新高考英语二轮复习题型专练30 读后续写故事拓展策略(含解析)

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高考英语二轮复习题型专练（新高考）30
读后续写故事拓展策略

【策略1：烘托情节特征】
在读后续写中，运用侧面描写，可以对人物进行多角度映照和多层次烘托，人物的描写就会达到“横看成岭侧成峰”的丰富境界。 侧面描写有“以旁面写正面”、“以对面写正面”、“以反面写正面”三种方法。如果从一个侧面去描写，人物形象往往单薄。如果从多个侧面去描写，人物形象就容易丰满。在写作中，我们可以尝试以下几种侧面烘托法：景物烘托法——通过对自然景物的描绘，来烘托人物心情；他人反映法——听听他人的反映，去了解主人公的个性特征；借人写人法——通过对受影响者的刻画，间接地表现主人公的思想品质。
一、场景拓展思维1：选择关键词
1.关键词语

blow 吹
howl 咆哮
crash 碰撞
stir 搅动
darken 使变黑
envelope 信封，包裹
gloomy 阴郁的
dip 蘸
pour 泼
sunshine /sunlight 阳光
breeze 微风
dim 昏暗的
faint 微弱的
winding 蜿蜒的
frighten 是某人害怕
chilling 寒冷的
thunder 雷，打雷
lightening 闪电
frosty 寒冷的
melt 融化
2.常用短语

be bathed in 沐浴在
amber-like sunshine 琥珀色的阳光
stretch off 延伸
凉爽清新的风cool and refreshing breeze
落日the setting sun
stroll down the street在街上漫步
the first ray of sunlight第一缕阳光
flood into涌入
gentle breeze微风
多雨的季节a rainy season
暴风雨之夜a stormy night
在茫茫大雨中in the blinding rain
在春天温暖的阳光里
in the warm spring sunshine
难以忍受的热unbearable hot
放晴了clear up
木日光浴bathe in the sunshine
一个偏僻的小村庄
a small village off the map
离海滨仅咫尺之遥
be dotted with 点缀着
二.场景拓展思维2：景色特征烘托人物心情
（一）阳光明媚的景色烘托生命美好与心情的愉悦
【典例赏析】
The beach to your right stretches off(延伸) to the horizon, slowly narrowing to nothingness（虚无）, only to re-emerge（重新出现） again on your left.
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.
The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。
When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in. 阳光倾斜而入
The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
I was immediately stunned by the azure sky with thick silver lining clouds drifting around. 我立刻被湛蓝色的天空和成群飘动的金色云朵所吸引了。
White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in broad ocean.
A gust of wind blew and parted the drooping branches of the weeping willow like a curtain. 一阵风吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。
The wind, soft and cold, clicked through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled （撒、点缀）the slope. 风，轻柔而清冷，轻点这树枝，搅动着斜坡下的零星灌木丛。
There are many kinds of flowers blooming in the corner of the park, even in autumn, I smell the fresh scent with cool breeze. How sweet!
It was Saturday morning, and all the summer world was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a song in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers. Cardiff Hill, beyond the village and above it, was green with trees and looked beautiful.
（二）暴风骤雨的场景烘托心情的抑郁
【典例赏析】
The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sicky moon(苍白昏暗的月亮).
The frosty air （寒冷的空气）blew in, cutting like knife.
The frigid gusts of wind stung their faces. 一阵阵寒风刺痛他们的脸颊。 Stung 的原形为sting“叮咬”
The summer breeze gently moved through the leaves with a sighing sound. 叹息的声音
There was a deathly stillness in the house. 死寂
The evening of this day was very long, and melancholy(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it could of gloom. A cold stormy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nothing of July appeared but in the trees and shrubs（灌木丛）, which the wind was despoiling(摧残), and the length of the day, which only made such cruel sights the longer visible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）
（三）烦闷焦躁的景色烘托心理的急躁等
【典例赏析】
It’s hot enough to melt hell. 天热得能融化地狱。
The air that has been hot all day becomes heavy. It hangs over the trees, presses the heads of the flowers to the ground, and sits on my shoulders. 整日闷热的空气变得格外呆滞。它笼罩着树木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也压得我的肩头沉甸甸的。
（四）凄风苦雨与狂风暴雨烘托恐惧、阴冷与害怕
【典例赏析】
On the dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling(嚎叫).
The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house.大雨倾盆，洪流暴涨，狂风肆意冲击房屋。
The boys were frightened as the wind blew several trees on their side and the light continued to come and go in the sky(闪电在空中持续乱舞).
There was now a fine, cold drizzle falling(寒冷的细雨), and the wind had risen from its uncertain（模糊的） puffs （一阵阵小风）into a steady blow. The few foot passengers astir （活动的）in that quarter hurried dismally（沉闷地） and silently along with coat collars turned high and pocketed hands（踹口袋里的手）.
三.场景拓展思维3：精细化用语再现场景与心理的交织
（一）细节描述之“describe a peaceful scene”
【典例赏析】
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin. (沐浴在阳光下；琥珀色的阳光亲吻着全身的肌肤)
Mist-covered mountains were dotted with small farms and villages. (点缀着)
The sound of my footsteps was accompanied only by the gracefully waving reeds.  (优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇)
（二）细节描述之“describe stormy weather”
【典例赏析】
The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.(乌云密布；黑云压顶)
On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling. (海浪肆意拍打；劲风咆哮)
The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house. (暴风骤雨)
（三）Good setting description for appreciation (佳“景”赏析)
【典例赏析】
The house smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghosts of long-dead cookies. 
The sun kept dipping down into the ocean and the lights came on at the harbor, casting sudden shadows on the ground, illuminating the faces that were just a second ago silhouettes. The sky was golden and purple, the ocean a darker shade of violet. 
The sun had set, but a faint pastel haze lingered in the mid-summer sky.
They rolled up the path, tree branches raking the windshield like angry wardens.
Outside, the air filled with cricket noise, as the sun reddened in its descent.
A restaurant overlooking a starlit night sprang to my imagination like something out of an illuminated manuscript from the late Middle Ages.
The moon went slowly down in loveliness; she departed into the depth of the horizon, and long veil-like shadows crept up the sky through which the stars appeared. 
All brightness was gone, leaving nothing. We stepped out of the tent onto nothing. Sledge and tent were there, Estraven stood beside me, but neither he nor I cast any shadow. There was dull light all around, everywhere. When we walked on the crisp snow no shadow showed the footprint. We left no track. Sledge, tent, himself, myself: nothing else at all. No sun, no sky, no horizon, no world.
Night had fallen fast upon the land. No more than an hour ago the sky was painted with hues of red, orange and pink, but all color had faded leaving only a matt black canvas with no stars to be looked upon. 
It would be a cold moonless night. The sky was dark and low, the air so chilled it hurt to breathe. Already the ground was laid white with frost and any water that had been liquid under the winter sun had become ice.
四、四季与自然景观的描写的精细化
【典例赏析】
we used to live in a beautiful village, and there were trees and flowers and green grass, and the air was so sweet.我们以前住在一个漂亮的村舍里，那里树很多，还有花花草草，连空气都是甜的。
The sight of a large cornfield in the latter part of summer, with all its green banners waving and its tasseled plumes nodding, is one to admire, and not to be forgotten.盛夏时节，一望无际的玉米地，绿色的叶子像旗帜一样迎风飞舞，抽穗的包谷随风点头，这是多么赏心悦目而又令人难忘的景色啊！
In the spring its branches are covered with bunches of creamy flowers,春天里，栗子树的枝干上开满了一簇簇奶油般的花朵，
Before this, he had lived in a warm country, where the sun shines down on beautiful orange groves, and fields always sweet with flowers.在这之前，他一直住在一个天气暖和的乡村。那里，阳光洒满美丽的满是橘子的山坡，田野里到处是芳香扑鼻的鲜花。
Last night, the cold north wind blew great snow clouds over the sky. Not a star, not a bit of blue sky could be seen.昨天夜里，北风呼啸，乌云密布。看不见一颗星星，整个天空也不见一丝蓝色。
It is winter. The cold wind whistles through the branches of the trees.正值冬季，寒风呼啸着吹过树枝。
Johnny looked through the glass. There lay the pure, feathery snowflake like a lovely little star.乔尼透过玻璃看着雪花，那片纯洁轻柔的雪花就像一颗可爱的小星星。
Soon the tiny flakes floated softly down, like flocks of little white birds. 不久，小小的雪花静悄悄地飘落下来，就像一群白色的小鸟。
The sun must have been pleased with what he saw, for he smiled such a bright, sweet smile, that the whole white world sparkled as if it were made of little stars.太阳一定对雪花们的作品非常满意，因为他笑得如此灿烂和甜蜜。整个洁白的世界闪闪发光，就像一颗颗小星星在眨眼睛。
（五）早中晚场景举例
【典例赏析1】
早上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
The sweetness of the sun fills my lungs.
The first ray of sunlight is too fragile to touch.
Spring breeze draws the curtain of clouds and the sunshine floods into the classrooms.
The whole world blossoms with one breath of the sunshine.
Snow blanketed every rooftop and weighed on the branches of old trees. 雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上。
Kissed by the rain and shining, the wet ground is cold under foot. The birds busy themselves around me, not caring that I'm there.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在那儿。
A dense earthly sweet smell rose from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flooded in. 阳光倾斜而入.
Golden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea of fragrant flowers crowd into my eyes. Walking into the painting, I am totally drunk with the twittering (吱喳) of birds. Soon the delicate （纤弱的,精致的）air and soft raindrops melt my heart.
It was Saturday morning, and all the summer world was bright and fresh, and filled with life. There was a song in every heart. There was cheer in every face and a spring in every step. The air was filled with the pleasant smell of flowers. Cardiff Hill, beyond the village and above it, was green with trees and looked beautiful.
黄昏：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
As the sky gradually darkened and the light dimmed, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.
The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness.
Falling leaves fluttered down in the cool mid-autumn air, bidding farewell to sweet summer and beckoning the autumn in.秋天的树叶在凉爽的中秋空气中飘落，告别甜美夏天，召唤秋天的到来。
It's dark now and the snow is still falling, clumps of wet flakes drifting mindlessly down, the air moist, the sidewalk mushy underfoot.现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪花随风飘落，空气潮湿，走在人行道上，脚底粘糊糊的。
The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.
雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一缕阳光告别.
The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，像是天空被一层漆黑幕布覆盖。
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.
我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，因为空气轻轻地把它吹到地上。
The lake mirrored the sky above, both of them blameless blue and shimmering. 湖面映照着上方的天空，它们都是无比湛蓝，并且闪闪发光。
The sunset was like orange paint on a blue canvas. 日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.
The strong sun on my black hair would burn me in minutes if I couldn’t find shelter. 如果我找不到庇护所，我黑发上强烈的阳光几分钟后就会把我烧焦
The sun dropped through and laid on his head and shoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。
晚上：（部分描写也可用于其它时间）
From the distance, he saw some dim light (昏暗的灯光) in the village.
Silence between dad and me made me more nervous and scared. At that moment, it was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky.
The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power.
The sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality, and the stars that dotted the sky lit up the night.天空，午夜蓝，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量，星星点点的天空照亮了夜晚。
The clear blue sky was dotted with fluttering larks. 天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。
The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined trees. The world was burdened with a sea of drakness. I was seized with the roaring power of nature, a sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.
The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in ther power.
The evening of this day was very long, and melancholy(阴郁的), at Hartfield. The weather added what it could of gloom. A cold stormy rain set in(阴冷的暴风雨袭来), and nothing of July appeared but in the trees and shrubs（灌木丛）, which the wind was despoiling(摧残), and the length of the day, which only made such cruel sights the longer visible.（白昼的延长可以让人多瞧一瞧这凄冷的景象）
The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds，(乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
The thin trees were blowing wildly, and untidy gray clouds were sailing past a pale, sicky moon(苍白昏暗的月亮). The frosty air （寒冷的空气）blew in, cutting like knife.
【典例赏析2】
I closed my eyes in the speeding car. Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep valleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.
The gentle breeze (微风) stroked his head , as if comforting all his tiredness.
Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her. Wandering in the woods, Ally slowed her pace to find the little guy in the mixed air. The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. The breeze patted her on the face, warm and comfortable.
The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven, whipping against the branches of lined trees. The world was burdened with a sea of darkness. I was seized with the roaring power of nature, a sense of horror creeping up on me. I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.
On the day back to school, dark clouds hung low in the sky. The rain poured down, with cold drops and angry winds slapping (拍;掴) my face. I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.
Spring, like an amazing artist, paints our campus with richer and deeper colors. Golden sunshine, fragile greens and a sea of fragrant flowers crowd into my eyes. Walking into the painting, I am totally drunk with the twittering (吱喳) of birds. Soon the delicate 纤弱的,精致的 air and soft raindrops melt my heart. Oh, I’m lost… in the masterpiece of Spring!
【策略2：构筑故事高潮】
文学故事中的高潮（climax）----故事的主要场景（key scene）也通常是故事的转折点（turning point），是指故事达到最紧张或扣人心弦的那一部分。高潮有时候是剧情中的 "危机" 点。有时候, 它只是达到关键时刻或者转折点, 发生了一些事情, 或者主角必须做出决定, 从而导致一个结果或其他。我们在分析叙事类故事或者小说故事的时候常常用下面的图表来表示故事情节。

【典例赏析】
1.常见故事高潮
A little girl has been searching for her lost dog. All of a sudden, she hears a bark coming from around the corner, and she looks around to see . . .
Kevin has worked very hard to try out for the soccer team at school. The coach has posted a list of this year's team members on his office door. Kevin walks forward to look at the list . . . .
Mary's parents have been discussing whether or not to move to another state. They call Mary and her sister down to talk with them about their decision . . .
Lois has performed in the state gymnastics finals. She waits anxiously to hear the names of the winners. The announcer says, "And first place goes to . . ."

2.文学名著中的一些故事高潮
The deaths of Romeo (who kills himself because he thinks Juliet is dead) and Juliet (who kills herself when she awakes and sees Romeo dead). Romeo and Juliet, Shakespeare （《罗密欧和朱丽叶》）
When Gaston and the townspeople come to attack the beast, and Belle admits her love for the beast. Beauty and the Beast, Disney （《美女与野兽》）
In "The Three Little Pigs," suspense builds up until the confrontation between the third pig and the wolf. This confrontation is the climax.（三只小猪） How to create a climax of a story?
一、高潮冲突思维1：.增加外部冲突增加外部冲突是一种明显有效的可以达到故事高潮的方式。冲突带来紧迫感, 将故事推向必要的解决或崩溃。
1.角色之间的冲突 (人物观点差异, 竞争需要等)
【真题再现】
（2017年11月浙江英语高考）On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn't we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. 开车找旅馆---徒劳无功---母亲建议搭帐篷在他人后院---David和我倍感紧张，心有不悦（母子的观点不一）
2.角色与环境之间的冲突
【真题再现】
（2017年6月浙江英语高考） Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. ……he saw instantly that it wasn't a dog at all, but a wolf: quickly catching up with him. Mac's heart jumped. ……, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, ……. Then it ……, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back …… Mac骑车独自行，路遇饿狼，与之搏斗，险象环生。（人（角色）----狼（环境）大战）
3.时间依赖的发展 ：决策变得紧急
【真题再现】
（2017年6月浙江英语高考）The car abruptly stopped in front of him. "Get into the car." Paul shouted at Mac. Mac jumped off the bike and slid into the car without delay as the wolf was just two steps away and was about to tear Mac into pieces. What a narrow escape! 骑车突停面前---急喊上车---Max上车避险---饿狼近在咫尺（此情此景，刻不容缓）
4.增加的障碍：人物角色必须克服 挑战, 以达到他们的目标
【真题再现】
（2018年6月浙江英语高考）But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost. We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. 小兔突现---马儿受惊---草原迷路（障碍1）----天色渐黑（障碍2）----又累又饿（障碍3）----心理恐慌（障碍4）
二、高潮冲突思维2：放大内心冲突 放大内心冲突（你的角色的内心斗争）也有助于建立一个高度紧张和不确定的时刻。
【真题再现】
（2016年10月浙江英语高考） Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing her family at a distance. All the fantastic memory crowded in and she couldn't help crying, "Hadn't I quarreled with Tom, walked away and climbed to the high place, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, confronted with the danger of dying.” She regretted with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in her eyes. 夫妇争吵---独自行走---荒野走散---夜色渐黑---独处森林---阴森恐怖---后悔莫及（内心冲突的刻画）内心独白（往昔对比+虚拟语气使用+旁边描写是常见技巧之一）
三、高潮冲突思维3：使用环境描写增加不确定性 充分利用环境描写可以起到烘托故事高潮的作用，具体方法可以看上期读后续写微技能。当故事角色在碰到困难时候，我们往往要加大笔墨来描写故事环境的黑暗，恐怖和不祥。强化环境描写增强了高潮元素。我们感受到了紧张的倍增。
【典例赏析】
Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest(黑暗). Even worse, the temperature suddenly dropped dramatically. (寒冷）
It didn’t take long for the forest to be enveloped in darkness（黑暗）. Her rasping breath steamed（寒冷） in the moonlight and her throat was parched from thirst.
【真题再现】【2020年1月·浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy, "said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪)get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile.” I guess this is it, “he said.” I'll see you back home in a month, okay？"His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy up？"asked Dad. “We've tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy, “smiled Mom.” Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.
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Para 2. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.
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【参考范文】
Dad put the box on the ground and opened the top. A shiny little wet nose popped up. Then two fluffy paws. Next the box tipped over sideways, and out tumbled a mass of wiggly golden silliness. Poppy was amazed. She wagged furiously. She barked with joy. She smiled, her tongue lolling out as she investigated the surprise. The little pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the older dog. “That didn’t take long,” remarked Mom, as both dogs went roaring around the house in an impromptu game of chase. Dad laughed. 
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He had missed Poppy and was looking forward to seeing her. When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too. “Oh my gosh, who is this?” he exclaimed. His parents laughed at the look of shock on his face. “That’s Pee-wee,” said Dad. “I can’t believe you got yourselves a puppy!” “We didn’t,” replied Mom. “This puppy is for Poppy!”
【写作分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：爸爸打开盒子，一条可爱的小狗出现了。所以后文应该是描写买来的小狗的样子以及这两只狗的相处情况；第二段开头是：几个星期后，男孩从大学回到家里。本段应该写男孩回到家以后看到两条狗的反应，以及父母告诉男孩这条狗是买给Poppy的。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【范文点评】
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：a mass of，with joy，look forward to等高级词汇；非谓语动词的运用The little pup was not shy and immediately starting yipping and jumping around the older dog.；时间状语从句When he bent down to give her a big hug, he fell over in surprise as a small golden cloud came racing up to lick his face too.等高级句式。
【题型演练】
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a rainy November morning. Overcome with anger I knew if I didn’t leave the house soon I would lose my temper with my husband, Joe. As rain came down in sheets, Joe offered to take me to work. I struggled into my jacket, seized my bag and teaching plans and ignored him.
He insisted and reached for his boots. I looked at the piles of newspapers and the dirty dishes sill on the table. “Don’t you have enough to do? I can take care of myself. ” I stormed out, not even kissing him good-bye. Joe shouted after me not to take the shortcut.
Joe and I had been eagerly looking forward to our retirement when a heart attack that past spring forced him to leave his job earlier than we had planned. As the medical bills mounted we realized I would have to continue working full-time while Joe stayed home and took over the housework.
The new arrangement was a disaster. Exhausted after a day of full work, all I wanted was a hot home-cooked meal and a good night’s sleep. However, what greeted me at the table was a microwave package. Sometimes he would serve oatmeal（燕麦）for several nights in a row. One night when I dragged myself to bed, I was terrified to discover Joe had turned our white sheets blue. He told me he had found out how to save on water, soap and electricity. He patted his blue trousers and announced proudly washing everything together was just the secret.
Ten minutes later, ignoring Joe s warning, I turned off the main route. I thought it hadn’t rained enough to flood the road, but as I rounded the corner water rushed across my path. After a few feet, the car got stuck. I opened the door and water poured in. I hurriedly closed the door. I couldn’t risk walking in this. Almost 20 minutes passed. The car began to shake. I got frightened to death when I heard three long honks（喇叭声）.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck.
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I screamed at Joe that I couldn’t make it.
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【参考范文】
Looking over my shoulder, I stared into the flashing lights of a truck. It was Joe！I couldn’t help bursting into tears. Joe shouted to me not to be frightened. Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. I opened the door, grabbed it and inched out. However, a sudden fall left me in the rushing water. I struggled to my feet, only to find a branch blocking the way right in front of me.
I screamed that I couldn’t make it. Joe, however, remained calm！He urged me to take one step at a time and assured me I could make it. I moved forward slowly and cautiously before I fell into his arms. Sobbing against his chest, I apologized that I shouldn’t have taken the shortcut. Joe patted me saying his primary concern was my safety. Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.
【写作分析】
这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲叙了十一月的一个早晨，下着大雨，作者的丈夫Joe叮嘱作者不要抄近路去上班，而作者没有听丈夫的话，还是走了近路，结果车被困在了积满雨水的道路上。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我回过头，盯着一辆卡车闪烁的灯光。”可知，第一段可描写作者发现是丈夫来解救自己，以及丈夫解救作者的经过，最后作者被一根树枝拦住了。
②由第二段首句内容“我尖叫着说我过去不了。”可知，第二段可描写作者的丈夫是如何鼓励作者克服了困难的，最后作者意识到丈夫其实懂得如何照顾自己，尽管他做家务很麻烦。
2.续写线索：回头看到灯光——丈夫开车救援——鼓励——成功解救——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大喊：shout at sb./ cry out/call out
②抓住：get hold of/ catch hold of/ seize/ clench/grab
③鼓励：encourage/ urge/inspire
④哭泣：weep/ sob/ cry
⑤道歉：apologize/ make an apology/say sorry for
情绪类
①感谢：show appreciation/show gratitude/be grateful
②积极：positive attitude/act positively
【范文点评】
[高分句型1].Then he threw a thick rope so that I could hang on to it and walk straight toward him. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
[高分句型2].Only then did I realize Joe actually understood how to take care of me despite his trouble with the housework.（运用了“only + 副词”置于句首的倒装句。）
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny stared at the store window longingly. There was nothing in this world that she wanted more than a Happy Hannah doll and all that currently separated her from the hottest doll of the holiday season was a thin piece of glass and S29.95 plus tax. Unfortunately, Jenny didn't even have the 95 cents, so she let out a deep sigh and continued walking home.
Suddenly, a pink rectangle(矩形)in the snow caught her eye. Jenny walked over and realized it was a leather wallet. She removed it from the snow, and opened the wallet to find a thick pile of folded green bills and two plastic cards. One was a credit card and the other an ID.
Jenny stared at the old woman in her ID photo. The woman had a beautiful smile that reminded Jenny of her grandma. Jenny sighed and then she put the wallet into her purse. She turned around and walked in the direction from which she came.
Jenny's heart beat quickly as she entered the store. She had long dreamed about this moment, but something didn't feel right about it As she approached a neat pile of Happy Hannah dolls, she pushed away her feelings. She grasped one Happy Hannah dolly.
As Jenny approached the register, the Happy Hannah Show theme song began playing. It was her mobile pone. It was her grandma In one hand she held the Happy Hannah doll and in the other she held the phone on which her grandma was calling. Jenny’s heart was filed with love and appreciation as she thought of her sweet old grandma She put the doll down and picked up the phone call.
“Hi Grandma? I'm going to be a little bit late tonight. I've got to drop something off... Yeah, it was good...OK...Alright...I love you too.”. Jenny left the store and walked through the melting snow all the way to the other side of the town. She though of her grandma as she rang the bell at 301 West Street.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
The woman who answered the door had been crying recently and looked upset and anxious.
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The woman took the wallet smilingly.
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【参考范文】
The woman who answered the door had been crying recently and looked upset and anxious.“Are you Mrs. Green?" Jenny asked politely, recognizing her from the ID card instantly. Mrs. Green nodded in confusion and let her come in.“Madam, did you lose something?” Jenny continued and asked some necessary questions.“I lost my wallet with the money to buy gifts for some poor children.” The old lady blurted out at last, her eyes rounding in surprise and sparkling with hope. Overcome with guilt, Jenny felt her face burning and handed the wallet to her. Thank God, she would have disappointed those kids.
The woman took the wallet smilingly. She held it to her chest tightly and then hugged Jenny, tears streaming down her face.“You are the real angel. No one knows what the wallet means to the children.” She sobbed in gratitude. Jenny's soft heart was touched because her grandma often called her angel. That night, she darted across the street, the creaking of snow echoing in the air. How eager she was to tell her grandma that today she got a present more meaningful than Hannah doll-She was a real angel!
【写作分析】
文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了Jenny一直想买洋娃娃，但是她的钱不够，一天在路上捡到了一个钱包，本来想要拿着里面的钱买洋娃娃的，但是正准备去付钱时，祖母的电话打来了，她选择了不买，把钱归还了失主。
1.段落续写∶
①由第一段首句内容“开门的那个女人最近一直在哭，看起来既沮丧又焦虑。”可知，第一段可描写Jenny找到失主后，询问了相关信息确认钱包的主人，开门的女人描述了钱包里钱的用处。Jenny把钱包还给女人的同时感觉愧疚。
②由第二段首句内容“女人微笑着接过钱包。”可知，第二段可描写Jenny归还钱包后，女人赞扬了Jenny的行为。听了女人对她的赞扬后，Jenny被感动了。此时Jenny想到奶奶说的话，她多么想把这个消息告诉奶奶。
2.续写线索∶
失主开门-—询问——还钱包——女士惊讶——女士感谢——赞扬——感动——告诉奶奶这个故事
3.词汇激活∶
行为类
认出∶ recognize/identify
递给∶ hand/pass
拿出∶take out/bring out
接受∶ accept/receive
情绪类
惊讶的∶surprised/amazed/astonished
感激的∶ grateful/thankful
【范文点评】
【高分句型1】The old lady blurted out at last, her eyes rounding in surprise and sparkling with hope.（独立主格结构）
【高分句型2】 No one knows what the wallet means to the children.（what引导的从句为宾语从句）
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Long long ago in a town, a newly-elected mayor was determined to do something effective to make the town better than before.
The mayor was acutely aware that his goal should be achieved not only by laws but also morals as well. He was a firm believer of the thought that nothing good could come to a town whose people only complained and expected others to solve their own problems! One day, a new idea suddenly struck him.
Early one morning, the mayor dressed himself up and went to a village nearby. He secretly placed a large stone in the middle of the main street and hid a gold coin under the stone. The instant every preparation was done, he hid himself behind a huge maple tree and watched closely, wondering what would happen before long.
The first person down the street was a milkman with his cart. He took no notice of it and the cart violently crashed into the stone, spilling the milk everywhere. "What fool put this stone here?" he shouted loudly. He picked himself up and angrily went away.
After a while, a group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head and paying no attention to the road. One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. She picked herself up and limped away in tears. Neither she nor her friends thought about moving the stone out of the road.
The mayor watched all day as many people passing to and fro complained about the stone but he found nobody making an attempt to move it and have the road cleared of the obstacle. The mayor was disappointed and even in despair. "Is there no one in this village who feels any responsibility to keep their neighbors from harm?"
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Just then, the mayor saw a young girl coming along.
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At that moment, the mayor stepped out from behind the tree.
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【参考范文】
Just then, the mayor saw a young girl coming along. She was from a poor family and had worked all day, worn-out. When seeing the stone, she thought, “It’s a danger to whoever comes down the street after dark. I should move it out of the way!” Thin as she was, she pushed the stone with all her might and finally made it. Turning round, she saw the gold coins where the stone had been. Rooted to the spot with surprise, she was wondering whose gold it was.
At that moment, the mayor stepped out from behind the tree. “Sir,” she said, “Is this gold yours? If not, we surely must find the owner!” He replied, “My dear, the gold is mine but now it’s yours, because it’s you that has learned the lesson I want to teach my people.” The story went about soon. The adults passing earlier felt ashamed and guilty about their irresponsibility. From then on, the people in this town became more responsible and caring for each other. Of course, one good turn deserves another. Years later, the whole town took on a completely new outlook.
【写作分析】
本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一位新当选的市长为了让市民道德水平提高，设置了一道测试：放了一块石头在路中间，并自己躲在一旁现察。来来往往的人很多，但他们都是在抱怨而没有挪走石头，这让市长很失望。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“正在这时，市长看到一个女孩走了过来。”可知，通过上文对送奶工和滑倒女人的描述，所以作为对比，第一段可描写这个女孩应该是一个善良有责任心的人，她不会对挡路石视而不见，因此可以描写她搬走石头，搬石头时发现了什么。
②由第二段首句内容“就在那时，市长从树后走了出来。”可知，第二段可描写市长表扬这个女孩，并且号召村民向她学习。
2.续写线索：
看见石头——思考——搬石头——发现金子——市长解释——故事流传——村民反思
3.词汇激活
行为类
①看见：spot/witness/observe
②搬石头：move the stone/carry the stone way
③解释：explain/make clear/interpret/reply
情绪类
①.思考：think deeply/ reflect on
②.愧疚：be ashamed of/take shame on oneself
【范文点评】
[高分句型1].Thin as she was, she pushed the stone with all her might and finally made it. （运用了as引导的让步状语从句）
[高分句型2] Turning round, she saw the gold coins where the stone had been.（运用了现在分词短语作状语以及where引导的地点状语从句）
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One spring morning many years ago, I had been searching for gold along Coho Creek on southeastern Alaska’s Kuprean of Island, and as I emerged from a forest of spruce(云杉) and hemlock tree, I froze in my tracks. No more than 20 paces in the bog(沼泽) was a huge Alaskan timber wolf - caught in one of Trapper George’s traps.
Old George had died the previous week of a heart attack, so the wolf was lucky. Confused and frightened at my approach, the wolf backed away. Then I noticed something else: It was a female, and her teats were full of milk. Somewhere there was a den of hungry pups (小狼) waiting for their mother.
From her appearance, I guessed that she had been trapped only a few days. That meant her pups were probably still alive. But I suspected that if I tried to release the wolf, she would turn aggressive and try to tear me to pieces.
So I decided to search for her pups instead and began to look for tracks that might lead me to her den. Fortunately, there were still a few remaining of snow. After several moments, I spotted pups’ marks on a trail.
The tracks led a half mile through the forest, then up a slope covered with many rocks. I finally spotted the den at the base of an enormous spruce, There wasn’t a sound inside. Wolf pups are shy and cautious, and I didn’t have much hope of inviting them outside, But I had to try. So I began imitating the high-pitched(声音很尖锐的) sound of a mother wolf calling her young. No response. A few moments later, after I tried another call, four tiny pups appeared. They couldn’t have been more than a few weeks old.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
I extended my hands.
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With her young to protect, she was becoming aggressive.
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【参考范文】
I extended my hands. They tentatively sucked at my fingers. Perhaps hunger had helped overcome their natural fear. Then one by one, I placed them in a fur bag and headed back down the slope. When the mother wolf spotted me, she stood up right. Possibly picking up the smell of her young, she let out a high-pitched, plaintive whine. I released the pups, and they raced to her. Within seconds, they were sucking at her belly.
With her young to protect, she was becoming aggressive. What next? I wondered. So tender were the pups that it was impossible for them to survive without mother’s protection. Hence, I had to release her. I fetched an iron bar. Using a rock as the supporting point I unlocked the chain. After gaining freedom, she howled at me with her head low showing gratitude. Watching the mother and her pups disappear in the forest, I let out a sigh of relief.
【写作分析】
这是一篇记叙文。本文讲述作者在多年前的一个春天的早上，在沿着Coho Creek 淘金的时候，遇到了一只被困在猎人陷阱里的还在哺乳期的母狼，于是循着踪迹找到幼崽并把幼崽送到被困的母狼身边的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我伸开双手。”可知，第一段可描写作者把小狼送回母狼身边的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“身边有了要保护的幼崽，它开始变得有攻击性。”可知，第二段可描写作者把小狼带到母狼身边之后的场景，作者犹豫是否要救它们出陷阱，以及最后的结果。
2.续写线索：唤出——放回——救出——感谢——感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.放进：place…in…/put…in…
②.注 意 到：take notice of/pay attention to
③.释 放：release/free/liberate
情绪类
①.感谢：show gratitude/be grateful
②.放 松：feel relaxed/feel at ease
【范文点评】
[高分句型1]. Possibly picking up the smell of her young, she let out a high-pitched, plaintive whine.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]. Watching the mother and her pups disappear in the forest, I let out a sigh of relief.（现在分词作状语）
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阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
September is most beautiful in Strathroy, where people wholeheartedly enjoy the simple pleasures of life and nature.
Roland was no exception. He was a magnificent German Shepherd (德国牧羊犬), a little lazy and over-weight though. He loved to doze in the backyard. He yawned and stretched his body as he heard the slowly approaching footsteps of Mrs. Proudfoot. “Come have your lunch dear!” said Mrs. Proudfoot with her usual fondness for him and he wagged his tail affectionately in return.
Roland was licking the last piece of meat in his plate when the doorbell burst into music. Mrs. Proudfoot hurried to answer the door. Roland stood alert by her side.
“Good noon Mrs. Proudfoot”. It was Sam, her teenage neighbor. “My! My! You look pale! What happened?” asked Mrs. Proudfoot with genuine worry. She immediately waved him in and closed the door behind. Mrs. Proudfoot was a lonely widow, but was well loved in her neighborhood especially by kids, though she had no kids to call her own.
Once encouraged, Sam disclosed his dilemma. “My friend Barry lost a rare book of school library. It costs 150 dollars, but he has only 55 dollars and his poor parents can’t afford to pay the rest. Barry is working part time but that’s far from enough.” With a dramatic sigh he continued, “If he didn’t refund the loss before the end of term, he will be dismissed from final exams. That will ruin his future! I have to help him, whatever it takes. He is my best friend.”
“Don’t worry, Sammy. You want me to pay…” but Mrs. Proudfoot was interrupted. “No, No, Mrs. Proudfoot. This is not what I came here for. I’ll work for you. Would you favor me to walk your dog please? For 2 dollars a day.” He looked up with begging eyes.
Mrs. Proudfoot clapped her hands in agreement, “That can’t be better! I’ve been worried about Roland lately. He does need some exercise! It’s nice of you to make such an offer.”
Sam thanked her over and over, “I will start tomorrow morning.”
注意：1、所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2、续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
Sam arrived very early the next morning.
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Paragraph 2:
A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.
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【参考范文】
Sam arrived very early the next morning. Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line, Sam darted towards him, arms widely opened. Giving him a lazy glimpse, Roland politelywagged his tail and then turned his head away, falling sound asleep again. Desperately brainstorming, Sam got a piece of delicious bone from Mrs. Proudfoot. Lured by the tasty smell, Roland swiftly bounced up and jumped at the bone, following Sam out. In this way, the first day was smoothly finished. Day by day, Sam was delighted to find Roland gradually become willing and eager to have a walk outside.
A month later, Mrs. Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic. Enjoying the pleasure to roam along the country road with Roland, Sam also harvested a lot from the relaxing time. Eventually one day, Sam was excited to tell Mrs. Proudfoot, “Barry and I have earned enough money. Thank you, Mrs. Proudfoot! But can I continue walking Roland for you? For free!” Radiantly, Mrs. Proudfoot nodded. Receiving a positive answer, Sam was wild with joy and Roland, wagging his tail merrily, as if intoxicated. Sometimes only a little kindness can ignite something shining, making the world more beautiful and harmonious.
【写作分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了山姆的朋友巴里不小心弄丢了图书馆里一本珍贵的书。为了帮助好友凑钱买书，山姆决定向普劳德福特女士请求帮助她遛狗换取报酬。原先懒惰又超重的狗，也因此变得精力充沛并且苗条了。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“山姆第二天很早就到了。”可知，第一段可描写山姆遛狗的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“一个月之后，普劳德福特女士很高兴地发现罗兰瘦了，并且充满活力。”可知，第二段可描写山姆成功地通过劳动获得了报酬，并且请求免费帮普劳德福特女士继续遛狗。
2.续写线索：狗的表现——引诱狗狗出门——狗的改变——完成任务——主动请求继续遛狗——主题升华
3.词汇激活
行为类
①找食物：get a piece of delicious bone/ask a can of meat
②收获：harvest a lot/benefit a lot
情绪类
①高兴、惊讶：was delighted to find/was surprised to find
②欢乐：was wild with joy/was more than happy
【范文点评】
[高分句型1]. Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line, Sam darted towards him, arms widely opened. （现在分词作状语和独立主格结构）
[高分句型2].Receiving a positive answer, Sam was wild with joy and Roland, wagging his tail merrily, as if intoxicated.（现在分词作状语）