2024年高考英语一轮复习考点精讲精练（全国通用）第40讲书面表达之建议信、推荐信、申请信（Word版附解析）

这是一份2024年高考英语一轮复习考点精讲精练（全国通用）第40讲书面表达之建议信、推荐信、申请信（Word版附解析），共4页。试卷主要包含了 三年真题应用文考点细目表， 命题规律及备考策略，as fllws如下，find，take sth， put frward提出等内容，欢迎下载使用。
第40讲 建议信、推荐信、申请信（核心考点精讲精练）


1. 三年真题应用文考点细目表

试卷
年份
体裁
话题
题材内容
新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷
2023
建议信
学校生活
给外教提建议
全国甲卷
2023
投稿
历史文化
介绍中国历史人物
全国乙卷
2023
投稿
生活学习
假期习得新技能
全国卷Ⅰ/
全国乙卷
2022
投稿
调查结果
学习英语的状况
2021
演讲稿
社会科技
明智的在线学习者
2020
记叙文
身边的人
值得尊敬和爱戴的人
2019
申请信
社会实践
当志愿者
全国卷Ⅱ/
全国甲卷
2022
投稿
世界海洋日
保护海洋
2021
求助信
文化习俗
外国朋友感兴趣的中国传统文化
2020
记叙文
文体活动
介绍采摘活动
2019
电子邮件
文体活动
排球比赛安排
全国卷Ⅲ
2020
求助信
文体活动
请外教指导短剧改编
2019
邀请信
文体活动
校园音乐节

2. 命题规律及备考策略
【命题规律】
近3年命题规律：
1. 内容上选材贴近考生实际生活。所写内容都是学生熟悉内容，让学生有话可说，利于学生表达；
2. 体裁上有：提纲作文；开放性作文；图表作文；看图作文
【备考策略】
1. 熟练掌握各种应用文的基本构架；
2. 积累基本词汇和句式，尤其是简单基本句式，写好简单句；
3. 背诵优美的段落和范文，模仿高级句式和表达；
4. 加强审题（主题、时态）训练；
5. 练习书写，达到整洁美观的程度。
【命题预测】
预测2024年应用文考查仍然贴近考生实际生活，以电子邮件和投稿为主，考查考生的解决问题能力。



题型总览 建议信
一、 必备词汇和万能句式
必备词汇
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view  在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration  把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on  随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
必备词汇句型
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
二、 写作模板
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,



【2023年新高考全国Ⅰ& Ⅱ卷】 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.
My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.
Thank you for considering my suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

（2022·河南·模拟预测）假定你是某国际学校高中生李华，最近你发现你校图书馆阅览室存在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象，请用英语给馆长Mr.Smith写一封信。要点如下：
1.说明写信的目的；
2.反映存在问题并提出合理的建议；
注意：1.词数100字左右；
2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am Li Hua, a high school student.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to draw your attention to the improper behaviors among students in the reading room of the school library: making too much noise and littering.
As you know, it is difficult for readers to focus while some students are talking to each other or making phone calls. Besides, a noisy and dirty environment is not only bad for our health but also has a negative effect on our studying.
Therefore, in my opinion, some measures should be taken to solve these problem. First, put up some signs that forbid such improper behaviors. Second, ask all the students to pick up their rubbish when they leave.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是某国际学校高中生李华，最近你发现你校图书馆阅览室存在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象，请用英语给馆长Mr.Smith写一封信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
采取措施做某事：take measures to do sth→ take action to do sth
解决：solve→ settle
禁止：forbid→ ban
众所周知：as is known→ it is known that
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：Therefore, in my opinion, some measures should be taken to solve these problem..
拓展句：Therefore, as far as I am concerned, some measures should be taken to solve these problem. .
【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, it is difficult for readers to focus while some students are talking to each other or making phone calls.（as引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Second, ask all the students to pick up their rubbish when they leave.（when引导的时间状语从句）

题型总览 推荐信

一、推荐信三段可用句式
首段交代写信背景，开门见山表明写信目的：
1. Our school will celebrate its 100th birthday this July./Our school’s approaching 100th birthday will be celebrated this July. Could you please recommend a student to address at the opening ceremony in English?
2. Hearing/Learning that you are coming to visit China, I would like to recommend several place interest to you.
3. I’m delighted to learn that you are going to visit Beijing, and I would like to offer my recommendation.
4. Delighted to know that you are going to learn English, I consider it a wise choice to visit
5. It affords me much pleasure to recommend John to you.
主体部分：紧扣要点，推荐条件写2--3个，适当增加细节：
6. 在学校进行公开演讲相关的推荐条件：The speakers should be equipped with the following qualities.
A. Initially, motivated and devoted to serving others, the speaker is supposed to hold a positive attitude towards life and enjoy a good fame or high popularity among students.
B. Additionally/Aside from it, not only can he have excellent performance in all school subjects, but also is furnished with extraordinary ability of spoken and written English.
C. Plus, I would be even better if the speaker is involved in relevant experience of public speaking.
7. I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
8. One reason why I recommend it/sb. is that ...
9. He is an all-round students with excellent grades in all subjects; As a boy with great potential, he is good/skillful at solving difficult problems.
10. Li Ming, a graduate from Peking University, majors in computer software design.
尾段写作：紧扣要点---表示感谢；增加细节---期待回信。
11. I would appreciate it very much if you could do me the favor. Your early/prompt reply is highly expected.
12. If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
13. Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected.
14. I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial. Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
二、推荐人物可用词汇
能力：have a gift/talent for=be gifted/talented in; be good/skillful at=be skilled in; be experienced in, be an expert in, a boy with great ability/potential; give full play to his talent; have a good knowledge/command of; be competent/equal/qualified for; creative, efficient, intelligent...
经历：graduate from; be a graduate from, major in; gain/win/get the first grade scholarship, an all-around students with excellent grades in all subjects; be given the title of ...
性格：outgoing; easy to get along with, enthusiastic, enthusiasm is part of his character...
模板
Dear ______ ,
①It is my great pleasure to recommend  ______（要推荐的人）to you.②During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______ . ③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______(介绍与此人的关系)。
④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding. ⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______ . ⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality. ⑦He has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him/her is always_______. ⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.（介绍此人的能力）
⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart. ⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university？I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence. I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua


【2020年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I hope everything's OK with you.
Our school's drama club plans to start practising. Since you're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua


（2023秋·黑龙江牡丹江·高三牡丹江一中校考期末）假定你是李华，你校留学生Henry对中国传统文化很感兴趣，他请你推荐一个适合加入的学校文化社团，请给他写封邮件回复，要点如下：
1. 写邮件的目的；2. 简要介绍该社团；3. 推荐的理由。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Henry,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Henry,
I’m glad you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. Since you have asked, I sincerely recommend the Dragon Club to you.
The Dragon Club is the club with the longest history and the most members in our school. Every weekend, the club will carry out various activities, mainly to spread traditional Chinese culture and popularize relevant cultural and historical knowledge. It also regularly organizes visits to local museums. I believe you will satisfy your desire to learn in the club.
Looking forward to the day when you share your experience with me!
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
题型总览 申请信
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
(1) 兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。
I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in …
(2) 见……上刊登的贵公司广告，我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。
In reply to your advertisement in …, I beg to apply for the post of … in your company.
(3) 看到贵公司在报上招聘……的广告，我马上感到这正是我这段时间所要寻找的工作，并且我能胜任。
Immediately I saw your advertisement in the paper for …I felt it was just the kind of post for which I have the qualifications and for which I have been looking for some time.
(4) 我想申请入贵校学习。
I would like to apply for admission to your college.
(5) 我想在贵校……系继续深造。
I would like to further my studies in …Department of your university.
第二部分：介绍详情
套语：
(1) 我的专业是……，我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
My major is…, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.
(2) ……年，我出生于……，毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作，因此积累了该领域丰富的经验。
Born in …in…, I graduated from…University majoring in …I have been working in …since my graduation, and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field.
(3) 毕业后，我先担任……，随后担任……，现任职于……
Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was …and currently I am working for/in …
(4) 我现在就读于北京第二外国语学院英语专业，即将毕业。
I am now studying at Beijing Second Foreign Language Institute and will soon be graduated as an English major.
第三部分：说明申请该职位或学校的原因
套语：
(1) 贵公司目前做的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。
The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me.
(2) 我认为我具备了报上刊登的贵公司……一职所要求的必要条件和经验。
I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position of …advertised in the newspaper.
(3) 受我所学课程的影响，我对饭店、酒店管理产生了浓厚的兴趣。
Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I have developed a special interest in Restaurant and Hotel Management.
第四部分：恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复
套语：
(1) 如能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
Your early response will be much appreciated.
(2) 希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。
I hope you will kindly send me an application form.
(3) 如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感激。
I would greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms and any instructions you may be so kind as to give me regarding my possible admission.
(4) 希望同意面试，届时我可以更详细地说明我的技能。
I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can explain my qualifications more fully.
(5) 我将乐意在您方便时接受面试，届时我将进一步介绍自己。
I should be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further details concerning myself.
【写作佳句】
【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明信息来源，并提出申请。
1. I’m Li Hua, from Class One, Senior Two.
我是李华，来自高二一班。
2. I have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company.
我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。
3. I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。
4. I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor（家庭教师/助教）in the newspaper.
我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。
5. I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school.
我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。
6. I am writing to tell you that I’m suitable for the job you are advertising.
我写信是想告诉你，我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。
7. I am writing to inquire about the possibility of the job.
我写信是询问（我得到）这份工作的可能性。
8. I am writing to join the program.
我写信是想加入这个项目。
9. I would like to apply for it during the summer vacation.
我想要暑假申请它。
【篇中句】突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由。
1. I think I’m qualified for the position. 
我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。
2. In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills.
首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。
3. What’s more, I am well acquainted with the western culture.（be acquainted with 熟悉）
而且，我非常熟悉西方文化。
4. Last but not the least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life.
最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。
5. I think it’s of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends.
我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。
6. I am sure I can do my best in the job.
我保证在工作中会尽最大努力。
7. That’s why I am applying for the position.
那就是我申请这个职位的原因。
8. I hope I can join you. 
我希望我能够加入你们。
【篇尾句】请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。
1. I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.
如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。
2. I hope you can offer me the opportunity.
我希望你能提供给我这个机会。
3. I hope I can be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。
4. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189....
如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189....
5. I am looking forward to your early reply.
期待你的早日恢复。
6. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
期待早日收到你的来信。
【写作模板】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m _________(简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, _________(表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it’s a good opportunity for me to _____________(应聘的原因). Therefore I recommend myself to without hesitation.
I ___________(陈述本人的性格优势). For one thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长一). For another thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长二).
Please contact me at ___________(你的联系方式一：电话号码). Or e-mail me at ___________(你的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址).
I am looking forward to your early reply .
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua


2019年新课标全国卷I
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意:：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
Dear sir or madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.



假定你是李华，你校的外籍交换生Henry给你发了一封邮件，想让你为他推荐一本词典用来学习汉语，请你用英语给他回复。内容包括：
1．词典名称；
2．推荐理由；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Henry，
Pleased to know your passion for learning Chinese，________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[参考范文]
Dear_Henry，
Pleased_to_know_your_passion_for_learning_Chinese,_I'm writing to recommend Xinhua Dictionary to you. As a native speaker, I believe it is a helpful reference book, especially for the beginners.
Firstly, it's one of the most widely used dictionaries in China, not only for its wide range of vocabulary but also for its precise explanation of each word. Besides, its reasonable price is an appealing factor undoubtedly.
I hope my suggestion is helpful and wish you great progress in learning Chinese.
Yours，
Li_Hua




过关检测

1．（2023·河南·校联考模拟预测）假定你李华，当你在参观美术馆或者博物馆时，看到很多人没有驻足观看，用心欣赏，而主要用手机拍摄。就此情况你打算给某英文报编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.说明情况;
2.提出建议;
3.你的感想。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear editor,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
Nowadays, I find that some people who enter museums or galleries mainly use their mobile phones to take pictures of the artworks. They don’t intend to stay for long to watch and appreciate them with their hearts or in a thoughtful way. With the digital age coming, it is a common phenomenon. Thus, I propose people take more time to enjoy the works of art with their eyes and hearts instead of taking more time to photograph them.
In my opinion, not only can appreciating artworks attentively let us know the ideas and values they convey, but also it can improve our aesthetic taste and enrich our spiritual world.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你李华，当你在参观美术馆或者博物馆时，看到很多人没有驻足观看，用心欣赏，而主要用手机拍摄。就此情况你打算给某英文报编辑写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
拍照：take pictures→take photos
欣赏：enjoy→admire
专注地：attentively→mindfully
打算：intend to→plan to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the digital age coming, it is a common phenomenon.
拓展句：Since the digital age is coming, it is a common phenomenon.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Nowadays, I find that some people who enter museums or galleries mainly use their mobile phones to take pictures of the artworks. (运用了that宾语从句)
[高分句型2] With the digital age coming, it is a common phenomenon. (运用了with的复合结构)
2．（2023·广西南宁·南宁二中校考模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信就下周三要参加孔子学院(the Confucius Institute)的面试征询你的意见。请你写封回信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 提出建议；(至少2条）  
3. 表示祝愿。
注意: 1.词数80左右;     
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Glad to receive your letter asking me for some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for this coming Wednesday. I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for.
It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius, which helps to better understand traditional Chinese cultures. It would also be beneficial to learn a few Chinese greetings. Additionally, wearing Han-style clothing will make you stand out among the candidates and impress the interviewers greatly.
I do hope my proposal could be practical. Wish you good luck!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，给予下周三参加面试的英国朋友Peter一些。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：建议信
时态：根据提示，时态应以一般现在时为主兼用一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表达目的
      2.提出建议
      1）了解孔子。（Understanding Confucius）
      2）汉语交流。（Chinese communication）
      3) 汉式服装。（Han-style clothing）
      3. 表达祝愿。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组和句式）
some advice on the interview; remind you of what to prepare for; read some books about Confucius; understand traditional Chinese cultures; learn a few Chinese greetings; wearing Han-style clothing; Wish you good luck!
第三步：连词成句
1. I am glad to tell you some advice on the interview for the Confucius Institute scheduled for this coming Wednesday.
2. I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for.
3. It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius
4. You’d better learn a few Chinese greetings.
5. It’s good for you to wear Han-style clothing
6. I hope my proposal could be practical.
7. Wish you good luck!
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡。
第五步：润色修改
最后，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较为高级语言，如：词汇traditional; beneficial; stand out; impress; proposal; practical等等。句子I’m writing to remind you of what to prepare for（疑问词+动词不定式）；It would be wise of you to read some books about Confucius, which helps to better understand traditional Chinese cultures.（非限制性定语从句）等等。全文中没有中式英语的句式，也没有滥用一些作文套句，英语运用能力较高。文章思路清晰、简明扼要、层次分明。
3．（2023·全国·校联考三模）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Daniel发来邮件，说他们学校正在组织参加海外游学活动，希望征求你的建议。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示支持；
2. 列举好处；
3. 提出希望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：海外游学 an overseas study tour
Dear Daniel,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Daniel,
I’m glad to hear from you and know that you have a chance to go on an overseas study tour. It is really a good opportunity to learn about the world through travelling.
First of all, when travelling abroad, you can learn a lot of different things that you have never experienced, which can help you expand horizons and gain global perspectives. Besides, travelling with others requires you to deal with others in a group, which can help develop your cooperative spirit. Additionally, it can develop your problem-solving ability when you meet with difficulties.
In a word, I hope you can join in and benefit from it.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复朋友Daniel征求是否参加海外游学活动建议的邮件，需表示支持，列举游学的好处，并提出恳切的希望。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
首先：first of all→in the first place
获得：gain→obtain/attain
此外：besides→what’s more/in addition
要求：require→demand/call for
培养：develop→cultivate/foster
遇到：meet with→encounter/be confronted with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It is really a good opportunity to learn about the world through travelling.
拓展句：There is no doubt that it is really a good opportunity to learn about the world through travelling.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m glad to hear from you and know that you have a chance to go on an overseas study tour. (运用了连接词that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First of all, when travelling abroad, you can learn a lot of different things that you have never experienced, which can help you expand horizons and gain global perspectives. (运用了关系代词that引导限制性定语从句、关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Besides, travelling with others requires you to deal with others in a group, which can help develop your cooperative spirit. (运用了动名词短语travelling…作主语、关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．（2023·全国·模拟预测）假定你是李华，酷爱自行车旅行。你校交换生Terry打算周末进行环湖自行车旅行，向你征求意见。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Terry,
Learning that you plan to take a cycling trip around the lake this weekend, I am writing to share some practical advice with you.
In the first place, choose a route with little or no traffic, which will reduce travel pressure, making cycling trip an easy job. Besides, it is wise of you to wear suitable cycling clothes and bicycle helmet. Last but not least, there is no doubt that it’s a good idea to prepare enough food and water, which will meet the supply of nutrients during cycling.
I wish you will have a pleasant journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校交换生Terry打算周末进行环湖自行车旅行，向你征求意见这一情况，给他写一封邮件提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
实用的：practical→pragmatic
建议：advice → suggestion
此外：Besides→ What’s more
足够的：enough→adequate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning that you plan to take a cycling trip around the lake this weekend, I am writing to share some practical advice with you.
拓展句：Because I learn that you plan to take a cycling trip around the lake this weekend, I am writing to share some practical advice with you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Last but not least, there is no doubt that it’s a good idea to prepare enough food and water, which will meet the supply of nutrients during cycling.（运用了that引导同位语从句，不定式短语作主语，which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, it is wise of you to wear suitable cycling clothes and bicycle helmet.（运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式to do作真正的宾语。）
5．（2023·全国·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件，说居家上网课时注意力难以集中，她担心成绩落后，因此向你求助。请你回复她， 内容包括：
1. 安慰；
2. 建议；
3. 祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mary,
Terribly sorry to learn that you have trouble in studying online. Don’t worry about your falling behind. Here are my suggestions.
How about tidying up your desk, which will keep you away from all the distractions. What’s more, turn off all the apps that will disturb you. Last but not least, it is of importance for you to engage yourself in the class actively like sharing your views and discussing problems because it leaves you no room for being absent-minded.
Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you. Best wishes for your improvement.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件，说居家上网课时注意力难以集中，她担心成绩落后，因此向你求助。请你回复她， 内容包括：1.安慰；2.建议；3.祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知：learn→ know
建议：suggestion → advice
此外：what’s more→besides
参加：engage in→ participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you.
拓展句：I hope that these proposals will be of some help to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】How about tidying up your desk, which will keep you away from all the distractions. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Last but not least, it is of importance for you to engage yourself in the class actively like sharing your views and discussing problems because it leaves you no room for being absent-minded.（运用了动名词作宾语）
6．（2023·全国·模拟预测）假定你是李华，下周你校将与某国际学校开展线上文化交流会，现公开招募英文主持人。请你用英文给负责人Mr. White写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 申请理由；
2. 个人优势；
3. 期待回复。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. White,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. White,
I am writing to apply for the position of English host for the online cultural exchange event between our school and the international school.
As a bilingual student with over 10 years of English learning experience, I possess excellent communication skills. Moreover, I have hosted various school events and competitions, which have honed my presentation and public speaking skills. I am eager to contribute to the success of the event and to learn from students of different cultural backgrounds.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于申请信。学校将与某国际学校开展线上文化交流会，现公开招募英文主持人，要求考生给负责人Mr. White写一封申请信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
岗位，职位：position → post
此外：moreover → besides/in addition

比赛：competition→ contest
盼望，渴望要做……：be eager to → long for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a bilingual student with over 10 years of English learning experience, I possess excellent communication skills.
拓展句：Since I’m a bilingual student with over 10 years of English learning experience, I possess excellent communication skills.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am writing to apply for the position of English host for the online cultural exchange event between our school and the international school. (运用了动词不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2]Moreover, I have hosted various school events and competitions, which have honed my presentation and public speaking skills. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
7．（2023·全国·一模）假设你是中学生李华，在英国学习，担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。近期，校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知，参加活动会有一个摊位进行宣传，请写一封邮件申请一个摊位。内容包括：
1.你的摊位名称：中国茶艺展；
2.具体活动安排。
参考词汇：摊位 booth
注意：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, president of China language and Culture Society. I am glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held soon. I am writing to apply for a booth.
The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and its benefits. Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life. Besides students visiting our booth will enjoy drinking various Chinese tea.
I would appreciate it if you can take my application into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。学校将举办“国际文化节”，要求考生给学生会写信申请一个摊位对中国传统文化进行宣传。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心的：glad→delighted
种类：kind→sort
被认为是：be considered as→be regarded as
考虑：take...into account→take...into consideration
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句：Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.
拓展句： Considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting, Chinese has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held soon. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and its benefits.（运用了where引导的非限定性定语从句）
8．（2023·河南濮阳·统考一模）假定你是李华，你班交换生Mark对河南的民俗文化很感兴趣，希望你给他推荐一个地方。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐地方并说明理由；
2．表示愿意帮助。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mark,
    Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
    The reasons are as follows. Shaolin Temple is probably the most famous temple in China, not only because of its long history and its role in Chinese Buddhism, Shaolin Temple Pagoda, but also because of its martial arts or Wushu.
    Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like.
                                                                                                                                                  Yours,
                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Mark写封邮件，给他推荐一个了解河南民俗文化的地方。
【详解】1.词汇积累
可能：probably→possibly
著名的：famous→well-known
热衷于：be keen on→be enthusiastic about
亲自：in person→in the flesh
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou.
拓展句：I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou,as I know that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person, I’m writing to recommend Shaolin Temple in Zhengzhou. (运用了现在分词作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Looking forward to meeting you in Henan and I would like to be your guide if you like. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)