新教材2023版高中英语Unit9LearningPartⅦ单元写作学案北师大版必修第三册

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Part Ⅶ　单元写作主题写作——学校活动【考题回放】假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底举行的青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。1．比赛的时间、地点；2．邀请他的原因；3．训练计划将发送至其邮箱，请他提出建议。注意：1．词数不少于80；2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：青少年机器人技能竞赛the Adolescent Robotics CompetitionDear Chris，I have good news to tell you.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Jin【写作构思】1．确定写作体裁和主题体裁：应用文——邮件主题：邀请加入兴趣小组2．确定时态和人称。时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。3．明确写作要点：写信的目的→比赛的时间、地点→邀请他的原因→训练计划以及请他提建议。4．结合要点分为三个段落。【素材整理】1．关键词语will be held, promote, take part in, win first prize, show great talent for, as a consequence, the most suitable, in addition to, such as, I would appreciate it if...2．单句写作(1)青少年机器人技能竞赛将于7月底举行以促进机器人科学的发展。(hold, so as to do)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)我想强调的是此刻我们小组正在招募新的成员。(what引导的主语从句)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(3)我想邀请你参加，因为我知道你刚在你们团体举办的机器人比赛中获得了一等奖，已经在设计机器人方面显示出了很高的天赋。(take part in, show great talent for)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(4)因此，我认为你就是最合适的人选。(as a consequence)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(5)除了定期的训练外，训练安排包括参加各种各样的活动，比如参加一些国内的比赛。(in addition to, a wide variety of)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(6)我将通过电子邮件发给你详细内容。(send)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(7)如果你能给我们一些如何使它完美的建议我将不胜感激。(I would appreciate it if...)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【连句成篇】Dear Chris，I have good news to tell you. The Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held at the end of July ①so as to promote the development of robotics.②What I want to stress is that our group is looking for new members at this moment. I would like to invite you to ③take part in it, since I know you've just won first prize in the robotics competition ④held in your institute and have shown great talent for designing robots. ⑤As a consequence, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.The training schedule, ⑥in addition to regular training, includes joining in ⑦a wide variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions. I will send the details to you by email. ⑧I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect.I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours，Li Jin―→①so as to do不定式作目的状语② eq \a\vs4\al(,what引导的主语从句和,that引导的表语从句) ―→③ eq \a\vs4\al(take part in参加) ―→④ eq \a\vs4\al(,过去分词短,语作后置定语) ⑤ eq \a\vs4\al(as a consequence因此；所以) ―→⑥ eq \a\vs4\al(,in addition to,除……之外) ⑦ eq \a\vs4\al(a wide variety of各种各样的) ―→⑧ eq \a\vs4\al(,高级句式：I would, appreciate it if...) 【写作训练】假定你是李华，你校学生会暑期将组织“丝绸之路”沿线国家考察活动，留学生也可参加。请你用英语给对此次活动感兴趣的留学生Jenkins写一封电子邮件，告诉他相关内容：1．活动安排(参观、交流等)；2．报名条件(年龄、身体状况等)；3．报名方式。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Part Ⅶ　单元写作【素材整理】2．(1)The Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held at the end of July so as to promote the development of robotics.(2)What I want to stress is that our group is looking for new members at this moment.(3)I would like to invite you to take part in it, since I know you've just won first prize in the robotics competition held in your institute and have shown great talent for designing robots.(4)As a consequence, you are the most suitable person, I suppose.(5)The training schedule, in addition to regular training, includes joining in a wide variety of activities, such as participating in some national competitions.(6)I will send the details to you by email.(7)I would appreciate it if you give us some advice on how to make it perfect.【写作训练】参考范文：Dear Jenkins，I'm more than delighted to tell you about a school activity for the coming summer holidays, named Travel along the Silk Road. The details are as follows.In order to find out the connections between China and the countries along the Silk Road, the 15­day tour will include two parts. We'll visit the cultural relics and the museums with rich collections. In addition, we will call on some local residents at their homes. For the sake of safety, all the participants should be at least 18, and at the same time they should be strong enough for the changeable weather and the long journey.If you would like to take part in it, you can contact the Student Union either by email or telephone.Best wishes!Yours，Li Hua