40 演讲稿中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

40 演讲稿

2024年中考英语书面表达高分作文攻略（全国通用版）

相关话题解读

演讲稿是面向听众、在正式的公开演讲中使用的稿子。中考英语作文中一般要求写简单的演讲稿，在写作中需要注意如下几点:

第一，演讲稿的结构。演讲稿包括称呼、开头、正文、结尾几部分。称呼语通常有“Dear ..”.“Good morning, everyone”， 或"Hello, ladies and gentlemen"等。考生应根据给定情境选择合适的称呼语。开头部分点明演讲主题，吸引听众。正文部分围绕主题做阐述，使听众了解演讲。结尾部分包括概括演讲内容或提出呼吁，以及结束语。结束语通常有“That's all, thank you"，或“Wish you a good time"等。

第二，演讲稿的语言。由于演讲是一一种口头交际，因此所用语言尽量简短、直白，少用书面语或长难句。为了加强演讲时的语气，可适当使用排比句。

第三，演讲稿的内容。首先要充分读题，了解假设的情境、演讲者的身份和演讲的对象。在此基础上，有针对性地构架演讲内容。另外，演讲是为了向听众做介绍或说服听众，因此发言内容要条理清晰，举例说明要有说服力，表达上除了以理服人外，还要注意以情动人。

相关话题写作样例与常用句式:

Hello, ladies and gentlemen! (开场称呼)

表明演讲目的/亮明观点:

It's my great honor to deliver a speech here. Today 'd like to say something about ..在此演讲我深感荣幸。今天我想谈一.谈.....

Today, I’d love to share with you something about...今天我非常乐意与你们分享关于...的内容。

It's nice to speak about ... here.在这里谈- .谈....很有益。

We should keep ... in mind.我们要牢记.....

具体介绍/证明观点/详述建议

结束语:

I am sure ..我确信....

Let's make joint efforts to ...让我们共同努力去......

Let's try our best to ...让我们尽力去....

Don't forget to .. in your life.别忘了在日常生活中....

Do you agree with me?你们同意我的观点吗?

具体实践案例写作指导

题目

学校正在提倡“光盘行动”，号召同学们节约粮食、抵制浪费。 假设学校请你在升旗仪式上做-次相关主题发言，请写-篇不少于60个词的主题发言稿，包括以下要点:

1.校园中存在浪费粮食的现象。

2.作为一名 中学生如何从我做起，在日常生活中践行节约，抵制浪费粮食。

这篇演讲稿的主题是食物浪费，写作内容应当紧扣要点，先描写至少两个校园中的食物浪费现象，再针对这些现象，列举至少两条抵制浪费食物的具体建议。为了让听众清楚地了解发言内容，讲稿的条理要清晰，可使用一些表示顺序的连接词。同时还要注意演讲稿的特点，语言要简短有力，在结尾呼吁号召，动员大家行动起来，抵制浪费。

段落结构

这篇演讲稿可以分为四段:

第一段(开头):开场称呼，并介绍演讲主题一 节约粮食、抵制浪费。

第二段(说明现象):举2-3个具体例子，说明校园中存在的粮食浪费现象，譬如剩饭剩菜多，点的食物超过能吃下的量等。

第三段(提出建议):针对浪费现象，列举23条措施，具体说明同学们应该如何抵制浪费食物。

第四段(号召、 结尾):号召同学们行动起来，从现在做起节约粮食。

核心词汇

the 'Clean Plate Campaign'光盘行动

raise awareness of saving food提高节约粮食的意识

build an economized society建设节约型社会

call on sb. to do sth.呼吁某人做某事

do one's parts to .尽某人所能做....

It's time for us to ...是时候我们要......

It's important for us to ..做......对我们来说很重要

 Let's start with the things around us!让我们从身边小事做起

习作

Good morning, teachers and students! The topic of my speech today is 'saving food'.In our school, food waste can be seen everywhere. Some students throw away much food after meals. Some students only eat what they like and leave what they don't like on the table. Some students waste food at lunch because they eat many snacks.

The phenomenon must be changed in no time. We shouldn't waste food any longer.When we have lunch in the canteen, we had better eat up all the food in our plates. If you don't feel hungry at lunch time, you can take less food.

I hope we can try our best to save food in our school! Thanks for listening.

点评

这篇演讲稿内容较完整，符合题干要求，语言较流畅，句式较丰富。但在内容上有几点问题:第一，讲稿中缺少背景信息， 即学校正在开展“光盘行动“

加上该要点。第二，第二段现象阐述中的第三点在解释浪费食物的原因，，应在第二段开头

而非说明浪费的现

象。建议可以把这一点稍作修改， 变为如何不浪费食物的建议，归人第三段，在请卖的现还有两点可以改进:首先，演讲的语言力度需要加强，比如结尾的号召采用Lets.，等句式可加强号召的力度。其次， 在建议措施中可增加连接词，如firstly, in addition等，使各条要点突出。

范文

Good morning, dear teachers and students! Today, I'd love to share with you something about saving food.

As we all know, the 'Clean Plate Campaign' is being held in our school. Students are called on to save food. However, wasting food is still a serious problem on our campus. We saw students order much food but eat only a little. We found bread which was not eaten up in trash bins.

I's time for us to raise students' awareness of saving food. I think we can start with the things around us. First, we should take food in moderation instead of asking for more than what we can eat in the canteen. Second, we'd better eat up what we order. Last, if you see someone throw food away after meals, tell him the importance of saving food and persuade him not to do so next time.

My fellow schoolmates, let's do what we can to save food. Let's do it from now on!Thank you! !

点评

这篇演讲稿内容丰富、逻辑连贯、语言有力，符合演讲的要求，是- -篇成功的演讲稿。开篇用一句话“I'd love to share with you something about saving food"点明了演讲主题，简短而清晰。第二段先介绍了演讲的背景基于学校的“光盘行动”，要求大家不浪费食物。"However” 的一句转折，自然地引出学校还存在的浪费现象。“We saw ...”,”We found ..”.两句句式相仿的句子，具体且有力地指出了浪费食物的问题。第三段针对现象告诉同学们该怎么做，三个建议层层递进，并用序数词使层次清晰。结尾呼吁大家行动起来，节约食物，明确有力。

相关话题满分作文解析

（1）

“人生没有彩排，生命没有重来”，你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keep away from the danger!” 为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是王雷同学，大家推选你参加这次比赛。请跟进以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。

写作提示：

写作要求：

1. 不得使用真实姓名和学校名；

2. 所有的提示词都须用上，包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯：

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚：

4. 词数100词左右。(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。)

Keep away from the danger!

Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger, First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission.

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In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!

That’s all. Thank you for listening!

【写作思路】

这篇作文要求我们以Keep away from the danger为题，写一篇演讲稿。审题可知，题目中利用思维导图的形式，列举了这篇文章中应该包括的几个要点。观察这个思维导图可知，短文应该从游泳、交通、交友、饮食、学校安全以及毒品等六个方面进行叙述，每个方面都给出了一些提示词，学生们可以利用这些提示词来组织语言，用完整的句子表达出来。文章应使用一般现在时、第一人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意：首先题目中给出的所有提示词以及要点都应包括在内，不要有所遗漏。可以根据表达需要进行拓展，使文章内容更加充实。但应注意拓展内容应与文章主题紧密相连，不要写没有用的东西。其次应注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句式的正确结构出发，选择适当的单词、短语和句型。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂结构，提升文章档次。同时语句之间应使用一些衔接成分，注意叙述的层次性，条理清楚，行为连贯。

【参考范文】

Keep away from the danger!

Hello! Everyone, I’m Wang Lei. The danger is around us. So we must learn how to keep away from the danger. First, we mustn’t go swimming without our parents’ or teachers’ permission. When we go swimming, we must wear life jackets. Second, we must obey the traffic rules. We should walk on the pavement. When we cross the street, we mustn’t look at the mobile phones. Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn’t believe whatever they say. Besides, don’t meet online friends alone. Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals. Don’t eat food that goes bad because it is bad for our health. Fifth, when we are in school, we can’t run on the hallways. You should get on well with your classmates and don’t fight with them. If someone threatens you, call for help. Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.

In a word, we must try our best to keep away from the danger!

That’s all. Thank you for listening!

【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，给我们介绍了生活中应如何远离危险，保证我们的安全。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，提示词都使用上了。文章中从六个方面进行了具体的介绍，每个方面前都有表示顺序的词First, Second… Last but not least等，使文章的结构非常清晰，叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。文章中使用了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句、祈使句等结构，句式多变，表达准确、清楚。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如When we cross the street, we mustn't look at the mobile phones、Third, we may have some friends on line, but we mustn't believe whatever they say、Fourth, we must wash our hands before having meals.、You should get on well with your classmates and don't fight with them.、If someone threatens you, call for help.、Last but not the least, never try drugs. If you see someone selling drugs, call 110 at once.等。

（2）

每个人的生命只有一次，一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救？请根据以下提示，以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。

要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。

      2. 短文应包括所有内容，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译。

      3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计人总词数。

Dear friends,

     Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?

Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________

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    In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.

    That’s all. Thank you!

【写作思路】

本文是根据材料提示写作，所以分析所给材料之后，首先要在头脑中确定文章的整体结构，然后逐步细化．就像盖房子一样，先有整体框架，然后是房间，最后是室内装修．

【参考范文】

Dear friends，

     Everyone has only one life， we should treasure our lives． But how can we protect ourselves？

     Here are some suggestions．

　 On the one hand， we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do． First，when we go out， we  must follow traffic rules． If we walk，we must  use sidewalks  and mustn't run a red light；If we ride bikes，we must ride along the right side and shouldn't carry others；Second， we should develop a healthy eating habits． Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less．When food smells bad，  don't eat it．Third，when we play sports or games， be careful not to hurt ourselves．Fourth，we mustn't swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around．

　On the other hand， we should learn to protect ousrselves， which is one of the most important living skills． We must be careful when making friends especially online．Some person online are not honest．They are dangerous， so we must keep away from them． If we happen to have trouble， we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents， teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselvs from danger or being hurt．

　 In a word， we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives．

    That's all．  Thank you !

【名师点评】

高分句型一： we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do. 我们应该意识到安全的重要性，并且知道如何去做。短语the importance of，what to do结构；

高分句型二：when we go out，we must follow traffic rules. 当我们外出时，必须遵守交通规则。状语从句，情态动词；

高分句型三：we should learn to protect ourselves，which is one of the most important living skills．我们应该学会保护自己，这是最重要的生存能力之一。定语从句；

高分句型四：we must keep away from them．我们必须远离他们。keep away from 短语

高分句型五： we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents，teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt．

我们应该保持冷静，并且记住及时向家长，老师或警察求助。以便于保护自己远离危险，避免受伤害。remember to do结构，ask...for help，in time短语；so that引导的目的状语从句，protect.. from...短语。

（3）

假设你叫李文，是无锡阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle School)的一名学生。今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，此次会议的主题是A Green World。你草拟了发言流程图，请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。

注意事项：

1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；

2. 流程图中包括部分非限定性内容，仅供参考；

3. 词数在 90 个左右，发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总数。

4. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。

5. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

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【写作思路】

这是一篇材料作文，根据李文的发言流程图写一篇英文发言稿。主题是A Green World。因为今天暑期，你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言，主要从介绍自己、中国为“绿色世界”已经做的和“我”是怎样做得。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时和现在完成时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【参考范文】

Ladies and gentlemen!

My name is Li Wen. I’m a student of Wuxi Sunshine Middle School. This year, I am fifteen years old. China has made its own efforts for the green world. Many factories have met the discharge standards. We have made use of many new energy sources. For example: wind, solar and hydroelectric power. What should we do as middle school students? First of all, we should turn off the lights in time. Secondly, when we take a shower, we should save water. Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. If so, we have made our due efforts for environmental protection.

【名师点评】

【高分句型一】

China has made its own efforts for the green world. 中国为绿色世界做出了自己的努力。

Many factories have met the discharge standards. 许多工厂的排污都达到了排放标准。

We have made use of many new energy sources. 我们利用了许多新能源。

这三句话，简短而有力量，体现了作者的语言功底深厚。

【高分句型二】

Third, when we go shopping, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. 第三，我们去购物时，应该用布袋代替塑料袋。句子when we go shopping,是由when 引导的时间状语从句。

（4）

假如你是李华，英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后，对广东文化产生兴趣，准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿，在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。

内容包括：

1. 推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。

2. 介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排。(包括活动的时间、地点和内容)

参考活动：欣赏粤剧(Cantonese opera)，体验功夫(kung fu)，参加广东历史讲座等。

作文要求：

1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 

Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. _______________________________________________________________________________________

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I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!

【写作思路】

这是一篇要求向来你校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流的学生介绍研学活动的相关安排。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般将来时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【参考范文】

Good evening, everyone. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students Union. I am very pleased to welcome you to the party. In Guangdong, you can enjoy many traditional foods. Such as shrimp dumplings, beef or fish balls, chicken feet and so on. Especially fish balls and chicken feet are really very delicious.I think you will love them. Tomorrow, in the morning, we'll go to the biggest theatre in Guangzhou. You are going to enjoy Cantonese opera there. We will go to Zhongshan Park in the afternoon. You can experience Chinese Kung fu there. It is amazing. We will attend a lecture on history of Guangdong in the evening.

I hope you' ll enjoy your stay here!