Unit 9 Can you come to my party？课时4 Writing-八年级英语上册同步精品讲义（人教版）

Unit 9 Can you come to my party?
Writing（课时4）
知识精讲

话题分析
本单元的话题与party活动相关，主要的语言功能是表达被邀请的感谢，会描述活动。主要用书信格式。
【单元写作目标】
能写邀请函、接受函及有礼貌地拒绝邀请。
1．能用Can you…？或 Would you like to…？礼貌地发出邀请；
2．能用would like to，be going to，have to，must，might，may来描述计划或必须要做的事情。
一、词汇积累
(一)拒绝邀请时说明理由的动词短语
1．准备考试 ________________
2．看医生 ________________
3．得了流感 ________________
4．帮我的父母 ________________
5．见我的朋友 ________________
6．太多的作业 ________________
7．骑自行车 ________________
8．为考试学习 ________________
9．去看电影 ________________
10．和……打网球 ________________
11．帮助某人做某事 ________________
12．在某方面帮助某人 ________________
13．去旅行 ________________
14．照顾；照料 ________________
(二)时间短语
1．在星期六 ________________
2．这个周末 ________________
3．在这个月末 ________________
4．去年秋天 ________________
5．放学后 ________________
6．后天 ________________
7．下一次 ________________
8．前天 ________________
9．到下周五为止 ________________
10．28日，周五 ________________
(三)其他短语
1．有空的 ________________
2．为……感谢 ________________
3．多好的主意啊！________________
4．一个惊喜派对 ________________
5．乔迁派对 ________________
6．招待食物与饮料 ________________
7．期待做某事 ________________
8．收到某人的来信 ________________
9．邀请某人做某事/到某地 ________________
10．想要做某事 ________________
11．直到……才…… ________________
12．计划做某事 ________________
13．有空做某事 ________________
14．拒绝 ________________
15．外出闲逛 ________________
16．书面形式回复 ________________
17．经过努力，成功；胜利 ________________
18．来参加我的聚会 ________________
二、句子积累
(一)请用①Can you…？②Would you like to…？发出邀请；请用①Sure，I'd love to.②Sure，that sounds great.接受邀请；请用①Sorry，I'm not available/free.I may/might/have to/must/am going to…②I'd love to，but I'm afraid I can't.I may/might/have to/must/am going to…有礼貌地拒绝邀请。
请根据英文提示，写出简单的邀请话语、接受话语、礼貌拒绝话语及理由陈述。
1．Inviting：________________________________________________________________________
(can/go to the library)
Accepting：________________________________________________________________________
Refusing：________________________________________________________________________
Reason：________________________________________________________________________
(take a trip to Wenzhou with family)
2．Inviting：________________________________(would like to/birthday party)
Accepting：________________________________________________________________________
Refusing：________________________________________________________________________
Reason：________________________________________________________________________
(have the flu，go to the doctor)
(二)佳句欣赏与模仿
1．What a great idea！【What a/an＋adj.＋可数名词 感叹句；多么……】
多么棒的安排！
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2．I'm sad to see her go，and this is the best way to say “Thank you and goodbye.”【the best way to do sth.做某事的最好方式】
这个派对是庆祝她生日的最好方式。
________________________________________________________________________
3．Thanks so much for planning this.【Thanks for doing 感谢某人做某事】
非常感谢你邀请我。
________________________________________________________________________
4．To show how much we're going to miss her，let's have a surprise party for her next Friday the 28th.【to show 为了表达……】
为了表达我们多么感激她，让我们为她举办一次惊喜聚会吧。
________________________________________________________________________
5．Bring Ms.Steen to the party without telling her so that she can be surprised.【without doing 不做某事；so that 因此】
悄悄地为贝蒂做个生日蛋糕，因此她肯定很开心。
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6．I'm looking forward to hearing from you.【look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事】
我期待着能在派对上见到你。
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【答案】
一、词汇积累
(一)拒绝邀请时说明理由的动词短语
1.prepare for an exam　2.go to the doctor　3.have the flu　4.help my parents　5.meet my friends　6.have too much homework　7.go bike riding　8.study for a test　9.go to the movies　
10.play tennis with sb.　11.help sb.do sth.　12.help sb.with sth.　13.take a trip　
14.take care of/look after
(二)时间短语
1.on Saturday　2.this weekend　3.at the end of this month　4.last autumn/fall　5.after school　6.the day after tomorrow　7.next time 8．the day before yesterday　9.by next Friday　
10.Friday，28th
(三)其他短语
1.be free/available　2.thanks for　3.What a great idea！　4.a surprise party　
5.a housewarming party　6.serve food and drinks　7.look forward to doing sth.　
8.hear from sb.　9.invite sb.to do sth./to sp.10．would like to do sth.　11.not…until…　
12.plan to do sth.　13.be free to do sth.　14.turn down　15.hang out　16.reply in writing
17．make it　
二、句子积累
1.Can you go to the library with me？　Sure，I'd love to./Sure，that sounds great.　
Sorry，I'm not available.　I am going to take a trip to Wenzhou with my family.　
2.Would you like to come to my birthday party？　
Sure，I'd love to.　I'd love to，but I'm afraid I can't.　I had the flu and I must go to the doctor.
(二)佳句欣赏与模仿
1.What a great plan！　
2.The party is the best way to celebrate her birthday.　
3.Thanks so much for inviting me.　
4.To show how much we appreciate her，let's have a surprise party for her.　
5.Make a birthday cake for Betty without telling her so that she must be happy.　
6.I'm looking forward to seeing you at the party.

三、篇章训练
Mike乔迁新居，他邀请Jenny下周的某个晚上到新居共进晚餐。由于Jenny下周日程已排满，不能前往。请以Jenny的口吻替Jenny回信婉拒，并表示谢意。词数在60个左右。
September
Sunday
Monday
Tuesday
Wednesday
Thursday
Friday
Saturday
Dinner with my cousin
and uncle
Class
Music club
with Jim
Need to work
late
Need to work
late
Office
party
Amy’s birthday
party


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【写作思路】
该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时开头表示感谢迈克的邀请；第二段解释我不能去参加聚会的愿意，我下周要做的很多事；第三段祝他玩得愉快。
【佳作展示】
Dear Mike,
Thank you for inviting me to have dinner at your new house. I hope that I can have dinner with you. But I have to say sorry to you. I’m really busy next week!
On Monday, I have to have class. On Tuesday, I have to go the music club with Jim. On Wednesday and Thursday I need to work late. On Friday, I have to attend the office party. On Saturday, I will go to Amy’s birthday party. On Sunday, I will have dinner with my cousin and uncle.
Have a good time! You can live a happy life at your new house.
Yours,
Jenny
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用一般将来时解释我下周要做的事，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：invite sb to do sth，say sorry to sb，need to do sth，have a good time。
句型：宾语从句that I can have dinner with you。
能力拓展

1． 假如你是来自美国的丹尼(Danny)，你的中国朋友孙丽即将结束为期一年的交换生生活。为此，你打算周六晚上在你家为她举办一场送别聚会。请根据以下写作要点，在你们班级群里留言，邀请你班同学参加本次聚会。
写作要点：
1. 对孙丽的评价；
2. 举办此次聚会的原因；
3. 希望同学们来参加聚会并表演节目(put on a show)。
写作要求：90词左右；格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi everyone,
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Danny
2．书面表达
假设你是Dick，请根据内容提示给John封电子邮件，邀请他与你一起参加Ann的生日聚会。
提示：Time：6：30 p.m.，Wednesday，October 9th Place: Ann's house，Heping Street
要求：1.根据内容提示可适当发挥；2.词数不少于60，开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3．书面表达
Tom邀请李平周日去参加他的生日宴会，但李平的父母出差了，要到下个月才回来，奶奶又卧病在床，需要人照顾，另外英语考试即将来临，因此李平无法前去参加生日宴会。李平感到很抱歉，只好写信辞谢。
假如你是李平，请根据以上提示内容写一封信，要求80词左右。
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参考答案
1．参考范文
Hi, everyone,
You must know our classmate Sun Li. In my eyes, she’s so nice. She studies very hard. And she’s always ready to help others. I learned more about Chinese culture from her. Sadly, she's going back to China. To show how much I'll miss her, I'll have a party for her at my home this Saturday evening. Can you come? If you can, please help with these things: think of some games to play and if you could put on some kinds of shows at the party, that would be great.
Danny
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时按留言格式写。在写作时根据汉语提示的要点，在班级群里留言，邀请同学们参加本次聚会。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称为主来写留言内容；时态采用一般现在时来评价孙丽，采用一般将来时来邀请同学们参加聚会；写留言时力求语言准确，描述聚会的原因、时间、地点和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
2．Dear John，
How are you？Can you go to Ann's birthday party together with me？Her birthday party is at 6：30 p. m. on Wednesday，October 9th.It's at Ann's house. Her house is on Heping Street. Lots of our friends will go to her birthday party，and I'm sure we will have a good time. Are you free then？If you can go，please let me know.
Hope to receive your reply soon！
Yours，
Dick
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时，开头邀请约翰一起去参加安的生日聚会；接下来介绍她的生日聚会的时间和地点；最后希望收到约翰的回复。
2.例文点评：例文采用两段式；用第一人称和第二人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用一般现在时介绍安的生日聚会的时间和地点；用一般将来时介绍很多朋友将要参加她的聚会。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点：
短语：together with，lots of，have a good time，let sb do sth，hope to do sth。
句型：I'm sure后面接的宾语从句；If引导的条件状语从句If you can go；祈使句Hope to receive your reply soon。
3．Dear Tom，
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I'd love to go，but I can't. My parents are out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandma because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming English exam. I'm very sorry I can't go to your party. I hope you can have a good time.
Yours，
Li Ping
【解析】
1、题干解读：本文属于材料作文，属于道歉信，讲述李平为什么不能去参加汤姆的生日宴会并祝他们玩的开心。
2、例文点评：本文时态运用准确，词句使用恰当，是一篇优秀的文章，符合英语国家的写作思维。
3、高分亮点：
短语：thank you for doing, on business, have to, look after, study for, have a good time.
句型：I’d love to go, but I can’t.