2024届北师版高考英语一轮复习写作专项提升Step 5第二讲记叙文课件

这是一份2024届北师版高考英语一轮复习写作专项提升Step 5第二讲记叙文课件，共26页。PPT课件主要包含了写作模板1　活动报道，典例示范，范文欣赏，范文赏析，增分佳句，热点演练，写作模板2　人物介绍等内容，欢迎下载使用。
记叙文主要用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,以写人、叙事为主要内容,应用广泛,写作形式灵活多样。活动报道和人物介绍是高考书面表达的主要考查方式。
活动报道是新闻报道的一个方面,是对进行的活动进行报道。第一句话通常为全文主旨句,包括时间、地点、人物和事件四个方面。后文对整个事件的过程和细节进行详细的叙述。活动报道的语言平实客观,不追求过于复杂的句式。
(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Crss-Cuntry Running Race Last Sunday witnessed an extrardinary crss-cuntry running race,which nearly drew the attentin f every student and teacher f ur schl.The students selected frm every class tk part in the cmpetitin.The rute measured five kilmeters,frm ur schl gate t the ft f Nanshan Muntain.Every runner tried their best t finish the task,with their classmates alng the way giving them necessary help as well as encuragement.At last,all the runners managed t arrive at the finish line,receiving cheers frm all directins.
The activity was highly spken f,because nt nly did it prvide a chance fr us t exercise,but als made us mre chesive.
文章开门见山,一句话说明活动的人物、时间、地点;然后详述经过、结果;最后对事件进行评价。语言丰富,使用了如witness,extrardinary,which nearly drew the attentin f every student and teacher f ur schl(非限制性定语从句),receiving cheers frm all directins(现在分词短语作状语),because nt nly did it prvide a chance fr us t exercise,but als made us mre chesive(部分倒装句)等高级词汇和句式,提升了文章的写作档次,也显示出了作者较强的语言运用能力。
开头说明事件来龙去脉的常用语:1.In rder t raise awareness abut envirnment prtectin,the English Club f ur schl rganized a vluntary activity this Sunday mrning.为了提高环境保护的意识,本周日上午我校英语俱乐部组织了一次志愿者活动。2.During the May Day hliday,my parents and I climbed Munt Tai.We were lucky that the weather was fine that day and we were able t see the sunrise.五一假期期间,我和父母一起去爬了泰山。我们很幸运,那天的天气很好,我们看到了日出。
3.The Chinese Ancient Petry Cmpetitin will be held in ur schl cncert hall this Friday afternn,frm 2 pm t 5 pm.本周五下午2点到5点,中国古诗词大赛将会在我校音乐厅举行。4.Last week,when I was n my way hme smething terrible happened.上周,当我走在回家的路上时,可怕的事情发生了。
中间详细叙述活动过程和细节的常用语:5.We’re scheduled t gather at the schl gate at 9:00 am,and take a bus t West Lake,which will take abut half an hur.我们计划上午9点在学校门口集合,乘坐公交车去西湖,这大约需要半小时。6.While walking n the cuntry rad,we enjyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view.走在乡间的小路上,我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。
7.Activities include putting up psters,telling the citizens the imprtance f prtecting the envirnment and picking up rubbish in the park.活动包括张贴海报、为市民讲述保护环境的重要性以及在公园捡垃圾。8.At the end f the activity,we tk a picture t memrize the unfrgettable day.活动结束时,我们合影纪念了这个难忘的日子。
结尾简要总结或者评价该活动的常用语:9.It was the mst exciting mment that I have ever experienced.这是我所经历过的最激动人心的时刻。10.Nt nly did it make us clse t nature,but it als gave us relaxatin frm heavy schlwrk.这次活动不但让我们接近大自然,而且让我们从繁重的课业中得到放松。11.The cmpetitin will prvide an pprtunity fr us t have a better understanding f ur traditinal culture.这次竞赛给我们提供了更好的理解传统文化的机会。
12.The cmpetitin bradened my knwledge n the Silk Rad and encuraged me t learn mre abut ur wn culture in the future.这次比赛不仅拓宽了我关于丝绸之路的知识面,而且激励我以后更多地学习关于我们的文化知识。
(2021·江苏如皋第二次适应性考试)假定你是李华,你们学校近期开展了以“十八而志,感恩与责任”为主题的十八岁成人礼仪式(Adult Ceremny),请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.活动目的与内容;3.活动反响。注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Our schl has recently launched an Adult Ceremny t encurage us t live with gratitude and respnsibility.Attending the ceremny were schl leaders,teachers and students wh are 18 years ld.The president n behalf f the schl expressed his wishes that we shuld stay hungry fr knwledge and never let dwn the high expectatins f teachers,parents and thers in sciety.After the speech f the president,we students tk a cllective ath and wrte dwn ur dreams.This event turned ut a great success,cnvincing us that it’s ur duty t aim high while ding slid wrk.
人物介绍的内容通常包括人物生平、性格特点、业余爱好以及取得的成绩。高考对人物介绍的考查通常与书信、电子邮件等结合起来,是书信或者电子邮件中的一部分内容。有时候也要求按照汉语提示对名人进行人物介绍。
(2020·全国Ⅰ卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The persn I respect There are many respectable peple arund ,aged 50,is my favrite English teacher.He is s knwledgeable,humrus and respnsible that I respect and lve him s much. Hnestly speaking,his great patience and assistance have a great impact n me.It was Mr.Zhang wh made me perceive the imprtance f learning English well.Had it nt been fr his guidance and encuragement,I culdn’t have wn first prize in the English cntest.Withut his aid,I wuldn’t have bsted my integrated skills in English.I’ll definitely remember his kindness and help is a very respectable teacher indeed!I d thank him fr what he did fr me.
文章开篇点明尊敬的人。随后介绍尊敬和爱戴的原因。最后进行评价。范文语言丰富,使用了大量亮点词汇和句型,如knwledgeable,humrus,respnsible,have a great impact n,definitely 等,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。句中使用了状语从句“that I respect and lve him s much”;强调句型“It was Mr.Zhang wh made me perceive the imprtance f learning English well.”;虚拟语气“Had it nt been fr his guidance and encuragement,I culdn’t have wn first prize in the English cntest.”和“Withut his aid,I wuldn’t have bsted my integrated skills in English.”提高了表达难度和写作档次,增加了文章的亮点。
开头介绍人物基本信息的常用语:1.My friend Li Hua,aged 27,graduated frm Peking University five years ag,and has just received his dctr’s degree.我的朋友李华,今年27岁,5年前从北京大学毕业,又刚刚拿到了他的博士学位。2.Li Ming is my best friend.He lks handsme.He is tall and strng.李明是我最好的朋友。他长得很帅,人又高又壮。
中间介绍具体个人事迹的常用语:3.He is gd at sprts such as running,ftball,basketball and table tennis.他擅长运动,例如跑步、足球、篮球、乒乓球等。4.Being kind-hearted and easy-ging,he fits in well with thers easily wherever he ges.由于心地善良,性情随和,他每到一处总会很容易地与他人相处融洽。
5.We have much in cmmn regarding ur study,interests and hbbies.我们在学习和兴趣爱好方面有许多共同之处。6.With their help,I regained my cnfidence and began t make steady prgress.在他们的帮助下,我重获信心,并且开始取得稳定进步。
对该人物进行评价的常用语:7.True friendship lasts a lng time.I believe the friendship between Li Ming and I will last frever.真正的友情是持久的。我相信我和李明之间的友谊会到永远。8.In my pinin,distance can’t cut ff the friendship.Only if we miss each ther,ur friendship will last frever.在我看来,距离不能阻断友谊。只要我们彼此想念,我们的友谊就会永存。
9.He devted himself t scientific research and made great cntributins t the cuntry.他致力于科研工作,为国家作出了巨大贡献。10.Cnsidered t be ne f the greatest writers in the wrld,he was awarded the Nbel Prize in Literature.他被认为是世界最伟大的作家之一,被授予了诺贝尔文学奖。
假定你是李华,你校英文报正在征稿,题目是The Mst Impressive Wman in My Life,请你写一篇稿件,投给校英文报。内容包括:1.这位女士的特点;2.这位女士对于你的影响。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。