    ②Since they spend tons of time watching TV, they have less time to enjoy real life activities, such as playing outdoor sports with friends, or enjoying other kinds of entertainment.
    ③It should also encourage people to invent and develop new technology which can block violent scenes from the programmes children watch.  
    ④It’s time to realize how harmful watching TV violence is, and it’s time to save our children from violence.
    2.缜密构思
    将第1、4两个要点进行重组,将第2、3两个要点进行整合。
    3.遣词造句
    With children spending quantities of time watching TV and less time participating in real life activities, experts point that TV violence can exert a passive impact on children.
    Moreover, only when TV violence is restricted appropriately and children are taught how to arrange their time reasonably can we well settle the problem.
    Confronted with such a disturbing situation, it is high time we should take action to prevent children from violence.
    【点睛】[高分句型1]:With children spending quantities of time watching TV and less time participating in real life activities, experts point that TV violence can exert a passive impact on children.(运用了with的复合结构作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
    [高分句型2]:Confronted with such a disturbing situation, it is high time we should take action to prevent children from violence. (运用了虚拟语气)
    4.(1)Online selling brings extra income but requires careful preparations. First, choose a credible platform with a wider customer base and insurance, and lower the price until you’ve established a fine reputation. Even if you cannot afford the prepaid fee of a platform, make sure transactions take place safely. It’s also essential to provide honest item descriptions and protect personal privacy. (60)
    (2) Several things about selling online are worth noting. Firstly, proper platforms ensure customers and insurance, though an upfront fee and a good reputation are required. Secondly, always keep safety in mind, meet buyers in public and keep the product until you receive the payment. Thirdly, avoid inaccurate product description and revealing your full name. Be careful when you sell online.
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章讲述了在网上销售自己不需要东西的时候应注意的一些问题及销售方法。
    【详解】1. 要点摘录
    ①Selling your stuff online does not only help to declutter(清理) your home and get rid of things you don’t need, but it can also be a great source of income.
    ②One thing you need to consider carefully is the platform on which you are going to advertise.
    ③Most big players in the field are so popular with sellers, not just because they can give you access to a bigger pool of potential customers, but also because they offer insurance both to the seller and the buyer, which gives both buyers and sellers more confidence.
    ④The downside, however, is that you will generally need to pay an upfront fee(预付费) for using the platform, and may also have to sacrifice a cut of your profit to the company.
    ⑤What’s more, you need to build up a reputation before buyers can trust you-which means you might have to settle for lower prices until you have a high rating.
    ⑥A few more things to keep in mind: always be accurate with your descriptions of the items you are selling, especially if advertising on a big platform.
    ⑦Don’t give out your full name, either- keep your last name private. Identity theft might be rare in such transactions, but it’s always better to be careful.
    2. 缜密深思
    把要点1重组;要点2、3、4整合;要点6和要点7重组,整合。
    3. 遣词造句
    Selling your stuff online not only help declutter your home, but it can also bring extra income.
    One thing to consider carefully is the platform. A credible platform usually has a wider customer base and offer insurance.
    The downside, however, is that you will generally need to pay an upfront fee for using the platform.
    Besides, you have to settle for lower prices so as to build up a good reputation.
    Always keep in mind that be accurate with the descriptions of items you are selling and be careful of your provacy.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】
    First, choose a credible platform with a wider customer base and insurance, and lower the price until you’ve established a fine reputation. (运用了祈使句和时间状语从句)
    【高分句型2】
    It’s also essential to provide honest item descriptions and protect personal privacy.(运用了it作形式主语)
    5.Digital content is important to us, and meanwhile, overstocking digital materials is popular. However, digital hoarding becomes uncontrollable because hoarders seldom know the space limitations in the expandable digital space. Moreover, digital contents are easy to get and shoot up. To keep mentally healthy, you should reduce digital footprint and avoid some unimportant social networks.
    【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章提出了“数字囤积”这一现象,分析了导致这种现象的原因,给人们带来的负面影响,以及如何减少数字足迹。
    【详解】1.要点摘录
    ①In the modern world, it is unavoidable that digital content plays an important role in our lives.
    ②In a recent paper published in the journal Information & Management, we have investigated a rising phenomenon called “digital hoarding”
    ③First, the digital hoarder is less likely to notice the space limitations in the digital world.
    ④Second, hoarding of physical objects happens in fixed boundaries, while digital spaces are “expandable”— you can get additional digital storage with minimum effort at very little or zero cost.
    ⑤Third, to hoard physical items, a person needs to expend some effort, such as purchasing them
    ⑥Fourth, compared with physical stuff, digital contents can be multiplied, for example, by making copies, with very minimal effort.
    ⑦If you think you’re holding onto too much digital content, you can try cleaning your digital footprint, reducing unnecessary digital content, coming up with simple methods to organize your files, pictures and videos. What’s more, reassess the importance of many social networks, including groups in many communication apps, and keep only those essential to you.
    2.缜密构思
    将①②,③④,⑤⑥六个要点进行整合,将⑦要点进行精简
    3.遣词造句
    Digital content is important to us, and meanwhile, overstocking digital materials is popular.
    However, digital hoarding becomes uncontrollable because hoarders seldom know the space limitations in the expandable digital space. Moreover, digital contents are easy to get and shoot up.
    To keep mentally healthy, you should reduce digital footprint and avoid some unimportant social networks.
    【点睛】[高分句型1]Digital content is important to us, and meanwhile, overstocking digital materials is popular. 用一个简单句对第二段和第四段部分内容进行总结。
    [高分句型2]To keep mentally healthy, you should reduce digital footprint and avoid some unimportant social networks.用一个简单句对最后一段内容进行总结,其中使用了不定式作状语,表达高级。
    6.Nowadays, a growing number of people choose to camp outdoors in that it’s easy to access and with low-budget. Moreover, various types of camping cater to our different needs, such as adventurous wild camping, cozy campsite camping and luxurious camping, which brings us peace and benefits our health. With the travel restrictions during the pandemic, sales of camping equipment soar. (60字)
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了露营的意义和露营的种类,以及在疫情的影响下,露营装备销量暴增的现象。
    【详解】1. 要点摘录
    ①If you haven’t tried camping, maybe you should join the increasing number of people who are enjoying the simple pleasures of camping.
    ②By grabbing your tent, and some additional things, it’s easy to head off to the countryside and enjoy a night or two under the stars.
    ③It is also, of course, a good low-budget holiday option.
    ④For the adventurous, wild camping is an ideal way to escape from reality. But for those who still want some home comforts, a campsite is a more suitable place to fix your tent.
    ⑤Here you have facilities such as washrooms, a shop and maybe even a restaurant. And for the most luxurious camping experience, you could try glamping, a type of camping associated with extreme comforts and luxury.
    ⑥More recently, sales of camping equipment have jumped as more people have chosen a vacation spent at hometown due to travel restrictions caused by the pandemic.
    2. 缜密构思
    将第1、2两个要点进行重组,将第3、4、5、6要点进行整合。
    3. 遣词造句
    It might be fun to consider joining others and enjoy the simple pleasure of camping.
    It’s easy and also cheap to head off to the countryside and have a holiday.
    Wild camping can be fun the adventurous while different types of campsites can also be found if you’re looking for a more comfortable environment.
    Due to the pandemic, the sales of camping equipment have increased a lot.
    【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, a growing number of people choose to camp outdoors in that it’s easy to access and with low-budget.(运用中in that引导原因状语从句)
    【高分句型2】Moreover, various types of camping cater to our different needs, such as adventurous wild camping, cozy campsite camping and luxurious camping, which brings us peace and benefits our health.(用which引导了非限制性定语从句)
    7.We are increasingly aware that modern hi-tech can be bad for the planet, which includes its energy use and the hardware. The European Union has recognised the increasing electronic waste problem by adopting a key principle: producer responsibility. The new UN report suggests that all countries could do something about the problem with a change in design.
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,我们已经逐渐意识到现代高科技对地球有害,这包括它的能源使用和硬件。欧盟已经认识到日益严重的电子垃圾问题,并采取了一项关键原则:生产者责任。这份新的联合国报告表明,所有国家都可以通过改变设计来解决这个问题。
    【详解】1.要点摘录
    ①We have gradually come to realise that in two ways in particular, modern hi-tech can be bad for the planet. The first is its energy use; The other is the hardware, when it comes to the end of its natural life.
    ②The latest United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP) report estimates that worldwide, electronic waste is mounting by about 40 million tons a year. The European Union has recognised the problem by adopting a key principle: producer responsibility.
    ③The new UN report suggests that all countries could do something about the problem with a change in design.
    2.缜密构思 将第1个要点进行总说,将第2、3两个要点进行分说。
    3.遣词造句
    We are increasingly aware that modern hi-tech can be bad for the planet, which includes its energy use and the hardware.
    The European Union has recognised the increasing electronic waste problem by adopting a key principle: producer responsibility.
    The new UN report suggests that all countries could do something about the problem with a change in design.
    【点睛】[高分句型1] We are increasingly aware that modern hi-tech can be bad for the planet, which includes its energy use and the hardware.运用that引导宾语从句对原文第一段进行概括。
    [高分句型2] The European Union has recognised the increasing electronic waste problem by adopting a key principle: producer responsibility.用动名词作宾语对第三段进行了概括,表达非常高级。
    8.Most of us make music publicly several times a year, but we don’t think we have a talent for music. According to psychologists’investigation, nearly all of us are musical experts. Our musical knowledge comes from long experience. In fact, we respond to music so naturally and normally actually, which demonstrates its strength and universality.
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了我们大部分人一年有几次都会在公开场合制造音乐,但是我们却认为自己没有音乐才能。根据心理学家对音乐性的研究可知,几乎所有人似乎都是音乐专家。我们的音乐知识是长期经验的产物。事实上,我们对音乐的反应如此自然和正常,实际上说明了它的力量和普遍性。
    【详解】1 要点摘录
    ①Most of us make music publicly just a few times a year
    ②As for the rest of us, our bumbling private efforts, rather than illustrating that we share an irresistible urge to make music, seem only to demonstrate that we don’t enjoy essential musical capacity.
    ③But the more psychologists investigate musicality, the more it seems that nearly all of us are musical experts, in quite a surprising sense.
    ④Our musical knowledge is the product of long experience.
    ⑤The fact that we respond to music so naturally and normally actually speaks to its strength and universality.
    2.缜密构思将第1、2两个要点进行重组,将第3、4、5几个要点进行改写。
    3.遣词造句
    Most of us make music publicly a few times a year, but we don’t think we are talented for music.
    Psychologists’investigation shows that nearly all of us are musical experts.
    Long experience shapes our musical knowledge.
    The fact that we respond to music so naturally and normally actually shows its strength and universality.
    【点睛】[高分句型1] Most of us make music publicly several times a year, but we don’t think we have a talent for music. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句,概括了第一段和第二段)
    [高分句型2]In fact, we respond to music so naturally and normally actually, which demonstrates its strength and universality.( 运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句,表达非常高级。)
    9.Marketers usually launch an advertising campaign for four purposes. First, they advertise to give customers information about products, which work well for new products. Second, they advertise to convince customers that their products are the best. Third, they advertise by comparing their products with others. Lastly, they advertise to establish a strong link with customers.
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说,广告有四个主要目的,首先,他们做广告给顾客提供产品信息,这对新产品很有效。其次,他们做广告是为了让顾客相信他们的产品是最好的。第三,他们通过比较自己的产品来做广告。最后,他们通过广告与顾客建立牢固的联系。
    【详解】1. 要点摘录
    ①There are four main advertising objectives—to inform, to persuade, to compare, or to remind.
    ②Companies use informative advertising to give information about a new type of product.
    ③The first sellers of these products had to tell consumers about the quality and convenience of the new product.
    ④Instead, they need to see how one company’s version is better than all the others. This kind of advertising is called persuasive advertising.
    ⑤In this, a company compares its brand with one or more other brands.
    ⑥Unlike the other types, its objective is to help to keep strong relationships with customers and to keep them thinking about the product.
    2. 缜密构思
    将2,3句进行整合,1,4,5,6句进行要点提取,重新表达。
    3. 遣词造句
    Marketers usually launch an advertising campaign for four purposes.
    They advertise to give customers information about their products, which is very effective for new products.
    They advertise in order to convince customers that their products are the best.
    【点睛】[高分句型1]First, they advertise to give customers information about products, which work well for new products.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
    [高分句型2]Second, they advertise to convince customers that their products are the best.(that引导宾语从句)
    10.It’s about selfies. When you post them, you can use photo retouching to get better looks for positive comments and likes. If all always do such things follow the crowd or avoid being despised, each may look identical. Actually, many can not achieve their goals. It is better to post real you with little retouching if necessary.
    【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍说明了关于自拍的现象和相关的建议。人们通常发布自拍,是为了获得更好的正面评论和点赞,所以会对照片进行修饰。如果所有的人都做这样的事,随波逐流或避免被轻视,那么每个人看起来可能都一样。事实上,许多人无法实现他们的目标。因此作者建议,如果有必要,最好贴出真实的你,稍作修饰。
    【详解】1.要点摘录
    1.When you’re having fun with your friends, you take selfies. When you visit famous places, you take selfies. When you are in beautiful spots, you take selfies.
    2.Instead of posting a photo you don’t like, you can turn to photo retouching. When you retouch an image, you improve its appearance. All in all, you can make yourself look like you wish you looked.
    3.With so many people sharing personal images of their lives, it’s almost like a contest.
    4.It seems like a lot of people are trying to match up to unrealistic beauty ideals. That isn’t good for anyone’s self-image.
    5.Perhaps it’s time to post the real you and only lightly retouched, if at all.
    2.缜密构思
    将第1、2两个要点进行重组,将第3、4两个要点进行整合,将第5点整合。
    3.遣词造句
    It’s about selfies.
    When you post them, you can use photo retouching to get better looks for positive comments and likes.
    If all always do such things follow the crowd or avoid being despised, each may look identical.
    Actually, many can not achieve their goals.
    It is better to post real you with little retouching if necessary.
    【点睛】[高分句型1] When you post them, you can use photo retouching to get better looks for positive comments and likes.运用一个when引导的时间状语从句,对第一、二和三段的内容进行了概括。when引导时间状语从句,for引导的表原因的状语等表达高级。
    [高分句型2]:It is better to post real you with little retouching if necessary.用it作为形式主语,不定式作为真正的主语,对第五段进行了概括,表达非常高级。


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