Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation？课时4 Writing-八年级英语上册同步精品讲义（人教版）

Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation?Writing（课时4）＂三步五要素法＂写游记  话题分析本单元主要话题是节日与假期，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与节假日里的旅游相结合。命题内容以游览为主，根据提示记叙在节假日里旅游的大致情况。写作时应注意游记的内容、格式以及事态的运用。内容一般从以下几方面着手：1. Where did you go?2. How was the weather?3. What did you do?4. How was the food?5. How was the people?6. How did you feel about the trip?  写作步骤◆ 步骤一：在第一行写明日期（年月日与星期）和天气等信息。◆ 步骤二：正文用一般过去时态描述当天发生的事情。◆ 步骤三：在日记的最后描述自己的感受和体会。去年寒假，你到北京的爷爷家度假，玩得很开心。请根据提示（提示词必须都用上）展开合理想象， 写一篇短文，叙述你在北京的寒假活动，与大家分享。80词左右。提示词：winter vacation   Tian'anmen Square   the Palace Museum  a Beijing hutong  Beijing duck____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路导航】时态：以过去时态为主；人称：第一人称。【佳作展示】 Beijing is the capital of China and it is in the north of China. There are many places of interest there. A lot of people come to visit Beijing every year. I have been to Beijing many times. I have done many things there. Last winter vacation, I visited my grandfather in Beijing. I climbed the Great Wall and went to the Tian'anmen Square. I visited the Palace Museum but I didn't visit the Summer Palace. I enjoyed the Beijing opera and ate Beijing duck. I liked to walk with my grandfather at the Beijing hutong. I had conversation with foreigners and I took lots of photos. I felt tired but very happy. It was an interesting experience. I had a good time there. 【名师点评】【高分句型一】There are many places of interest there. 那里有很多名胜。句型：There be…… place of interest名胜【高分句型二】I have been to Beijing many times我去过北京很多次。Have been to Sp.去过了某地。【亮点短语】place of interest名胜；have a good time 玩得开心；walk with sb.与某人散步；conversation with sb.与某人聊天；take photos拍照。（一）同学们，在这个超长寒假里你一定有些特殊的收获吧，比如，你获得了一个新的生活技能，或者培养了一个新的爱好。校英语校刊专栏My Winter Holiday想向你征稿，了解你的宅家生活。请你叙述一个这样的经历，并谈谈它给你带来的影响，向校刊积极投稿。参考词汇： creative（有创意的），enrich（使丰富）注意事项：1）不得出现真实姓名；2）词数90左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）某英文网站正在举办以“My Meaningful Holiday”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请写一篇英语短文投稿，介绍你通常如何度过有意义的寒假，并说明理由。Activities (活动)Reasons (理由)read booksopen our eyes, bring fun, ...do sports (basketball...)keep fit, make friends, .........要求：1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；2.文中不得出现真实的人名或校名。3.词数：80词以上；首句已给出，不计入总词数。My Meaningful HolidayI'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I'd like to share my meaningful holiday with you.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）假如你是王欣，前几天收到英国朋友 Tom 来信，以下是信件部分内容：What did you do in your winter holiday?请给 Tom 写一封回信，回信需包含以下内容：1. telling him how you spent your winter holiday.2. explaining why you did that.3. talking about your feeling.要求：1.词数 80 左右，开头结尾已经写好不计入总词数。2.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名。Dear Tom,Thank you for telling me about your life. In this winter holiday, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Wang Xin（四）根据本模块的话题，写一次自己难忘的旅行。词数70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。下面的问题可以帮到你:How did you get there? What did you see there? What did you do there? What did you feel about it?If you don't go to the Great Wall, you won't become a hero.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案1．例文：During the long winter break during which the epidemic was spreading, I had no choice but to stay indoors and isolate ourselves. The long isolation period means more free time. I felt a little bored at first, but soon I realized I could use this period to do whatever I liked to enrich myself. During the isolation period, I spent an hour practicing the piano every morning. I liked it very much. I also spent a lot of time reading every day, just like many other people. This kept boredom away and let me learn lots of new things. In addition, I started to learn how to cook. My first meal wasn’t very good, even though I spent a lot of time on it. I thought it was creative, but it tasted bad. But learning something new was fun. My cooking skills have gotten better since then. I also learned to study more independently.During this time, I had found ways to improve myself. Let’s hope that the epidemic ends soon and that things can return to normal.【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语，写出自己漫长的寒假是如何度过的，有什么收获以及自己的感想，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。2．例文My Meaningful HolidayI'm Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I'd like to share my meaningful holiday with you.Whenever I have a holiday, I will keep a habit of reading books, because I think it can not only open our eyes, but also bring a lot of fun. Besides, reading is good for our Chinese learning. And then, I will also keep doing sports, such as playing basketball or table tennis. We can keep fit, make more friends and relax ourselves by doing sports. Finally, going outing is also a good choice, especially with your family. Nature’s beauty is worth admiring.This is how I spend my holiday. It is meaningful, isn’t it?【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“My Meaningful Holiday”为题写一篇作文，介绍自己通常是如何度过有意义的假期的。写作指导：本文注意主要以第一人称展开叙述，因为是描写自己通常如何度过假期，所以时态用一般现在时即可。写作时注意层次要分明，内容要结合表格提示展开。3．例文Dear Tom,Thank you for telling me about your life. In this winter holiday, I had an unforgettable time. I got up early and did exercise for 40 minutes every morning, because I want to be healthy. What’s more, I learned to do some housework because I think it would help my mother a little. I continued to study hard during the holiday, because I want to improve my study. I really enjoyed myself during my winter holiday. What about you? Please write to me. Thanks a lot.Yours,Wang Xin【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据Tom的来信写一封回信，向他介绍寒假做了什么、为什么这么做以及自己的感受；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍自己在寒假期间做了什么以及做这些事的原因；第三段介绍自己的感受并收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。4．例文：
     If you don't go to the Great Wall, you won't become a hero.On May Day my classmates and I went to the Great Wall. We got on the bus in the early morning. On our way to the Great Wall, we saw lots of new buildings being built here and there. Beijing is changing a lot every day.After two hours the Great Wall appeared before our eyes. She was so wonderful that we couldn't help cheering. At once we started towards the top. We were very glad to be heroes in the end. How great the Great Wall is! We were proud of the Great Wall and the people who had built it. And we made our mind to work harder than before. We will try our best to make our motherland richer and stronger.【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一次自己难忘的旅行，开头已给出。要求根据问题的提示，写明你是怎么到达那里的、你的所见，所做的事情及对此次旅行的感受。可适当发挥。2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作。时态采用一般过去时为主。文章要紧扣题目要点，围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。