新高考英语二轮复习课时练高考题型组合练第5组组合练(十五)写作组合规范练短文改错＋书面表达 (含解析)

组合练(十五)　写作组合规范练　短文改错＋书面表达

Ⅰ.短文改错

(2022·四川德阳二诊)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last Saturday morning，I wondered what to do on the weekend while lied on bed.Suddenly，I remember Mom had promised to take my sister and me to the zoo，so I got up and got dressing very quickly.At the thought of getting closely to the lovely monkeys there，I felt very excited.As soon as she arrived at the zoo，we went to the monkey’s home direct.With the help of my sister I took some good picture of them for my science project.My sister said I was big fan of monkeys.Yes，that she said was right.And I was confident about that I would get an “A” in the project.

答案　

Last Saturday morning，I wondered what to do on the weekend while  on bed.Suddenly，I  Mom had promised to take my sister and me to the zoo，so I got up and got  very quickly.At the thought of getting  to the lovely monkeys there，I felt very excited.As soon as  arrived at the zoo，we went to the monkey’s home .With the help of my sister I took some good  of them for my science project.My sister said I was  big fan of monkeys.Yes， she said was right.And I was confident about that I would get an “A” in the project.

Ⅱ.书面表达

上周，你和同学参加了学校一年一度的运动会。请你写一篇英语文章向《英语园地》杂志投稿，题目自拟，内容包括：

1．运动会简介；

2．你参加的项目和表现；

3．个人感受。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考范文

An Unforgettable Sports Meeting

Last Friday，our school held an annual sports meeting.There were some events in the sports meeting，such as high jump，long jump，and running race.

I like running，so I took part in a 5,000-meter race.Faced with fifteen strong competitors，I felt nervous at first.At the sound of the starting signal，all the runners began to run like the wind.I tried my best to keep up with them.Finally，with strong will，I was the first to reach the finish line，which made me so happy.

Tired as I was，I felt very excited.I believe that as long as we spare no effort to do something，we are more likely to succeed.