【同步讲义】人教版英语九年级全一册-Unit 11 课时4 Writing 讲义

Unit11 Sad movies make me cry.

知识点01  思路点拨

本单元以“Feelings(情感)”为话题，谈论身边的人或事给自己带来的情绪变化。写此类文章时，可以通过描述一件具体的事情来表达自己的喜、怒、哀、乐，也可以描写生活或学习中的烦恼或焦虑。

文体：记叙文
人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主               

时态：以一般过去时为主

写作思路：

本文根据要求是一篇记叙文。它主要是说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（what, who, when, where, why ）和一个“ H ”（how ）。

人称应是第一人称，时态应是过去时。

知识点02  必背句型

开心

难过

知识点03  提纲

知识点04  范文

An experience that made me very happy was winning the nation-wide English competition last year.

At first, I didn’t know what to write for my speech, but after talking to my teacher and reading some books, I had some ideas and started writing. Then I practiced my speech many times.

On the day of the competition, I saw many people there. This made me feel very nervous. I started to worry that I would forget my speech.

Then I remembered what my teacher told me -- close my eyes and take deep breaths. I did that and it made me feel much better. When my turn came, I gave my speech with confidence.

I waited anxiously for the results, and when I heard that I was the first prize winner, I jumped up and down with joy.

This experience taught me that being well-prepared is very important. It helps to read a lot, and also to ask people around you for advice. Most importantly, have confidence in yourself.

去年赢得全国英语比赛的经历让我非常高兴。

起初，我不知道该为演讲写什么，但在与老师交谈并阅读了一些书籍后，我有了一些想法，开始写作。然后我多次练习我的演讲。

比赛那天，我在那里看到了很多人。这让我感到非常紧张。我开始担心我会忘记我的演讲。

然后我想起了老师告诉我的话——闭上眼睛，深呼吸。我做到了，这让我感觉好多了。轮到我时，我自信地发表了演讲。

我焦急地等待着结果，当我听说我是头奖得主时，我高兴得跳上跳下。

这次经历告诉我，做好准备是非常重要的。多读书，向周围的人寻求建议，都会有帮助。最重要的是，对自己有信心。

常用表达句型

The loud music makes me nervous.喧闹的音乐使我紧张。

Money and fame don't always make people happy.金钱和名声不能总使人们开心。

I would rather...我宁愿…….

I'm not happy because.…我不开心，因为……

I used to have such worries as well, so I can understand how you are feeling now.我过去也有这样的烦恼，所以我能理解你现在的感受。

You should learn to relax and not to be too hard on yourself.你应该学会放松，不要给自己这么多压力。

The movie was so sad that it made Tina and Amy cry电影如此伤感以至于蒂娜和埃米都哭了。

To start with,it was cloudy and grey,and cloudy days make me sad.开始的时候，天是多云并且灰暗的，阴天使我难过。

Sometimes a small change of yourself may lead to a big difference to your life. 有时候你自身的小的变化对你的生活产生很大的影响。

Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. 在今天的世界压力是一个严肃的问题。     

写作注意

1.  语态、时态要准确无误。
2.  主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。
3.  注意人称代词的宾格形式。
4.  注意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。
5.  注意拼写、标点符号和大小写。标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。

题组A  基础过关练

（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。

内容包括：

1.你对这位老师的印象；

2.你感谢他（她）的原因；

3.你对他（她）的祝福。

注意：

1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可适当举例或拓展；

3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。

It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

It’s time for me to say goodbye to my junior school life. I’m here to say thanks to my English teacher Mr. Zhang. She is very kind and patient. She has helped me a lot in my studies since I came to this school. When I was in trouble, she used to encourage me and give me some good advice. At one time I failed to pass an English test and I was very sad about it. She came and cheered me up. She told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I have made great progress in English. I’m so thankful to her for her kind help that I will work harder and try to do better in the future. I hope she will become better and better.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

 （2021·内蒙古内蒙古·中考真题）正能量偶像宛如指路明灯，可以引导我们成为更好的人。近期，你们学校的英语报刊以“My guiding star”为题正在征稿，请你积极投稿。

要点：1. Who is your guiding star?

2. What did he/she do?

3. What have you learned from him/her?

4. What are you going to do in the future?

要求：1. 文章应包括所有要点并围绕要点适当发挥；

2. 文章应句式多样、语句流畅、意思连贯；

3. 词数 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

注意：1. 文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息；

2. 不许抄袭、套改。

My guiding star

The people we admire are like guiding stars that guide us to be better. My guiding star is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】参考范文：

My guiding star

The people we admire are like guiding stars that guide us to be better. My guiding star is Doctor Zhong Nanshan. He is one of the greatest doctors that I respect.

He devoted all of his energy and time to the medical research. For example, during the COVID-19 outbreak, he was so brave that he rushed to the front line and came up with valuable advice of fighting against the virus.   

I have learned his spirit, his bravery and his patience. Besides, I have learned that I should value my time and read more books to get more knowledge. From now on, I’m going to study harder and go to my dream university to make my dream come true. Only in this way can I make contributions to our great country.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我的引路之星”为题写一篇短文。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时和一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍相关事迹；最后一段描述自己从中学到了什么，以及打算将来如何做。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无标点和语法错误。

题组B  能力提升练

（2021·辽宁辽宁·中考真题）根据要求完成大作文。词数: 80﹣100词。

每个人都会从不同的经历中获得不同的感受。哪一种感受经常伴随着你呢？请根据下面的图示写一篇短文。

内容包括:

（1）How do you often feel?

（2）What makes you so . . . Why?

（3）Do you want to make any changes? How?

要求:

（1）内容完整, 语意连贯, 层次清晰, 书写规范。

（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

（3）短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

       I often feel_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】[例文]

I often feel angry. I’m angry with myself. I hope to develop some healthy habits like getting up early or taking more exercise, but I still spend most of my time staying up playing computer games. I’m also angry with my friend Bill. He argued with me several days ago and I don’t want to talk to him any more. But I really want to change these things. Maybe I should be strict with myself and maybe I should say sorry to Bill first. After all, I don’t want to lose my best friend.

I hope my life can be filled with peace and happiness.

【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据题目要点提示，写一篇关于自己情绪的作文。题目所给要点提示必须全部包括，切忌遗漏。

2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态根据动作发展时段正确使用过去时、现在时或将来时。这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。

（2022·江苏无锡·中考真题）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。

注意事项：

1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；

2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；

3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；

4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；

5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

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【答案】例文

The Person I Want to Thank

In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.

Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。

2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。

题组C  培优拔尖练

（2022·重庆·中考真题）有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校English Coner 将进行“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。

要求：

1. 80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考词汇：anger n.[U] 愤怒

1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）

2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）

3. ……

Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem

Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for listening.

【答案】例文

Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem

Have you ever controlled your anger and solved a problem better? Here is my experience.

Last term, I bought a magazine that I had always wanted. I liked it so much that I was careful every time I carried it. But one day, my best friend Tom took the magazine without telling me. When I found it, I was very angry. But I calmed down soon. I thought of how Tom helped me when I was in trouble and I didn’t want to break the relationship between us. So I controlled my anger and decided to have a talk with him. I told him that he should tell me if he wanted to read the magazine. After the talk, our relationship became stronger.

From this experience, when we are angry, we should calm ourselves down and learn to reflect. The most important is to communicate with others on time so that we can solve the problems better.

Thanks for listening.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Control Your Anger and Solve Your Problem”为题，结合自己的经历讲述通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决一件小事，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段讲述自己有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事；第三段描述自己的感悟。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

 （2021·山东淄博·中考真题）你们学校将要举行“我心目中的英雄”主题演讲比赛。请你写一篇100词左右的英语演讲稿，介绍一位事迹突出、品格高尚、令人感动的人物，内容包括：

1. 他（她）的基本情况；2.他（她）的主要事迹；3.你的感悟。

注意：1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现你的真实区县、学校及姓名。

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【答案】One possible version:

Good morning, everybody! It’s my honor to speak here, and I am very glad to introduce the hero in my mind.

When people say the word “hero”, what will you think of?   Maybe your hero is a famous singer, a movie star or a great man. But my hero is around me. She is my mother.

My mother is a wise woman and she plays different roles in my life. As a mother, she takes good care of me. As a friend, she can listen to me. As a teacher, she encourages me instead of getting angry with my poor grades. She does nothing great, but what she does makes me so moved.

This is my mother, the hero in my heart!

Thanks for listening! That’s all.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于演讲稿写作。要求谈谈你心目中的英雄。注意要点齐全。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称和一般现在时来介绍。介绍心目中的英雄时，要交代清楚该人物的基本情况，主要事迹，并谈谈你的感悟。写作时注意保持主谓一致性，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。