高考英语一轮复习高分突破练习专题40应用文写作之通知和演讲或致辞（含解析）

这是一份高考英语一轮复习高分突破练习专题40应用文写作之通知和演讲或致辞（含解析），共20页。

考点导航
【写作思路】
口头通知
口头通知要注意以下几点：
(1) 要有称呼用语。如：在正式场合用的Ladies and gentlemen,对学生用的Bys and girls 等。
(2) 要有开头语。常用的开头语有：
May I have yur attentin, please?
Be quite. There is smething imprtant I have t tell yu.
Yu need t knw.
I have smething t tell yu.
(3) 时态问题。口头通知是要告诉大家即将进行的活动，因此要以一般将来时为主。
(4) 人称问题。口头通知常用第二人称表示被通知的对象。
(5) 要有结束语。常用的结束语有：
That’s all. Thank yu.
Any questins? Des everyne understand?
书面通知
书面通知具有以下特点：
(1) 书面通知的正文上面的正中有NOTICE或ANNOUNCEMENT 标志。
(2) 在正文最后的右下角要写上发通知的单位或组织者的姓名。
(3) 在左下角写上发出通知的日期。
【写作佳句】
口头通知套语
(1) 在用口头下达通知时，发通知者通常要将听通知人的注意力吸引过来，这类表达常见的有：
May I have yur attentin, please?
Attentin please, everyne. I have an annuncement t make.
Be quite. There is smething imprtant I have t tell yu.
I have smething (imprtant) t tell yu.
I’m glad t tell yu smething imprtant.
(2) 其他用于口头通知的固定套语(如叫听者不要迟到、欢迎某人参加某活动等)：
Everyne is asked t be there n time.
Be sure nt t be late.
please be present n time.
please take yur ntebks with yu and be sure n time.
Thse wh are interested in it are warmly welcme.
(3) 口头通知的结束套语主要有：
That’s all. Thank yu very much.
书面通知套语
常用的开头语有：
All teachers and students will be required t…(全体师生务必要……)
Ntice is hereby given that…(兹通知……)
Our schl / The Student Unin will / is ging t hld…
A lecture will be given at 7:00 this evening in…
常用的结束语有：
Everybdy is expected t attend it.
Be sure t attend it n time.
Please / D be present n time.
【演讲类必背】
1．My name is ... Tday I am very glad t have the pprtunity t make this presentatin. I shall be speaking abut ...
我是……今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
2．Gd mrning, everyne! It is my great hnur t share with yu my pinins n ...
大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下关于……我的看法。
3．Ladies and gentlemen/Bys and girls, I'm ... I'm greatly hnured t speak here n behalf f my schl. I'm ging t talk abut ...
女士们、先生们/同学们，我是……很荣幸代表我校在此演讲。我要谈论的是……
4．What really matters/cunts is whether yu can cncentrate n yur lessns.
真正要紧的是你是否能全神贯注于你的功课。
5．Abve all/Mst imprtant f all, yu shuld believe in yurself.
最重要的是，你要相信自己。
6．It played an increasingly imprtant rle/part in ur life.
它在我们的生活中起着越来越重要的作用。
7．That's all. Thank yu fr yur attentin/listening.
我的演讲到此结束，谢谢大家。
8．I hpe I have made myself understd.
我希望我已经非常清楚地表达了我的意思。
【新闻报道常用句型】
Recently, a survey has been dne t find ut …最近，进行了一次调查去了解
One thusand senir middle schl students frm ten schls in HuBei Prvince were interviewed.湖北省10间学校的一千名中学生参与了调查。
The survey shws that mre than half f the students like t read news mst.调查发现超过一半的学生最喜欢读新闻。
The survey shws that half f the girls chse..., while 48 ％ f the bys …调查发现一半的女生选... ，而48%的男生...
In rder t celebrate the 90th birthday f ur Party and enrich ur lives, ur schl has rganized a patritic sng cncert recently.为了庆祝建党90周年，丰富大家的文化生活，我们学校最近举办了一次爱国歌曲演唱会。
When it was time fr the vlunteers t ...
What they did has brught jy t thers and enriched their wn lives.
【分析】
SKIPIF 1 < 0
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Grwing Tgether，内容包括：
(1)短片内容：学校的发展；
(2)放映时间、地点；
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
(1)词数100左右；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【试题分析】
2018年高考英语书面表达体裁为通知，替学校的“英语天地”邀请学生看英文短片Grwing tgether。继2015年，2016年，2017年连续三年考查信件认识人写信之后，全国二卷考查了应用文中的另一典型体裁，内容为邀请电影相关的时间，地点的通知。学生对该题材和内容熟悉，对词汇的要求也相对基础。
纵观全国II卷英语书面表达，从题材上来讲，除了2014年考查了记叙文，十年中九年均考查了应用文，应用文占90%。所以考生在高考的英语写作的准备中应当把重心放在应用文上，熟练掌握英语应用文写作的几个相关专项，并且熟识高考英语基础词汇。
【写作点拨】
英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。
第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。
【满分范文】
Bys and girls,
May I have yur attentin, please? Recently, an utstanding mvie will be shwn in ur campus. Welcme t jin us end enjy it! Here are sme relevant details abut it.
T begin with, the name f the mvie is Grwing tgether, which is abut the develpment f ur belved schl; as a result, it will be nt nly meaningful but als interesting. Besides, it will be in the library frm 2:00 t 4:00 in the afternn n June 9th . What’s mre, everyne f yu will be welcme t take part in it, enjying the mvie, having a heated discussin afterwards and giving yur wn cmments.
Hpefully, yu wuld make it t ur activity. I have the cnfidence that yu will have a great time.
The Student Unin
SKIPIF 1 < 0
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家参加即将举行的书法讲座，内容包括:
1. 讲座目的；
2. 讲座内容；
3. 讲座时间、地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 参考词汇:书法 calligraphy
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【参考范文】
In rder t make us students learn mre abut Chinese calligrahy and aruse ur awareness f prtecting the traditinal Chinese culture, a lecture abut Chinese calligraphy is t be held in the lecture hall f the Art Building n May 15th this Sunday. It will last tw hurs frm 8 am t 10 am. The lecture will be given by ShenYang , a famus Chinese calligrapher. It mainly cnsists f three parts: first, listen t a lecture fr ne and a half hurs , then have a discussin fr half an hur; after that bserve the calligrapher imprvising n the spt.
All the students are required t arrive befre 7:30 am. D be punctual!
Students’ Unin
【写作步骤】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文 通知
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：分两部分，第一部分发出通知和通知的具体内容， 第二部分希望按时参加。
要点：
1.通知全校学生参加书法讲座，对书法讲座作介绍
① 书法讲座主讲人
② 书法讲座的具体安排：地点 、时间、内容
2.希望准时参加。
第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）
in rder t ; Chinese traditinal culture; Chinese calligraphy; aruse ne’s awareness f ;
Chinese characters ; last tw hurs; cnsist f ; n the spt; be required; be puncutal
第三步：连词成句
1.In rder t aruse ur awareness f prtecting the traditinal Chinese culture.
2.A lecture abut Chinese calligraphy is t be held in the lecture hall f the Art Building n May 15th this Sunday.
3. It mainly cnsists f three parts
4.Yu will bserve the calligrapher imprvising n the spt.
5.All the students are required t arrive befre 7:30 am.
8.D be punctual / n time!
根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。
第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)
表示时间顺序： First f all; t begin/start with ,In the beginning
Lastly / Finally/ In the end
表示并列或补充关系： what is mre; besides ,mrever ,
in additin, as well as；nt nly…but(als), meanwhile , in the meantime, …thers
表示转折对比关系：but , hwever, althugh , thugh , yet , while
n ne hand…n the ther hand ...,
表示因果关系：because, as , therefre, As a result , as a cnsequence , cnsequently , thus
连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、
段与段之间结构清晰。
SKIPIF 1 < 0
星光中学（Xingguang High Schl）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Muntain）;
2. 活动的过程；
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【品读范文】
An Impressive Muntain-Claiming
In rder t help us students t keep fit and prmte wills, ur schl rganized a muntain-climbing n Aprial 10 and we recieved much fun and benefit.
It was a nice day, the sunlight warm and sft.At rund 9 a.m., we gatheredat the ft f Daqing Muntain in high spirits, well-equipped fr the tugh jurney t thedestinatin-the tp f the muntaiin. Despite the hardship, we were singing and laughing allthe way, enjying the the fresh air and the beautiful views. When sme students fell behind rgt int truble, thers wuld cme t their aid. At arund 11 a.m., we all arrived at thesummit f Daqing Muntain. Bathed in the sunshine, we jumped and cheered with great jy.
This utdrs activity is really impressive and beneficial. Nt nly did it get us clser t thenature and relieve pressure frm us, it als prmte the friendship amng us.
【提分词汇】
keep fit 保持健康
in high spirits 情绪高涨
receive much fun and benefit 得到很多乐趣和好处
well-equipped 配备很好
despite prep. 尽管，不管
impressive and beneficial 印象深刻而且很有益处
get clse t the nature 接近大自然
【亮点句型】
In rder t help us students t keep fit and prmte wills, ur schl rganized a muntain-climbing n April
10 and we received much fun and benefit.为了帮助我们这些学生保持身体健康，提高意志，学校于4月10日组织了一次登山活动，我们得到了很多乐趣和好处。
Despite the hardship, we were singing and laughing all the way, enjying the the fresh air and the beautiful
views. 尽管困难重重，我们一路又唱又笑，享受着新鲜的空气和美丽的风景。
Nt nly did it get us clser t thenature and relieve pressure frm us, it als prmte the friendship amng us.
它不仅让我们更接近大自然，减轻我们的压力，它也促进我们之间的友谊。
检测训练
1．元旦即将来临，学生会(The Students’ Unin)将举办一场英语晚会(an English Evening party)，现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知，欢迎全校师生参加，通知包含以下要点：
晚会主题：迎新春，享受英语
时间：12月31日星期五晚上8：00-10：00
节目内容：1.英语短剧(English shrt-play perfrmances) 演唱英语歌曲，讲英语故事
2.邀请外国学生为我们演唱中国歌曲
其他：1.全体学生要求准时出席；
2.晚会上不要乱扔垃圾（扔垃圾：litter）；
3.欢迎大家光临晚会，玩得开心。
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【参考范文】
NOTICE
In rder t celebrate the cming new year, an English Evening party with a theme f “Welcme new year and Enjy yur English” is ging t be held by ur Students’ Unin frm 8 pm t 10 pm n Friday, 31st. December n ur schl playgrund. There will be many activities frm the students, such as English shrt-play perfrmances, English stry telling and English sngs. What’s mre, sme freign students will be invited t sing Chinese sngs fr us at the party. All students are expected t attend it n time and required nt t litter. At last, yu are welcme t ur English party and we are sure yu will enjy yurself.
The Students’ Unin
【写作步骤】
第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一则通知；元旦即将来临，学生会(The Students’ Unin)将举办一场英语晚会(an English Evening party)，现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知，欢迎全校师生参加。人称应为第三人称，时态应为一般将来时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：theme（主题），Welcme new year and Enjy yur English（迎新春，享受英语），frm 8 pm t 10 pm n Friday, 31st. December（12月31日星期五晚上8：00-10：00），English stry telling and English sngs（演唱英语歌曲，讲英语故事），n time（准时）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【写作亮点】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如in rder t，with a theme f，such as，what’s mre，at last等等；本文中的被动语态运用地非常自然和流畅，如In rder t celebrate the cming new year, an English Evening party abut/with a theme f “Welcme new year and Enjy yur English”is ging t be held by ur Students’ Unin frm 8 pm t 10 pm n Friday, 31st. December n ur schl playgrund.；What’s mre, sme freign students will be invited t sing Chinese sngs fr us at the party.；All students are expected t attend it n time and required nt t litter.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2、你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Grwing Tgether，内容包括：
短片内容：学校的发展；
放映时间、地点；
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【品读范文】
Ntice
In rder t have a better understanding f ur schl, an utstanding English shrt mvie abut ur schl will be shwn in the library frm 2:30 t 4:00 in the afternn n June 9th. It is rganized by the Student Unin. Here are sme relevant details abut it.
T begin with, the name f the mvie is Grwing Tgether, which is abut the develpment f ur belved schl. As we all expect, it will be nt nly meaningful but als interesting. What’s mre, everyne f yu will be welcme t take part (participate) in it, enjying the mvie, having a heated discussin afterwards and giving yur wn cmments.
The Student Unin
June 8, 2018
【提分词汇】
have a better understanding f 更好地理解
utstanding 杰出的
relevant details abut ...相关的细节
meaningful adj. 有意义的
5.a heated discussin 一场激烈的讨论
【亮点句型】
In rder t have a better understanding f ur schl, an utstanding English shrt mvie abut ur schl will be shwn in the library frm 2:30 t 4:00 in the afternn n June 9th. 为了更好的了解我们学校，6月9日下午2:30 - 4:00将在图书馆放映一部关于我们学校的优秀英语短片。
As we all expect, it will be nt nly meaningful but als interesting. 正如我们所期待的那样，它不仅有意义，而且有趣。
What’s mre, everyne f yu will be welcme t take part (participate) in it, enjying the mvie, having a heated discussin afterwards and giving yur wn cmments..更重要的是，我们欢迎你们每个人都来参加，欣赏电影，然后进行热烈的讨论，并给出自己的意见。
3、假设你是学生会主席李华，当地电视台将举办外国人参与的"汉字听写大赛"，委托你向学校国际部留学生通知相关事宜，请你写一则书面通知，要点包括：
1.参赛日期：2017年3月15日；
2.复习范围：中国四大名著中的词汇；
3.奖品：中国四大名著套书；
4.联系人及电话：李华12345678910。
注意：词数100左右。
Ntice
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【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是应用文中的书面通知，写作时时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第二人称为主。应用文写作是语言交际能力的一个重要部分，能够体现出考生综合语言运用能力以及逻辑思维能力。通知类书面表达要注意语言的得体性、交际性和准确性，最能考查考生的实际交际能力，是高考考查的重点之一。本篇书面表达根据题干和要点提示可分三段来写：
第一段：交代写作背景,引入话题,表明写作意图。
第二段：要点列举,包括时间、要求和奖品。
第三段：互相转告,有问题联系李华。
【写作素材】
1.为了让大家更好地了解……,我愿与大家分享它的一些细节。
T help yu have a better understanding f...,I’d like t share with yu sme details abut it.
2.一个令人兴奋的……活动将要举行了。
An exciting arund the crner.
3.按计划, …… 将在……举行。
As scheduled, ... will be held at...
4.确保……/注意……
Make sure that...
5.你最好提前准备……
Yu’d better advance.
6.希望你们参加……
Yu are expected t participate in...
7.希望对……感兴趣的人都来参加。
Thse wh are interested in ... are expected t cme.
8.请不要错过获奖机会。
Dn’t miss the chance f being the winner.
9.请互相转告。
Please infrm whmever yu meet.
【范文赏析】
Ntice
T help yu further understand Chinese culture, the lcal TV statin will rganize a Chinese Character Dictatin Cmpetitin. I’d like t share with yu sme details abut it.
As scheduled, the cmpetitin is t be held n March 15, 2017. Yu are suppsed t get prepared befre the cmpetitin. �Abve all, it’s recmmended that yu read the Fur Great Classical Nvels and fcus n the phrases in them. Whever wants t g, please sign yur name here as sn as pssible. Dn’t miss the chance f being the winner, and the appealing prize "a set f the Fur Great Classical Nvels" is waiting fr yu. Please infrm whmever yu meet. Fr any questin, call Li Hua at 12345678910. I’m sure yu will benefit a lt frm it.
【亮点点击】
▶正文部分分三段来写，第一段简述活动背景，引入参赛这一话题，段末用"I’d like t share with yu sme details abut it."使上下文衔接更加紧密。
▶第二段中过渡性词语As scheduled， Abve all等的使用，使文章条理清晰，结构严谨，过渡自然，行文流畅。
▶高级表达，如句句中的不定式短语作目的状语，句中that引导的宾语从句以及句中whever引导的让步状语从句的使用使文章句式丰富,提升了文章的得分档次。
▶范文中各种高级词汇和短语(文中加粗部分)的交替使用，也为文章增加了亮点和得分点。
4．假如你是英华国际学校学生会主席李华，你在食堂发现有浪费粮食现象，打算向全校师生作"FOOD FOR LIFE"的演讲，请你用英文写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：
1.演讲的主题；
2.演讲的原因；
3.你的倡议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Gd mrning, respected teachers and dear fellw students!
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Thank yu fr yur listening!
【参考范文】
Gd mrning. respected teachers and dear fellw students!
I feel s hnred/privileged t deliver a speech themed at fd fr life. The past years have witnessed the severeness f fd crisis wrldwide. Hwever, sme f us haven't attached great imprtance t the issue. Fd waste is still a cmmn sight, especially in the canteen.
Facing the stern reality, I think it's high time that we stpped it. Nt nly are we expected t raise the awareness f saving fd, but als g int actin immediately. D remember, every bit f effrt cunts in the prcess f saving fd fr a better life.
Thank yu fr yur listening!
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇题为“"FOOD FOR LIFE"”的演讲稿，号召同学们珍惜粮食。
【写作步骤】
1.词汇积累
发表演讲：maker a speech=deliver a speech
重视：pay attentin t=attached great imprtance t
严峻的：serius → severe
行动：take actin= g int actin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Fd waste is still a cmmn sight, especially in the canteen.
拓展句：It is especially in canteen that Fd waste is still a cmmn sight.
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]：Nt nly are we expected t raise the awareness f saving fd, but als g int actin immediately.这句话运用了倒装句。
[高分句型2]：D remember, every bit f effrt cunts in the prcess f saving fd fr a better life.这句话运用了强调句。
5、假设你是学生会主席李华，你校将举办英语读写大赛。请你为校英语报写一则通知，内容包括：
(1)大赛时间及目的；
(2)参赛对象；
(3)比赛内容：读写任务（task-based writing）和主题写作；
(4)报名截止日期。
注意：词数100左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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【范文】
Ntice
Aimed at prmting ur interest in reading and imprving ur writing skills, an English reading & writing cntest is t be held in ur schl next mnth.
The cntest cnsists f tw parts, task-based writing and theme writing, bth f which are gd ways t shw ur English ability. All the students in ur schl are welcme t take part in the cntest. Three winners will be chsen fr a 15-day summer camp in Lndn. If yu're interested, please cme t the Student Cuncil and sign up befre September 10.
There is n dubt that participants will benefit a lt frm the cntest. Dn't miss the valuable chance!
6、假定你是李华，你负责的英语俱乐部拟在暑假期间组织主题为“Stay ut f danger and enjy a safe hliday”急救培训课程。请你用英语写一则通知，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 培训内容（观看关于意外受伤的短片，专家教授急救技能等）；
3. 培训课的意义。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Ntice
With the summer vacatin appraching, the English club plans t rganize a first aid training class, whse theme is “Stay ut f danger and enjy a safe hliday”.
As is scheduled, it will be given in the schl lecture hall frm 4:00p.m. t 5:00p.m. next Wednesday. At the beginning f the class, a shrt film will be shwn, helping us students knw what accidental injuries will frequently happen and what harm they will cause. After that, an expert will give a lecture n hw t avid such injuries. Then under his prfessinal guidance, we will learn hw t ffer first aid t thse wh get injured. By attending the class, nt nly will we master sme basic and practical first aid skills, but als we will raise ur awareness f safety and try t keep away frm danger.
The training class will definitely prve t be a useful experience. Thse wh are interested are welcme t it!
The Schl English Club
7．你校正在举办英语周活动，你准备参加以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结一个事例，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈Sharing的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点：
1. 有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等；
2. 你的感悟。
注意：1. 词数120左右.
2. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Gd mrning, everyne!
It’s a great hnr t be here and share smething with yu.
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【参考范文】
Gd mrning, everybdy!
It's a great hnur t be here and share smething with yu. I still remember hw depressed I was after the midterm examinatin in Senir One, when I had hped t be still amng the best as in junir high schl. At that time, my best friend came up and asked me t g t the playgrund. “Yu're always the best in my heart，” she cmfrted me. “There is always a rad ahead.” Strangely, my heart was filled with warmth I had never sensed befre. I felt much better.
Sharing is part f beauty. Just as a Swedish prverb ges, “Shared jy is a duble jy; shared srrw is half a srrw.” Sharing can braden ur hrizns. As fr me, by ding this, I live a happier and mre cnfident life.
Thanks fr yur attentin!
【写作分析】这是一篇以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛，首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同，需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，这里是有关Sharing的一个事例：时间，人物，内容，过程，影响等以及自己的感悟。所以注意用一般现在时，用第一人称来叙述。
【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式，为文章增色不少，如：It's a great hnur td sth.、share smething with、cme up、live a happier and mre cnfident life等，为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如：at that time、strangely等，使文章更加连贯完整。全文主要用的是一般现在时，时态做到使用准确。
8、．假定你是李华，是新华中学的一名中学生。你班的外教Mr. Jhnsn即将回国，请你代表同学们在欢送会上致辞，内容包括:
1、对Mr. Jhnsn致谢；
2、准备了礼物，以留作纪念；
3、希望Mr. Jhnsn以后常回来看看。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
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Gd afternn, everyne! Mr. Jhnsn has been teaching us fr ne year, and he will have t g back hme. We all are very grateful fr his devtin. We have witnessed Mr. Jhnsn wrking as ur English teacher in his particular way. His patience with us students was impressive and his hard wrk has inspired many students. He is als a warm-hearted man, wh spends a lt f his spare time staying in the schl`s English Crner answering questins frm us students.
T shw ur gratitude t him, we have made sme presents fr him urselves, hping that seeing these presents, he will remember us. Welcme t China again, Mr. Jhnsn. D remember that there are a grup f children in China missing yu!
Thanks fr listening!
【写作步骤】
第一步: 根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一则发言稿，时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。关键要点如下：①外教Mr. Jhnsn即将回国；②对Mr. Jhnsn致谢；③准备了礼物，以留作纪念；④希望Mr. Jhnsn以后常回来看看。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：g back hme（回国），be grateful fr（感谢），presents（礼物），shw ur gratitude t（表示感谢）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【写作亮点】
本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合发言稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
非限制性定语从句的使用He is als a warm-hearted man, wh spends a lt f his spare time staying in the schl`s English Crner answering questins frm us students.
非谓语动词的使用T shw ur gratitude t him, we have made sme presents fr him urselves, hping that seeing these presents, he will remember us.