2024届高考英语复习写作专题3个人生活学案

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Ⅰ．应用文写作祝贺信假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Michael在学校举办的中国诗词大会比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件向他表示祝贺。1．祝贺他获奖；2．肯定他付出的努力；3．询问何时方便，一起交流一下中国古诗词学习心得。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry ContestDear Michael，      Yours，Li HuaDear Michael，I am writing to offer my congratulations on your winning the first prize of your group in the Chinese Poetry Contest．①As your friend, I just want you to know how delighted I am at your success．For these years, you've shown great interest in Chinese poetry and kept on reciting poems every day．②Not only have you accumulated much knowledge about Chinese poetry, but also you have had a deep understanding of it．Your appreciation for those poems is sometimes beyond our expectations．You deserve to win this prize．③I do hope to have a talk with you and exchange our views about Chinese poetry．Looking forward to your reply．Yours，Li Hua1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如offer one's congratulations, delighted, show interest in, keep on doing sth．, accumulate, have a deep understanding of, appreciation, beyond one's expectations, deserve to do sth．, exchange, look forward to等。2．句式美：①句how delighted I am at your success为how引导的宾语从句作know的宾语。②句运用了not only ...but also ...连接并列句，且not only部分运用了部分倒装结构。③句I do hope to have a talk ...运用了“do＋动词原形”的强调结构。假如你是李华，你的好友王芳在中学生英语演讲比赛中荣获一等奖。请你根据以下内容，给她写一封祝贺信。内容包括：1．表达你的愉悦心情；2．向她表示祝贺；3．请她介绍成功的经验。注意：1．词数 80 左右；2．开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 the English Speech ContestDear Wang Fang,      Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Wang Fang，Hearing that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, I'm writing to give you my sincere congratulations．You don't know how excited I was when I heard the good news．I am proud of you! Your pronunciation and fluent English made a profound impression on me．It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest．Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning．I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice．I am looking forward to your early reply．Yours，Li HuaⅡ．读后续写(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Mother's Day SurpriseThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day．How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed．They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge．They had watched their mother in the kitchen．There was nothing to it．Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do．[悬念1]The big day came at last．The alarm rang at 6 a．m．The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen．They decided to boil the porridge first．They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast．Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk．Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture．Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan．Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread．The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds．Jenna threw the burnt piece into the  sink and put in the other slice of bread．This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely．Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake．The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire．Jenna panicked．Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly．But the stove was a mess now．Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge．But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain．Jenna made him put his hand in cold water．Then she caught the smell of burning．Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well．[悬念2]注意：续写词数应为150左右。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared．                                                                          The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up．                                                                         一、理清文章大意关键：Who: Jenna and JeffWhere: in the kitchenWhen: on the morning of Mother's DayWhat: preparing a surpriseHow: cooking in the kitchen大意：双胞胎Jenna和Jeff在母亲节这天，自己动手，为妈妈做早餐，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1 思考：这对双胞胎自认为做早餐没有问题，难道情况真的是这样的吗？他们真的知道怎么做吗？悬念2思考：面包也被烤焦了，双胞胎在厨房搞得一团糟，爸爸不知道吗？知道了会帮助他们吗？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①当孩子们看到爸爸出现会是什么样的反应？②他们最终做早餐成功，是爸爸帮助他们的吗？③他们是不是一切从头开始？段首句2思考：①当他们把早餐拿到楼上叫醒妈妈时，她会如何反应？会感到很惊讶吗？ ②孩子做早餐对妈妈来说意味着什么？③孩子们会对妈妈说些什么吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph 1：爸爸出现→救命稻草→爸爸帮忙→重新做早餐Paragraph 2：妈妈被叫醒→惊喜→感慨→孩子祝妈妈节日快乐As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared．Father's appearing was like a saviour to the two children．Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again．They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge．Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success．It was all right this time．Delicious breakfast was ready．How happy they were!  The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up．When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised．It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much．The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn't expect．The children said loudly, “Happy Mother's Day！” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again．1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①positive一词暗示两个孩子在爸爸的指导下，重拾信心，采取积极的措施进行补救。②没有直接说他们这次成功，而是用all right和ready，这种写作方式可以调动读者的互动意识。③perfect一词高度评价了他们做的早餐，也折射出妈妈的喜悦心情。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①under the guidance of, adjust, the key to, hug等高级词汇的运用增加了文章的亮点。②感叹句用得恰如其分，让读者仿佛看到了他们高兴的样子。③全文用了两处非限制性定语从句，使文章句式结构丰富。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Finally, the bell rang．“Don't forget to practise your class presentation at home！” Miss Bella cried as everyone started talking and packing their schoolbags．Jessy felt sick．She hated having to read aloud in class．She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her．Once, when Jessy was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical．Jessy watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school．He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence．He was just one of those people who were good at everything．Jessy sighed．As she turned the corner, she saw Lee's watch lying right in the middle of the path．Jessy knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didn't want to run after him．Jessy bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home．On arriving home, Jessy put it on almost without thinking．She was surprised it fitted so well．She walked to the mirror and started practising her speech．Words just flooded out of her．“I'm going to talk about swimming．I have been lucky．I've won lots of competitions．But when I'm in a race, I'm not really thinking about winning．I'm just loving the feeling of being in the water ...” Jessy laughed with excitement．She walked across the room．She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence．Turning back to the mirror, Jessy saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass．The flashes of silver seemed almost magical．So maybe Lee's watch really did have something magic about it．The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Bella asked who was going to be brave and go first．Nobody moved．Jessy slowly raised her arm．Before Miss Bella could say anything, there was a shout from behind．“She's stolen my watch！” Lee said angrily．“It went missing at school yesterday．”注意：续写词数应为150左右。Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jessy, waiting for an explanation．                                                                          Miss Bella smiled and asked the class to listen to Jessy's speech first．                                                                          【参考范文】Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jessy, waiting for an explanation．A flush of embarrassment came to her cheeks, making Jessy biting her lips．Dead silence suddenly fell．Then came Miss Bella's voice, “Why is Lee's watch on your wrist？” Jessy hesitated for a while and decided to tell the truth．However, on second thoughts of the well-prepared speech and the magic of the watch, she changed her mind．“Miss Bella, could I give the speech first and then explain？” She made a request in a tone of begging．Miss Bella smiled and asked the class to listen to Jessy's speech first．Jessy put away her fright, took a deep breath, and made for the platform．Casting a glance at the sea of faces watching her, Jessy cleared her throat and began her speech．“I'm going to talk about swimming ...” Word began to flood out of her．“What a terrific speech！” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Bella nodded with approval．Immediately Jessy finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class．Relieved, Jessy told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch．She returned the watch to Lee as she eventually realised the real source of confidence．