新高考英语二轮复习课时练高考题型组合练第6组组合练(十八)写作组合规范练短文改错＋书面表达 (含解析)

组合练(十八)　写作组合规范练　短文改错＋书面表达

Ⅰ.短文改错

(2022·安徽江南十校一模联考)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Amy，

The Tree-planting Day is around corner.As you know，in our school，it had long been a tradition to hold activities on 12 March.I hope you can spare time to joining us.

There will be a round-the-school tour on your campus to learn about the plants.A vividly lecture will be given about everyday objects that is made from plants.To experience the glory of labour，so we will plant trees on our own.What meaningful！If you’d like to participate，remember to wear water-proof shoe.

With great attention pay to trees，our school enjoys a green environment.

Yours，

Li Hua

答案　

Dear Amy，

The Tree-planting Day is around  corner.As you know，in our school，it  long been a tradition to hold activities on 12 March.I hope you can spare time to  us.

There will be a round-the-school tour on  campus to learn about the plants.A  lecture will be given about everyday objects that  made from plants.To experience the glory of labour，so we will plant trees on our own. meaningful！If you’d like to participate，remember to wear water-proof .

With great attention  to trees，our school enjoys a green environment.

Yours，

Li Hua

Ⅱ.书面表达

(2022·河南焦作一模)

假定你是李华，你了解到近日在某地举行的一次传统捕猎活动中，超过1 400只海豚被捕杀。请你就此事件给某英文报环保专栏的编辑写一封邮件，内容包括：

1．你对海豚的了解；

2．你对这一事件的态度和建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：海豚dolphin

参考范文

Dear editor，

I am much shocked by the sad news that over 1,400 dolphins have been killed recently.

As is known to all，the dolphin is a kind of lovely sea animal，with a much higher IQ than most of the other animals.In some large aquariums，you can see dolphins performing various skills for visitors.Watching dolphins performing has now become a must for visitors to the aquarium，especially children.

In my opinion，the outdated tradition of hunting dolphins must be stopped at once.We should take all necessary measures to educate people and give better protection to the dolphins.

Hope we can do more to raise people’s awareness of wildlife protection.

Yours truly，

Li Hua