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Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are？WritingWrite a polite letter to the school asking for the information you want to know. Use your notes in 3a.In your letter, you should:﹡introduce yourself﹡say when you are coming ﹡politely ask for information ﹡thank the person for helping you知识点01  思路点拨本单元的话题围绕“游览”为话题，要求我们在游览出行时，能够得体地运用礼貌语句指路、问路等。与此相关的写作任务是能够根据图示或文字提示简单介绍去某地的路线。写作时，注意线路介绍顺序要清晰，能正确运用所学的指路句型，语言要简洁明了。命题者一般是针对假期旅行或学校组织的集体外出活动来设计试题，要求考生对活动的过程、所见所闻以及自身感受进行描述。通常会涉及旅行目的、旅行地点、必备物品、出发时间、出行方式及旅行路线(包括问路和使用地图)等。此类试题通常以文字、图画提示或者表格提示的方式来考查。体裁：应用文(电子邮件、书信)；主体部分为说明文时态：用一般现在时人称：第一人称。知识点02  必背单词组和句型词组：restroom, beside, bathroom, central, east,address pardon me, suggest, politely, polite, direct, impolite request, corner, direction, underground, pass by. go along, turn left/right, go straight 句型：Excuse me, could you please tell me how to get to...?2. Just go along.. .until you pass...3. I'm coming to your school for...4. I'd like to know about...5. I wonder if you...6. Walk along this street. It's next to/across from/behind the ...7. Take the first/second turning on the left/right.8. It's (not) far from here.You can't miss it. 知识点03  提纲列提纲写句子给学校写信咨询相关信息介绍自己并说明写信意图  Dear Sir / Madam,My name is XX and I’m from XX, China.  I’ll be coming to your school for XX.   Now I’m writing to ask for some information about XX.礼貌地询问信息First, I wonder about the whole plan for XX. 咨询整体计划Then, could you please tell me what courses I’ll take and how long each course will last? 咨询课程相关Next, I’d like to know where to eat and live.咨询食宿情况 Last, I wonder what activities I can do to learn more about your culture.咨询课后活动感谢及期望I would like to thank you for your help. I’m looking forward to your reply. 知识点04  范文Dear Sir / Madam,My name is Zhang Ting and I’m from Beijing, China. I’ll be coming to your school for a two-week study vacation this summer. Now I’m writing to ask for some information about this study vacation.First, I wonder about the whole plan for this study vacation. Then, could you please tell me what courses I’ll take and how long each course will last? Next, I’d like to know where to eat and live. Last, I wonder what activities I can do to learn more about your culture.I would like to thank you for your help. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Zhang Ting话题好句积累【开头句】1．The summer/winter vacation is coming soon and we've had a good plan for it2．I'm going to travel to some places of interest which can open  my eyes．3．We're planning to go to Beijing for a trip．But whether going there or not depends on the weather．4．Our classmates are going to volunteer in a nursing home，where they can get some experience in taking care of the old．【中间句】1．You'll be sure to experience many new things when traveling．2．The main reason for traveling is，perhaps for pleasure．3．You can enjoy the beautiful scenery and relax yourselves by traveling．4．Traveling not only makes us energetic but also broadens our horizons．5．When we stayed there，we got lots of help from local people．They were friendly to us．6．I help my parents do housework from time to time．7．Besides，I often do some reading during my vacation because it can improve my writing．【结尾句】1．The vacation is unforgettable for me．2．All of us felt tired but happy．3．I'm sure I will have a great time during my winter vacation．4．All in all，I hope all of us can have a wonderful vacation．5．Only in this way can you enjoy your summer vacation happily．题组A  基础过关练   小明今年暑期想参加上海英语夏令营(Shanghai English Summer Camp)。假设你是小明,请你写一封信向负责人Miss Chen咨询一些信息。要求80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。内容包括:1.介绍自己的一些个人信息,如姓名、年龄、英语成绩等;2.礼貌询问信息,如时间、吃住、活动、英语学习等; 3.表示感谢。Dear Miss Chen,I’m Xiao Ming,a Grade Nine student at Xinxing School._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Xiao Ming【答案】Dear Miss Chen, I’m Xiao Ming,a Grade Nine student at Xinxing School. I love English and I hope to improve my English.I’d like to come to your school soon for the English Summer Camp.I am writing to know about more information about the summer camp.Could you please tell me when the summer camp will begin and how long it will last?I also want to know what we will do during the summer camp.Will it be fun?And could you please tell me where we will stay?I’m wondering if the hotel is clean and comfortable.I also want to know if it is convenient to go shopping.What’s more,let me know how much it costs and what I need to take. I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully, Xiao Ming 【解析】本文为一封书信。请你向负责人Miss Chen咨询一些信息。根据提示可知包括以下要点：（1）介绍自己的一些个人信息,如姓名、年龄、英语成绩等；（2）礼貌询问信息,如时间、吃住、活动、英语学习等；（3）表示感谢。写作时，首先要明确以上要点，确定时态应为一般现在时态，人称应以第一人称为主。其次，注意书信的书写格式，同时要注意表达准确，语义连贯，符合逻辑。最后，再检查单词是否有拼写错误，标点符号是否有使用错误等。本文多次使用经典短语、固定结构、高分句型等为文章增色不少，如：hope to do, look forward to, if引导的宾语从句,表达委婉强求的句式Could you please …等等。假如你叫王琳，在网站上看到一则英语俱乐部开设暑期课程的活动，你打算报名参加来提高自己的英语水平。根据以下要点提示向负责人Mr Smith询问相关情况。要点提示：1.做简要的自我介绍 2.礼貌地询问一些信息 3.表达感谢。要求：90词左右，可适当拓展。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dear Mr Smith,My name is Wang Lin.I am a middle school student in Beijing, China. I like English a lot.I am thinking about going to your school club to take the training course to improve my English. I’ve read your ad on the Internet and I really want to know something about your club and the course.Would you mind answering a few questions? First,could you please tell me how many hours students spend in class every week? Second, how many students are there in a class? Third, I’d like to know where I will live. Will there be a host family? Thank you!I am looking forward to your reply.Yours,Wang Lin【解析】1.题干解读：本文要求以王琳的身份给俱乐部负责人Mr. Smith写一封信，询问英语俱乐部开设暑假课程的情况。写作时，要按照三点提示进行书写。2.写作指导：本文是以王琳的身份，向俱乐部的负责人询问情况的一封信。时态上以一般现在时为主，人称上以第一人称为主。写作时，先简要的自我介绍，接着礼貌地询问一些信息，最后表达感谢并盼望收到回信。题组B  能力提升练假设你叫Carl，你的朋友Lisa下周五要到你家来做客。请你根据下面地图中标出的Lisa到你的家的行走路线及你的具体位置，写一封e­mail。要求：1.语言简洁流畅，条理清晰，可适当发挥；2．词数：80～100。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Lisa，I know you are arriving at my home next Friday. Now let me tell you the way to my house. When you go out of the bus station，please go down the Garden Street. When you see a post office on your left，turn right to the Center Street. Go straight down the Center Street，you can see a hotel and a bank on your right. They are near my house. So it's convenient for my family to live here. When you pass a school on your left，turn left and you can see my house at the end of the street.I hope you'll have a good trip.Yours，Carl【解析】这是一篇图表，要求介绍到你的家的行走路线及你的具体位置。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。假设你叫王华,下周是你的生日。你准备在家开一个生日晚会，并且邀请你的一些朋友参加。 晚会6:00 开始。 你家住在新华路108号 ， 乘坐35路或者62路公共汽车在新华路下车。 你家就挨着车站， 房子是红色的，门是白色的。请根据以上信息，给你的好朋友李辉写一封80词左右的信。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Li Wei,Next Sunday is my birthday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Li Wei，Next Sunday is my birthday. I’m going to have a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 6:00. would you like to come? I have also asked some other classmates of ours and some of my friends. I live at 108 Xinhua Road.you can take No. 35 or No.62 bus and get off at the bus stop of Xinhua Road. My home is next to the bus stop. It’s a rad house with a white door.You can’t miss it. I hope you will come.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般将来时和一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。题组C  培优拔尖练同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。 写作内容：1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。3.读自己喜欢的书。4.远离危险的地方。 写作要求：1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.        【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays. Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free time. I will                           also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will                           stay away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.【解析】题目解读：本文要求按照提示介绍即将到来的假期计划，注意要点齐全。写作指导：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。假设你是Linda，暑假期间准备参加澳大利亚的游学活动，请你写一封邮件给该项目的负责人，礼貌地咨询如下相关细节，咨询时可以加上自己的观点。100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。1. The course you will study and the time of the course.2. Which university will you visit？3. What club can you join？Dear Sir，I'm planning to take part in your "overseas study tour to Australia". _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanks for your time. I'm looking forward to your reply.Yours，Linda【答案】Dear Sir，I'm planning to take part in your "overseas study tour to Australia". While as for some details, I'm still confused. Could you please tell me which courses I will study and how long I will study. I know there are some famous universities in Australia. I just wonder which university I will visit during the study. I'm interested in the history of the university and I believe I can learn a lot from it. And the last but the most important one, can I join the club? You see, I'm good at dancing and swimming. During the study, I also want to join the clubs because they're not only good for my study but also for my health.Thanks for your time. I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours，Linda【解析】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求写一封咨询信，题干中用问题的形式对文章的内容给出了提示，审题可知，短文中应包括以下内容：首先介绍自己的写信目的；然后对该项目的具体细节进行询问，主要有三个方面；最后表达自己的期望。第二部分是文章的主体，学生们应对该内容进行适当拓展，补充更多的细节信息，使文章内容更加充实、完整。短文应以一般现在时、第一人称和第二人称为主来叙述。2. 例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文按照题目要求给该项目的负责人写了一封咨询信，符合英语书信体格式的要求。短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点，对具体问题进行了拓展，丰富了细节。文章结构清晰，层次清楚，叙述有条理。语言准确、得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些高级词汇和句型，展现了作者良好的语言运用能力。3. 高分亮点：短语：take part in；as for；be interested in；learn from；be good at；not only…but also。句型：Could you please tell me which courses I will study and how long I will study；I'm interested in the history of the university and I believe I can learn a lot from it.；During the study, I also want to join the clubs because they're not only good for my study but also for my health.【点睛】这篇作文题目要求写的是咨询信，这是书信体作文中较常见的一种。咨询信的文章一般包括三个部分：首先是对自己身份以及写信目的的介绍，一般两到三句话即可；主体部分应对想咨询的问题进行具体的叙述，这部分内容应占篇幅最大，学生们应该补充更多的细节信息，充实文章内容，可以联系自己的实际进行询问；最后应表达自己的期望，如希望对方给予回信等，一到两句话即可。这种类型的文章一般以第一人称和第二人称为主、一般现在时来叙述。这个题目中是利用三个问题表明了具体的咨询信息，这也是学生们组织文章内容的一个重要依据和提纲。例文是一篇比较优秀的文章，短文结构安排合理、清晰，语言准确、得体，文中使用了较多好的短语和句型，尤其是宾语从句、状语从句等几个长句的使用，表现了作者良好的语言驾驭能力。