【期中真题】（江苏专用）2023-2024学年九年级英语上册 期中真题分类专题汇编 专题13 书面表达

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专题13 书面表达

1．（2022秋·江苏连云港·九年级统考期中）在成长过程中，我们总会遇到一些问题和烦恼。假如你是青少年工作者Mr Sigmund Friend，请根据David的来信，给他写封回信，帮助他分析问题，并给出建议解决问题。
Dear Mr Friend,
I am David, a Grade 9 student. I have a problem and I don’t know how to face it.
I am crazy about basketball. My friends and I always play basketball for hours after school. Sometimes I go home late and my parents get angry. Should I spend less time on basketball? What should I do? I look forward to your advice.
Best wishes,
David
注意:
(1) 词数90左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear David,
Thank you very much for your letter. I hope I can help you.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Sigmund Friend

2．（2022秋·江苏盐城·九年级统考期中）梁启超先生曾经告诉我们“少年强则国强”。为了充分发挥优秀少年的榜样和引领作用，现《我爱英语》俱乐部正开展“最美少年”评选活动。你班决定推选Millie参加本次评选，请根据提示用英文写一封推荐信。
1. What is her like? (well-organized, confident, modest…)
2. What is her favourite colour/sport/and who is her hero…?
3. What did she do and what is her dream?
注意:
1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Millie in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely,
Cindy
3．（2022秋·江苏南京·九年级南京市科利华中学校考期中）
During the “Helping Week”, your school has collected many letters about teenage problems from all the students. And you got a letter from Helen. Please give a helping hand to her.
Hello there!
I’m Helen and I’m a Grade 9 student. I don’t have any close friends and my parents have no time for me. So I really feel lonely, What should I do? Can you give me some advice? Thank you so much.
Helen
注意：
1.词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容须包括所有要点，全文连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Helen,
It’s very lucky for me to get your letter. I hope I can help you in some ways. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Tom

4．（2022秋·江苏南京·九年级统考期中）Note from editor: “Worries in bottle” is a column on teenage problems in Teenager Magazine. Now we are inviting you to help solve others’ worries by writing a reply letter.

写作要求：
1. 请选择以上两个漂流瓶中的一个，以“Mike”的名义写一封回信。
2. 内容需针对瓶中问题，并提出至少两条建议，可适当发挥，文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，词数80左右。
Dear
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Mike

5．（2022秋·江苏徐州·九年级统考期中）“改变”是疫情之下的关键词，新冠疫情几乎影响了每个人。那么这次疫情带给了你哪些成长呢？请根据下列提示，写一篇题为COVID-19 has changed me a lot的短文，给你校英文报投稿。
COVID-19     CHANGE
*developing good hygiene habits(卫生习惯);
*learning to cook some Chinese dishes;
…
要求：1. 内容须包括所给提示要点，需要补充至少一条变化；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
COVID-19 has changed me a lot
The COVID-19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone’s daily life. Now I’d like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me. __________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

6．（2022秋·江苏苏州·九年级统考期中）在成长过程中，我们都会遇到各种各样的问题和烦恼。请以“My growing pain”为题，用英语写下你成长过程中的问题或烦恼。故事需包括问题和解决。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名，校名等信息；照抄阅读语篇不得分。
My growing pain
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7．（2022秋·江苏盐城·九年级统考期中）你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“One thing I feel proud of”的征文比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇短文参赛。
1. What did you do to make you feel proud of yourself?
2. What have you learned from the experience?
...
注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Everyone has done something that he is proud of. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

8．（2022秋·江苏南通·九年级统考期中）假如最近你们学校组织了”评选优秀团员”活动，你班王明被选为优秀团员。请你根据下表信息提示，写一篇介绍王明的短文。
基本情况
王明；九（2）班；中等身高；2007年9月出生；
个人爱好
喜欢音乐，曾经创作了具有地方特色的音乐；喜欢观看纪录片，因为……（自拟内容）
优秀事迹

上周为希望工程捐款；
……（自拟内容）
职业梦想

具有表演天赋；想当一名演员；曾经在校园剧（campus plays）中扮演主角，并获奖。
……（自拟内容）
注意：1. 语言规范，信息完整，结构连贯，书写工整。
2. 内容必须包括表格中所有信息，并作适当的发挥。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
4. 词数90左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Wang Ming is a student in Class 2, Grade 3. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I admire him very much. I think he is an excellent League member.

9．（2022春·江苏淮安·九年级校考期中）家庭是人生的第一所学校，在父母的陪伴下，我们茁壮成长。请你以My Growth为题，写一篇你的成长故事。内容要点如下：
1. 家庭教育的重要性；
2. 一个你的成长故事；
3. 你的感悟。
注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数80～100。
My Growth
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

10．（2022秋·江苏苏州·九年级统考期中）近年来，一些年轻人热衷于庆祝万圣节等西方节日，相反，中国的各大传统节日却受到“冷落”。对此现象，请以“The Return of Chinese Traditional Festivals”为题写一封倡议书。
内容包括：
1. 你观察到的现象；
2. 你对此现象的观点或想法；
3. 你的建议举措。
注意：
1. 词数100；
2. 文章须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：
文化自信cultural confidence；弘扬中国文化promote Chinese culture
The Return of Chinese Traditional Festivals
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11．（2022秋·江苏苏州·九年级苏州中学校考期中）每段人生都有永不褪色的回忆。你学习，运动，旅游，交友，玩耍……其中有快乐，有悲伤，有趣味，有感动，有后悔，有惊喜，有骄傲……
请以“An unforgettable thing”为题，写一篇记叙文，将你的故事与我们分享。
内容包括：
1. What happened to you?(what, when, who, where… )
2. How was it going on?/What did you do then?
3. How did you feel at last?/What did you get from this experience?. . .
注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
An unforgettable thing
Everyone has his or her own unforgettable experiences, so do I!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

12．（2022秋·江苏·九年级统考期中）生活中我们有许许多多的第一次，比如第一次骑车、第一次做饭、第一次旅行……人生中的第一次是一种勇敢的尝试，在此过程中，我们会碰到挫折和困难，它们像一串串脚印，永驻在我们成长的道路上。请以“My first ________”为题用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
a.请先将标题填写完整；
b.分享你的第一次尝试的经历；
c.你的感悟。
注意:
（1）词数100左右；
（2）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息；
（3）照抄阅读语篇不得分。
My first ________
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13．（2022秋·江苏淮安·九年级统考期中）近年来，“双减”政策在很多学校得到了落实。“双减”实施后，自律者优秀， 懒散者出局。假如你是九 (1)班的李明，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你是如何进行自我管理的。内容需包括以下要点：
1. 制定学习计划
学校课程、课外阅读、练习拓展；……
2. 合理时间安排
早、中、晚、周末；……
3. 养成良好习惯
早睡早起、坚持锻炼；……
要求：
1. 词数在80~100词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所有要点，并适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
To be an excellent student, self-management is quite important.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

14．（2022秋·江苏·九年级期中）中学生在成长过程中经常会碰到一些烦恼。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，在班会上谈谈你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法。
你的烦恼
你的做法
个头不高，相貌平常 体重不满意，不知如何改变
不必在意，相信自己
父母不理解，要求严格，父母太忙，没有时间陪自己，朋友少, 孤独
学会沟通，友善待人
学习压力大，课外活动少，
作业多，经常熬夜学习，
无暇顾及个人爱好；
充足睡眠，计划每一天……(自主发挥，至少两点)
要求：
1. 词数90左右。开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 所写内容必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥，不要简单翻译。
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Hello, everyone
I’m Lihua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

15．（2021秋·江苏常州·九年级统考期中）假如你是Emma，收到了笔友Josh的电子邮件。请根据来信，给他回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法，再给出建议，并适当发挥。
To: Emma@help.com
Subject: Ask for your help
Dear Emma,
I have a problem and I need your help. My parents are really strict with me and they want to control everything I do! For example, when I go out with my friends, they always ask, “Where are you going? Who are you going with?” I try to talk with them, but they don’t listen.
Why is it so hard for them to understand me?
Josh
要求：
1. 词数100左右。回复信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope this helps!
Emma


参考答案：
1．例文
Dear David,
Thank you very much for your letter. I hope I can help you.
Firstly, you said you enjoy playing basketball, and I think it’s a good habit to relax both physically and mentally. However, you need to arrange your time reasonably and establish a schedule, and not neglect your studies just because of playing basketball. Secondly, I think you should communicate well with your parents and tell them that you enjoy playing basketball, which has many benefits. You will use your spare time to play basketball and control your time well. I believe they will understand you.
I hope my advice is helpful to you.
Best wishes,
Sigmund Friend
【详解】[总体分析]

题材：本文是一篇应用文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：考生注意按照提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，感谢来信；
第二步，具体分析问题并给出解决方案；
第三步，书写结语，希望有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①because of因为
②communicate well with与某人好好沟通
③is helpful to有帮助
[高分句型]
①I think you should communicate well with your parents and tell them that you enjoy playing basketball, which has many benefits.（that引导的宾语从句中包含定语从句）
②I hope my advice is helpful to you.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
We are writing to recommend Millie in our class as “The Most Beautiful Youth” in our school.
Millie is well-organized, so all her things are put in order and she never forgets the things she needs to do. She is so confident that she can face all difficulties. What’s more, she always does extra work for our class. She is modest. She never shows off when she gets good grades. Millie likes blue because it brings her peace of mind and body. She is crazy about playing basketball because it can make her relaxed and her life more interesting. Her mother is her hero in her heart. Because she always helps people in need. She learns a lot from her mother. Last week, she helped a classmate learn about the world through the Internet because she believes “Helping others is helping yourself”. She wants to be an excellent teacher in the future.
We think Millie is the most suitable person for this award. We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Cindy
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封推荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当增添细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明要推荐的人（开头已给出）；
第二步，根据提示介绍被推荐人的情况，推荐理由；
第三步，表达希望对方可以同意请求。
[亮点词汇]
①in order按顺序
②show off炫耀
③be crazy about迷上
④in need需要帮助
[高分句型]
①She never shows off when she gets good grades. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Millie likes blue because it brings her peace of mind and body. (because引导的原因状语从句)
3．例文：
Dear Helen,
It’s very lucky for me to get your letter. I hope I can help you in some ways. The problems of many teenagers today are similar to you. They have too much homework. They don’t have enough time for their hobbies. So your problem is very common and you don’t have to worry too much. I think you should have good communication with your parents and let them know how you feel. They will understand you. Your parents must love you and they want to make you a better person. Besides, you can take part in school activities so as to meet more friends. If you are friendly to them, they will make friends with you. I hope you have a good result.
Best wishes,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文写作，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据Helen的来信中提到的问题写一封回信，给她一些具体的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，先安慰，再根据她的具体问题给出相应的建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be similar to和……相似
②too much太多
③have good communication with和某人有良好的沟通
④take part in school activities参加学校活动
[高分句型]
①I think you should have good communication with your parents and let them know how you feel.（宾语从句）
②If you are friendly to them, they will make friends with you.（if引导的条状状语从句）
4．例文1
Dear Alex,
I am so sorry that what your deskmate said made you so sad, and I don’t think you are too sensitive. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, you can tell your deskmate not to say that again. It’s impolite to laugh at people’s appearance or their figures. Secondly, if he still does things that make you feel uncomfortable or sad, just ignore him and don’t care about what he says. A true friend will accept you for who you are, not for how you look or what you personally believe. Lastly, try to be accept yourself for who you are. Remember, you are unique. Try your best to look for friends who really care about you and your feelings.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours
Mike
例文2
Dear Linda,
I am so sorry that you are having difficulty in communicating with your classmates. Here are some suggestions for you.
First of all, you can try to ask your classmates about their likes and dislikes so that you can easily find the classmates who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better try to take part in some discussions with your classmates even though the topic is not what you really interested in. In this way, they will see that you are willing to join them and they will be more likely to chat with you.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours
Mike
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封建议信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按照题目所示两个漂流瓶中的一个问题进行分析，并给出对应的建议。不要遗漏在称呼中要补上你所选择的那个对象的名字，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明选择两个漂流瓶中的哪一个问题，引出话题；
第二步，结合所选择的漂流瓶中所呈现的问题，针对性地给出相应的建议，不少于两条建议，可列举具体的做法；
第三步，表达祝愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
②be willing to do sth乐于做某事
③be helpful to对……有帮助
④have difficulty in doing sth在做某事方面有困难
[高分句型]
①I am so sorry that what your deskmate said made you so sad, and I don’t think you are too sensitive.（and连接两个并列分句，第一个并列分句中含有that引导的宾语从句，且宾语从句中含有what引导的主语从句，第二个并列分句中含有省略引导词that的宾语从句以及否定前移的用法）
②Here are some suggestions for you.（倒装句）
③It’s impolite to laugh at people’s appearance or their figures.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
④ Secondly, if he still does things that make you feel uncomfortable or sad, just ignore him and don’t care about what he says.（if引导的条件状语从句，且从句中含有that引导的定语从句，what引导的宾语从句）
⑤ Besides, you’d better try to take part in some discussions with your classmates even though the topic is not what you really interested in.（even though引导让步状语从句，what引导的表语从句）
⑥ Try your best to look for friends who really care about you and your feelings.（who引导的定语从句）
5．例文：
COVID-19 has changed me a lot
The COVID-19 pandemic has had a big influence on everyone’s daily life. Now I’d like to share something about how the pandemic has changed me.
In the past, I didn’t pay much attention to personal hygiene. But now I’ve developed good hygiene habits which can be helpful to me all my life. For example, I never forget to wash hands before eating food or after coming back from outside. I used to like eating out, but now I can cook delicious food for myself and my family. In my spare time, I learned to cook Chinese dishes such as gongbao chicken and mapo tofu. What’s more, I begin to care more about my parents and don’t argue with them anymore.
In a word, I’m becoming more careful and independent.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想分享一些关于新冠疫情对我的改变”来引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别从“养成好的卫生习惯、学习做一些中国菜以及关心父母”三个方面进行描述；
第三步，书写结语。对自己的变化进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②For example例如
③used to过去常常
④In my spare time在我闲暇之余
⑤What’s more另外
[高分句型]
①But now I’ve developed good hygiene habits which can be helpful to me all my life.（which引导定语从句）
6．范文：
My growing pain
My middle school life is coming to an end. During the three years, not only did I have a happy time, but I had kinds of problems. My biggest problem was from my parents. They wanted me to spend all my time on my lessons. They didn’t allow me to play computer games or have outdoor activities with my friends.
I couldn’t stand the strict rules! So I wrote a letter and told my parents I knew it was important to do well in schoolwork. I would make good use of the time and try to do well in schoolwork first. After a long talk with my parents, they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like.
Now I have realized communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，写自己成长中的情况；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括成长遇到的各种各样的问题和烦恼。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍遇到的各种各样的问题和烦恼；
第二步，介绍对应问题的解决方案；
第三步，最后得出结论要善于沟通。
[亮点词汇]
① come to an end结束
② not only…but (also) 不但……而且……
③ allow sb to do sth允许某人做某事
④ make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
① they agreed that I could have spare time and do something I like. （that引导的宾语从句）
② Now I have realized communicating with our parents is a good way to solve our problems.（不定式作后置定语）
7．例文
Everyone has done something that he is proud of. I won’t forget the first time I traveled alone forever.
Last summer vacation, I went to the summer camp. At first, I was kind of afraid because it was the first time I felt lonely. But my parents encouraged me a lot. Then I met many kids and we became good friends. We went to climb the mountain together happily and helped each other on the way. At last, we got to the top of the mountain. We had a picnic there. We were all very excited. And I was proud of myself because I could travel alone without my parents.
I have learned a lot from this experience. I know how to deal with problems when I have them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍你做了什么让你为自己感到骄傲；
第二步，介绍你从中获得了什么。
[亮点词汇]

①at first起初
②on the way在路上
③be proud of为……自豪
[高分句型]
①At first, I was kind of afraid because it was the first time I felt lonely.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I know how to deal with problems when I have them.（when引导时间状语从句）
8．例文：
Wang Ming is a student in Class 2, Grade 3. He is of medium height. He was born in September, 2007. He has some hobbies. He likes music. He once wrote music with local colour. He likes watching documentaries because he can learn a lot of useful information from them.
He is generous and helpful and he has done several good things. Last month he donated his pocket money to Project Hope. He also donated blood many times to help people who are in trouble. He even decided to donate his body for medical research.
He has some great dreams. He once played the leading role in campus plays and won good awards. Because he has acting talent, he wants to be an actor. …
I admire him very much. I think he is an excellent League member.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“基本情况、个人爱好、优秀事迹、职业梦想”等几个方面详细描述王明的优秀品质；
第三步，书写结语。结尾已给出。
[亮点词汇]
①be of medium height是中等身高
② music with local colour具有地方特色的音乐
③donate money to捐钱给……
[高分句型]
①He likes watching documentaries because he can learn a lot of useful information from them.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②He also donated blood many times to help people who are in trouble.（动词不定式作目的状语；定语从句）
9．例文：
My Growth
Family education is very important to all of us. With the accompany of parents, we can grow up happily. Family is like a big tree, family education is the sunshine and rain.
It is parents who teach us some basic life skills. We also learn how to behave when getting into trouble. When we feel upset, we get courage and comfort from family. Parents teach me how to face life bravely.
I felt so happy when I got an A in a test. But I also felt enough about it and didn’t try my best to study. As a result, I failed in the next exam. When I told  my parents what happened , they shared a story about proud soldiers. Then I know why I failed and change my attitude towards study.
Thanks to my family, I can learn a lot from it and I love my family very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：内容要点需要考生适当发挥，考生因注意时态的变化以及使用正确的词汇和句型。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出家庭教育的重要；
第二步，说明家庭教育的重要性所在以及阐述一个成长的故事，应该要结合主题展开描写，并要注意行文的连贯；
第三步，表达自己的感悟，对家庭的热爱。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to sb对某人重要
②get into trouble陷入麻烦
③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大能力做某事
④thanks to幸亏
[高分句型]
①With the accompany of parents, we can grow up happily.（with短语作伴随状语）
② It is parents who teach us some basic life skills.（强调句）
10．例文：
The Return of Chinese Traditional Festivals
In recent years, some young people are keen to celebrate Halloween and other Western festivals. On the contrary, China’s major traditional festivals have been “neglected”. I think we Chinese people should first like our Chinese festivals. Because they represent our traditional culture and spirit. They can not only promote Chinese culture, but also let our culture store itself. I hope we can pay more attention to our traditional festivals at ordinary times, and at the same time, TV should also increase the publicity of these festivals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，属于材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章标题以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇说明观察到的现象——年轻人热衷于庆祝万圣节等西方节日而“冷落”了中国的各大传统节日；
第二步，说明你对此现象的观点或想法；
第三步，提出你的建议或举措，并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be keen to热衷于
②on the contrary正好相反
③not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I think we Chinese people should first like our Chinese festivals.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
②I hope we can pay more attention to our traditional festivals at ordinary times, and at the same time, TV should also increase the publicity of these festivals.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句；and连接两个宾语从句）
11．例文
An unforgettable thing
Everyone has his or her own unforgettable experiences, so do I! Let me share mine.
There are a lot of unforgettable moments in my middle school life. How time flies! Three years of middle school life has come to an end. During the three years, I have known many kind teachers and helpful classmates. Thanks to them, my middle school life is meaningful and colourful. One of the most unforgettable experiences happened in Grade 8. I worked hard to prepare an English Speech. However, things didn’t went on as smoothly as expected. I fell ill a week before the speech. I coughed so badly that I could hardly speak. I felt worried and helpless. It was my dearest English teacher that helped me get out of trouble. She told me to calm down and looked after me carefully. To me, my English teacher is like my family who care me and love me. Because of the experience, I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“An unforgettable thing”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“分享自己难忘的经历”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“发生了什么、情况如何、做了什么、感觉如何以及从这次经历中得到了什么”几个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②come to an end结束
③Thanks to由于，幸亏
④get out of trouble逃离困境，摆脱麻烦
[高分句型]
①I coughed so badly that I could hardly speak.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
②Because of the experience, I have decided to be a teacher like my English teacher when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
12．例文
My first mountain climbing
We are usually deeply impressed by what we experienced for the first time. For me, my first mountain climbing left a deep impression on me.
Three years ago, my class went climbing. It was my first time to do things like this. I felt very excited at first and supposed it would be easy. However, as time went by, I was so tired that I wanted to give up. My teacher encouraged me to challenge myself. Encouraged by my teacher, I did it at last and couldn’t express my excitement in words!
From my first mountain climbing, I learned not to give up when facing difficulties. Only when I keep doing it and finish it can I have a sense of achievement.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给的提示，分享你的第一次尝试的经历及你的感悟，注意写作之前先补充完整题目。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先补充完整题目，再直入主题来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体分享你的第一次尝试的经历；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①leave a deep impression on给人留下深刻印象
②go climbing爬山
③as time went by随着时间的流逝
④encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
⑤give up放弃
[高分句型]
①We are usually deeply impressed by what we experienced for the first time.（what引导的宾语从句）
②I was so tired that I wanted to give up.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）
13．例文
To be an excellent student, self-management is quite important. Today, I’d like to share with you how I have been managing myself effectively under the “dual reduction” policy that has been implemented in our school in recent years. I firmly believe that a well-thought-out plan can lead to better results. At the beginning of each week, I set aside time to create a detailed study schedule that outlines the school courses and extended reasding and exercises. In addition to having a study plan, I also focus on time management so that I can make sure to include breaks and leisure activities in my schedule. Moreover, I’ve developed many good habits like going to bed and waking up early and doing exercise regularly. In conclusion, the “dual reduction” policy has led me to adopt a more disciplined and organized approach to my studies. I believe that these self-management skills will continue to serve me well in the future, no matter what challenges I face.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，即双减后自己的自我管理方法；
第二步，具体阐述自我管理的方法，包括制定学习计划，合理时间安排，养成良好习惯等；
第三步，文章总结。
[亮点词汇]
① lead to... 导致……
② at the beginning of…在……开始的时候
③ set aside…留出……
④ self-management skills 自我管理的方法
[高分句型]
① I’d like to share with you how I have been managing myself effectively under the “dual reduction” policy that has been implemented in our school in recent years. （how引导的宾语从句及that引导的定语从句）
② In addition to having a study plan, I focus on time management so that I can make sure to include breaks and leisure activities in my schedule. （so that引导目的状语从句）
③ I believe that these self-management skills will continue to serve me well in the future, no matter what challenges I face.（no matter what引导的让步状语从句）
14．例文
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua. I’d like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them. I am not very tall and very common.
I am unhappy with my weight and don’t know how to change it. But I don’t care and I believe in myself.
My parents don’t understand me and are strict with us. Also, they are so busy that they have no time for me. I have very few friends, so I feel lonely from time to time. I encourage myself to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others very well.
I often feel stressed because of my study and I don’t have many chances to join the after-class activities.
I have so much homework that I often stay up late to finish it all. I will plan my time very carefully and improve my study in a very good way so that I can have enough sleep. Try to join as many activities as possible and achieve a balance between study and hobbies.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你遇到的烦恼以及你自己的做法的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“谈谈我遇到的烦恼以及我自己的做法”来引出中重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我的烦恼、我的做法等”几个方面重点介绍我如何处理我遇到的烦恼的做法；
第三步，书写结语，表达“谢谢你”的感谢用语。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理；
②be strict with对……要求严格；
③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事；
④stay up late熬夜。
[高分句型]
①Also, they are so busy that they have no time for me. (“so+形容词+that+从句”句型)
②I have so much homework that I often stay up late to finish it all. (动词不定式作目的状语)
15．One possible version:
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them. We are growing up, but often, it’s hard for our parents to see this. To them, we are still children and they want to protect us.
If you find it hard to talk to your parents, you can try writing a letter to them. In the letter, tell your parents what you are thinking about. Then maybe they will understand you better. After your parents read the letter, try to talk to them.
In your free time, you can do something you can to help your parents. For example, you can help your parents with some housework.
What’s more, you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life.
I hope this helps!
Emma
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态: 本文以“一般过去时和一般现在时”为主
③提示: 题目要求根据笔友Josh的求助，写封邮件给他提一些建议。
[写作步聚]
第一步，先简单谈一下自己的经历，并分析出现这种情况的原因。
第二步，给出建议，可分段提出，包括写信、帮父母做家务以及日常沟通。
第三步，最后表达自己的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up成长
②think about思考
[高分句型]
①We are growing up, but often, it’s hard for our parents to see this.（it作形式主语）
②If you find it hard to talk to your parents, you can try writing a letter to them.（it作形式宾语）
③In your free time, you can do something you can to help your parents.（动词不定式作目的状语）