新教材2023版高中英语Unit8GreenLivingPartⅦ单元写作课件北师大版必修第三册

这是一份新教材2023版高中英语Unit8GreenLivingPartⅦ单元写作课件北师大版必修第三册，共13页。

Part Ⅶ　单元写作主题写作——有关交通方式的应用文【考题回放】假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在，请你按以下要点用英语回一封信：1．建议骑自行车上学；2．自行车是学生常用的交通工具；3．骑自行车的一些好处；4．骑自行车需注意的问题。注意：1．词数80左右；2．要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作构思】1．读题，确定写作体裁和主题通过读题我们知道，这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信，向Andrew就上学期间的交通方式提出建议。2．明确写作要求(2)词数要求：80词左右。【素材整理】1．关键句型(1)开头问候语I'm very glad to hear from you.Very happy to receive your letter.How is everything going with you?(2)表达建议Why don't you...？＝Why not...?You should...I hope you can...You'd better...I suggest...(3)信末结束语Looking forward to your early reply.Hoping to hear from you soon.Wish you a fun time in our school.2．单句写作(1)至于上学的交通方式，我想建议骑自行车。(as for)_______________________________________________________(2)购买或修理自行车不会花费太多。(动名词短语作主语)________________________________________________________(3)在我们学校停放自行车很方便，无论交通多么繁忙。(no matter引导让步状语从句)____________________________________________________________________________As for the transportation to school, I'd like to suggest riding a bicycle.Buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost much.Parking a bicycle is convenient in our school, no matter how busy the traffic could be.(4)骑自行车也是锻炼和保护环境的实用方法。(a way to do sth.)___________________________________________________________(5)你应该小心的是骑行的时候保持合适的速度。(what引导主语从句)__________________________________________________________Bicycle­riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding.【连句成篇】Dear Andrew，Very happy to hear from you and you're welcome to study in our school for the next two months. ①As for ②the transportation to school, I'd like to ③suggest riding a bicycle.④Firstly, it's very common among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost much. Next, ⑤parking a bicycle is convenient in our school, ⑥no matter how busy the traffic could be. ⑦Actually, bicycle­riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment. What you should do carefully is just keep an ⑧appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you're off it.⑨Hopefully, ⑩what I've mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a fun time in our school.Yours sincerely， Li Hua①as for至于―→②直接切入主题④分条给出原因―→⑤动名词短语作主语⑥高分句式：让步状语从句⑧appropriate adj. 合适的⑨hopefully adv. 希望(评注性副词，修饰整个句子),―→⑩提分亮点：主语从句【写作训练】假设你叫李华，是某中学的学生，同时是环境保护的志愿者。请根据以下内容为《中学生英语报》写一份英文倡议书，倡议全国中学生选择公共汽车作为交通工具。倡议书内容：1．私家车及出租车的普及增加了道路负担，加剧了环境污染；2．选择公共汽车出行的好处；3．提出呼吁。注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。Dear fellow students，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely， Li Hua参考范文：Dear fellow students，With the popularity of private cars and taxis, more traffic jams are caused, and the air is not so good as before. This is a problem that calls for immediate attention. Therefore, as a volunteer of environmental protection, I strongly advocate taking a bus.Obviously, bus taking, which has many advantages, is the right solution. In terms of environmental protection, it reduces waste­gas emission from private cars. Besides, it helps cut down energy consumption, eases traffic jams, and in turn improves the air quality. By taking a bus, we can surely create a clearner world for ourselves and our next generations.Let's just work together. Your cooperation would be much appreciated!Yours sincerely， Li Hua