Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake？课时4 Writing-八年级英语上册同步精品讲义（人教版）

Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake?
Writing（课时4）
知识精讲

话题分析
本单元的话题与食物相关，会描述一件物品或者美食的制作过程。
写作目标
能简单介绍某种事物的制作过程。
1．能用步骤连接词“first，next，then，after that，finally”等表示做某事情的先后顺序；
2．能用本单元的动词短语表示做某件事情的指令；
3．能正确使用可数名词和不可数名词；
4．写作微技能：利用wh－questions充实写作内容。
词汇积累
1．剥香蕉 ________________
2．把牛奶倒入搅拌机 ________________
3．切碎苹果 ________________
4．把火鸡放入烤箱 ________________
5．打开搅拌机 ________________
6．煮15分钟 ________________
7．还有一件事 ________________
8．别忘记加盐 ________________
9．主菜 ________________
10．传统食物 ________________
11．用……覆盖 ________________
12．用……填充 ________________
句子积累
(一)用“how many/how much”填空。
1．— ________________ rice do we need?
—Four cups.
2．— ________________ meat do you want to buy?
—I just need three kilos.
3．— ________________ chicken is enough?
—We need four slices of chicken.
4．— ________________ orange would you like?
—A little.
5．— ________________ oranges would you like?
—May I ask for five?
(二)写作微技能：利用wh－questions充实写作内容。根据上下文，将下列内容补充完整。
(Anna，an American girl，is asking Daming about how to make zongzi.They are in the kitchen.)
Anna：Daming，the Chinese zongzi is so delicious.Can you tell me ________ to make it?
Daming：Sure.We need to have rice，leaf and some meat.
Anna：How ________ rice do we need？And how ________ meat do we need?
Daming：Two kilos of rice and one kilo of meat are enough. ________，wash all the things.Remember to keep the rice in the water for at least a few hours.
Anna：Then?
Daming: ________，you need to cut up the meat.________，mix together all the ingredients and add some salt.
Anna：What's next？Can I put something delicious into the rice？What about eggs or beans?
Daming：Either is OK.It's up to you.________，put the rice and meat together into a leaf.________，fold the leaf.Don't let the rice out of it.You must be careful.
Anna：OK，I see.That's it?
Daming：Yes.Just put zongzi into the hot pot and cook for about an hour.________，you can enjoy the special food—zongzi.
Anna：Special food？Why do you say so?
Daming：Zongzi is the m________ dish on the Dragon Boat Festival.The Dragon Boat Festival is one of Chinese ________ (传统的) festivals.Now it is the legal(法定的) holiday.
Anna：Do you ________ (纪念) anything or anyone on this day?
Daming：Yes.It brings to remembrance of Qu Yuan，an ancient Chinese poet.On this day，people all over China，including some overseas Chinese ________ (庆祝) the festival.
(三)佳句欣赏与模仿
1．In most countries，people usually eat traditional food on special holidays.【special day 特殊的日子；traditional food 传统食物】
在特殊的日子里吃传统的食物是一个传统。
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2．It is always on the fourth Thursday in November，and it's a time to give thanks for food in the autumn.【a time to do sth.做某事的时刻】
端午节在农历五月初五，是全家团结的时刻。
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3．At this time，people also remember the first travelers from England who came to live in America about 400 years ago.【remember sb.纪念某人】
人们在端午节这天纪念屈原。
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4．These days，most Americans still celebrate this idea of giving thanks by having a big meal at home with their family.【celebrate sth.by doing sth.通过做某事庆祝某件事或某个节日】
人们通过吃粽子和观看龙舟的方式欢度端午。
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5．Here is one way to make turkey for a Thanksgiving dinner.【here is one way to do sth.这是做……(某道菜) 的一种方法】
这是端午节制作粽子的一种方式。
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【答案】
一、词汇积累
1．peel the bananas　2.pour the milk into the blender　3.cut up the apples
4．put the turkey into the oven　5.turn on the blender　6.cook for 15 minutes
7．one more thing　8.don't forget to add some salt　9.main dish　
10.traditional food　11.cover…with…　12.fill…with…
二、句子积累
(一)1.How much　2.How much　3.How much　4.How much　5.How many
写作微技能：利用wh－questions充实写作内容。
how；much；much；First；Then；Next；Next；After that；Finally；main；traditional；
remember；celebrate
(三) 佳句欣赏与模仿
1.It's a tradition that people eat traditional food on special days.　
2.The Dragon Boat Festival is on the fifth day in the fifth month of Chinese calendar.It's also a time for family to get together.　
3.People remember Qu Yuan on the Dragon Boat Festival.　
4.People celebrate The Dragon Boat Festival by eating zongzi and watching the Dragon Boat races.　5.Here is one way to make zongzi for the Dragon Boat Festival.


能力拓展

1． 假如你是杰里(Jerry)，你非常喜欢吃三明治，而且也会做三明治。请你写一篇80词左右的文章，介绍一下三明治的制作过程。
参考词汇：relish 调味品；佐料
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2. 根据以下要点，写一篇作文描述自己DIY水果沙拉的经历。
我喜欢DIY，所以上周日我决定亲自动手做一份水果沙拉。我去超市选了一些水果，例如：苹果、草莓、葡萄等，还买了一瓶沙拉酱。然后开工了。我把水果洗干净，切成小片。我把它们倒入大碗里面，倒入沙拉酱并用调羹搅拌。最终，完成了！ 这份沙拉不仅看起来色泽艳丽而且尝起来味道甜美。
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3．书面表达。
西红柿炒鸡蛋(scrambled eggs with tomatoes)是一道家常菜， 它既美味可口又简单易做。根据所给提示， 以＂How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes＂为题写一篇80词左右的短文。原料：一个西红柿、三个鸡蛋、一个青椒(green pepper)、盐、油(oil)
步骤：
1. 将西红柿和青椒切碎；
2. 把鸡蛋打破(break)放入碗里并搅拌；
3. 往鸡蛋里放些盐并搅拌；
4. 将平底锅(pan)加热， 锅里放些油， 然后放入鸡蛋、西红柿和青椒；
5. 翻炒两分钟即可。
How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
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4．书面表达。
假设你是李平，你的笔友Hector得知你会做爆米花（popcorn）,他也想亲自制作一次，但他不会。他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教做法。请你给他回一封电子邮件，简单介绍制作爆米花的过程。
要求：1. 使用first, next, then, finally 等表示过程的词；
2. 60词左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Hector,
I’m glad to get your e-mail.
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Yours,
Li Ping
参考答案
1．例文
My name is Jerry. My favorite food is the sandwich. I can make a sandwich in a few minutes. Here is a recipe for a great chicken sandwich!
First, put some butter on a piece of bread. Next, cut up a tomato and an onion, and put them on the bread. Then put some lettuce and the chicken pieces on the bread. Put two spoons of relish on the chicken. Finally, put another piece of bread on the top.
The sandwich is delicious. I think you will like it.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己喜欢吃的是三明治，并介绍三明治的制作过程。
2.写作指导：本文的时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段介绍自己喜欢吃的是三明治；第二段介绍制作三明治的过程；最后一段评价三明治真的很美味。句子通顺，逻辑性强，无标点和语法错误。
2．例文：

I like DIY, so I decided to make a fruit salad by myself last Sunday. I chose some fruit in the supermarket. For example, I bought some apples, strawberries and grapes. I also bought a bottle of salad cream. Then I started to make it. I first washed the fruit and cut them into small pieces. Then I put them into a big bowl, added some salad cream and mixed them together with a spoon. Finally, I finished. It not only looked colourful but also tasted sweet.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时注意要包含汉语提示的内容，描述自己DIY水果沙拉的经历。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍制作过程时，力求语言准确，条例清晰，制作顺序准确，制作过程完整。
3．How to make scrambled eggs with tomatoes
Do you like scrambled eggs with tomatoes? The dish is delicious and easy to cook. Here’s a recipe for it. First cut up one tomato and one green pepper. Next break three eggs and put them into a bowl and mix them. Add some salt and mix again. Then heat the pan and pour some oil into the pan. Put the eggs, the tomato and the green pepper into the pan. Finally cook for two minutes. Now you can enjoy it.
【详解】
首先认真审题，确定文章的主要内容，文章文体和时态。这篇作文所给材料非常详细，我们只要用合适的句式，正确的语言进行介绍就可以。根据该文章是一篇介绍如何做西红柿炒鸡蛋的说明文可知会出现大量的描述应该如何做的祈使句。为了说明做菜步骤，选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性和逻辑性。
【点睛】
这篇短文首先利用一句话“The dish is delicious and easy to cook”引入正文，开始介绍西红柿炒鸡蛋的做法。在介绍时，first，next，then，finally表示顺序的词的应用使得做菜步骤清晰有序，令读者一目了然。首尾句“Now you can enjoy it.”使得这篇说明文首尾呼应。总之这篇短文达到了预期的写作目的，是一篇比较成功的文章。
4．Dear Hector,
I’m glad to get your e-mail.
You say you like popcorn. I also like it very much. I learned from my mother about how to make popcorn two years ago. Now let me show you how to make it. First, put the corn into the popcorn machine. Next, turn on the popcorn machine. Wait for several minutes. Then pour the popcorn into the bowl and add one spoon of sugar to the popcorn. Finally you can eat the popcorn.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】
1.题干解读：本题要求回信介绍制作爆米花的过程，属于书信类写作。开头是寒暄I’m glad to get your e-mail；然后引出爆米花的话题，接着介绍制作方法Now let me show you how to make it。
2.例文点评：这篇习作先引出爆米花的话题再介绍做法，属于“总分式”结构；以一般现在时和祈使句结构为主，用第一和第二人称叙述；内容充实，步骤合理，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：be glad to, very much, learn from, how to do, two years ago, put into, turn on, wait for, add to.
高分句型：
1). You say you like popcorn.（宾语从句）
2). I learned from my mother about how to make popcorn two years ago.（“疑问词+不定式”结构）
3). Now let me show you how to make it.（固定句型）