2024届高考英语复习写作专题4个人生活方式学案

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Ⅰ．应用文写作道歉信假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件：1．未及时回信的原因； 2．你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom，     Yours，Li HuaDear Tom，How is everything going on with you? I'm writing this letter to express my apology to you for not writing you back in time．In the first place, I'll be so happy if you could accept my apology．①It's of great importance for me to make full preparations for the final exam last week．Therefore, I couldn't spare enough time to write you back in time．What's more, I am willing to tell you that I am to do some part-time jobs in the summer holiday．②No one can deny the fact that we can have our vision broadened in the process．③Last but not least, it must be pointed out that I would love to go travelling during this holiday．I am looking forward to hearing from you．④And I'll appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply．Yours，Li Hua1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be going on with, express one's apology to, in time, in the first place, be of great importance, make full preparations for, what's more，be to do, deny, broaden, last but not least, point out等。2．句式美：①句It作形式主语，真正的主语为后面的不定式短语to make full preparations for the final exam last week。②句the fact后接that引导的同位语从句，that在从句中不作成分，但不可省略。③句it是形式主语，真正的主语是that引导的主语从句，that在从句中不作成分。④句if引导条件状语从句，it为指示代词，指代if从句的内容。假定你是李华，你与外教David约定于本周六一起游南湖公园，但因故不能赴约。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示歉意；2．解释原因；3．另约时间。注意：1．词数80左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear David，    Yours，Li Hua【参考范文】Dear David，I'm sorry to say that I can't go to Nanhu Park with you this Saturday．My uncle phoned and asked me to pick him up at the airport on Saturday morning．I have tried to find an alternative person to do it, but no other person is available．Shall we walk in the park on Sunday morning? Please let me know if the time is suitable for you and I am open to suggestions as well．Please allow me to say sorry again．Yours，Li HuaⅡ．读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son．Suddenly a crow perched (栖息) on their window．The father asked his son, “What is this？” The son replied, “It is a crow．” After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this？” The son said, “Father, I have just now told you that it's a crow！” After a little while, the old father again asked his son for the third time, “What is this？”At this time some expression of irritation (恼怒) was felt in the son's tone when he said to his father with a rebuff (生硬回绝), “It's a crow, a crow．” A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What is this？”[悬念1]This time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’？ Are you not able to understand this？”A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered (发皱的) diary, which he had maintained since his son was born．On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page．When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary：[悬念2] Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow was sitting on the window．My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow．I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question．I did not feel irritated at all but I rather felt affection for my innocent son．注意：续写词数应为150左右。After reading the diary,                                                                            Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father．                                                                          一、理清文章大意关键：Who: the son and his fatherWhere: in the houseWhat: the diaryHow: the son was ashamed大意：父亲问了儿子4次“这是什么”，儿子回答4次“乌鸦”后开始大发雷霆。父亲拿出以前记录不厌其烦回答儿子23遍同样问题的日记让儿子看。二、挖掘文中悬念点悬念1思考：文章为什么用了4次“What is this？”？悬念2思考：儿子读完日记后有什么感受？三、分析段落开头语段首句1思考：①读完日记后儿子会哭吗？ ②儿子会想起自己的童年旧事吗？③儿子想自己要是老的时候，自己的儿子会怎么看自己？段首句2思考：①儿子为什么羞愧地跪下？他会对父亲说些什么？②儿子会联想到儿时父亲为自己所做的一切而向父亲承诺些什么吗？通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：Paragraph 1：感动流泪→回想起日记中记录的内容→反思：自己老的时候儿子会怎样对待自己Paragraph 2：感到惭愧，跪下道歉→求得宽恕→许诺After reading the diary, the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he sat together with his father．His father patiently answered the same question all 23 times without feeling any irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! The son thought to himself: If I attain old age, how will my son look at me? Will he think of me as a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight, poor hearing or poor understanding?Feeling ashamed, the son got down on his knees before his father．He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive him for his bad behaviour．He said this aloud, “I promise to see you happy forever, Dad．It is you who have cared for me since I was a little child, showering your selfless affection on me．You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university．I will serve you in the best way no matter how you behave．”1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。①patiently一词与上文作者对父亲的不耐烦形成了鲜明对比。②without feeling irritation巧妙地呼应了上文的At this time some expression of irritation was felt。③selfless一词用得精妙，概括了父亲的伟大，折射了作者惭愧的原因。2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。①all 23 times与上文照应，与父亲问了4次同样的问题作者就不耐烦形成强烈反差，此处是全文的点睛之笔。②It is you who ...此处强调句用得恰如其分，尽显儿子的惭愧之情，也显露儿子回报父爱的决心。③If I attain old age(条件状语从句)，showering your selfless affection ...(非谓语动词短语)，so that I could afford ...(目的状语从句)等高级句式和结构的应用为文章的增分点。阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One Saturday morning, Jeremy woke up to a quiet house．Usually Mum was awake making breakfast and cleaning the kitchen, but not today．At the sound of his mum coughing, Jeremy knocked on her bedroom door and asked with great concern, “Mum, are you OK？” “Honey，” Mum said weakly．“I have a terrible cold．You can have cereal (燕麦) for breakfast and watch cartoons．I'm going to stay in bed．”Jeremy poured some cereal into a bowl and ate the pieces dry．Mum must feel very bad if she was  staying in bed all day．How could Jeremy help? First, he wiped up the crumbs of cereal he left on the kitchen counter．He also put away the cereal box neatly, so the kitchen looked just as it did when he woke up．But what else could he do? Jeremy thought．Saturday was the day when mum did laundry．Jeremy loved to watch the clothes spinning in the machine．That should be fun! He ran to his room to get the laundry basket, inside which there was his mother's favourite white dress, among other clothes and a pair of red socks．Jeremy opened the door to the washer and put the clothes inside．He had watched Mum do laundry lots of times, so he knew where to find the washing powder and how to pour it into the machine．Finally, he closed the door and pressed the big button that said “START”．Jeremy looked through the round glass window．Water was pouring in, and the machine was starting to spin, making his clothing tumble around．That was easy!Jeremy watched cartoons until he heard the washing machine beep．That meant the washing was done．Jeremy opened the door to take out the damp clothes．He took out a few at a time and moved them into the dryer．Everything seemed clean, and Jeremy felt proud．Then he pulled out a pink dress．注意： 续写词数应为 150 左右。But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket．                                                                          Holding the pink dress, Jeremy nervously knocked at his mum's bedroom door again．                                                                          【参考范文】But he remembered there was no pink dress in the laundry basket．“Where did it come from？” Jeremy wondered, reaching into the washer to take out more clothes．Then much to his astonishment, he pulled out two T-shirts, both in light pink．Realising there was something wrong, Jeremy stood frozen, his heart sinking．While racking his brain for reasons, he caught sight of the red socks, and it suddenly occurred to him that they must be to blame for it．With no means of handling the situation, Jeremy was in such a panic that he even thought of hiding the dress from his mum．“That isn't a positive approach to the problem，” he reminded himself．Finally, he decided to dry and fold the laundry before telling his mum everything．Holding the pink dress, Jeremy nervously knocked at his mum's bedroom door again．After what seemed like ages, he came to the bedside, his head drooping．Sensing his unease, his mother inquired with concern what was wrong．“Sorry Mum, I shouldn't have ruined your favourite dress．” Jeremy apologised．Stuttering out the mistake he had made, he was ready to get a good scolding for his wrongdoing．Realising what was going on, his mother smiled understandingly at him, “Never mind, dear．I know you meant to help．” Then his mother held the dress up before her and said in an approving tone, “You know what? I think it looks nice．” At this Jeremy beamed with relief, making a silent vow to be more careful in helping his mum out next time．