37 电子邮件 中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

37 电子邮件

2024年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

相关话题写作素材必备与写作示例指导

电子邮件写法点拨

在进行电子邮件写作时，我们可以采取三步走的方法:

1.       与联系人寒暄，表明写作意图，引出话题。若与收信人较亲密，可以直呼其名，然后简单说明写信目的:若与联系人较为陌生，可以先说明自己的身份再引出写信的目的。

2. 详细阐述邮件内容，主次分明，详略得当。内容即写信人具体要说的话。可以是通知、致谢、叙事、致贺、邀请、提建议等，可以是一件事，也可以是几件事。

3.首尾呼应，再次点明主旨，表示问候。简单概括邮件的主题，表达对收信人的美好祝愿，再次表明自己的写作意图，呼应开头，使文章结构更加严谨。

必备词汇

sincerely/truly真诚地

regards问候

wishes祝愿;希望

look forward to期待

as soon as possible尽快

congratulation祝贺;恭喜

suggestion建议

advice提议;建议

inform通知

reply回信

必备句型

一、开头常 用句式

( 1) How have you been recently? 你近来怎样?

(2) How are you getting on with your English?你的英语学得怎么样?

(3) I wonder if everything is going well with you.我想知道你最近是否一切顺利。

(4) I haven't heard from you for ages.我很久没有收到你的来信了。

(5) I'm writing to you for some help.我写邮件给你是希望得到你的帮助。

(6) I am sorry for delaying the e-mail so long.耽误了这么久才给你回邮件，我很抱歉。

(7 ) Thanks for your e-mail.谢谢你的邮件。

(8) I'm glad to receive your e-mail.很高兴收到你的邮件。

(9) You must be surprised to receive my e-mail收到我的邮件你一定很意外。

二、常用于阐达事件或提出建议、邀请等。

(1) Something bad happened to me有件倒害事发生在我身上。

(2)1am going to tell you something serious.我想告诉你一件根户肃的事情。

(3) 1 would like to share my success on the competition with you.

我想和你分享我比赛得奖的消息。

(4) The party is on Saturday morning聚会在周六早上。

(5)1 wan to invite you to have dinner with me this Friday.这个星期五我想邀请你共进晚餐。

(6) Would you like to join a in the picnic?你愿意和我们一起野餐吗?

(7) I have got 3 pieces of advice for you, just as follows:

我有三点建议给你，正如下文所示:

(8) You should follow thee 3 steps. Firstly, . Secondly, ... And last, ...

你应该按照这三个步骤，第一.......第二......第三......

❸结尾常用句式

(1)1 would be grateful if you could provide me with some information.

如果你能给我提供一些信息，我会很感激的。

(2) 1 wonder if you could help me out of it.我想知道你能否帮我一把。

(3)1 hope that you can show me what t0 do next我希望你能告诉我下一步该怎么做。

(4) I'm looking forward”hearing from you我期待收到你的回信。

(5) Please write me back as soon as possible请尽快给我回信。

(6) I hope to see you at the party我希望能在聚会上见到你。

(7) Please take good care of yourself and have a good time请照顾好自己，并玩得开心。

(8) Please do let me know if you have decided it 如果你决定了，一定要让我知道。

(9) Thank you again for your help.再次感谢你的帮助。

(10) I would appreciate it if you could write me back.如果你能回信，我会很感激的。

(11) I need to go to school, so I have to quit it.我要去学校了，所以只能搁笔了。

相关话题写作示例指导

题目

根据中文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑的回信。词数在80-100之间。假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Tony给你写了-封电子邮件说他最近过得很不错，希望你给他写一一封回信，说一下你的生活近况。

内容包括: 1.一个星期前，发烧请了五天假，直到期末考才回学校; 2.期末考成绩不理想，心情低落，但得到了父母的安慰; 3.期待Tony的回信。

思路导航

第1步:例文审题

主体人称

题目要求“你”以李明的身份来写回信，因此主体人称为第一人称“"1”。

主体时态

由于回信要介绍的生活近况发生在过去，故主体时态用一一般过去时。

写作贴士

题目要求主要包含三个方面，但这是一一封回信，因此在开头要概括题目设定的背景内容;第三点的期待回信要用一一般现在时。

第2步:列提纲

(1)简单概括Tony写给李明的邮件的内容。

(2)根据题目要求详细讲述李明的生活近况。

(3)表明期待Tony的回信。

第3步:参考词句

(1) Tony; glad; have a good time; not feel well.

(2) fever, upset; attend school; a 5-day leave; final examination; fail; prepare for...

(3) look forward to; reply...

第4步:连句成篇

Dear Tony,

I am glad to learn that you had good days recently. But I am not feeling well these days.

One week ago, I had a high fever and was unable to attend school. Therefore,| had to ask for 5 days' leave. I didn't return to school until the final exam came.It didn't surprise me that I failed my exam, but I still felt upset about it. My parents didn't blame me. Instead, they comforted me that I would do well the next time.

Please take good care of yourself. And I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

参考译文

亲爱的托尼:

我很高兴知道你最近过得很开心。但是这些天我并不开心。

一个星期前， 我发高烧了，不能去上学。因此，我只好请了5天假。直到期末考试到了，我才回到学校。考试不及格并没有令我惊讶，但我还是对此感到难过。我的父母并没有责备我，相反地，他们安慰我说我下次会考好的。

请照顾好你自己。我期待你的回信。

你真诚的，

李明

相关话题真题解析

（一）

即将毕业的你，将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。

要求：

1. 参考表格内容，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；

4. 词数：不少于70个词，（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）。

Dear Editor,

My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

There are my ideas. I hope they can help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

本篇作文为应用文，要求写一封电子邮件，写作时应注意以下几点内容：

1. 审题：不需要写题目，开头结尾已给出，只需要按照给出的提示写出自己如何处理笔记和书籍的计划和理由，给的提示短语需要全部列出。

2. 列提纲：

第一段：开头已给出，引入主题，第二段：详细列出自己处理笔记和书籍的计划和理由第三段：结尾已给出，进行情感的升华。

3. 人称及时态：第一人“我”为主，时态应选用一般将来时和一般现在时。

【参考范文】

Dear Editor,

My name is Li Hua. I'm going to graduate soon. I'd like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.

First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger cousins. In this way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. What's more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally the used paper will be taken to the waste center.

There are my ideas. I hope they can help.

Yours,

Li Hua

（二）

假如你是国际学校的学生李华，你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排，请给

Tom回封邮件，告知你的计划，并邀请他来黄石游玩。

内容包括：1. 读几本好书；

2. 参加社会实践活动；

3. 帮父母做家务；

4. 和朋友一起锻炼；

5. 邀请Tom。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息；

4. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词忙：有意义的  meaningful      经典文学作品classic literature works

社会实践活动social practice activities

Dear Tom,

I'm very happy to hear from you. _____________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【写作思路】

本文属于材料作文，写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I'm very happy to hear from you. How are you going these days? Summer vacation is coming soon. Here I’d like to share my holiday plan with you. First of all, I am going to read some good books to open up my mind. What’s more, I’ll take part in some volunteer activities to raise awareness of serving the society and improve my social communication ability. Of course, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and so on. Last but not least, I am about to invite you to visit my hometown, Huangshi and I really want to meet you.

How about yours? I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如would like to do, share sth with, be going to, open up one’s mind, take part in, awareness of serving the society, of course, and so on, be about to do, invite sb to do, look forward to doing以及first of all, what’s more和last but not least,增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

（三）

假如你是李华，想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括：1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划

写作要求；1.词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.  文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。

Dear Mr. Smith,

It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you. ____________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

本文属于申请信，给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件，包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Smith,

It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you．

My name is Li Hua．I like reading and writing．I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school．And I have a habit of keeping a dairy．I want to be a writer when I grow up．So After knowing your summer camp，I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience．If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance．After work，I will spend more time making a summary．

I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply．

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如like doing, spend+时间+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job，I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

（四）

假如你叫陈伟，2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一个周末，请你制定一个周末活动计划，并用英语给你的英国笔友Alan写一封电子邮件，说明你的活动安排。

主要活动内容包括：

1. 6月22日上午在家读书；下午与家人和朋友外出活动；

2. 6月23日到朋友家附近的公园捡垃圾；

3. 你对本次活动的期待。

注意：

1. 邮件字数：80词左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，但邮件中不能出现真实的人名、地名。

3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给击，不计入总词数。

Dear Alan,

I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. ___________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Chen Wei

【写作思路】

写作要求以电子邮件的形式介绍自己中考后的第一个周末活动计划。写作时要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：分别从时间和活动安排来介绍，根据表达的内容确定句子的时态，就本文而言应该用一般将来时态，会用到be going to结构，人称为第一人称。在时间的表达上注意介词的正确使用，在某一天的早晨、下午、晚上用介词on。写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使用恰当的连词，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【参考范文】

Dear Alan,

I'm going to enjoy myself during the coming weekend. On the morning of 22nd June, I'm going to get up a little late and then read an interesting storybook. In the afternoon I'm going out with my family and friends. We're going to take a walk in the country near our home or go swimming in the lake. And on 23rd June we're going to collect liter in the park near my friend's house. I think it's going to be a great weekend-busy but good fun!

Yours,

Chen Wei

（五）

假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件，将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括：

注意：

1. 词数70左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；

4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

参考词汇：

高大健壮tall and strong      运动do sports     听音乐listen to music

最喜欢的科目favourite subject  风趣幽默funny and humorous

乐于做某事be ready to do sth.   相处get on with

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend. With my best wishes

Yours,

Li Hua

【写作思路】

【参考范文】

Dear Jack,

How is everything going? Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you.

Now I am writing to introduce my classmate Chen Dong to you．He is a 16-year-old boy．He has round face ，black  hair and bright eyes．He is tall and strong．He likes smiling very much．（高分句型一）（要点一，介绍男同学的外貌及特征．）He likes doingh sports．reading and  listening to music．His  favourite subject is English ．because he thinks it is very interesting．He is humorous and funny．He is ready to help others and easy to get on with others． 【要点二，介绍同学的性格．】He likes doing sports．reading and listening to music．His  favourite subject is English．because he thinks it is very interesting．He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．（高分句型二） He likes winter very much， because he thinks winter is a season to do many fun things，such as skating ，making snowman and so on．【要点三，介绍同学的喜好．】 His dream is becoming an English teacher，because he wants his students to get good grades．【要点四，介绍同学的理想．】 I'm sure you'd like to have such a person as your friend．With my best wishes!（要点五，美好的祝愿．）

Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

高分句型一

He likes smiling very much．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事"，短语very much "非常，很"．此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑．"

注意like后加doing

高分句型二

He also spends much time taking part in after-school activities．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语spend

some time （in）doing sth "花时间做某事"．短语take part in "参加"．此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动．"