高考英语三轮冲刺查补易混易错点11 应用文写作之邀请信、感谢信、推荐信(含解析)
展开查补易混易错点11 应用文写作之邀请信、感谢信、推荐信
体裁
命题形式
写作主题
2022
新高考
I卷
应用文
邀请信
写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈
II卷
应用文
邀请信
写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈
全国卷
乙卷
说明文
投稿
利用填表调查结果给报社投稿
甲卷
应用文
投稿
以世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿
2021
新高考
I卷
应用文
投稿
校刊youth庆祝十周年,向校刊表达自己经历,并送上祝福
II卷
应用文
投稿
校刊youth庆祝十周年,向校刊表达自己经历,并送上祝福
全国卷
乙卷
应用文
发言稿
以“be smart online learners”为主题写一篇发言稿参赛
甲卷
应用文
征求建议
征求外国朋友建议,哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人
2020
全国卷
I卷
应用文
投稿
写一篇以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题投稿参赛
II卷
应用文
日记
写一篇英文短文介绍上周末采摘活动
III卷
应用文
求助信
给外教写一封信,请帮忙指导
【邀请信】
首段:介绍自己,简要介绍相关的活动,并发出邀请
1. We're throwing a surprise party for... We'd like to invite you to.../It's my honor to invite you to...
我们将为…..办惊喜派对。我们想邀请你……/我非常荣幸地邀请你......
2. We are having...on...and we feel it would be wonderful if you can join it. 我们将于……(日期)
举行……(活动),我们认为如果你能参加就太好了。
3. It gives me great pleasure to invite you to... 我很高兴邀请你……
主体部分:介绍活动相关信息,并说明邀请的内容
1. It will begin at..and last... during which..它将于……开始并持续……,在此期间...…
2. With the aim of...,we will invite... 为了……,我们将邀请......
3. To begin with,we will... besides,there will be a lot of activities,such as...,which will.... 首先,
我们会……。此外,会有很多活动,比如……,这将……
尾段:期待对方接受邀请,并期盼对方回复
1. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来,我们会感到非常荣幸。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible whether you can..?
请尽快让我知道你能否…..,好吗?
【满分范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to tell you our school is going to hold a speech contest with the theme of saving food.And
I'm writing to invite you to participate in it.
Saving food is everyone's responsibility.The aim of the speech contest is to arouse the students'
awareness of saving food.Besides,it can be helpful in developing students' good habits.The competition will be held in the Pearl Square at8:20am on September28.All the teachers and students in our school can take part in the competition.I'm convinced that it'll leave a deep impression on you.
Looking forward to your early reply and attendance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【感谢信】
首段:表明写信目的
1. I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks for../I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for...... 我写这封信是为了表达我对……的真诚感谢。/我想为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。
2. Upon leaving...../graduation,I'd like to express my heartfelt/sincere thanks to you for......
离开….时/毕业之际,我想向你表示我诚挚的感谢,感谢你…
主体部分:解释感谢的原因
1. Without your timely help,I would not have been../Thanks to your help,I have made rapid progress
in...../But for your help,I would not have made so much progress in......
没有你的及时帮助,我就不会……/多亏了你的帮助,我在……方面进步很快。/要不是你的帮助,我在……(方面)不会取得如此大的进步。
2. There's no denying that it is very difficult for me to......without your help.
不可否认,没有你的帮助,对我来说……是非常困难的。
3. Whenever I have difficulty in......,you are the one that I will turn to first.
每当我在……(方面)遇到困难时,你就是我首先要求助的人。
尾段:再次致谢并表达回报意愿
1. Your kindness and help will always be remembered by me. 我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
2. My gratitude is beyond description./Words fail to express my thanks to you. 感激之情,无以言表。
3. I deeply appreciate your help and I hope to have the opportunity to reward your kindness.
我非常感谢你的帮助,并且我希望有机会回报你的好意。
【满分范文】
Dear Alex,
It's really hard to say goodbye to you.I even can't find words to express my appreciation of all you
have done for me.
Honestly speaking,it's so nice of you to offer me a great deal of practical learning skills.Under your guidance,I've made great progress in English.It s a big surprise for me to have even ranked first in a recent English speech contest.Whenever I encounter difficulties,you always cheer me up and help
me out,which fuels my enthusiasm for learning English.No words can express how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
【推荐信】
首段:说明写信目的,指明推荐/介绍的对象
1、 I'm very pleased/more than delighted to learn/know that you are going to... I would like to recommend....to you.
得知你将……我很高兴。我想向你推荐……
2、 Knowing that you are interested in......,I'm writing to recommend…....to you.
得知你对……感兴趣,我写信向你推荐……
3、With reference to your requirements,I shall recommend.......to you.
根据你的要求,我向你推荐........
主体部分:阐述推荐理由
1、There are several reasons why I think this person is a good choice.Firstly,he has shown great talent in...... In addition,he has a very pleasant personality.
我认为这个人是个不错的选择原因有几个首先,他在……方面表现出很高的天赋。另外,他的性格非常讨人喜欢。
2、To begin with,the activity is tailor-made for students who have a burning passion for.........
首先,这个活动是为那些对……有强烈爱好的学生专门设计的。
3、.......should be highly recommended as it is a must-see site for most of the foreign visitors.
......应当极力推荐,因为它是大部分外国游客必览之景。
尾段:表达期待与感谢
1、 Hope my recommendation will be helpful.Wish you a good time/journey.
希望我的推荐有用。祝您过得/旅途愉快。
2、 I'll be more than happy if you can take my suggestions/ideas into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。
满分范文
Dear Jim,
Learning from your letter that you will study in Beijing next semester,I am more than delighted to recommend Beijing Language and Culture University to you.
Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture,I think it is an ideal place for you.The university is known for its language and culture courses intended for international students.I believe you will have a rewarding experience there.Frankly speaking,studying for a degree in a different country is never easy.You'd better learn some basic Chinese before coming.In this way,you may adjust yourself to the life there soon.
Hope my recommendation will be helpful.Wish you a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作模板
Dear ______ (称谓)
In a bid to ______(活动目的), a/an ______(活动) is scheduled to be held in/at ______(地点). I would like to invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, the ______(活动) falls on ______(具体日期), lasting from______ to______(具体时间点) , during which time a wide variety of ______ (活动内容) will be put on. For example, ______(具体内容). In addition, /As far as I can see, ______(其他活动/重要意义).
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know. May you have a good time!
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt gratitude to you for ______(感谢的原因). Undoubtedly,had it not been your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been______ (没有对方帮助时的后果).
Whenever I encounter difficulties, you ______(具体事由和感想) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. Many thanks to you. I wish ______(表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear ______ (称谓)
In response to your request for ______(推荐事由), I would like to recommend ______(具体推荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Initially, ______(推荐理由一) . Additionally/Aside from it, ______(推荐理由二) . Plus, ______(推荐理由三) . If you want details, please______(联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
1.(2022·北京·高考真题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.建议交流的具体内容及其原因;
2.交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jim,
How’s everything?
I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?
The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件,邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
最近好吗:How’s everything → How’s it going
提供、给予:give → offer / provide
不擅长:be weak in → be bad at / be poor in
建议:suggestion → advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing.
拓展句:I’m writing to ask if it is convenient for you to offer us an online talk on English writing.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2.(2022·浙江6月份高考真题)假定你是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验,内容包括:
1.位置与开放时间; 2.室内设施和功能。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Michael,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Michael,
Good news ! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假定考生是李华,你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”,请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信,邀请他一同体验。
【详情解析】
1. 词汇积累
由……组成:consist of→ be made up of
位于:be located on→ be situated on
与……相连接: be linked to →be connected to
预定:reserve→book
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
拓展句:Recently, a newly-furnished section, which consists of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet.(of which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays.(过去分词作状语)
3.(2022·全国新高考I、II卷真题)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
参加:attend→participate in
建立:establish→set up
帮助:aid→assistance
许多:plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句:You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略结构)
4.(2021·天津·高考真题)假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:
(1) 表示感谢并问候;
(2) 计划与家人一起做的事情;
(3) 你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
注意:
(1) 词数不少于100;
(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Jin
【参考答案】
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:表示感谢并问候;计划与家人一起做的事情;你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
照顾:take care of→look after
另外,此外:in addition→besides→what’s more
雇佣:employ→hire
既然:now that→since
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
拓展句:As the Internet industry develops rapidly,the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. (运用了now that引导的原因状语从句)
5.(2020·全国高考新课标II卷真题)假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介;
2. 指导内容;
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
Dear Miss Evans,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Miss Evans,
How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.
We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?
Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。
【详情解析】
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时,一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构:总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的;第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题;第三段表达感谢,并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
write to;according to ;combine ; adaption ;challenge;attached to ;convenient
第三步:连词成句
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
6.(2020·北京·高考真题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:
1. 条件及要求;
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意:1. 词数不少于50;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【详情解析】
第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指导教师,内容包括:1. 条件及要求;2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):drama club (戏剧俱乐部);plan to do sth.(计划做某事);in one's place(代替某人);recommend(推荐);a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人);currently (目前);experienced(熟练的);both…and…(两者都……);take care of(照顾);wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
7.(2023届吉林省名校联盟高三3月大联考英语试题)假定你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办以校园生活为主题的绘画比赛,请给你校交换生Chris写封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.活动意义;
2.参赛要求。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Chris,
How are you getting along? I am writing to invite you to participate in the on-coming painting contest in our school.
The contest, with the theme of “Life on Campus”, is aimed at enriching us students’ after-class activities and arousing our affection for our school. You are always interested in painting, so I consider it a good opportunity for you to show your talent. Remember to submit your painting to Students’ Union before November 10.
Looking forward to seeing your wonderful work.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校将举办以校园生活为主题的绘画比赛这一情况,给你校交换生Chris写封邮件,邀请他参加。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
参加:participate in→ take part in
目的是:is aimed at → is designed to
对……感兴趣:are interested in→ are keen to
机会:opportunity→ chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to invite you to participate in the on-coming painting contest in our school.
拓展句:I am writing to invite you to participate in the on-coming painting contest, which will be held in our school.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】The contest, with the theme of “Life on Campus”, is aimed at enriching us students’ after-class activities and arousing our affection for our school.(运用了with的复合结构)
【高分句型2】You are always interested in painting, so I consider it a good opportunity for you to show your talent.(运用了动词consider后接it作形式宾语,动词不定式to do作真正的宾语。)
8.(2023届内蒙古赤峰市八校高三第一次统一考试英语试题)假定你是李华,你校将举办中国诗词朗诵大会(Chinese Poetry Recitation Conference)。请给你的交换生朋友Joe写一封邮件,邀请他一起观看。
内容包括:
1活动目的;
2.时间地点;
3.活动意义。
注意:1.写作词数应为100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Joe,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Joe,
How is everything going? I can’t wait to inform you that a Chinese Poetry Recitation Conference will be held in our school. As you are keen on Chinese poetry, I’m writing to invite you to enjoy it with me.
As scheduled, the conference will be held from 3:00 pm to 5:00pm at the Academic Hall this Friday, whose aim is to improve our ability to appreciate Chinese ancient poetry as well as cultivate our literature taste. As you know, Chinese poetry, extensive and profound, is a precious cultural heritage of Chinese literature. Undoubtedly, it is a golden chance for us to get exposed to the charm of Chinese poetry.
Eagerly looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生交换生朋友Joe写一封邮件,邀请他一起观看学校即将举办的中国诗词朗诵大会(Chinese Poetry Recitation Conference)。内容包括:1活动目的;2.时间地点;3.活动意义。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
告知:inform→tell
对……感兴趣:be keen on →be interested in
宝贵的:precious→valuable
接触:get exposed to→expose oneself to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Undoubtedly, it is a golden chance for us to get exposed to the charm of Chinese poetry.
拓展句:There is no doubt that it is a golden chance for us to get exposed to the charm of Chinese poetry.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】As scheduled, the conference will be held from 3:00 pm to 5:00pm at the Academic Hall this Friday, whose aim is to improve our ability to appreciate Chinese ancient poetry as well as cultivate our literature taste.(运用了状语从句的省略以及whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】As you know, Chinese poetry, extensive and profound, is a precious cultural heritage of Chinese literature.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
9.(江西省部分学校2022-2023学年高三下学期3月月考英语试题)假设你是李华,《校园生活》(Campus Life)报刊正在举办面向外国学生的“汉语的魅力”征文比赛活动。请你给你的留学生朋友 Robert写封邮件,邀请他参加征文比赛。内容包括:
1.征文比赛的内容;
2.请他讲述学汉语的感悟;
3.投稿要求:2023年4月19日前发至邮箱:charmofchinese@163.com。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Robert,
I’m overwhelmed with excitement to know that Campus Life, a popular magazine, is holding a writing competition, asking foreign people to write about their stories in learning Chinese. Knowing that you’ve been learning Chinese and have made great progress, I’m writing to invite you to sign up for the competition. There are many things to write about. For example, you can write about what has motivated you to take up Chinese, and how you have overcome the difficulties you’ve been faced with while learning Chinese. By the way, It’s required that you post your writing to charmofchinese@ 163.com no later than April 19,2023.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生留学生朋友 Robert写封邮件,邀请他参加“汉语的魅力”征文比赛。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
激动不已的:overwhelmed → thrilled/ excited
报名参加:sign up for→ enroll
激励:motivate →encourage/inspire
克服:overcome →get over
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowing that you’ve been learning Chinese and have made great progress, I’m writing to invite you to sign up for the competition.
拓展句:Because I know that you’ve been learning Chinese and have made great progress, I’m writing to invite you to sign up for the competition.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Knowing that you’ve been learning Chinese and have made great progress, I’m writing to invite you to sign up for the competition.(运用了现在分词作原因状语和that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】There are many things to write about.(运用了不定式作后置定语)
10.(2023届四川省泸州市高三第二次教学质量诊断性考试英语试题)假定你是李华,你校将要举办“美丽中国(Amazing China)”主题摄影展作品征集活动。你的交换生朋友Peter是一名摄影爱好者,请给他写一封英语邮件,邀请他投稿参展。内容包括:
1. 写信事由;
2. 投稿方式;
3. 表达希望。
注意:
1 .词数100左右;2 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? I have some exciting news for you! Our school will hold a photo contest named “Amazing China”. I know you love photography, so why not give it a try?
The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, famous places or historical sites, local customs of China and so on. And every photo should be accompanied with an explanation: time, place, name of the work, and stories behind. Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted. Each participant can turn in three photos at most to 2022@hongxingschool.com. Deadline for entries is November, 15th, 2022.
If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于一篇应用文。假定你是李华,你校将要举办“美丽中国(Amazing China)”主题摄影展作品征集活动。你的交换生朋友Peter是一名摄影爱好者,请给他写一封英语邮件,邀请他投稿参展。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
比赛:contest→ competition
开心的:happy → delighted
上交:turn in→ hand in
至多:at most→ no more than
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted.
拓展句:Photos which are edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Our school will hold a photo contest named “Amazing China”.(运用了过去分词作定语)
【高分句型2】If you are interested, I’m more than happy to be your photography companion.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
11.(2023届辽宁省县级重点高中联合体高三第一次模拟考试英语试题)假定你是李华,即将参加以“My Dream University”为主题的校英语演讲比赛。请给你的外国好友Jack写封邮件,内容包括:
1. 征求备赛意见;
2. 表示感谢。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jack,
How are you recently? I’m going to participate in an English speech competition themed My Dream University. With time going by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m writing to ask for your advice.
Knowing that you have taken part in many competitions, I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions. For example, how can I adjust my mindset, improve my contents and hold the attention from audience?
I truly believe that with your help, I’ll have a better performance. Thanks a lot from the bottom of my heart. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,即将参加以“My Dream University”为主题的校英语演讲比赛。请给你的外国好友Jack写封邮件。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
参加:participate in/ take part in→join in
比赛:competition→contest
建议:advice/suggestion→tip
例如:for example→for instance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I truly believe that with your help, I’ll have a better performance.
拓展句:If you could offer your help, I’ll have a better performance.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]With time going by, I’m getting increasingly nervous, so I’m writing to ask for your advice. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2]Knowing that you have taken part in many competitions, I’d appreciate it if you could give me some practical suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
12.(江苏省通泰徐镇连宿淮7市2022-2023学年高三下学期初联考英语试题)假定你是李华,春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游,你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 收到照片表示感谢;
2. 回顾一起度过的时光;
3. 邀请他周末来家作客。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下各式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Mike,
How are you? Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories.
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time.
I’d like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Mike回一封邮件,内容包括:收到照片表示感谢、回顾一起度过的时光、邀请他周末来家作客。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
难以置信的:incredible →unbelievable
真正地:truly→authentically
玩得愉快:have a great time → have fun
机会:chance →opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It will be a chance for you to meet my family.
拓展句:It will be a chance that you will meet my family.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home.(运用what引导的主语从句,省略了关系代词的定语从句)
13.(北京市昌平区2022-2023学年第一学期高三期末质量抽测英语试题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你参加了学校举办的线上英文演讲比赛。在准备的过程中,你的英国朋友Jim给了你很多帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件表达感谢,内容包括:
1. 介绍比赛结果;
2. 回顾Jim对你的帮助。
注意:
1. 词数不少于100;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jim,
I can’t wait to tell you the good news that I won the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school! I am writing to show my gratitude to you.
I would always remember that before the contest, you gave me many valuable suggestions about how to perform better during the contest, such as reading English text loudly every morning. Besides, your encouragement also made me full of confidence. Thanks to your guidance, I really kept calm and showed the best of myself to others.
Without your patient help, I couldn’t make such an achievement. Thank you again for your kindness! Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本书面表达是一篇感谢信。要求考生以学生李华的身份对在准备英语演讲比赛过程中,给予了很多帮助的英国朋友Jim写一封邮件表达感谢。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
比赛:contest→competition
感谢:gratitude→thanks
有用的:valuable→useful
建议:suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, your encouragement also made me full of confidence.
拓展句:Besides, you encouraged me so much that I were full of confidence.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I can’t wait to tell you the good news that I won the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school! (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2] I would always remember that before the contest, you gave me many valuable suggestions about how to perform better during the contest, such as reading English text loudly every morning. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
14.(2023届湖南省郴州市高三上学期第一次教学质量监测英语试题)假定你是校学生会成员李华,你校学生会组织了图书捐赠及互换活动,外教 Smith 捐赠了许多英文图书 。请你代表学生会给他写一封邮件 ,内容包括:
1. 表达感激之情;
2. 回顾活动以及 Smith 给予的帮助。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear Smith,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Smith,
On behalf of the student Union, I’m writing to express our heartfelt gratitude for your generous donation of so many English books.
Last Friday, we organized a book donation and exchange event. Many students and teachers took an active part in it. It’s so kind of you to bring books covering a wide range of topics. Besides, the books you donated were very popular, all of which were taken away in a short time. There is no denying that your generosity and contribution made a big difference to our event, which turned out to be a great success.
Thank you once again for your support.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给外教Smith 写一封电子邮件,向他介绍图书捐赠及互换活动,并对他给予的爱心捐赠表示感谢。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
由衷的:heartfelt →profound
参加:take part in →participate in
不可否认:no denying →no doubt
伟大的:big → great
2.句式拓展
简单句变并列句
原句:Last Friday, we organized a book donation and exchange event.
拓展句:Last Friday, not only did we organize a book donation but also we have an exchange event.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Besides, the books you donated were very popular. all of which were taken away in a short time. (运用了介词加which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】There is no denying that your generosity and contribution made a big difference to our event,which turned out to be a great success.(运用了that引导的同位语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
15.(湖南省师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高三下学期月考卷英语试题)假定你是学生李华,你的英国朋友Tom对中国古代四大名著很感兴趣,希望你能给他推荐其中的一部。请你给Tom回信,内容包括:
1. 简要介绍一本名著;
2. 说明推荐理由。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:
《三国演义》Romance of the Three Kingdoms
《水浒传》Water Margin
《西游记》Journey to the West
《红楼梦》A Dream of Red Mansions
Dear Tom,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Tom,
I’m glad you’re interested in our traditional culture and the China’s four great classical novels. I will recommend Journey to the West to you at your request.
Journey to the West tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India for Buddhist scriptures. During their journey, they bravely face a series of dangers and finally conquer those devils and monsters. This book is not only interesting in content and vivid in language, but also conveys a spirit of courage. In our daily life, we are bound to meet with all kinds of challenges. We should be brave and never give up.
The book is well worth reading. I hope you will like it.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于推荐信。要求考生给英国朋友Tom回信,给他推荐一本中国古代四大名著。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad → pleased/happy
勇敢地:bravely → courageously
战胜:conquer → defeat
必然:be bound to → be certain to
2.句式拓展
原句: I will recommend Journey to the West to you at your request.
拓展句: I will recommend Journey to the West, which is my favorite, to you at your request.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I’m glad you’re interested in our traditional culture and the China’s four great classical novels.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Journey to the West tells the story of Tang Xuanzang and his three disciples who go to India for Buddhist scriptures. (运用了who引导限制性定语从句)
16.(2023届湖北省华中师范大学第一附属中学高三第二次学业质量评价检测英语试题)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Liz来信表示对中国烹饪很感兴趣。正好这学期你校要开设“Exploring Chinese cuisine”的线上课程,请你回信向他推荐此课程。内容包括:
1.开课时间;2.课程内容;3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Dear Liz,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
LiHua
【参考答案】
Dear Liz,
The online course “Explore Chinese cuisine” is going to be included in the curriculum this semester in my school. Knowing you are interested in Chinese cuisine, I can’t wait to tell you the good news.
Chinese cuisine culture is extensive and profound, which can be roughly divided into eight regional cuisines. Our course will introduce the features of each regional type by focusing on the cooking materials, cooking methods and seasoning. Here comes the highlight of the course. The school has invited famous chefs in the town as the guest teachers. They will show us how to cook the most typical dishes of each regional type. Sounds amazing, doesn’t it?
To popularize Chinese food culture and enhance its influence, this online course is open up to the students worldwide. After logging on to the official website of my school and registering a new user, you will be asked to fill in an application form. The course takes place every Saturday at 8 p. m. and you can’t afford to miss it.
Yours
LiHua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Liz写一封回信,向他推荐学校要开设“Exploring Chinese cuisine”的线上课程,内容包含开课时间、课程内容以及报名方式。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in →be keen on
好的:amazing →wonderful
提高:enhance →boost
要求:ask →require
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowing you are interested in Chinese cuisine, I can’t wait to tell you the good news.
拓展句:Because I know you are interested in Chinese cuisine, I can’t wait to tell you the good news.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Chinese cuisine culture is extensive and profound, which can be roughly divided into eight regional cuisines.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】To popularize Chinese food culture and enhance its influence, this online course is open up to the students worldwide.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
17.(2023届广西南宁市高中毕业班第一次适应性测试英语试题)假定你是李华。你的外国朋友Mike即将到你的家乡旅游,请你给他写一封邮件,向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆(Folk Culture Museum)。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.介绍文化馆特色;
3.表示欢迎。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? Knowing that you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
There is a lot to do in the museum. First, what will impress you most is that a variety of cultural handicrafts such as musical instruments, farming tools and so on are exhibited in different halls. Here, you can be involved in making crafts like paper umbrellas and Chinese knots. What’s more, with the help of the guides who is professional , you will have a better understanding of the history and development of our folk culture.
You’re warmly welcome to visit the museum. I’m sure you’ll immerse yourself in the folk culture and fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Mike写一封邮件,向他推荐家乡的民俗文化馆
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
介绍:recommend→introduce
各种各样的:a variety of→all kinds of
展示:exhibit→show
涉及:be involved in→relate to
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Knowing that you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
拓展句:Because I know you are going to travel in my hometown, I am writing to recommend the local Folk Culture Museum.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】First, what will impress you most is that a variety of cultural handicrafts such as musical instruments, farming tools and so on are exhibited in different halls. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, with the help of the guides who is professional , you will have a better understanding of the history and development of our folk culture.(运用了who引导的定语从句)
18.(2023届广西桂林市、梧州市高考联合调研英语试题)假定你是李华,下周将去英国交换学习两个月,并打算在此期间游览英国风景名胜。请给你的英国网友Jack写封信,请他推荐一处景点,内容包括:
1. 表达问候;
2. 写信目的;
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Jack,
It’s a long time since we last emailed each other. Hope everything goes well with you. I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student, during which I plan to travel around. I’m writing to ask for your advice on the choice of tourist attractions in England.
As a developed country, England has much to offer tourists from around the world. I am particularly interested in mountain climbing. I know there are many mountains in your country, but I don’t know which one is worth visiting. I wish you could recommend one to me.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【语篇解读】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友Jack写一封信,请他帮忙推荐一处英国景点。
【详情解析】
1.词汇积累
建议:advice →suggestion
选择:choice →selection
全世界:around the world →across the world
我会很感激的:I’d appreciate it →I’d be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am particularly interested in mountain climbing.
拓展句:I am particularly interested in mountain climbing, which can make me relaxed.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I will be living in England for two months as an exchange student, during which I plan to travel around. (运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I’d appreciate it if you could reply soon. (运用了if 引导的条件状语从句)
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