【备战2024年高考】英语 （全国通用版）2023年全国甲卷英语作文全方位深度透析试卷

这是一份【备战2024年高考】英语 （全国通用版）2023年全国甲卷英语作文全方位深度透析试卷，共6页。
2023年全国甲卷英语作文全方位深度透析【适用地区】四川、贵州、西藏、广西【真题呈现】（2023 全国甲卷）以英语讲述中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括1.人物事迹；2.意义；3.启示。注意:1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【深刻解读】本写作的主题语境是“人与社会”，话题是“历史故事”。语篇类型是人物介绍，属于半开放作文。试题内容是用英语介绍中国历史人物。设题者优化情境设计，重视思维品质培养。本文是一篇记叙历史人物的写作，对学生历史知识的积累、历史素养的培养以及综合能力的提升等，都起着重要的作用。而新高考背景的发展则提出了更高的要求。本考题体现了培养学生的自主学习性，提高学生学习历史的兴趣。体现了学生学习的综合性，创新性，基础性和应用性。其核心价值是通过中国故事讲述历史人物，引导学生了解中国历史，树立正确的价值观，对学生产生极大的教育意义和引领作用。其核心价值是推动社会文明持续发展。学会通过学习历史，了解历史人物可以培养学生的情感取向和理性认识。【语篇构建】如何写好投稿投稿是投稿人根据征稿要求进行写作，将自未发表的作品投寄给报社、杂志社、出版社、网站等媒介，期望被采用、得以发表的行为。所投稿件内容应紧贴主题、新颖、创新、实用，且符合字数要求。本写作以英语讲述中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，本文是半开放作文。考生不拘于考题所列考点，掌握分析人物的一般规律，通过新材料创造新情境。在备考过程中，多读有关历史人物的材料，掌握描述人物的一些形容词对描述历史人物有很大的帮助。考题其实是要求考生准确使用语法和词汇，运用一定句型清楚、连贯地描述历史人物。注重学科关键能力考查旨在引导学生通过不同的英语学习方式和实践活动，灵活运用所学语言知识，侧重考查学生分析问题和解决问题的能力。可按照如下格式构建语篇：【思路梳理】(一) 审题：确定体裁、人称和时态。该书面表达任务是写投稿，属于半开放性作文；正文人称以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时为主。(二) 确定文章结构、列出写作要点。此投稿正文可以分为三段。第一段：点明投稿的目的。第二段：增加细节，历史人物的人物事迹和意义。第三段：总结表达自己的感想和祝愿。(三) 捕捉相关词汇、激活储备句型。  先声夺人开头句——点明目的1.June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It aims to raise people's awareness of protecting oceans.2.Recently, we conducted a survey concerning different ways to learn English beyond the classroom. The results are as follows.引人入胜篇中句——介绍基本情况1.It goes without saying that Oceans play a critical role in the world.2.Not only do they provide abundant resources and food for us, but they are also crucial for the global climate development.3.Additionally, oceans are the lungs ofour planet, providing mostofthe oxygen we breathe.画龙点睛结尾句——总结感想和祝福1.As high school students, it's our responsibility to protect them.2.First of all, do what we can to make a difference. For example, stop throwing garbage into oceans. In addition, call on people aroundus to take action, too. I believe we will have cleaner oceans.【参考范文】I would like to introduce a prominent figure inChinese history, Confucius. He was born in the state of Lu which is located in present-day Qufu, Shandong Province.Confucius was a great philosopher, educator, andpolitician who left a profound impact on Chinese culture and society.Confucius believed in the importance of moral values such as respect, loyalty, and kindness. He emphasized the importance of education and self-improvement, which he believed would lead to a harmonious society. His teachings and philosophy were compiled into a book called the Analects, which is still studied by many Chinese today.Despite facing opposition and exile during his lifetime, Confucius' teachings have continued to influence Chinese society for over 2,000 years. He is still one of the most important figures in Chinese history today【名师点评】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了which，who 引导的定语从句，分词短语facing opposition and exile做状语… 并且使用了一些固定词组，如was born in ; left a profound impact on; lead to ；prepare for；等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【写作回顾】在写作前一定要仔细审题，确定投稿的文章介绍哪一个历史人物。审题时确定文章体裁、人称、时态和框架结构。在研读内容要点时要注意挖掘所给信息。问问自己要“我”写什么？怎样才能不让自己的作文内容流于表面，将内容要点进行拓展。其次怎么写？平时积累的功能语句在这篇写作中要做出适当的调整，不能完全照搬照抄。开头和结尾要呼应，突出写作的中心。在写作过程中语言上要注意语言的简练，在简练的语言中运用具体词汇来表达具体内容。在100词左右的文章中将各种句型和语法现象恰当地运用。最后注意句与句之间以及段落之间的逻辑关系。在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上，根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则，按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序遣词造句，然后将零散的句子组成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。【词块拓展】1.shouder-length hair 齐肩长发2.in rags 衣衫褴褛的3.wear a blank/vacant look 带着空洞的/茫然的表情4.have a good figure 身材好5.high nose bridge 高鼻梁6.middle-age spread 中年发福7.in one’s forties 在某人四十几岁的时候8.be devoted/committed to 奉献于;投入9.facial expressions 面部表情10.be anxious about 对...焦虑11.be focused on 集中12.a gesture of kindness 善行13.melt people's loneliness 减少人们的孤单14.create/build a harmonious society 创建和谐社会15.work tirelessly 孜孜不倦地工作16.appeal to the public to do sth. 呼吁公众做某事17.engage in voluntary activities 参与志愿活动18.rebuild faith in life 重建对生活的信心19.full of devotion 充满奉献精神20.inspire social responsibility 激发社会责任感21.a sense of duty/responsibility 责任感【句式拓展】1.She Had Many Good Qualities Despite Her Apparent Rudeness.她粗鲁是粗鲁, 但还有许多优秀品质.
2.We Should Learn From His Fine Qualities.我们要学习他的优秀品质。
3.Her Best Qualities Come Out In A Crisis.在危急关头显露出了她的优秀品质.
4.These Fine Qualities Go Towards The Making Of A Great Man这些优秀品质是成为一位伟人的条件。
5.Her Mind Dwelt On His Good Qualities她的心思集中在他的优秀品质上。
6.A Crisis Brings Out The Best In Her.在紧急关头看出了她的优秀品质.
7.Her Best Qualities Come Out A Crisis.在危难中她的优秀品质显露了出来。
8.He Has Many Good Qualities- Generosity, Diligence, Modesty And Simplicity.他具有许多优秀品质：慷慨、奋、虚、朴。
9.Trouble Can Call Forth A Person's Best Qualities困境能表现出一个人的优秀品质。
10.Difficulties Can Bring Out A Person's Best Qualities困难可以使人发挥其优秀品质。
11.Trouble Can Call Out A Person's Best Qualities.逆境可以激发出一个人的优秀品质。
12.His Wife Is Everything A Man Could Wish For.他的妻子具有男人想要的一切优秀品质.
13.Her Good Qualities Opened Out As She Grew In Years.她的优秀品质随年龄的增长而日趋完善。
14.The Family Crisis Really Brought Out The Best In Her.她在家庭遇到危难时, 表现出她的优秀品质.
15.The Family Crisis Really Bring Out The Best In Her她在家庭遇到危难时, 表现出她的优秀品质
16.He Epitomizes The Good Qualities Of His Family.在他身上集中体现了他家族的优秀品质。
17.He Has Many Sterling Qualities.他身上有许多优秀的品质。
18.Difficulty Can Build Up The Most Excellent Character.困难可以磨练出一个人最优秀的品质.【变式训练】你校英语报以“Sport is happiness”为题举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1. 解释原因；2. 发出倡议。注意：(1)写作词数应为80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Sport is happiness______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Sport is happinessAre you feeling stressed out because of too much work or too many demands? If so, why not have a try at sport? Sport can bring you happiness.Sport can magically stimulate various brain chemicals that may leave you feeling more relaxed and less anxious. A sweaty basketball match or just a jogging will definitely get you refreshed and energetic. Additionally, sport can connect you with more friends who are always the cure for your troubles.Go in for sport and you will not only get physically stronger but also mentally happier. (92)【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的稿件。要求考生向学校英语报投稿，写一篇题为“Sport is happiness”的短文。【详解】1.词汇积累因为：because of→ on account of/as a result of各种各样：various → a variety of 肯定地：definitely→ absolutely此外：additionally→ what’s more/ besides/in addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Go in for sport and you will not only get physically stronger but also mentally happier.拓展句：If you go in for sport and you will not only get physically stronger but also mentally happier.【点睛】【高分句型1】Sport can magically stimulate various brain chemicals that may leave you feeling more relaxed and less anxious.（运用了that引导的定语从句）【高分句型2】Additionally, sport can connect you with more friends who are always the cure for your troubles.（运用了who引导的定语从句）       附表  历年真题作文考情一览考试年份试卷名称语篇类型主题语境话题内容2023新高考全国卷I应用文-建议信人与社会外教准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，要求考生给外教写邮件说明这样分组存在的问题并提出建议。全国甲卷半开放类人与社会用英语介绍中国历史人物。全国乙卷提纲类作文人与自我通过分享自己在假期中学习新技能的原因、过程、感受，有层次，有条理地展示了自己所学得的新技能。北京卷应用文-建议信人与社会针对“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动给好友写一封建议信，包括活动内容，活动形式。浙江卷1月新闻报道人与自然介绍“认识我们身边的植物”的活动报道的过程，收获和感想2022新高考全国卷I邀请信半开放类邀请外教参加校广播站英语节目访谈全国甲卷投稿半开放类阐述海洋的重要性并就保护海洋发出倡议,投稿参加征文比赛全国乙卷投稿图表类就图表中学生英语学习活动的调查结果写一篇短文投稿浙江卷6月邀请信半开放类邀请留学生同学一起体验图书馆“小组学习室”2021新高考全国卷I投稿半开放类庆祝校英文报创刊十周年全国甲卷询问信半开放类询问外国朋友哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人全国乙卷发言稿半开放类做明智的网络学习者浙江卷6月宣传稿半开放类宣传国画作品展浙江卷1月发言稿半开放类欢迎新西兰学生访校2020新高考全国卷I新闻报道半开放类报道学校越野赛跑活动全国卷 I人物介绍半开放类介绍身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人全国卷Ⅱ叙事短文半开放类介绍采摘活动全国卷III求助信半开放类请外教帮忙指导改编一个短剧浙江卷7月询问信半开放类询问因病回国的外教的情况浙江卷1月邀请信半开放类邀请英国朋友参加中文演讲比赛