陕西高考英语写作分类训练：开放性作文

这是一份陕西高考英语写作分类训练：开放性作文，共16页。
开放性作文1．假定你是学校英文报记者李华，近期你校正在举行创建美丽校园活动，请你以"Beautiful Campus，Better Life" 为题，写一篇新闻稿报道本次活动。内容包括∶1. 活动目的；2.活动内容∶创建环保与文明校园；3. 师生评价注意∶1. 词数80左右，标题不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Beautiful Campus, Better Life____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．假定你是李华，你代表班级参加学校组织的主题为“ How to Keep Healthy”的英语作文比赛。请你写一篇文章参赛，内容包括：1. 饮食方面：多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃肉类；2. 情绪方面：保持积极的心情，良好的情绪；3. 锻炼方面：经常运动(跑步、散步等)。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加，以使行文连贯。How to Keep Healthy______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．你校将举办英语作文比赛，请你以“Make Winter Holiday More meaningful”为题目，写一 篇英语短文参赛，内容包括： 1. 寒假的意义； 2. 你的建议。注意: 1. 词数 100 左右; 2, 题目和开头已经给出。Make Winter Holiday More MeaningfulWinter holiday is coming. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假设你是李华，你们城市开启的共享单车活动极大地方便了人们的生活。但同时也出现了很多不文明现象，比如随便停放、上私锁、毁坏共享单车等。请你就这些问题，给China Daily写一封信，提出相关的解决方案。注意：1. 词数左右；2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。参考词汇：bike-sharing company共享单车公司；shared bike共享单车；register登记。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．请根据“Where there is a will, there is a way.”这个谚语结合自身情况，写一篇文章。注意：1)词数 100 左右；2)可适当增加事实细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.6．假设你是李华，你得知你的英国笔友Jack最近经常熬夜学习。请你用英语给他发一封邮件，劝他改掉这个不良习惯。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数：不少于70词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。Dear Jack,I learned that you often stay up very late studying these days.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua7．假设你是王林，你的美国笔友John来信说他最近每天晚上玩手机到深夜，导致白天没有精神且食欲不振。他对此很担心，但又管不住自己，因此写信向你求助。请你用英语给John 写一封回信，谈谈你的想法并给他一些建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假如你的好朋友李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于100字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。提示词：give up（放弃）  concentrate on（集中精力于）LiHua spent too much time playing computer games____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m sure he will make great progress soon.9．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter作为交换生下学期将到你校学习。他发来电子邮件向你询问中国日常生活中常用的一些身势语(body language)，请用英语给他回复。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes,Li Hua10．用英语写一篇100词左右的文章介绍我国首位航天员杨利伟。姓名：杨利伟出生年月：1965年6月籍贯：辽宁省绥中县简历：1983年6月参军1992年调到成都空军某部1996年8月1500名飞行员参加体检，杨利伟进入14人之列1998年1月正式成为我国首批航天员，经过5年训练光荣地选为我国首次载人航天飞行首飞队成员2003年10月15日乘“神舟5号”飞船遨游太空出生于农民家庭，从儿时起向往蓝天，在部队聪明好学，训练刻苦。参考词汇：astronaut 宇航员 manned-space aircraft 载人航天飞机  research 研究 candidate 候选人_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________            1． Beautiful Campus, Better Life These days, our school launched a campaign named Beautiful Campus, Better Life, aiming to create a better campus.  The students were required not to litter around, waste food or smoke. Many posters which called on the students to behave well, mind their own manners and keep the environment clean were put up on the campus.  The students and teachers thought highly of the campaign. They thought it was helpful in building a more beautiful and attractive campus and an attractive campus can help make a positive and inspiring learning environment and as a result, improve the students’ academic performance.【分析】本篇书面表达属于新闻稿，要求考生以“Beautiful Campus，Better Life”为题，报道学校正在举行的创建美丽校园活动。【详解】1. 词汇积累发起：launch→initiate要求：require→demand有益的：helpful→beneficial鼓舞人心的：inspiring→encouraging2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：These days, our school launched a campaign named Beautiful Campus, Better Life, aiming to create a better campus.拓展句：These days, our school launched a campaign named Beautiful Campus, Better Life, whose aim was to create a better campus.【点睛】[高分句型1] Many posters which called on the students to behave well, mind their own manners and keep the environment clean were put up on the campus.（运用了which引导的定语从句）[高分句型2]They thought it was helpful in building a more beautiful and attractive campus and an attractive campus can help make a positive and inspiring learning environment and as a result, improve the students’ academic performance.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略连接词that）2．How to Keep HealthyNowadays, more and more people are concerned about their health. So it is necessary for us to know how to keep healthy.First of all, it’s necessary for us to keep a balanced diet. We should eat more vegetables and fruit which contain lots of vitamins and less fat. And we should try to eat less meat. Moreover, keeping a good state of mind is also good for our health. We should always have an active attitude towards life. Last but not least, make sure we take proper exercise every day. Running or walking, simple as it is, has a positive effect on our health.In a word, there is a lot we can do to keep healthy. Let’s take action to be healthier.【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生写一篇文章参加学校组织的主题为“How to Keep Healthy”的英语作文比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累关心：care→be concerned about必要的： essential →necessary保持健康：keep fit→keep healthy积极的：active→ positive2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays, more and more people are concerned about their health.拓展句：Nowadays, it is a fact that more and more people are concerned about their health.【点睛】【高分句型1】So it is necessary for us to know how to keep healthy.（运用了it作形式主语）【高分句型2】Running or walking, simple as it is, has a positive effect on our health.（运用了as引导的让步状语从句）3．Make winter Holiday More meaningfulWinter holiday is coming. For many, the true meaning of winter holiday lies in spending time with loved ones and sharing traditions. For some of us students, we can choose to go about this differently, thus making a difference to others. From providing food for people in need to assisting in a nursing home, there are many wonderful things for us to do. In fact, there are many great organizations that love having volunteers during this holiday! Besides, you can encourage your neighbors and friends to organize an interesting activity for the whole community. Make this winter holiday more meaningful and you’ll see that the world is becoming much better!【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文。要求考生以“Make Winter Holiday More meaningful”为题目，写一 篇英语短文参加学校即将举办的英语作文比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累影响：influence→ make a difference to sb.着手做：undertake→ go about帮助：help→ assist极好的：nice→ wonderful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides, you can encourage your neighbors and friends to organize an interesting activity for the whole community.拓展句：Besides, you can encourage your neighbors and friends who are warm-hearted to organize an interesting activity for the whole community.【点睛】【高分句型1】In fact, there are many great organizations that love having volunteers during this holiday!（运用了由that引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Make this winter holiday more meaningful and you’ll see that the world is becoming much better!（运用了由that引导的宾语从句）4．Dear editor,I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m writing to say some bad behaviour toward the convenient shared bikes in our city.However, bad things do happen to shared bikes every day. Some people cause damage to the bikes on purpose, and some even use their own locks. What’s more, shared bikes are placed randomly, which strongly effects daily life. What’s more, shared bikes are placed randomly. All these bring great trouble to other users.To improve this situation, I think we should educate people to protect our public services. And bike-sharing companies also need to do something. For example, they should punish those who damage the bike. What’s more, because people use their real name to register as a user, it’s a good way to connect their personal credit with their behavior.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。共享单车活动极大地方便了人们的生活，但同时也引发了很多不文明现象，要求考生给China Daily写信，提出相关的解决方案。【详解】1.词汇积累随便地，随意地：randomly → casually影响：effect → influence教育：educate → teach公司：company → firm2.句式拓展变化句式原句：To improve this situation, I think we should educate people to protect our public services.拓展句：I think we should educate people to protect our public services so that this situation can be improved .【点睛】[高分句型1] What’s more, shared bikes are placed randomly, which strongly effects daily life. (运用了which引 导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2] For example, they should punish those who damage the bike. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)5．One possible version:The well-known proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way.” has long been accepted by all of us. It means that whenever we meet challenges or difficulties, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will.It is widely recognized that thought decides behavior, nothing will be hard to a determined and persistent person. Now, we are faced with the College Entrance Examination, we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for it, otherwise we will have no motivation to get our goal achieved. So, having a goal and working hard for it is the base of our success. What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively. Everything comes to him who waits. Perseverance means victory.Living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seems more than necessary. With this awareness, we can encounter in the future better and overcome all the challenges calmly and confidently.【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生根据“Where there is a will, there is a way.”这个谚语结合自身情况，写一篇文章。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：议论文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 以谚语“Where there is a will, there is a way.”为中心。第二步：列提纲 as long as；be faced with；set a goal；strive for；get rid of；more than第三步：连词成句1. The well-known proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way.” has long been accepted by all of us.2. It means that whenever we meet challenges or difficulties, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will.3. It is widely recognized that thought decides behavior, nothing will be hard to a determined and persistent person.4. Now, we are faced with the College Entrance Examination, we need to set a goal for ourselves and strive for it, otherwise we will have no motivation to get our goal achieved.5. So, having a goal and working hard for it is the base of our success.6. What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively.7. Everything comes to him who waits.8. Perseverance means victory.9. Living in an age when the modern competition becomes more and more fierce, a strong will seems more than necessary.10. With this awareness, we can encounter in the future better and overcome all the challenges calmly and confidently.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表并列补充关系：and2.表因果关系：So 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1] It means that whenever we meet challenges or difficulties, we will eventually succeed as long as we have a strong will.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）[高分句型2] So, having a goal and working hard for it is the base of our success.（so引导结果状语从句）[高分句型3] What we need to do now is to get rid of bad habits, improve study efficiency and discuss with our teachers actively.（what引导的主语从句）6．Dear Jack,l learned that you often stay up very late studying these days. I’m writing to persuade you to give up the bad habit.Staying up late at night is harmful to your health. It may cause headaches and even make you ill. What's more, you may find it difficult to concentrate on your studies at school. As a result, you'll soon fall behind with your school work.Therefore, you should make a good daily work plan. Finish your daily work on time and don't leave it until night. After all , it's most important to keep healthy , isn't it ?l hope you'll consider my suggestions.Yours，Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Jack发一封邮件，劝他改掉经常熬夜学习的这个不良习惯。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要点：1.熬夜对健康有害：可能会引起头痛；甚至让你生病；会让你学习落后；2.你的建议。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）persuade,give up the bad habit,be harmful to,cause headaches,concentrate on,fall behind,make a good daily work plan,on time,keep healthy第三步：连词成句1.I’m writing to persuade you to give up the bad habit.2.Staying up late at night is harmful to your health. 3.It may cause headaches and even make you ill.4.You may find it difficult to concentrate on your studies at school.5.You'll soon fall behind with your school work.6.You should make a good daily work plan.7.Finish your daily work on time and don't leave it until night. 8.After all , it's most important to keep healthy , isn't it ?9.l hope you'll consider my suggestions.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表并列补充关系：What is more, 表因果关系：Therefore, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Staying up late at night is harmful to your health. （运用了动名词短语作主语）[高分句型2]What's more, you may find it difficult to concentrate on your studies at school. （运用了it作形式宾语）7．One possible version:Dear John,I’m pleased to receive your letter seeking my proposals on how to overcome the awful habit of staying up late. Therefore, I’m writing to give you a helping hand. From my point of view, there are two accounts for this. For one thing, a habit is easy to form but hard to get rid of. For another, since mobile phones have become an indispensable part in our daily life, it is absolutely difficult to resist, especially for us adolescents.Here are some humble suggestions for your consideration. First and foremost, you are supposed to switch off your phone and keep your phone away from you before going to bed so that it will not attract your attention. Additionally, if I were you, I would work out properly before going to bed to relax myself both physically and mentally. Last but not least, it is high time you enhanced your awareness of early sleep. As a classic proverb goes that early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. Whichever suggestion you will take, please persevere in it. Hopefully, your problem would be solved soon. Best wishes!Yours,Wang Lin【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友John写一封信，针对他最近每天晚上玩手机到深夜的问题给出你的想法和建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时，少量现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 介绍你对“每天晚上玩手机到深夜”这个问题的看法；2. 给出你对解决这个问题的建议；3. 表达祝愿。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）stay up late; be easy to do sth.; get rid of; be supposed to do sth.; switch off; keep … away from …第三步：连词成句1. I’m pleased to receive your letter seeking my proposals on how to overcome the awful habit of staying up late.2. For one thing, a habit is easy to form but hard to get rid of.3. You are supposed to switch off your phone and keep your phone away from you before going to bed so that it will not attract your attention.4. If I were you, I would work out properly before going to bed to relax myself both physically and mentally.5. As a classic proverb goes that early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.6. Whichever suggestion you will take, please persevere in it.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：first and foremost, last but not least2.表并列补充关系：additionally, and3.表转折对比关系：but4.表因果关系：therefore连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]. I’m pleased to receive your letter seeking my proposals on how to overcome the awful habit of staying up late. （由how引导的宾语从句作介词on的宾语）[高分句型2]. First and foremost, you are supposed to switch off your phone and keep your phone away from you before going to bed so that it will not attract your attention. （由so that引导的目的状语从句）8．       Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I’ll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I’ll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I’m sure he will make great progress soon.【分析】这是一篇开放作文。要求考生写一篇文章，说说如何帮助沉迷于电脑游戏的朋友李华。【详解】第1步：假如你的好朋友李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于100字的短文。提示词：give up（放弃）  concentrate on（集中精力于）第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：spend time in doing/on sth.（花时间做某事/在……上花费）; do harm to（对……有害）; be addicted to（沉迷于）; concentrate on（集中精力于）; ask sb. to do sth.（请求某人做某事）; turn to sb. for help（向某人求助）; give up（放弃）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.中使用了that引导宾语从句；If I try these, I’m sure he will make great progress soon.中使用了if引导条件状语从句。9．Dear Peter,I’m glad to hear you’ll come to our school as an exchange student next term. Since you want to learn about Chinese body language in our daily life, let me tell you some.We usually greet each other with head nodding, smiles, hand shaking and so on. During the conversation, it’s good manners to have eye contact instead of staring directly at others. In class, students are required to raise their hands if they have any questions. Moreover, it’s common to see youth of the same sex hold hands or hug in public places.I hope my introduction can be of some help to you. Whenever necessary, I’m always here to give you a hand.Looking forward to your arrival.Best wishes,Li Hua【分析】本文是一篇电子邮件。【详解】在写这篇文章时，要注意：1. 准确把握说明对象，即介绍一些中国的身势语，写作时要做到有的放矢；2. 语言力求简单，通俗易懂；3. 结构要层次分明，条理清楚，内容要连贯；4. 时态以一般现在时为主。【点睛】本文严格按照写作要求来写，信息表达完整，有理有据，条理清楚，层次清晰。文中时态使用准确，同时使用了一些高级词汇（greet each other相互问候；have eye contact有眼神交流； raise one’s hands举手；be of some help to you对你有一些帮助；等等。）和高级句式，如it’s good manners to have eye contact instead of staring directly at others. （it作形式主语，）； I hope my introduction can be of some help to you.（宾语从句）；Whenever necessary, I’m always here to give you a hand.（让步状语从句）等，给文章增添了不少色彩。10．The Pride of ChinaYang Liwei was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Privince in June, 1965.When he was a child, he dreamed of flying in the blue sky. He joined the army in June, 1983. Nine years later he went to work in air force in Chengdu. In August 1996 he was chosen to be one of the 14 astronaut candidates from 1500 pilots through the physical examination.He was a wise soldier and worked hard in the army. He became the first astronaut of our country in 1998 and was chosen to be one of the first manned space aircraft astronauts. On October 15, 2003 he successfully flew to space and carried out some research work.He is the honor of our motherland and will be remembered forever by Chinese people. We should learn from him.【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生一篇100词左右的文章介绍我国首位航天员杨利伟。【详解】1.词汇积累渴望：dream of→ be dying for申请人：candidate→ applicant聪明的：wise→ smart做，履行：carry out→ perform2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Yang Liwei was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Privince in June, 1965.拓展句：Yang Liwei, who is an excellent astronautwas, was born in a farmer’s family in Suizhong County, Liaoning Privince in June, 1965.【点睛】【高分句型1】When he was a child, he dreamed of flying in the blue sky.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)【高分句型2】He is the honor of our motherland and will be remembered forever by Chinese people.(运用了一般将来时的被动语态结构)