新北师大版高中英语选择性必修一Unit2Success-Writing Workshop课件

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新北师大版高中英语选择性必修一Unit2 SuccessWriting Workshopiron hammer “Iron Hammer”---Lang Ping Lead in Focus on content P1.Lang Ping is one of China’s most recognized athletes.( )P2.Her strong and powerful playing style earned her the name of “Iron Hammer”. ( )P3.In 1986, she returned to become the coach of the women’s national team when the team is struggling.( )P4. She is loved only because of her devotion to career.( ) Task 1: True or false.Task 1: True or false.P1.Lang Ping is one of China’s most recognized athletes.( )TWho is Lang Ping?Focus on content Task 1: True or false.P2:Her strong and powerful playing style earned her the name of “Iron Hammer”. ( )TWhy was Lang Ping named “Iron Hammer”?Focus on content Task 1: True or false.P3.In 1986, she returned to become the coach of the women’s national team when the team is struggling.( )FWhat did she do in 1995?Focus on content Task 1: True or false.P4. She is loved only because of her devotion to career.( ) FWhy do people love Lang Ping?Focus on content Choose the best answer according to the passage.1. What is the first paragraph mainly about?A. Introduce the person generally.B. Describe the details.C. Make a comment.D. Introduce the development.2. What did the success during the 1980s bring her?A. She became a volleyball coach in America.B. She went abroad to study further.C. She became a star in China.D. She retired and lived a simple life.3. What did Lang Ping do in 1995?A. She returned to be a volleyball athlete again.B. She became the coach of the women’s national team.C. She became a successful volleyball coach in Italy.D. She earned her name “Iron Hammer”.4. What is the purpose of the last paragraph?A. To conclude a comment.B. To make a summary.C. To put forward a suggestion.D. To offer a solution.Task 2: match a, b, c with each paragraph.b. general introduction of the person c. major awards and comments a. important life or work experiences of the person Focus on structure P1P2P3P4P1 : general introduction of the person1.XX is one of China’s most recognised athletes/writers/scientists/actors/singers/physicist/astronauts...2.She/He has been a... for ...years and has contributed greatly to ..., which has made her the most popular figure in China’s ... history.Focus on useful expressions accept Task 3: Read paragraph 2 and complete the blanks. 1980splayed national volleyball team 1984 1982 1981 1985 achieved including Focus on time expressionsTask 3: Read paragraph 3 and complete the blanks. retiring successful volleyball coach returned women’s national team leadership Focus on useful expressions P2 : Lang Ping’s experience as an athleteacceptearn v. ① get money 挣钱 ②get sth that you deserve it such as praise 赢得Focus on key words and phrasesP3 :Lang Ping’s experience as a coach retire v. ① stop working because sb is elder or sick 退休retire from sth ② stop competing during a game, race,ect, because you are injuried （因伤）退出（比赛等）Focus on key words and phrasesFocus on useful expressions 1. In xx, sb was given xx Award/Prize. 2. sb is loved not only because of his/her devotion to her /his career, but also because of her/his huge influence on the sport/teaching/literature/medicine...P4. major awards and comments Time Expressions (1)duringLang Ping played on China’s national volleyball tem during the 1980s.atLang was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics …Sentence BuilderafterAfter retiring as an athlete in 1986 she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.that yearThat year, Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards …Sentence BuilderFind more detailed information about the person you are going to write about.Outlining Complete the outline of the person’s life story based on Activity 3.Drafting Use your outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft.Editing Edit your essay in pairs. Then share what you have written in class.1 general introduction of the person 2 important life or work experiences of the person3 major awards and commentsWriting a Life StoryIt’s important to:focus on what is special about the person you are writing about;choose important events and achievements to show why he / she is special;use time expressions to describe past events or experiences;use past tenses to write about events in the past.Writing Help【写作任务】某英语学习app 写作板块“Influential people in history”在面向其用户征文。请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文介绍伟大的生物学家——亚历山大•弗莱明(Alexander Fleming)并投稿。注意：1. 词数100 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作要求介绍生物学家弗莱明, 属于记叙文的写作范畴。这类文章的关键之处在于突出人物主要成就。人称应以第三人称为主，时态则以一般过去时为主。二、谋篇布局此类文章一般采用“总—分—总”的组织模式，力求给读者一个较为清晰且完整的印象。针对本篇写作任务，我们可以列出以下提纲：第一部分：总体介绍（其身份、生卒年、出生地等）；第二部分：列举其主要经历和成就（按时间顺序）；第三部分：总结全文（对其历史地位进行简要评价）。三、组织语言常用词汇：courage, determination, patience, theory, experiment, attitude, confidence, research, gain, discovery, devotion, interest, influence, win, receive, ...care for, learn ... by oneself, be fond of, lead a(n) ... life, be good at, make contributions to, succeed in, make efforts to, be proud of, be considered as, be honoured with, be famous for / as ..., grow up, be awarded to, ...常用句型：... got / received a(n) ... degree in ...... was born in ... and died in the year of ...... play(s) an important role in the development of ...After graduation, he / she decided to ...... will be remembered forever.【范文展示】Possible version one： Alexander Fleming (1881-1955) was a Scottish biologist, who discovered penicillin. Its use has been saving so many lives. Fleming was raised by his mother and elder brother. It was because he grew up on a farm that he developed great power of observation. The year 1906 saw Fleming graduate as a top student from St Mary's Hospital Medical School, Imperial College London and begin his research. He made outstanding contributions to medical science, the most important of which was his discovery ofpenicillin in 1928. Because of it, a Nobel Prize was awarded to him in 1945. Fleming is without doubt one of the greatest biologists in history.Possible version two： Scottish biologist Alexander Fleming (1881-1955) discovered penicillin, which has been playing a vital part in saving countless lives. Brought up by his mother and elder brother, Fleming grew up on a farm. This experience brought him great power of observation. In 1906, Fleming graduated with distinction from St Mary's Hospital Medical School, Imperial College London andbegan his research. He made impressive contributions to medical science, but it was his discovery of penicillin that gave him his lasting reputation. Fleming was recognised for that achievement in 1945, when he was awarded a Nobel Prize. Fleming is undoubtedly one of the greatest biologists in history.