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Module 3 模块话题满分范文必背-九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题（外研版）
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这是一份Module 3 模块话题满分范文必背-九年级英语上册单元重难点易错题（外研版），共15页。
Module 3 Heroes
模块话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1．每个人都有自己心中的学习榜样。钟南山院士是我学习的榜样。下面是关于他的一些简要信息。根据这些信息，写一篇80字左右的英语短文。
1.钟南山出生于1936年10月20日。他85岁了，每天坚持锻炼身体。
2.他是个医生，勇敢，有爱心，知识渊博……
3他的主要事迹：
A．新冠Covid-19开始传播的时候，他奔赴最危险的地方。
B．对抗疫情。不放弃病人。
4. 我从他的身上学到了许多东西……
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【答案】例文
Everyone has his own role model. Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my role model. Zhong Nanshan was born on October 20, 1936. Although he is 85 years old, he still keeps exercising every day. He is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century. He is brave, warm-hearted and knowledgeable.
When Covid-19 began to spread, he went to lots of dangerous places to help others. He defeated the epidemic bravely and did not give up rescuing patients.
I learned a lot from him. First of all, we should keep doing exercise to keep ourselves healthy. Secondly, we should be always ready to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍钟南山的基本信息；
第二步，阐述在疫情期间，钟南山的事迹；
第三步，最后说明从钟南山身上学到的优点。
[亮点词汇]
①Although尽管
②keep doing sth一直做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century.（one of+最高级+名词复数“……中最……之一”）
②First of all, we should keep doing exercise to keep ourselves healthy.（动词不定式作目的状语）
2．袁隆平被称为“杂交水稻之父”。由于他的努力，中国的水稻产量大幅度提高。请根据以下提示对他进行介绍。
提示：Father of Hybrid Rice，finished university in the 1960s，developed hybrid rice in 1973
要求：1）语法正确，表达流畅；2）拼写正确；3）词数：70左右。
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【答案】例文
Yuan Longping is one of the most famous scientists in China.
People call him “Father of Hybrid Rice”. In the 1960s, he finished university. Since then, he has spent plenty of his time developing the new type of rice. In 1973, together with other scientists, he developed hybrid rice. It was a great success. Because of his hard work, China now produces enough rice every year to feed its people. His achievements have encouraged all the Chinese people.
What a great scientist Yuan Longping is!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；介绍袁隆平做的事要用“一般过去时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总得介绍下袁隆平；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了袁隆平的事迹和成就；
第三步，书写结语。感叹袁隆平的伟大。
[亮点词汇]
①plenty of大量的
②developed培育，发展
③achievements成就
④encourage鼓励
[高分句型]
①Since then, he has spent plenty of his time developing the new type of rice.（本句使用了现在完成时；spend some time doing sth.“花多长时间做某事”）
②What a great scientist Yuan Longping is!（感叹句）
3．一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。每个人心中都有自己的英雄。 《ABC Kids》 报社正在举行“心中的英雄”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容提示：
1. What does a hero mean in your opinion?
2. Who is a hero in your heart?
3. What can you learn from him or her?
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60~80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Everyone has a hero in his or her heart.
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【答案】例文：
Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. I think a hero must be a good example for others.
The hero in my heart is called Li Lanjuan. She is a doctor from Zhejiang. The reason I like her is that she, as well as her team, saved a lot of patients during the pandemic. She is not only brave in the face of the virus but also very professional. After taking her advice, thousands of people were saved.
Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I will try my best to contribute to human society.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的关键信息，写短文介绍自己心中的英雄。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在自己看来英雄意味着什么；
第二步，介绍自己心中的英雄；
第三步，介绍自己从这个英雄身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
②in the face of 面对
③thousands of 数以千计的
[高分句型]
①I think a hero must be a good example for others.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I will try my best to contribute to human society.（but连接并列句）
4．假如你是某中学学生李华，最近你班观看了《感动中国2021年度人物》，失聪女孩江梦南的事迹深深触动了你。请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述江梦南的经历，并表达你的想法。
要点如下：
（1）江梦南在六个月大的时候失去了听力。
（2）她父母鼓励她学习唇语、练习开口说话，这让她能够与人正常交流。
（3）有时候，学会一个单词可能要练习上千遍。
（4）她努力学习，终于在2018年被清华大学录取。
（5）你的想法……
要求：（1）词数：80~100个
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：失去听力：lose one’s hearing 唇语：lip-read
清华大学：Tsinghua University 录取：be enrolled into
Jiang Mengnan was born in Hunan Province in 1992. She_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Jiang Mengnan was born in Hunan Province in 1992. She lost her hearing when she was a six-month-old girl. Her parents encouraged her to learn to lip-read and practise speaking. This made it possible for her to communicate with common people. But this was also a very difficult journey. Sometimes it might take her thousands of times to learn even a word. However, Jiang Mengnan never thought of giving up. She studied hard and was finally enrolled into Tsinghua University. It seemed impossible, but she did it. We all should learn from her bravery and persistence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作时应用第三人称形式来叙述；时态用一般过去时；可通过文中提示的五个方面以观察者的视角来描述江梦南幼年时期的遭遇、父母在她生活和学习中对她的帮助以及她通过自己的努力最终考上清华大学的事迹；表述中条理应清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题。引出需要赞扬的对象；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述江梦南幼年时期的遭遇、父母和她自己在生活和学习上遇到的挫折和坚持，最终如愿考入清华大学；
第三步，书写结语。根据以上描述总结我们应该向江梦南学习。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
②communicate with sb. 与……交流
③it takes sb. some time to do sth. 做某事花费某人多长时间
④think of doing sth. 考虑做某事
[高分句型]
This made it possible for her to communicate with common people.（make it+形容词 for sb. to do sth.“使做某事对某人来说变得……”。it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是动词不定式。）
5．疫情三年中，涌现出了许多英雄，如钟南山院士、李兰娟院士、张继先医生等。他们当中谁最让你钦佩呢？请你以“My Favourite Anti-epidemic Hero”为题写一篇短文。
内容要点：
1. 你最钦佩的抗疫英雄是谁？
2. 谈谈你钦佩他（她）的原因。
3. 你从他（她）身上学到了什么？
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所给要点；
2. 文中不得透露个人信息；
3. 词数80左右。
参考词汇：anti-epidemic（抗疫）；COVID-19（新冠肺炎）；admire sb. for sth./doing sth.（敬佩、佩服）
My Favourite Anti-epidemic Hero
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【答案】
My Favourite Anti-epidemic Hero
There are millions of anti-epidemic heroes. Among them, the anti-epidemic hero in my heart is an excellent doctor, Zhong Nanshan.
He is a kind man with courage. Although he was old, he tried his best to fight against COVID-19. Though he was very tired, he never gave up his work. He saved millions of people’s lives. And he has moved every Chinese people. I admire him not only for what he has done to the country but also for his courage. I will study hard from now on and become a person like him. He is a true hero in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中最钦佩的抗疫英雄、钦佩他（她）的原因以及从中学到了什么的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍最钦佩的抗疫英雄是谁。
第二步，具体阐述钦佩抗疫英雄的原因。
第三步，描述自己从最钦佩的抗疫英雄身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① tried his best尽他最大努力
② fight against对抗，与……作斗争，为反对……而斗争；
③ gave up放弃
④ from now on从现在开始
[高分句型]
① He is a kind man with courage.（with表伴随）
② Although he was old, he tried his best to fight against COVID-19.（Although引导引导让步状语从句）
③ I admire him not only for what he has done to the country but also for his courage.（not only…but also…用于连接两个表示并列关系的成分）
6．“能吃苦，肯奋斗，有担当，似一叶扁舟在激湍中逆流而上，如一株小树在万木前迎来春光。”这就是陆鸿，《感动中国》2022年度人物之一。虽幼时高烧导致身体残疾，但他仍坚持学习。毕业后，由于身体残疾，陆鸿没有找到工作，他开始自主创业，从卖水、修自行车到最后成功开相册厂，他帮助许多残疾人就业，实现人生价值……请以“永不言弃”为话题，结合自身经历，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历以及他身上值得我们学习的优秀品质。
参考词汇：相册album；坚持persistence
注意：
1.短文条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3.词数90左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep impression on me.
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【答案】 Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep impression on me.
Lu Hong comes from Jiangsu. A high fever caused physical disability when he was young, but he still persisted in studying. After graduation, due to his physical disability, Lu Hong couldn’t find a job. He is not complaining, not depressed, and unwilling to become a burden to his family. He started his own business, from selling water and repairing bicycles to successfully opening a photo album factory. He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.
Lu Hong is not afraid of hardship, willing to strive, responsible, and never gives up. He is a model for all of us. Compared to Lu Hong, there is nothing that cannot be overcome about the difficulties we face in life or study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历及他的优秀品质；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总写，陆鸿给我留下了深刻印象，引出介绍的内容（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体讲述陆鸿的成长经历。
第三步，最后写陆鸿值得我们学习的优秀品质，结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象
②come from来自
③be unwilling to do sth.不愿意做某事
④become a burden to成为…的负担
⑤be not afraid of hardship不怕吃苦
⑥compared to与……相比，比起
⑦due to由于
[高分句型]
①A high fever caused physical disability when he was young, but he still persisted in studying.（时间状语从句、but连接的并列句）
②Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year…（定语从句）
③Compared to Lu Hong, there is nothing that cannot be overcome about the difficulties we face in life or study.（there be句型和定语从句）
④ He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.（动词不定式作宾语补足语）
7．假如你校英文报正以“My hero”为题开展征文大赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文参赛，介绍你心目中的英雄——颜宁。
要求：1.内容须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.词数不少于100。
My hero
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【答案】例文：
My Hero
Yan Ning is a hero in my heart. She was born in Jinan, Shandong. Yan Ning, 45 years old, has been one of the top scientists in the world. And she is the founder of Shenzhen Academy of Medical Sciences. I admire her because she is a dream follower. When she was a little girl, she dreamed of being a scientist. To achieve her dream, she experienced a lot of difficulties. But she never gave up her dream. Instead, she worked hard to fight for it. From her, I learned that the key to success is hard work. No pains, no gains. As long as I take action, I’m sure my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍颜宁的基本个人信息；
第二步，介绍她的成就；
第三步，介绍她成为你心目中英雄的原因以及你从她身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②dream of doing sth梦想做某事
③give up放弃
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I admire her because she is a dream follower.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When she was a little girl, she dreamed of being a scientist.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．今年是学习雷锋六十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。
Learn from Lei Feng
Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly.
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【答案】例文
Learn from Lei Feng
Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all his life to his beloved career as well. I was totally shocked by his character.
Such is human nature: people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his spirit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Lei Feng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.
To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of math to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.
I strongly suggest that if each of us takes Lei Feng as our role model and copies his spirit, we shall see a better world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己对雷锋的崇敬之情；
第二步，介绍向雷锋叔叔学习的原因，并讲述在日常生活中是如何帮助别人的。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②so that以便
③take...as an example以……为例
[高分句型]
①I was totally shocked by his character.（一般过去时被动语态）
②I strongly suggest that if each of us takes Lei Feng as our role model and copies his spirit, we shall see a better world.（that引导宾语从句）
9．冬奥会上年仅18岁的中国自由式滑雪运动员谷爱凌成为了全世界的焦点。她参加了三项滑雪赛事，获得了两金一银的骄人成绩。她不仅是优秀的运动员，还是学霸和模特，同时擅长篮球、芭蕾等，她的成功来源于她对滑雪的热爱和努力付出以及她骨子里的自信和永不放弃的精神。请大家根据以上的导语提示，写一篇英语作文。
要求：1. 字数90-100左右。 2. 不允许在文中出现自己的姓名和学校。
参考词语：
英文名字：Eileen Gu 自由滑雪者： freeskier 芭蕾： ballet
学霸： grade-A student 自由式滑雪： Freestyle Skiing
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【答案】例文
At the Winter Olympics this year, Eileen Gu won two gold medals and one silver medal for China in the women’s freestyle skiing.
First, Eileen’s success needs her deep love in the skiing. It’s known that interest is the best teacher. Second, hardworking is the key to success. Success needs us to devote our time. Finally, her confidence enabled her to perfectly show her skill. In final race she even tried techniques which she never successfully completed .
In a word, from this fantastic eighteen-year-old girl, we can better understand passion, hard-working, and confidence.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出介绍谷爱凌的个人成就；
第二步，具体阐述她取得这样成就的原因；
第三步，书写结语，总结可以从她身上学习的精神。
［亮点词汇］
①In a word总之
［高分句型］
① It’s known that interest is the best teacher.（宾语从句）
② In final race she even tried techniques which she never successfully completed.（whicht引导的定语从句）
10．榜样的力量是无穷的。众所周知，无数革命先烈的努力奋斗才换来了我 们今天的幸福生活，请选择一个你心目中的革命先烈榜样，以A Hero in My Heart为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：1）你心目中的革命先烈英雄是谁；
2）简述英雄事迹一二及影响；
3）为致敬革命先烈，新时代的青少年要怎么做才能成为对社会有用的人。
2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数 100 左右。
A Hero in My Heart
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【答案】例文
A Hero in My Heart
A hero in my heart is Lei Feng. Lei Feng is a model soldier. On December 18, 1940, he was born in a poor peasant family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province. At the age of 18, he worked as a steel worker. He was often praised for his good job. On January 8, 1960, he joined the army. All his life, he was selfless and kind to others. He constantly did good deeds for others. As a result, he became a model soldier. After his death, Chairman Mao called on the people to “Learn from Comrade Lei Feng”. The whole nation was moved by his deeds. Lei Feng’s spirit will live in our hearts forever.
As a teenager, we should learn from Lei Feng. We need to help each other in life, and more importantly, we need to help those who need help. In this way, we can be useful to the society.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你心目中的革命先烈英雄是谁；
第二步，简述英雄事迹一二及影响；
第三步，最后介绍作为一名青少年，要怎么做才能成为对社会有用的人。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②join the army参军
③as a result因此
④help each other互相帮助
[高分句型]
we need to help those who need help.（who引导的定语从句）
Module 3 Heroes
模块话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1．每个人都有自己心中的学习榜样。钟南山院士是我学习的榜样。下面是关于他的一些简要信息。根据这些信息，写一篇80字左右的英语短文。
1.钟南山出生于1936年10月20日。他85岁了，每天坚持锻炼身体。
2.他是个医生，勇敢，有爱心，知识渊博……
3他的主要事迹：
A．新冠Covid-19开始传播的时候，他奔赴最危险的地方。
B．对抗疫情。不放弃病人。
4. 我从他的身上学到了许多东西……
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【答案】例文
Everyone has his own role model. Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my role model. Zhong Nanshan was born on October 20, 1936. Although he is 85 years old, he still keeps exercising every day. He is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century. He is brave, warm-hearted and knowledgeable.
When Covid-19 began to spread, he went to lots of dangerous places to help others. He defeated the epidemic bravely and did not give up rescuing patients.
I learned a lot from him. First of all, we should keep doing exercise to keep ourselves healthy. Secondly, we should be always ready to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍钟南山的基本信息；
第二步，阐述在疫情期间，钟南山的事迹；
第三步，最后说明从钟南山身上学到的优点。
[亮点词汇]
①Although尽管
②keep doing sth一直做某事
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century.（one of+最高级+名词复数“……中最……之一”）
②First of all, we should keep doing exercise to keep ourselves healthy.（动词不定式作目的状语）
2．袁隆平被称为“杂交水稻之父”。由于他的努力，中国的水稻产量大幅度提高。请根据以下提示对他进行介绍。
提示：Father of Hybrid Rice，finished university in the 1960s，developed hybrid rice in 1973
要求：1）语法正确，表达流畅；2）拼写正确；3）词数：70左右。
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【答案】例文
Yuan Longping is one of the most famous scientists in China.
People call him “Father of Hybrid Rice”. In the 1960s, he finished university. Since then, he has spent plenty of his time developing the new type of rice. In 1973, together with other scientists, he developed hybrid rice. It was a great success. Because of his hard work, China now produces enough rice every year to feed its people. His achievements have encouraged all the Chinese people.
What a great scientist Yuan Longping is!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；介绍袁隆平做的事要用“一般过去时”
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总得介绍下袁隆平；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了袁隆平的事迹和成就；
第三步，书写结语。感叹袁隆平的伟大。
[亮点词汇]
①plenty of大量的
②developed培育，发展
③achievements成就
④encourage鼓励
[高分句型]
①Since then, he has spent plenty of his time developing the new type of rice.（本句使用了现在完成时；spend some time doing sth.“花多长时间做某事”）
②What a great scientist Yuan Longping is!（感叹句）
3．一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。每个人心中都有自己的英雄。 《ABC Kids》 报社正在举行“心中的英雄”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容提示：
1. What does a hero mean in your opinion?
2. Who is a hero in your heart?
3. What can you learn from him or her?
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60~80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Everyone has a hero in his or her heart.
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【答案】例文：
Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. I think a hero must be a good example for others.
The hero in my heart is called Li Lanjuan. She is a doctor from Zhejiang. The reason I like her is that she, as well as her team, saved a lot of patients during the pandemic. She is not only brave in the face of the virus but also very professional. After taking her advice, thousands of people were saved.
Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I will try my best to contribute to human society.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的关键信息，写短文介绍自己心中的英雄。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在自己看来英雄意味着什么；
第二步，介绍自己心中的英雄；
第三步，介绍自己从这个英雄身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
②in the face of 面对
③thousands of 数以千计的
[高分句型]
①I think a hero must be a good example for others.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I will try my best to contribute to human society.（but连接并列句）
4．假如你是某中学学生李华，最近你班观看了《感动中国2021年度人物》，失聪女孩江梦南的事迹深深触动了你。请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述江梦南的经历，并表达你的想法。
要点如下：
（1）江梦南在六个月大的时候失去了听力。
（2）她父母鼓励她学习唇语、练习开口说话，这让她能够与人正常交流。
（3）有时候，学会一个单词可能要练习上千遍。
（4）她努力学习，终于在2018年被清华大学录取。
（5）你的想法……
要求：（1）词数：80~100个
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：失去听力：lose one’s hearing 唇语：lip-read
清华大学：Tsinghua University 录取：be enrolled into
Jiang Mengnan was born in Hunan Province in 1992. She_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Jiang Mengnan was born in Hunan Province in 1992. She lost her hearing when she was a six-month-old girl. Her parents encouraged her to learn to lip-read and practise speaking. This made it possible for her to communicate with common people. But this was also a very difficult journey. Sometimes it might take her thousands of times to learn even a word. However, Jiang Mengnan never thought of giving up. She studied hard and was finally enrolled into Tsinghua University. It seemed impossible, but she did it. We all should learn from her bravery and persistence.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作时应用第三人称形式来叙述；时态用一般过去时；可通过文中提示的五个方面以观察者的视角来描述江梦南幼年时期的遭遇、父母在她生活和学习中对她的帮助以及她通过自己的努力最终考上清华大学的事迹；表述中条理应清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题。引出需要赞扬的对象；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述江梦南幼年时期的遭遇、父母和她自己在生活和学习上遇到的挫折和坚持，最终如愿考入清华大学；
第三步，书写结语。根据以上描述总结我们应该向江梦南学习。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
②communicate with sb. 与……交流
③it takes sb. some time to do sth. 做某事花费某人多长时间
④think of doing sth. 考虑做某事
[高分句型]
This made it possible for her to communicate with common people.（make it+形容词 for sb. to do sth.“使做某事对某人来说变得……”。it是形式宾语，真正的宾语是动词不定式。）
5．疫情三年中，涌现出了许多英雄，如钟南山院士、李兰娟院士、张继先医生等。他们当中谁最让你钦佩呢？请你以“My Favourite Anti-epidemic Hero”为题写一篇短文。
内容要点：
1. 你最钦佩的抗疫英雄是谁？
2. 谈谈你钦佩他（她）的原因。
3. 你从他（她）身上学到了什么？
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所给要点；
2. 文中不得透露个人信息；
3. 词数80左右。
参考词汇：anti-epidemic（抗疫）；COVID-19（新冠肺炎）；admire sb. for sth./doing sth.（敬佩、佩服）
My Favourite Anti-epidemic Hero
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【答案】
My Favourite Anti-epidemic Hero
There are millions of anti-epidemic heroes. Among them, the anti-epidemic hero in my heart is an excellent doctor, Zhong Nanshan.
He is a kind man with courage. Although he was old, he tried his best to fight against COVID-19. Though he was very tired, he never gave up his work. He saved millions of people’s lives. And he has moved every Chinese people. I admire him not only for what he has done to the country but also for his courage. I will study hard from now on and become a person like him. He is a true hero in my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中最钦佩的抗疫英雄、钦佩他（她）的原因以及从中学到了什么的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍最钦佩的抗疫英雄是谁。
第二步，具体阐述钦佩抗疫英雄的原因。
第三步，描述自己从最钦佩的抗疫英雄身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① tried his best尽他最大努力
② fight against对抗，与……作斗争，为反对……而斗争；
③ gave up放弃
④ from now on从现在开始
[高分句型]
① He is a kind man with courage.（with表伴随）
② Although he was old, he tried his best to fight against COVID-19.（Although引导引导让步状语从句）
③ I admire him not only for what he has done to the country but also for his courage.（not only…but also…用于连接两个表示并列关系的成分）
6．“能吃苦，肯奋斗，有担当，似一叶扁舟在激湍中逆流而上，如一株小树在万木前迎来春光。”这就是陆鸿，《感动中国》2022年度人物之一。虽幼时高烧导致身体残疾，但他仍坚持学习。毕业后，由于身体残疾，陆鸿没有找到工作，他开始自主创业，从卖水、修自行车到最后成功开相册厂，他帮助许多残疾人就业，实现人生价值……请以“永不言弃”为话题，结合自身经历，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历以及他身上值得我们学习的优秀品质。
参考词汇：相册album；坚持persistence
注意：
1.短文条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3.词数90左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep impression on me.
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【答案】 Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep impression on me.
Lu Hong comes from Jiangsu. A high fever caused physical disability when he was young, but he still persisted in studying. After graduation, due to his physical disability, Lu Hong couldn’t find a job. He is not complaining, not depressed, and unwilling to become a burden to his family. He started his own business, from selling water and repairing bicycles to successfully opening a photo album factory. He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.
Lu Hong is not afraid of hardship, willing to strive, responsible, and never gives up. He is a model for all of us. Compared to Lu Hong, there is nothing that cannot be overcome about the difficulties we face in life or study.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历及他的优秀品质；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总写，陆鸿给我留下了深刻印象，引出介绍的内容（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体讲述陆鸿的成长经历。
第三步，最后写陆鸿值得我们学习的优秀品质，结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
①leave a deep impression on sb. 给某人留下深刻印象
②come from来自
③be unwilling to do sth.不愿意做某事
④become a burden to成为…的负担
⑤be not afraid of hardship不怕吃苦
⑥compared to与……相比，比起
⑦due to由于
[高分句型]
①A high fever caused physical disability when he was young, but he still persisted in studying.（时间状语从句、but连接的并列句）
②Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year…（定语从句）
③Compared to Lu Hong, there is nothing that cannot be overcome about the difficulties we face in life or study.（there be句型和定语从句）
④ He helped many disabled people find employment and realize their value in life.（动词不定式作宾语补足语）
7．假如你校英文报正以“My hero”为题开展征文大赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文参赛，介绍你心目中的英雄——颜宁。
要求：1.内容须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.词数不少于100。
My hero
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【答案】例文：
My Hero
Yan Ning is a hero in my heart. She was born in Jinan, Shandong. Yan Ning, 45 years old, has been one of the top scientists in the world. And she is the founder of Shenzhen Academy of Medical Sciences. I admire her because she is a dream follower. When she was a little girl, she dreamed of being a scientist. To achieve her dream, she experienced a lot of difficulties. But she never gave up her dream. Instead, she worked hard to fight for it. From her, I learned that the key to success is hard work. No pains, no gains. As long as I take action, I’m sure my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍颜宁的基本个人信息；
第二步，介绍她的成就；
第三步，介绍她成为你心目中英雄的原因以及你从她身上学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②dream of doing sth梦想做某事
③give up放弃
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I admire her because she is a dream follower.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②When she was a little girl, she dreamed of being a scientist.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．今年是学习雷锋六十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。”请写一篇意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80字的作文。在作文中，简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。
Learn from Lei Feng
Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly.
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【答案】例文
Learn from Lei Feng
Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all his life to his beloved career as well. I was totally shocked by his character.
Such is human nature: people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his spirit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan “learn from Lei Feng, our decent idol”, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.
To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of math to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.
I strongly suggest that if each of us takes Lei Feng as our role model and copies his spirit, we shall see a better world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己对雷锋的崇敬之情；
第二步，介绍向雷锋叔叔学习的原因，并讲述在日常生活中是如何帮助别人的。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of代替
②so that以便
③take...as an example以……为例
[高分句型]
①I was totally shocked by his character.（一般过去时被动语态）
②I strongly suggest that if each of us takes Lei Feng as our role model and copies his spirit, we shall see a better world.（that引导宾语从句）
9．冬奥会上年仅18岁的中国自由式滑雪运动员谷爱凌成为了全世界的焦点。她参加了三项滑雪赛事，获得了两金一银的骄人成绩。她不仅是优秀的运动员，还是学霸和模特，同时擅长篮球、芭蕾等，她的成功来源于她对滑雪的热爱和努力付出以及她骨子里的自信和永不放弃的精神。请大家根据以上的导语提示，写一篇英语作文。
要求：1. 字数90-100左右。 2. 不允许在文中出现自己的姓名和学校。
参考词语：
英文名字：Eileen Gu 自由滑雪者： freeskier 芭蕾： ballet
学霸： grade-A student 自由式滑雪： Freestyle Skiing
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【答案】例文
At the Winter Olympics this year, Eileen Gu won two gold medals and one silver medal for China in the women’s freestyle skiing.
First, Eileen’s success needs her deep love in the skiing. It’s known that interest is the best teacher. Second, hardworking is the key to success. Success needs us to devote our time. Finally, her confidence enabled her to perfectly show her skill. In final race she even tried techniques which she never successfully completed .
In a word, from this fantastic eighteen-year-old girl, we can better understand passion, hard-working, and confidence.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出介绍谷爱凌的个人成就；
第二步，具体阐述她取得这样成就的原因；
第三步，书写结语，总结可以从她身上学习的精神。
［亮点词汇］
①In a word总之
［高分句型］
① It’s known that interest is the best teacher.（宾语从句）
② In final race she even tried techniques which she never successfully completed.（whicht引导的定语从句）
10．榜样的力量是无穷的。众所周知，无数革命先烈的努力奋斗才换来了我 们今天的幸福生活，请选择一个你心目中的革命先烈榜样，以A Hero in My Heart为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：1）你心目中的革命先烈英雄是谁；
2）简述英雄事迹一二及影响；
3）为致敬革命先烈，新时代的青少年要怎么做才能成为对社会有用的人。
2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数 100 左右。
A Hero in My Heart
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【答案】例文
A Hero in My Heart
A hero in my heart is Lei Feng. Lei Feng is a model soldier. On December 18, 1940, he was born in a poor peasant family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province. At the age of 18, he worked as a steel worker. He was often praised for his good job. On January 8, 1960, he joined the army. All his life, he was selfless and kind to others. He constantly did good deeds for others. As a result, he became a model soldier. After his death, Chairman Mao called on the people to “Learn from Comrade Lei Feng”. The whole nation was moved by his deeds. Lei Feng’s spirit will live in our hearts forever.
As a teenager, we should learn from Lei Feng. We need to help each other in life, and more importantly, we need to help those who need help. In this way, we can be useful to the society.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你心目中的革命先烈英雄是谁；
第二步，简述英雄事迹一二及影响；
第三步，最后介绍作为一名青少年，要怎么做才能成为对社会有用的人。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②join the army参军
③as a result因此
④help each other互相帮助
[高分句型]
we need to help those who need help.（who引导的定语从句）
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