外研版 (2019)必修 第三册Unit 6 Disaster and hope优秀课件ppt

这是一份外研版 (2019)必修 第三册Unit 6 Disaster and hope优秀课件ppt，共27页。PPT课件主要包含了什么时候”，正确地道的语句，turned on，名词作谓语，动词使用错误，liked，形容词作谓语，are raised，bicycled，include等内容，欢迎下载使用。

教学目标：1. 英语写作的两个意识2. 了解写作中常见的错误3. 通过写作训练强化写出正确地道的英语句子。
想要写好英语作文，就要养成良好的写作意识。 1. 要养成用英语思维写句子的意识。 2. 要养成正确使用谓语动词的意识。
1. 用英语思维写句子。 英语和汉语句子表达的语序是有区别的。 在汉语中我们一般说：“某人在什么时候在什么地方做了某事。”或 “什么时候，某人在什么地方做了某事。” 但在英语中则要表达成：____________________________________
“某人做了某事在什么地方
1. 这个星期五，我们将在阶梯教室（lecture hall）上汉语课。 _________________________________________________2.在过去几年里，这座小镇发生了很大的变化。 _______________________________________________
We'll have the Chinese lessn in the lecture this Friday.
Great changes have taken place in the past few years.
2. 正确使用谓语动词。 英语中，一个句子的主干部分是“主语 + 谓语+宾语”，而“谓语”则是句子的核心，因此，有无谓语不成句之说。 英语写作中，谓语出错都要扣分，故使用正确的谓语形式成为必然。正确的谓语形式包括：1）准确的谓语动词2）正确的时态、语态和主谓一致
1. 我突然想起一个好主意。 ___________________________________ _________________________________________2. 我们可能早点出发，以便我们有更多时间看书和选书 _____________________________________________________________________
Suddenly I thught a gd pinin.
We may start early s that we'll have mre time t chse and read bks.
In a flash I came up with a gd pinin.
start ut/ set ff
3. 从那时起，他就一直住在这个村庄。 ___________________________________2. 几个小时后，他们终于到达了目的地。 ____________________________________________
He has been living in this village ever since.
They arrived at the destinatin several hurs later.
Sectin 3　常见错误
一、谓语错误 谓语是句子的核心成分，谓语错误属于“重大错误”。通常每错必扣分。谓语错误通常分为以下两类：1. 谓语动词选用错误2. 谓语的时态、语态、一致性错误
1. 误：Ding a part­time jb can effect yur studies. 正：Ding a part­time jb can _____________________ yur studies.
affect/ have an effect n
2. 误：He pened the light after he entered the rm. 正：He ____________ the light after he entered the rm
1. 谓语动词选用错误
4. 误：He was like ice cream even thugh in winter. 正：He _____ ice cream even thugh in winter.
be 动词后面用动词原形
5. 误：The sprts meet will held in ur schl next Friday. 正：The sprts meet ___________ in ur schl next Friday.
will be held
3. 误：He fnd f pp music while his brther likes raps. 正：He _________ pp music while his brther likes raps.
2. 误：Children wh raise in pr families can generally deal with prblems mre effectively in their adult years.
2. 谓语时态、语态、一致性错误
1. 误：In the mrning, we had bicycled t the suburbs t plant trees.
正：In the mrning, we ___________ t the suburbs t plant trees.
误：Children wh _________ in pr families can generally deal with prblems mre effectively in their adult years.
3. 误： I have a wide range f hbbies, which includes drawing, cllecting stamps and s n.
正： I have a wide range f hbbies, which ________ drawing, cllecting stamps and s n.
主语which 指hbbies,为复数
二、单词拼写错误 很多考生因为基础词汇没掌握好，在写作时经常会出现单词拼写错误。拼写错误一般是每三个错词扣一分。但拼写错误过多的考生肯定是得不了好分数的。
误： Cmpared with thers, this cuntry pays little attentin t the plutin.
正： Cmpared with thers, this cuntry pays little attentin t the __________.
误：With the develpment f transprtatin, the wrld seems t be geting mre and mre smaller.
正：With the develpment f transprtatin, the wrld seems t be __________ smaller and smaller.
写作中使用非谓语动词时要注意非谓语与句子主语或所修饰名词的谓语关系和被动关系。这是很容易出错的点。
误： With his attentin fixing upn his cellphne, he didn’t ntice the teacher was standing by him.
正： With his attentin ______ upn his cellphne, he didn’t ntice the teacher was standing by him..
fix his attentin upn是固定搭配
误： Seating n the bench, she buried herself in her thught.
正： _________ n the bench, she buried herself in her thught.
改正下列句子中的错误。1．Peple thrwed cans, paper, bags and s n int the river.
2．It's high time we d smething t reduce the number f traffic accidents. 3．There have been mre and mre rad accidents happened in recent years.4．Dr. Smith, tgether with his wife, are t arrive by taking an evening flight.
请根据一下提示，以Travelling 为题写一篇关于旅游的短文。1. 旅游的益处。2. 旅游也可能有麻烦，如天气变化，丢失钱物等。3. 旅游应做好准备。如天气、交通状况、结伴而行等。文章必须包括所有要点，词数100； 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以Travelling 为题写一篇关于旅游的短文。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分 1. 旅游的益处。（the benefits f traveling）(领略大自然以及其他城市的美丽风景；呼吸新鲜空气；结交新朋友；放松自己) 2. 旅游的麻烦。（the truble f traveling）(如天气变化，丢失钱物) 3.应做好准备。（have enugh preparatin）(天气、交通状况、结伴而行)
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）As is knwn; breathe the fresh air;make friends with; be caught in; catch a cld; have a gd preparatin ， g n a trip第三步：连词成句1. As is knwn traveling is a gd activity.2. Yu can breathe the fresh air, meet different peple and make friends with them, which can help yu relax.3. Yu may be caught in the rain and may catch a cld while travelling.4. Therefre, when ging n a trip yu must prepare yurself carefully.2. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）考虑三个要点之间的逻辑关系前两个要点是转折，二三两个要点之间是因果，第二个要点的麻烦和第三个要点的准备工作，可用表示结构顺序的词。1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Firstly/First, Secndly/Secnd… And then, Finally, In the end, At last2.表并列补充关系：What is mre, Besides, Mrever, Furthermre, In additin As well as, nt nly…but (als), including,3.表转折对比关系：Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh+clause(从句), In spite f+n/ding,On the ne hand…,On the ther hand… Sme…,while thers…,as fr, s…that… 4.表因果关系：Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改【答案】Travelling（背诵） As is knwn,travelling is a very gd activity. When yu are free yu can g ut t enjy the beauty f nature. Travelling can let yu breathe the fresh air, meet different peple and make friends with them, which can help yu relax. But travelling is nt always pleasant. Fr example, the weather can be changeable. Yu may be caught in the rain and may catch a cld while travelling. What’s wrse,Yu may have yur mney stlen r may be injured. Therefre, yu must have enugh preparatin befre ging n a trip. Firstly, yu must have clear infrmatin abut the weather. Secndly, yu shuld chse a gd partner t g with. If s, yu will surely enjy yurself.