人教版九年级英语全册单元作文精讲12-突发事件 Unit 12 Life is full of unexpected.

主题：突发事件导读本单元的主题是用英语谈论过去的突发事件,由此引导同学们学会及时从容应对,培养正确看待事物的积极心态.与此关联的话题通常是用英语描述日常生活中一次难忘的、尴尬的、幸运的或特别的经历.这类作文通常采用记叙文体裁.写作时,要讲清事情发生的时间、地点、经过和结果等.同时,主题要明确,文章所有内容应紧紧围绕主题展开.同时,可适当抒发自己的情感.可适用于本单元的主题有很多,如My unlucky day, An unforgettable day等. 题目回放生活中总是充满不可预料的事情.相信同学们在日常生活中一定有过愉快的、沮丧的、失望的甚至愤怒的经历.假设你叫李华,请自拟标题,写一篇英语短文,描述自己经历过的一次预料之外的事情.写作要点：1.你经历了什么事情；2.描述你当时的感受和体会.写作要求：1.不得出现你的真实姓名和校名；2.词数90左右. 审题指引1 审体裁：本文要求叙述一件自己经历过的意外之事,属于记叙文.2 审内容：第一段引出要叙述的话题,第二段描述自己经历的意外事情,第三段发表感想和体会.3 审时态：以一般过去时和过去完成时为主,可适当使用一般现在时.4 审人称：以第一人称为主. 框架设计开头：第一段引出话题.中间：主体段落描述自己生活或学习中遇到的意外经历.结尾：最后发表自己的感悟和体会. 段落素描1. First paragraph: I am Li Hua, a junior high school student. I experienced something unexpected in my life.(I am Li Hua, a student of Class One, Grade Nine. As we know, life is full of unexpectedness. I clearly remember ...)2.The body: One day, when I...,I was attracted by...However, when I...,I found ... Even worse,... I realized that I had been cheated.3. Last paragraph: Indeed, life is filled with unexpected things. We have to face them bravely and calmly. (Indeed, life is full of unexpected things. We are supposed to face them...Hopefully, measures will be taken to...) 范本淬炼ALife is full of unexpectednessI am Li Hua, a junior high school student. I ① experienced something unexpected in my life.One day, when I turned on the TV to relax for a little while, I ② was attracted by an exciting advertisement for a toy, which was just the right thing ③ I had dreamed of all the time. I made a phone call and ordered the toy. However, when I received the toy, I found it was not as beautiful as the one ④ introduced in the advertisement. Even worse, it was expensive and of low quality. By then, I realized that ⑤ I had been cheated. Indeed, life ⑥ is filled with unexpected things. We have to face them bravely and calmly.亮点点评1.开头直接点题,简要说明自己经历的一件预测之外的事,主体段落展开叙事,结尾总结并谈感想.要点齐全,段落清晰,条理分明.2.句式多样,使用了状语从句、被动语态、定语从句、宾语从句等,使文章句式富于变化,增强了文章的可读性.3.使用了一些衔接语,如 however, even worse, by then, indeed等,使文章衔接顺畅.4.使用了一些亮眼词语,如 attract, dream of, expensive, bravely, calmly等. BLife is full of unexpectednessI am Li Hua, ① a student of Class One, Grade Nine. As we know, life is short and full of unexpectedness. I clearly remember an unexpected thing ② that happened to me.One day, through an advertisement I ordered an online toy that I had ③ been eager to have for a long time. However, when I received the toy, I was shocked to find it was ④ completely different from what the advertisement had described. It was highly priced, and of low quality. I ⑤ came to realize that I had been cheated by the advertisement.Indeed, life if full of unexpected things. We are supposed to face them bravely and calmly. Hopefully,⑥ measures will be taken to prevent such bad things from happening again.亮点点评1.文章段落设计合理,逻辑清晰.开头引出主题,中间主体段落举例说明,结尾总结并提出建议.2.本文句式富于变化,表达流畅,能灵活运用定语从句、时间状语从句、宾语从句等句式丰富文章内容.3.比起上一篇文章,本文用词更丰富,如使用 eager, shock, completely, come to realize, prevent...from 等,增加了文章的感染力.佳作赏析ALife is full of unexpectednessAs we all know, life is ① full of unexpectedness. I will never forget an unusual winter vacation, when a serious infectious disease ② broke out in most parts of my city.At first, the serious disease spread fast, and ③ a large number of people had to stay at home all day and could not go to work. ④Likewise, most students could not go to school and had to attend classes online. Luckily, the local government took action ⑤ immediately, and hundreds of medical workers rushed to the frontline to ⑥ fight against the infectious disease. At last, it was brought under control. Indeed, life is filled with unexpected things, including ⑦ unpredictable disasters. However, I am sure if we work together, we will⑧ achieve the final victory,亮点点评1.本文联系生活实际论述主题,立意深刻,观点新颖.2.文中时态切换自如,且句式多变,除恰当运用主动和被动语态外,还使用了when引导的定语从句等复杂句式,彰显了作者较强的语言驾驭能力.3.用 at first, likewise, at last, indeed, however 等衔接语,使句子和段落过渡自然.4.用丰富的词汇和短语准确表达思想,如用 break out, attend classes, take action, immediately, fight against, bring ...under control, including, achieve等,使文章内容丰富生动. BA shameful cheatIn our lifetime, some of us ① must have been cheated, and it is the same with me.Last month, I noticed on the Internet a message about ② charitable donations for disabled people. Touched by the ③ miserable life of those disabled people, I donated one hundred yuan without any hesitation. Two weeks later, I realized it was a ④ shameful cheat.No doubt, the Internet plays an important role in our lifetime, but we ⑤ should not be misled by false or deceitful online information.亮点点评1.文章结合现实生活中时有发生的网络骗局展开叙述,能引发读者共鸣.2.句式多样,使用了过去分词充当状语、宾语从句等句式,避免了句式过于单一的问题.3. 用 last month, two weeks later, no doubt, but等时间词语和衔接语,使文章衔接顺畅.4.用 charitable donations, disabled people, touched by, miserable life, donate, hesitation, a shameful cheat, mislead, deceitful等丰富词汇和短语,增加了文章的亮点. CAn unexpected experienceMost of us have unexpected experiences ① in our lifetime. Let me introduce one of mine.Once, according to an online advertisement, I bought a dress, which was ② claimed to be of high quality, beautiful, but inexpensive; however, when I received it, I was surprised to find it was ③ totally different from what the advertisement had described. I ④ was aware that I had been cheated by the advertisement.This unexpected experience tells me that I should ⑤ keep my eyes open while shopping online, and cannot be cheated by false advertisements.亮点点评1.文章紧扣主题设计段落,并联系生活事例展开叙述,最后谈了自己的感受.2.文中句式富于变化,简单句、祈使句、非限制性定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句交替使用,行文流畅自然.3.文章灵活运用丰富词汇和短语,如 according to, claim, of high quality, inexpensive, totally, different from, describe, aware 等,增强了文章的生动性. 素材宝库1.好词妙语rush to the frontline 冲到前线unpredictable disaster 不可预测的灾难the unluckiest day 最不幸的一天so(in order)that 以便于·..... unfortunately 不幸地allow sb.to do sth. 允许某人做某事share...with...与······分享.....be aware that 意识到charitable donations 慈善捐赠2.提分佳句Indeed, our life is filled with unexpected things.的确,我们生活中充满了预料之外的事情.We are supposed to face up to the challenges bravely.我们应勇敢地正视挑战.It was the unluckiest day for me. 它对我来说是最不幸的一天.By the time I rushed out, the school bus had already left. 就在我冲出去的时候,校车已经离开了.Fortunately, he was not angry with me and allowed me to enter the classroom. 幸运的是他没有生我的气,让我进教室了.What an unlucky day I spent! 我度过了多么不幸的一天！I had a/an ...experience. 我有一个··..··的经历.When...,I found/realized that...··..··的时候,我发现／意识到··....Good things come to those who wait. 苍天不负有心人.You will never know unless you try.除非你去尝试,否则你永远不会知道.A journey of a thousand miles begins with one single step.千里之行,始于足下. 实战练笔作为学生,你是否有过这样的经历：早上睡过头了,顾不上吃早饭却还是错过了校车,只能步行上学；到学校后迟到了,而且还忘带课本；去吃午饭时发现没有带饭卡和现金.请根据以上提示,以My unlucky day为题写一篇英语作文.写作要求：1.语句通顺连贯,不得在文中出现你的真实姓名和校名；2.词数90左右.范文：My unlucky dayI will never forget the day when I felt unlucky.On the evening of Last Thursday, I stayed up late after watching an interesting TV program. The next morning, I overslept. Without breakfast, I rushed out to catch the school bus, but still I missed it. I had to walk to school. When I got into the classroom, I found that the teacher had already started the class. At this time, I sat down, but found that I had left my textbooks at home. At lunchtime, I reached the dining hall, only to find that I had not taken the lunch card or any cash with me.What an unlucky day it was! Unit 13 We are trying to save the earth!