2024届高考英语复习写作专题15环境保护学案

Ⅰ．应用文写作

倡议信(书)

近期“公筷行动”公益广告每天在央视频道黄金时间播出。为了号召大家用餐使用公筷，请你以学生会的名义向全校师生写一封英文倡议书刊登在校英文报上。内容要点如下：

1．“公筷行动”简介；

2．你的建议或想法。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear teachers and students，

The Student Union

Dear teachers and students，

①As we see, a public service advertisement is being aired on CCTV every day recently, which is about advocating the use of public chopsticks to avoid using one's own chopsticks to pick food from the same dishes．②It is intended that the bacteria and viruses will be prevented from spreading．

③For the sake of our health and safety, I think it is good and necessary to use “public chopsticks” when dining together with others．So let's start taking action right away!

The Student Union

1．词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如be aired on, advocate, avoid doing, be prevented from doing, for the sake of, dine together with, take action, right away等。

2．句式美：①句中使用了两个非限制性定语从句，分别由as和which引导。

②句用了“It is＋过去分词＋that引导的主语从句”，It作形式主语。

③句中think后接宾语从句，从句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语to use “public chopsticks”。

假定你是李华，请你给校英语报写一封倡议信，号召全校同学积极响应学校正在开展的垃圾分类活动，内容包括：

1．垃圾分类的意义；

2．你的建议。

注意：1．词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：垃圾分类 waste classification

Dear fellow students,

Yours，

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear fellow students，

As you may have noticed, the programme of waste classification in our school has kicked off．I am writing to call on you, members of the school, to take immediate action．

Every day, we produce piles of waste, ranging from plastic bottles to paper, which not only leads to environmental pollution, but is also a waste of resources．Therefore, it is urgent for us to take an active part in the waste classification programme．First, we can collect what can be recycled to save resources．Second, harmful materials should be sorted and treated properly to avoid pollution．Most importantly, we need to develop the habit of classifying waste．

Let's do it!

Yours,

Li Hua

Ⅱ．读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“I just want a normal birthday party，” April told Bailey as they walked home from school．

Bailey knew what April meant．April's parents loved the environment．And because April happened to be born on Earth Day, all her parties had an Earth Day theme．

“Remember when you turned seven？” said Bailey．

“How could I forget the Throw-Out Blowout？” said April．

“We helped out at your garage sales and donated the money to charity．And when you turned eight ...”

“It was a Tree Spree，” finished April．“We planted maples．” “Last year, we all collected newspapers to recycle，” said Bailey．“The Print Sprint，” April groaned (抱怨)．

Bailey giggled, “I thought it was fun．”

Later that night, as April loaded the dishwasher, she said, “I'd like to plan my own party this year．”[悬念1]

“Sure，” said Mum．“We could have a Compost Carnival．” “Great idea！” said Dad．

April cleared her throat．“I'd like to go to Maze Craze (疯狂迷宫) instead．” “Really？” said Dad, surprised．

“I guess we could do that．Dad and I can send you kids there，” said Mum．

April couldn't wait for her birthday! She and her friends would have so much fun．And they wouldn't have to think one bit about the Earth．

At school the next day, April told her friends, “I'm having my birthday party at Maze Craze！”[悬念2]

“You are？” said Josie．“But we always do something earthy on your birthday．” “Remember that salamander (火蜥蜴) we found two years ago？” said Tyler．“Yeah，” said April．“This year, we're not even going outside．”

“Oh！” said Tyler．

The following weekend, everyone gathered in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze．

“Thanks for coming，” said April．“I've been so excited about my party．No shovels (铲子)．No collecting recyclables．Nothing earthy about it．” She shifted her feet．“Then I got here this morning and saw this parking lot．”

April's friends glanced around．Plastic bottles bounced (弹起) across the ground．Newspapers and fast-food sacks blocked the storm drain (排水道)．Shopping bags rustled (沙沙作响) in the trees．[悬念3]

注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。

“What a mess！” April frowned．                                                                      

April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled．

一、理清文章大意

关键：Who: April

Where: in the parking lot outside of Maze Craze

When: on her birthday

What: a normal birthday party

How: April tried to celebrate her birthday in a new way．

大意：本文讲述了April今年想在疯狂迷宫过生日。生日当天，她和朋友到达疯狂迷宫外面的停车场时，看到了很多垃圾。

二、挖掘文中悬念点

悬念1 思考：April会怎样计划自己的生日呢？

悬念2思考：疯狂迷宫与环保有关联吗？与地球日主题有关吗？

悬念3思考：面对眼前的这种情景，April和她的朋友会做些什么呢？

三、分析段落开头语

段首句1思考：

①停车场既然这么脏乱，April会对朋友和家人说些什么呢？

②April的爸爸妈妈会怎么做？

③大家会怎样捡垃圾？

段首句2思考：

①朋友们的衣服会不会因为捡垃圾而弄脏？

②朋友们会祝贺 April生日快乐吗？

③April对明年的生日聚会有何打算？

通过以上思路，预设续写情节如下：

Paragraph 1: April皱眉→April建议捡垃圾→大家设法捡垃圾

Paragraph 2：感到高兴→大家祝April生日快乐→明年的打算

“What a mess！” April frowned．Though she had been longing for a non-Earth Day birthday, it was difficult to turn a blind eye to such a mess．She turned around to her friends, “How about picking up the trash first？” Her proposal was quickly approved by others and soon they were in business．April's mum grabbed some gloves from the trunk while her dad managed to remove those shopping bags in the trees．With the bags, April and Bailey collected scattered bottles．By the drain, Josie and Tyler made great efforts to clear the blockage．Many hands make light work．In a short while, three bags were filled with cans and newspapers to recycle．

April looked at the collected rubbish and smiled．Then she looked up at her friends．Their neat clothes for the birthday party were soaked with sweat, but their faces glowed with satisfaction．It felt so good to do something for the Earth．“Happy Earth Day, everyone，” said April．“Now we are ready for Maze Craze．” “Happy Birthday, April！” shouted her friends．“I'm so lucky to have been born on Earth Day！” April thought to herself．“A Compost Carnival may be a good idea for next year．”

1．使用恰当的修饰词让描写更加生动。

①quickly一词暗示其他人和April也有同感，因此立刻赞同她的提议。

②两处用了so作修饰词，表示程度，比very语气强。

2．词汇与语法结构丰富、准确。

①turn a blind eye to, make great efforts to, be soaked with sweat, glow with satisfaction等都是精彩的高级表达。

②运用了Though引导的让步状语从句。

③How about doing sth．? 表示建议。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

One morning on my way to school, I noticed an elderly woman dressed in a yellow vest (马甲) carrying a garbage bag and one of those rubbish claws (爪形器具)．“What's that lady doing？” I asked Mum．“Vest Lady．She just picks up rubbish around here for fun，” Mum said．“Why would someone think picking up rubbish looking like a construction worker is fun？” I puzzled．

For several years I'd witness this mysterious Vest Lady — rain or shine — on my way to school．I had thought she was crazy for picking up rubbish．Eventually I smiled and waved at her each time I saw her．Later, I moved to high school．The time I saw rubbish here and there I felt really annoyed．Then I'd think, “Why isn't anyone picking up this rubbish? People are so inconsiderate！” However, shortly after, I realised picking up the rubbish was not someone else's problem．

Now I couldn't walk past litter without feeling guilty．I volunteered to clean up rubbish around our school．Strange as it might sound, picking up litter was kind of a thrill for me! In fact, I was so determined that for my 17th birthday I bought myself a rubbish claw, reusable gloves and a reflective safety yellow vest with my own name on it．

During my first attempt in my stylish equipment, met with unfriendly looks from others as if I were a criminal doing community service．One day, I had an epiphany (顿悟), “I'm acting just like Vest Lady！”

But there was too much rubbish around, cigarette ends littered about, cans rolling on the street, pieces of paper hidden in the grass and plastic．How would I get more volunteers involved in rubbish removal? A smart idea flashed into my mind．

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Soon I created my website gopickingup．com．                                                                      

More and more people put on vests with their own names．                                                                      

【参考范文】

Soon I created my website gopickingup．com．On the website I launched a rubbish removal campaign．I described my purpose — calling on volunteers to pick up rubbish．I posted pictures of rubbish littered about on the website, which could not only illustrate the severe situation but also show that a large number of volunteers were in great need．Besides, I shared the story of Vest Lady who influenced me so much．Surprisingly, my website gradually became a big hit on the Internet．

More and more people put on vests with their own names．Volunteers could be seen picking up rubbish in their spare time．The yellow vests made beautiful scenery in the park or on the street．With our joint efforts, the environment became better and better．What delighted me most was that people's awareness of environmental protection was improved．The rubbish removal campaign was a big success．Thanks to Vest Lady who rooted the sense of environmental protection in my mind, more people became Vest Lady．