小升初小学英语总复习第九部分作文练笔教学课件

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这是一份小升初小学英语总复习第九部分作文练笔教学课件，共47页。
一、作文练笔题的概念和分类作文练笔题是学生综合运用所学知识，正确表达自己观点的题目。作文练笔题要求学生用所掌握的词汇、句型、语法等组织语言，写成篇章，是对学生整体语言水平的考查。在解题时，学生要做到细心审题、明确要求、注意单词的拼写和语法的运用，做到语句通顺、层次清楚、书写工整、卷面整洁。记住工整的书写和整洁的卷面会为作文加分。
小学阶段的作文练笔题的形式分为以下几种： 1.命题作文2.文字提示作文3.看图作文4.表格提示作文5.书信作文
二、常见作文练笔题的解题技巧1.命题作文：由于没有具体的限定材料，这种作文容易出现偏题，因此，写作时要仔细审题，确立中心，明确要求。2.文字提示作文：按提示信息整理出要点，可以在顺序上进行重新整合，特别注意不要逐字翻译。
3.看图作文：题目会提供一幅或一组有情境或有线索的图片，还可能在图内或图下配关键的提示词。做看图作文题的时候，要仔细观察图片，所写句子要符合图意；同时如有提示词，则需要尽量将提示词都用上，并注意时态的正确运用。4.表格提示作文：按照表格的提示，用自己熟悉的短语和句型，整理出要点，然后组合成短文。
5.书信作文：书信写作的格式是书信作文的一个重要的考核点。同时，书信作文的要求会在题目中给出，并且人名多数时候都是被限定的，在读题的时候，一定要看清楚。
【例1】Read and write. 请以“My favurite seasn”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一年四季中，你最喜欢的季节。要求：1. 认真阅读题目，围绕主题，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
解析: 本题是命题作文，围绕“My favurite seasn”这一主题，介绍一年四季中，你最喜欢的季节是哪个？可以从以下几个方面进行描写：这个季节的景色如何？气候怎样？在这样的气候和景色里，你最喜欢穿什么衣服、做什么活动等。本文用一般现在时进行写作，注意名词的单复数。
范文：There are fur seasns in a year. My favurite seasn is summer. Summer is green. The weather is always sunny and ht. I can wear my T-shirt and shrts. I can eat ice-cream. It's my favurite. I can g swimming, t. I like swimming very much.
【例2】Read and write. 你周末是怎么过的？请写一篇短文，介绍你上周末的活动，并说说你这周末的计划。要求：1. 认真阅读题目，根据文字的提示，明确写作主题，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
解析: 本题是文字提示作文，重点是要认真读懂提示的文字。要求是介绍上周末的活动和这周末的计划，因此，在写作时，需要注意时态的正确运用。介绍上周的活动用一般过去时，介绍本周末计划用一般将来时。介绍时要有一定逻辑以及内涵，即可获满分。
范文：Last weekend was a happy weekend. I went t a park with my family. We had a picnic there. This weekend is my friend, Lucy's birthday. She will have a birthday party in her huse. I will g t the party. We will sing birthday sngs. We will eat a birthday cake, t. We will have a happy time at the party.
【例3】Lk and write. 请根据图片，写一篇短文。要求：1. 认真观察图片，展开想象，写成通顺的语篇。可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
解析: 本题是看图作文，特点为图片呈现了场景、人物、事件等信息。从图片来看，有4个学生在打扫教室。文字提示可以给人物命名，展开合理的想象，所以作文的人称不限，时态不限。但是在想象中，需要注意要有一定的逻辑性和条理性，还要注意时态的统一性。
范文：Hell! My name is Lily. It's 5 'clck in the afternn. It's time t cleaning ur classrm nw. Lk! Zhang Bin and Liu Dng are sweeping the flr. Yang Ling is cleaning the windws. I am cleaning the desk and chairs. We are tired, but we are very happy.
【例4】Read and write. 请根据表格内容，写一篇短文，介绍你的三餐。要求：1. 认真阅读表格，根据表格内容，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
解析: 本题是表格提示作文，提示内容的主题是一日三餐。从表格的信息中可以知道一日三餐的时间安排和三餐的食谱。写作时需要注意介词的搭配和食物类单词的单复数表达形式。范文：Hell! My name is Tm. I ften have breakfast at 7：00 a.m. I ften have bread and milk fr breakfast. Smetimes I have egg ndles. I usually
have lunch at 11：30 a.m. I have rice, chicken and beef fr lunch. I have dinner at 6：30 p.m. I have fish, vegetables fr dinner. Fish is my favurite. It's gd fr my health.
【例5】Read and write. 假设你是Ken，请根据下面的来信内容，写一封回信。要求：1. 认真阅读下面的书信，根据来信内容，写一封回信，要注意书信格式。2. 书信内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
Dear Ken,I am in Beijing nw. It's cld in Beijing in winter. It snws here. I like winter because I can make a snwman. What abut yu? What's the weather like in Dngguan in winter? What d yu ften d there? Write sn. Yurs,Ben
解析: 本题是书信作文，写信之前要先认真阅读来信。从来信的称呼和最后的署名不难看出，这是Ben写给Ken的信，信中谈及了北京冬天的天气，Ben还介绍了他喜欢北京冬天的天气以及喜欢的原因。特别要注意信中提及的问题：What abut yu? What's the weather like in Dngguan in winter? What d yu ften d there? 因此，在以Ken的身份写回信时，要对这三个问题作出相应的回复。写作时需要注意书信的格式。
范文：Dear Ben,I am glad t receive yur letter. I like winter, t. It's warm and sunny in Dngguan in winter. It seldm snws here. I ften g t the park with my parents in winter. I ften ride my bike in the park. I can ride fast. Hpe yu can cme t Dngguan ne day. Yurs,Ken
一、Read and write. 命题作文写作。（一）请以“I lve my family”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你的家庭。要求：1. 认真阅读题目，围绕主题，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
I lve my family___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hell! My name is Li Ping. There are fur peple in my family.They are my parents, my brther and me. My father is 40. He is a dctr. He likes reading. My mther is a music teacher. She is pretty. She can sing sngs well. My brther is yung. He is a pupil. I am a pupil, t. We like reading bks like ur father. I lve my family.
（二）请以“This is my teacher”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你的老师。要求：1. 认真阅读题目，围绕主题，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
This is my teacher______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hell! I'm Zhang Bin. I have a new PE teacher this term. He is Mr Chen. He is tall and strng. He has big eyes. He can play basketball very well. We ften play games in his class. His class is s much fun. We all like him.
二、Read and write. 文字提示作文写作。（一）你的生日是什么时候？请写一篇短文，介绍你的生日日期、生日会的活动以及生日会上的心情等。要求：1. 认真阅读题目，根据文字的提示，明确写作主题，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
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Hell, I am Peter. My birthday is n May 13th. I will have a birthday party n that day. My parents will make a birthday cake fr me. My friends will cme t my party. We will sing and dance. We will play sme games, t. We will have a gd time at the party.
（二）你最喜欢的动物是什么？请写一篇短文，介绍它的外貌、颜色、习性等。要求：1. 认真阅读题目，根据文字的提示，明确写作主题，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
My favurite animal is rabbits. My parents bught a rabbit fr me last mnth. It is white. It has tw red eyes and tw lng ears. Its tail is shrt. It can jump. I ften play with it after finishing my hmewrk. It likes eating carrts. It's very cute.
三、Lk and write. 看图作文写作。（一）请根据图片，写一篇短文。要求：1. 认真观察图片，展开想象，写成通顺的语篇。可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
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Yesterday was Saturday. It was a fine day. I went t the park with my friends. We had a picnic there. We ate gd fd and drank apple juice. We ate sme watermelns, t. We sang sngs happily. We flew kites, t. We had a gd time.
（二）请根据图片，写一篇短文。要求：1. 认真观察图片，展开想象，写成通顺的语篇。可以给图中人物命名，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
There is a nature park near my hme. The park is big and nice. There are many trees and flwers in the park. There is a big lake in the park. Yu can see a bridge ver the lake. Yu can g bating n the lake. I ften g t this park n the weekend.
四、Read and write. 表格提示作文写作。（一）请根据表格内容，写一篇短文，介绍下面的人物。要求：1. 认真阅读表格，根据表格内容，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
Hell! My name is Li Bin. I am 12 years ld. My hbby is drawing. I have a friend. He is Chen Kai. He is 13 years ld. I am 156 cm tall. He is 162 cm. He is 52 kg. He is taller and heavier than me. He likes playing basketball very much. We usually draw r play basketball tgether n the weekend.
（二）请根据表格内容，写一篇短文，介绍Tm的一天。要求：1. 认真阅读表格，根据表格内容，写成通顺的语篇，有总起句，有细节描写。2. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
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Hell! This is my friend Tm's timetable. He ften gets up at 6：30 a.m. Then he has breakfast. He ges t schl at 7：30 a.m. Classes begin at 8：00 a.m. He has fur classes in the mrning and tw in the afternn. He ften has lunch at 12：00. Schl is ver at 4：30 p.m. After schl, he smetimes plays ping-png with his classmates. He has dinner at hme at abut 6：30 p.m. He ges t bed at 9：00 p.m. This is a day f Tm's.
五、Read and write. 书信作文写作。（一）假设你是Ken，请写一封信，向你的新笔友Paul介绍你自己。要求：1. 认真阅读题目，根据题目要求写一封信，要注意书信格式。2. 书信内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
Dear Paul, I'm glad t be yur pen pal. I am 12 years ld. I live in Guangzhu. I study in N.1 Sunshine Primary Schl. I am active. I have many hbbies. I like singing. I like drawing. I like playing basketball and ftball, t. What abut yu? Where d yu live? What are yur hbbies? Write me sn.Yurs, Ken
（二）假设你是Mike，你和你舅舅外出旅游了。请写一封信给你父母，向他们汇报你的旅游情况。要求：1. 认真阅读题目，根据题目要求写一封信，要注意书信格式。2. 书信内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。3. 不少于五句话，注意书写规范。
Dear Mum and Dad, I visited Beijing with Uncle Bill. It was a happy trip. On the first day, we visited the Great Wall. We tk a lt f pictures there. On the secnd day, we went t Tian'anmen Square. On the third day, we visited Beihai Park. On the furth day, we ate sme gd fd. On the fifth day, we went shpping in