04 自我介绍 中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

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04 自我介绍 2024年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版） 素材储备在写自我介绍的时候，我们要注意以下三点:1.简单介绍自己的概况。般包括姓名 、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。2我们可以选取简短的事例来说明自己的想法和性格。在具体写作时，要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法。3、用第一人称进行写作。第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述。 必备词汇家庭背景live in...居住在....                  be born in..出生......spent one' s childhood in... ...过童年   live a happy busy life过着幸福/忙碌的生活外貌特征tall高的                         short矮的slim苗条的                      thin瘦的overweight超重的                 fat胖的ugly丑的                         strong强壮的round face圆脸                    broad face宽脸straight hair直发                  curly hair卷发short/long hair短/长发             long nose高鼻梁big/bright eyes大的1明亮的眼睛   good-looking好看的ordinary-looking长相普通的      wear glasses戴眼镜教育背景graduate from..毕业于....              study hard at...努力学.....品质个性kind和蔼的                   determined坚决的open-minded思想开明的        reliable可靠的humorous幽默的              clever/smart聪明的gentle温柔的                 considerate体贴的active/optimistic积极的        easy-going随和的patient耐心的                hard-working努力的friendly友好的               warm-hearted热心的generous慷慨的              responsible有责任心的sensible明智的               sociable好交际的strict严厉的                  honest诚实的selfish自私的                 shy害羞的impatient没有耐心的           rude粗鲁的bad-tempered坏脾气的          careless 粗心的兴趣爱好be good at... 擅....               do well n...擅长.be fond of...喜.....                enjoy doing sth.喜欢做菜事be crazy about.. .对....着谜          have a git for. ....天赋be interested in... .对....感兴趣       be in the lead处于领先地位 相关话题作文解析一To Introduce Myself HI. my name is Lin Xiao, a girl of 14 years old. I’M studying in Class1,Grade 7 of Dongzhou  Middle school.1love music very much  although I 'm not very 9 at singing. I've been playing Guzheng, an ancient traditional instrument for a long time. I practice it every day after I finish my homework. Apart from that, 1 also like reading and writing which both give me a lot of fun and enrich my school life.1 often write some articles for our school newspaper.This is me. What about you? 参考译文 自我介绍 嘿!我叫林萧，一个14 岁的女孩。我就读于东洲中学七年级班。虽然我不太擅长唱歌，可我非常喜爱音乐。我学习古革这种古老而传统的乐器已经有很长段时间了。 每天做完作业后我都会练习古筝。除此之外，我还喜欢看书和写作，它们都给我带来了许多乐趣，而且也丰富了我的校园生活。我经常为我们的校报写一些文章。这就是我。你呢? 亮点词汇ancient 古老的;古代的traditional 传统的;守 旧的instrument .乐器;仪器;器械apart from除...以外enrich 丰富;充实 出彩句型Sb. be good at doing sth.某人擅长做某事。I love...我喜欢....I've been..... for a long time 我已经...很长一段时间了。...give me a lot of fum and enrich my school  life....给我带来了许多乐趣，而且也丰富了我的校园生活。write... for.. ..........为.....写......What about you?你呢? 高分点评本文向我们展示了一个多才多艺、热爱生活的女孩的形象。作者在遣词造句和语言表达上都有不俗的功底，各种高级词汇信手拈来，文中还使用了同位语“ an ancient traditional instrument"和定语从句“which both give me a lot of fun and enrich my school life"等，更使文章在表达上有了升华。 二 To Introduce Myself My name is Zhang Wei. I'm fifteen years old and I live in Beijing. I'm a junior middle school student and I do well in my study.My favorite subject is chemistry. I want to be a chemist when I grow up. I'm also interested in drawing. In my free time, I often draw some pictures of my cat Kitty.y won the first prize in a painting contest last year.Do you want to be my friend? You can email me at zhanaweiQ163. com. 参考译文 自我介绍我叫张神。我15岁了，住在北京。我是一名初中生我的学习或绩很优异。我最喜欢的科目是化学。我长大后想成为一名化学家。我对面面也感兴趣在空闲时，我经常给我的猫凯蒂画一一些画。 去年我在一场绘画比赛中得了第一 名。你想跟我做朋友吗?你可以发邮件到zhangwei@163 com (与我联系) 亮点词汇 favorite 最喜欢的; n.最喜欢的人或物chemistry 化学chemist 化学家in one's free time在某人空闲时the first prize第一名painting contest绘画比赛email ...发邮件; n电子邮件 出彩句型  Sb. does well in..某人善于做....My favorite subject is... 我最喜欢的科目是....I want be...when I grow up.我长大后想成为....sb. draw(s) some pictures of..某人给.....画一些画。Do you want to be my friend?你想跟我做朋友吗?email sb.at...(email address)给某人发邮件到.... (邮箱地址) 高分点评 本文分为三段，每-段都简短有力，分别从不同方面介绍了“我”。第-段简单介绍了“我”的背景:第二段详细阐述了“我”的兴趣爱好:第三段表达了“我”想与人交友的热切愿望。本文逻辑清晰，详略得当，感情真挚，不失为一篇佳作。  相关话题满分作文必背一初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟。提示：1. 初中阶段你有哪些收获；      2. 初中阶段你有哪些遗憾或未实现的愿望；      3. 你对未来的高中生活有哪些计划或打算。要求：1. 80-100词，首句已给出，不计入总词数；      2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】这是一篇提纲类0，初中生活，精彩纷呈。回首过去你是否感到充实和快乐，展望未来你是否对高中生活充满期待，请结合以下提示谈谈你的感悟，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。【参考范文】The life of my junior high school is coming to an end. Since I came to the junior high school, I’ve gained confidence and happiness. With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I’ve also made some good friends.However, there is still something that I feel sorry about. Because I was busy with my schoolwork, I couldn’t keep on reading. Once in a while, I felt so upset and anxious that I quarreled with my parents.In the future, I’ll try to make good use of time and spend more free time reading books. Meanwhile, I’ll get on well with my parents. I believe I’ll have a happy and colorful life.【名师点评】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如With the help of our teachers, I’ve learned how to be a good person as well as plenty of knowledge. I've also made some good friends.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 二 时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。要求：l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；2.不少于60词。提示：l. What did you use to be like?2. What is the most important change?3. And how did it happen? Tell a story about it.I have changed a lot!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作思路】本文要写我初中三年的变化，根据习作提示，首先要指出我最大的变化是什么，并描述出具体变化是怎么发生的，所以要针对自己某一个最大的变化来写，而不是泛泛地写很多变化；时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。【参考范文】I have changed a lot!Great changes have happened to me during the past three years. The most important change is my attitude to English.I used to be tired of learning English. And I was not interested in it. I couldn’t remember the words freely or pronounce them correctly. Thanks to my mother, she often encourages me to learn it. Besides, with the help of my English teacher, I find a better way to learn English. I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.Now I like English so much that it is my favorite subject. Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am!【名师点评】本篇文章，首先开篇点题，我有很多变化，我最大的变化是我对待英语学习态度的变化。第二段是文章的主体，先描述过去学习英语的状况，其中用到表达过去常用的句型used to do ;在妈妈及老师的帮助下，我的英语学习发生了很大变化，具体表现为 I read it every morning. I listen to her carefully in class, take grammar notes. I often ask my classmates for help.等。最后对以上变化进行总结，并指出对于这个变化，我的心情如何，Seeing the great change in my English study, how happy I am! 整篇文章内容符合要求，时态用云正确，思路清晰，结构完整，是一篇不错的文章。