2024年高考英语一轮复习考点精讲精练（全国通用）第48讲书面表达建议信邀请信和申请信（核心考点精讲练）（Word版附解析）

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专题48 书面表达建议信、邀请信和申请信（核心考点精讲练）
建议信


一、 必备词汇和万能句式
必备词汇
1.gve/offer sb. some advice(on) 给某人提建议
2.ask sb. for advice 向某人征求意见
3.as follows 如下
4.in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view  在我看来
5.find..…helpful/useful/beneficial 认为……有用
6.take part in/participate in... 参加
7.follow/take/adopt one's advice 采纳某人的建议
8.take sth. into account/consideration  把……考虑在内
9.with regard to 关于；就
10. put forward 提出
11.in this regard/in this respect 在这点上/在这方面
12.share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事
13.with time going on  随着时间的推移
14. Be faced with 面临
15.take sth. seriously 重视；认真对待
必备词汇句型
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）.
我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。
4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。
5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。
6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。
第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因
套语：
(1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
(2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
(3) 下午，我们会一起……
During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
(4) 记得带上水和午餐。
Remember to take water and lunch with you.
(5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club.
(6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。
I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
(7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
(8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
第三部分：提出建议
套语：
我建议……
I’d like to suggest that…
May I suggest that…?
In my opinion…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
I am writing to advise…
If I were you, I would…
第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复
套语：
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).
我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。
3. Best wishes!
（给你）最美好的祝愿！
4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement.
无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。
5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。
6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。
二、 写作模板
模板①
Dear________,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here.
In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容).
I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with your________________(祝愿).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear_______,
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).
Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________.
(可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下)
As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心).
I hope ____________(表达愿望)。
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua



(2018年全国卷I) 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件问你询问有关习俗，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 到达时间；
2. 合适的礼物；
3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
试题分析
近几年新课标全国Ⅰ卷的书面表达一直很稳定。形式上看为提纲类书信体作文，内容上依然为彰显中国传统文化突出中国传统价值观。今年作文考题与2017 年考题的汉语提示内容有相同点，即既注重对时间表达的考查，又突出了中国元素之礼仪之邦涵盖的礼尚往来与餐桌礼仪。本题也具有以往试卷的半开放式的命题特点，这就要求我们适当地增加细节，以使文章内容充实、行文连贯。需要注意的是，本文是一封回信，考生内容上要兼顾这些细节，才能把分数拿到更高。在书信体告知中，一般会使用第三人称和第二人称交替进行写作，时态应该以一般现在时为主。
One possible version,
Dear Terry,
I’m glad to hear you will pay a visit to your Chinese friend and inquire some Chinese traditional customs. I’d love to introduce some to you.
First, being on time is one of the most important for Chinese. So I suggest you arriving five to ten minutes earlier. In addition, some suitable gifts such as fruits or flowers should be chosen. However, an umbrella as a gift is considered to bring bad luck to the receiver. Remember to avoid it. Finally, you should pay special attention to Chinese table manners. For example, you can’t take up your chopsticks until the host, especially the elders do.
Wish you a good time with your Chinese friends.
Yours
Lihua

邀请信


一、 必备词汇和万能句式
必备词汇
　1. 邀请 invite/ invitation
　　2. 做演讲 make/deliver a speech
　　3. 评委 judge
　　4. 感激 appreciate (vi. )/ be grateful
　　5. 荣幸 honor (v./n.)
　　6. 欢迎 welcome (v./n./adj.)
　　7. 接受邀请 accept sb’s invitation
　　8.代表学校 on behalf of our school
　　9. 我想邀请你做... I’d like to invite you to...
　　10. 举办活动的目的是... The purpose of the activity is to
　　11. 活动的细节有... Here are some details about the activity...
　　12.如果……我将感到荣幸 It’s my honor if...
　　13.欢迎你参加 You are welcome to...
必备句型
【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明活动，并邀请对方。
1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School，the president of the Student Union.
我是来自育文学校的王明，学生会主席。
2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.
我们学校有一场英语演讲比赛将在8月6号举行。学科&网
3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.
周日，在我的花园里会举行一场聚会。
4. I’d like to invite you to judge it.
我想邀请你做它的裁判。
5. I’m writing to invite you to...
我写信是邀请你……
6. I wonder if you can come to...
我想知道你是否能来……
7. We sincerely hope you can attend it.
我们真诚希望你能够参加。
8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to...
我很荣幸的邀请你……
9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm?
很遗憾你不久就要回美国了。所以，这周六，在阳光俱乐部我们会为你举行一个欢送会。下午六点你能来吗？
【篇中句】介绍活动具体内容，并说明受邀人参加理由。
1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。
2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。
3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
下午，我们会一起……
4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.
记得带上水和午餐。
5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
顺便说一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。
6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
我知道你的母语是英语，还是一个英语老师。我，代表我们学校，真诚的邀请你来比赛现场。
7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。
8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。
【篇尾句】期待对方接受邀请，并期待对方尽快回复。
1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.
那期间你有空吗？请方便时尽快给我打电话1234567。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?
请尽快告诉我你能否接受我的邀请好吗？
3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来，我们会非常荣幸。
4. We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着你的到来。
5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待着尽早见到你。
二、写作模板
模板①
Dear________,
________(开门见山地点、活动)，It would be pleasant to have you here(表达邀请愿望). Will you give me the pleasure of your company(正式发出邀请)？
During the party/conference, we will have a lots of activities you will be interested in (开始介绍活动内容). First, __________(介绍举行的活动一). Second, _________(介绍举行的活动二). I know/believe you be very interested in _________(引出受邀请人参加的理由). First/For one thing________(希望受邀人参加的理由一)，Second/For another__________(希望受邀人参加的理由二)。 The party/conference would not be complete without you(总结受邀人参加的必要性).
The party/conference will begin at ________(提出活动的地点). It is possible for us to meet at ________(提出具体约定时间). We do hope you can come ________(再次发出邀请).
Yours
Li Hua
模板②
Dear________,
There will be a________(内容) at/in________(地点) on________(时间). We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________(具体时间). This will be followed by a________(进一步的安排). At ________________(时间), we will have ________________________(另一个安排).
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before_________________________(通知你的最后期限).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

2019·全国卷III假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version,
Dear Allen,
I’m Li Hua. Having known that you like music from our school paper, I am writing to sincerely invite you to join the school music festival to be held on July 26.2019,which is aimed at improving our abilities to appreciate beauty.
Come and join us. I hope you can become a member of our school music band. Then you can sing an English song with us. Definitely, you can take part in other musical activities. You can also watch a variety of colorful performances. Besides, you can attend a lecture about music by a famous musician around 3-5 pm. I think we can have a good time!
I'm looking forward to your reply soon. (120 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
申请信

【写作方法】
1. 首段：
a. 自我介绍；
b. 申请原因；
c. 说明写信目的。
2.主体：
a. 详述有关背景资料：资历、教育经历、工作经历、兴趣爱好；
b. 询问有关学校、课程等具体内容。
3.尾段：
a. 强调上述材料的重要性；
b. 希望尽快得到答复；
c. 要求手册及申请表；
d. 表示感谢。
【写作流程图】
说明写信目的

介绍自我(包括：学历、工作简历、在学校或工作单位的表现)

说明申请该职位或学校的原因

恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
(1) 兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。
I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in …
(2) 见……上刊登的贵公司广告，我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。
In reply to your advertisement in …, I beg to apply for the post of … in your company.
(3) 看到贵公司在报上招聘……的广告，我马上感到这正是我这段时间所要寻找的工作，并且我能胜任。
Immediately I saw your advertisement in the paper for …I felt it was just the kind of post for which I have the qualifications and for which I have been looking for some time.
(4) 我想申请入贵校学习。
I would like to apply for admission to your college.
(5) 我想在贵校……系继续深造。
I would like to further my studies in …Department of your university.
第二部分：介绍详情
套语：
(1) 我的专业是……，我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
My major is…, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.
(2) ……年，我出生于……，毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作，因此积累了该领域丰富的经验。
Born in …in…, I graduated from…University majoring in …I have been working in …since my graduation, and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field.
(3) 毕业后，我先担任……，随后担任……，现任职于……
Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was …and currently I am working for/in …
(4) 我现在就读于北京第二外国语学院英语专业，即将毕业。
I am now studying at Beijing Second Foreign Language Institute and will soon be graduated as an English major.
第三部分：说明申请该职位或学校的原因
套语：
(1) 贵公司目前做的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。
The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me.
(2) 我认为我具备了报上刊登的贵公司……一职所要求的必要条件和经验。
I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position of …advertised in the newspaper.
(3) 受我所学课程的影响，我对饭店、酒店管理产生了浓厚的兴趣。
Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I have developed a special interest in Restaurant and Hotel Management.
第四部分：恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复
套语：
(1) 如能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
Your early response will be much appreciated.
(2) 希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。
I hope you will kindly send me an application form.
(3) 如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感激。
I would greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms and any instructions you may be so kind as to give me regarding my possible admission.
(4) 希望同意面试，届时我可以更详细地说明我的技能。
I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can explain my qualifications more fully.
(5) 我将乐意在您方便时接受面试，届时我将进一步介绍自己。
I should be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further details concerning myself.
【写作佳句】
【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明信息来源，并提出申请。
1. I’m Li Hua, from Class One, Senior Two.
我是李华，来自高二一班。
2. I have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company.
我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书。
3. I read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.
我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。
4. I am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor（家庭教师/助教）in the newspaper.
我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。
5. I am writing to apply for the summer camp in your school.
我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。
6. I am writing to tell you that I’m suitable for the job you are advertising.
我写信是想告诉你，我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。
7. I am writing to inquire about the possibility of the job.
我写信是询问（我得到）这份工作的可能性。
8. I am writing to join the program.
我写信是想加入这个项目。
9. I would like to apply for it during the summer vacation.
我想要暑假申请它。
【篇中句】突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由。
1. I think I’m qualified for the position. 
我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。
2. In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills.
首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。
3. What’s more, I am well acquainted with the western culture.（be acquainted with 熟悉）
而且，我非常熟悉西方文化。
4. Last but not the least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life.
最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。
5. I think it’s of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends.
我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。
6. I am sure I can do my best in the job.
我保证在工作中会尽最大努力。
7. That’s why I am applying for the position.
那就是我申请这个职位的原因。
8. I hope I can join you. 
我希望我能够加入你们。
【篇尾句】请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。
1. I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.
如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。
2. I hope you can offer me the opportunity.
我希望你能提供给我这个机会。
3. I hope I can be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。
4. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189....
如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189....
5. I am looking forward to your early reply.
期待你的早日恢复。
6. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
期待早日收到你的来信。
【写作模板】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m _________(简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, _________(表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it’s a good opportunity for me to _____________(应聘的原因). Therefore I recommend myself to without hesitation.
I ___________(陈述本人的性格优势). For one thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长一). For another thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长二).
Please contact me at ___________(你的联系方式一：电话号码). Or e-mail me at ___________(你的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址).
I am looking forward to your early reply .
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua

2019年新课标全国卷I
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意:：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【试题趋势】
今年全国卷一的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信，仍然属于书信应用文。试题要求考生给伦敦的一家将举办中国画展览的美术馆写信，申请当一名志愿者。本篇书面表达体现了传播中国传统文化与中外文化交流。与2018年及2017年高考书面表达所考查的内容比较类似。2018年是新西兰人来中国人家做客，2017年是给外国人上汉语课讲唐诗，都融入了对中国传统文化的宣传，树立文化自信和民族自豪感。同时，今年的考题还融入了美育知识，引导学生关注和提高审美情趣。正如我们去年对2019年试题趋势的分析和预测一样，掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识势在必行。在备考时，要集中看一些与日常生活和传统文化相关的话题，如文学艺术、风土人情、社交礼仪、饮食、体育运动、语言学习等，按照话题网络化复习，效果会更佳。
试题分析：
书面表达旨在考查考生的英语写作能力，评价其能否运用相关常识和语言知识进行有效的文字表达，完成特定的交际任务。今年的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信。题目的内容要点设计比较灵活，难度与往年大致相当。
写作的基本要求是切题、完整、准确、连贯。作文要切题，考生要认真审题，精准把握主旨，确保内容围绕主题展开；内容要完整，短文要覆盖各内容要点，无遗漏地完成交际任务；表达要准确，语言运用应贴切、得体，能有力支撑交际目的的顺利实现；行文要连贯，各要点间应关系紧密，脉络清晰。
【写作指导】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3.要求从写信目的、个人优势和能做的事情这三个方面展开写作。考生在写作时要做到层次分明，应着重掌握个人优势的常用表达，如I’m good at …；I have the ability to …；I’m experienced in …等等。从语言风格来讲，短文应该是正式的形式，应运用得体的语气及礼貌用语或结构等。
【范文】
Dear sir or madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London during the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners. Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.


Writing 1
（2022·河南·模拟预测）假定你是某国际学校高中生李华，最近你发现你校图书馆阅览室存在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象，请用英语给馆长Mr.Smith写一封信。要点如下：
1.说明写信的目的；
2.反映存在问题并提出合理的建议；
注意：1.词数100字左右；
2.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am Li Hua, a high school student.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to draw your attention to the improper behaviors among students in the reading room of the school library: making too much noise and littering.
As you know, it is difficult for readers to focus while some students are talking to each other or making phone calls. Besides, a noisy and dirty environment is not only bad for our health but also has a negative effect on our studying.
Therefore, in my opinion, some measures should be taken to solve these problem. First, put up some signs that forbid such improper behaviors. Second, ask all the students to pick up their rubbish when they leave.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是某国际学校高中生李华，最近你发现你校图书馆阅览室存在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象，请用英语给馆长Mr.Smith写一封信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
采取措施做某事：take measures to do sth→ take action to do sth
解决：solve→ settle
禁止：forbid→ ban
众所周知：as is known→ it is known that
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：Therefore, in my opinion, some measures should be taken to solve these problem..
拓展句：Therefore, as far as I am concerned, some measures should be taken to solve these problem. .
【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, it is difficult for readers to focus while some students are talking to each other or making phone calls.（as引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Second, ask all the students to pick up their rubbish when they leave.（when引导的时间状语从句）
Writing 2
（2022·上海长宁·二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，最近在学校英语报“Advice Column”中看到一则启示，关于征询同学们“提高在线学习有效性”的建议。请给该报的编辑写一封邮件，内容须包括：
1）你的建议
2）你的理由
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear editor:
I'm WangLei, a senior 3 student of Mingqi middle school.   Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper and it asked students for suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning. I’m writing to give my advice.
First of all, you should find a quiet room and put your phone outside the room. The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study. What’s more, you should communicate with teachers and students actively in the discussion boards. By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.
I hope my suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.
                            Yours,
                           WangLei

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语报的编辑写邮件，对于“提高在线学习有效性”提出建议，并且给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
集中精力：concentrate on→focus on
此外：what's more→besides
交流：communicate→exchange
2.句式拓展
并列句变成复合句
原句： Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper and it asked students for suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning.
拓展句： Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper, which asked students for suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study.(that引导表语从句)
【高分句型2】By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.(not only…but also…引导的并列句）
Writing 3
（2022·湖北·武汉市第十二中学模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【答案】Dear English radio station,
        Knowing that you will adjust the broadcast time slot, length and column, I am writing to give my suggestions.
First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students understand national events and stimulate their listening ability. Secondly, English pop songs can be played for ten minutes after school at noon, which can relieve students’ study pressure all morning. Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
Hoping my suggestions can be helpful.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见的情况，写封邮件给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestions→ advice
缓解，放松：relieve→ relax
压力：pressure→ stress
优秀的：excellent→ outstanding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
拓展句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays which are published by students can be played.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students understand national events and stimulate their listening ability.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.(运用了非谓语动词作后置定语。)

Writing 4
（2022·广东·华南师大附中三模）假设你是中学生李华，在英国学习，担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。近期，校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知，请结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加此活动。
AnnouncementThis is to inform that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on June 15th, 2022.Any student club that intends to join please send an email to Internationalculturalfestival@gmail.com by May 15th, 2022 to apply for a booth（摊位）. The name of the booth and main activities should be included in the application.
Student Union

注意：
1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Student Union,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, president of China language and Culture Society. I am glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on June 15th, 2022. I am writing to apply for a booth.
       The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and its benefits. Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life. Besides students visiting our booth will enjoy drinking various Chinese tea.
I would appreciate it if you can take my application into account. Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加国际文化节活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开心做某事：be glad to do sth→be pleased to do sth
被认为是：be considered as→be though as
高兴的：pleasant →happy
各种各样的：various→ all kinds of
2.句式拓展
原句：Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting.
拓展句：Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink ,which has a long history of planting.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and their benefits. （运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句。）
【高分句型 2】It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.（运用了through which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
Writing 5
（2022·上海奉贤·二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近你校“解忧”社团（Anxiety Relieving Club）正在招新，旨在帮助同学们排忧减压。你很想成为其中一员，请给社长写封申请信，内容须包括：
1. 你想加入该社团的理由；
2. 你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress. As a warm-hearted and outgoing boy, I am eager to become a member of it.
At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure. Thanks to the help of teachers and classmates, I came out of the haze, so I have the experience of helping other students reduce pressure. I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key. It’s a good choice to let them join study groups and sports activities.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                                                                                                                               Yours,
                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为学校“解忧”社团的一员，信中介绍你想加入该社团的理由和你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
创立：set up→establish
害羞的：shy→self-conscious
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure.
拓展句：At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure, which made me sad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)

Writing 6
（2022·四川凉山·三模）假定你是李华。你校要举办一年一度的戏剧节，想邀请外教Rebecca观看你班彩排并提出建议，请你用英语给她写封100字左右的邮件，内容包括如下：
1. 戏剧节日期和要求。
2. 你班准备的节目。
3. 期待建议。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Rebecca,
I’m writing to inform you that the annual “Drama Festival” is coming next month. It is required that each class prepares one performance, adapted from some famous China’s traditional dramas, lasting for no more than 30 minutes.
Excited and full of eagerness, our classmates will participate in our drama named “Snow in Midsummer”, which is based on a China’s traditional drama. A woman “Dou’e” was wronged being a murderer. But we have some puzzles on stage language and idiomatic English expressions. We sincerely invite you to watch our rehearsal at 4:00 p.m. next Monday in our classroom. We badly need your practical advice.
Looking forward to your guidance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。你校要举办一年一度的戏剧节，想邀请外教Rebecca观看你班彩排并提出建议，请你用英语给她写封100字左右的邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→celebrated
参加：participate in→take part in
诚恳地：sincerely→cordially
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
简单句：But we have some puzzles on stage language and idiomatic English expressions.
复合句：But we have some puzzles on stage language and idiomatic English expressions，which annoyed us.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is required that each class prepares one performance, adapted from some famous China’s traditional dramas, lasting for no more than 30 minutes.（运用了that引导主语从句，过去分词作状语，现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】Excited and full of eagerness, our classmates will participate in our drama named “Snow in Midsummer”, which is based on a China’s traditional drama.（运用了形容词短语作伴随状语，which引导非限制性定语从句）
Writing 7
（2022·贵州贵阳·三模）假如你是李华，将给你校的英国交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加下周的一次社团活动。要点如下：
1. 时间和内容；
2. 活动安排；
3. 需要做的准备。
注意：
1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
4. 参考词汇：社团club
Dear Tom,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
Since you’re interested in playing Pingpang, I sincerely invite you to take part in the activity of Pingpang club. It will be held in the Pingpang stadium at 2:00 next Saturday afternoon. A skillful PE teacher, Mr. Wang, in our school will be the host this time.
This lesson is about the basic skills of playing Pingpang. Firstly, Mr. Wang will give us a lecture about different skills on playing it. Then he will watch us play it and give directions. This will certainly help us improve our skills.
Please put on your sport suits, bring your bat and come to the stadium on time. We definitely will have a good time together
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，将给你校的英国交换生Tom写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加下周的一次社团活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→participate in
熟练的：skillful→experienced
发表演讲：give a lecture→deliver a lecture
提高：improve→promote
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A skillful PE teacher, Mr. Wang, in our school will be the host this time.
拓展句：Mr. Wang, who is a skillful PE teacher in our school, will be the host this time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you’re interested in playing Pingpang, I sincerely invite you to take part in the activity of Pingpang club. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, Mr. Wang will give us a lecture about different skills on playing it. (运用了动名词作宾语)
Writing 8
（2022·湖北·恩施市第一中学模拟预测）假定你是南山外国语学校学生英语俱乐部的负责人李华，请写一封信，邀请你校外教格林女士就如何提高英语写作能力，为全校英语爱好者作一场报告。要点如下：
1.发出邀请；
2.表明讲座的意义；
3.表达期盼。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. Green,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ms. Green,
My name is Li Hua, the head of the students’ English club of Nanshan Foreign Language School. We club members are interested in learning how to improve writing skills in English. I have been impressed with some ideas about how to improve writing from the books you recommended. Since you are an expert in teaching writing, I would like to invite you to deliver a special lecture about how to improve writing skills in English. I am sure the lecture will help us English learners make great progress. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教格林女士写封信，邀请她就如何提高英语写作能力，为全校英语爱好者作一场报告。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
学习：learn→study
因为：since→because
肯定的：sure→certain
对……感兴趣：be interested in→show interest in
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Hua, the head of the students’ English club of Nanshan Foreign Language School.
拓展句：My name is Li Hua, who is the head of the students’ English club of Nanshan Foreign Language School.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I have been impressed with some ideas about how to improve writing from the books you recommended. (运用了that引导的定语从句，省略了that)
[高分句型2] Since you are an expert in teaching writing, I would like to invite you to deliver a special lecture about how to improve writing skills in English. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句)



Writing 1
（2019·天津·高考真题）假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:   
⑴你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
⑵选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
⑶希望从中有何收获。
注意：
⑴词数不少于100；
⑵可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
⑶开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【答案】Dear Chris,
   I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the lecture. Looking forward to your early reply.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【详解】1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：opportunity→chance
采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
Writing 2
（2021·北京·高考真题）【北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00. Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
【详解】1.词汇积累
通知：tell→inform
除此之外：in addition→besides
适合：fit→suit
有空的：available→free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers together.
拓展句：In addition, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park next Saturday, when we can go to see the flowers together.
Writing 3
（2019·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封申请信，属于书信应用文。
【详解】1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在时。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3. 关键词和句子
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
Writing 4
（2010·天津·高考真题）第二节：书面表达
假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信：
● 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生级社会的益处等）
●个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等）
●你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等）
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
晨曦希望小学 Chenxi Hope School
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two.
_______________________________________________________________________________­_______________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am Li Hua from Class One，Senior Two．As far as I am concerned，I believe to teach English for pupils from Chenxi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutors，which thus will result in substantial social benefits．
       I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach，because I have good character，and I'm independent in life and proficient in English．That's why I apply for the position．I hope I can join the instructive activity．
       My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening，speaking，reading and writing．What's more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language，creating a good learning environment．I hope you can offer the opportunity．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】本文是书信类作文。
【详解】本文要求用英语给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。重要短语：As far as I am concerned （据我所知），result in （导致），be qualified for （有资格，合格），be independent （独立），instructive（有教育意义），stimulate interests in（激发…的兴趣）等
Writing 5
（2018·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
（1） 口语能力：
（2） 相关经验；
（3） 应聘目的。
注意：
（1） 词数80左右；
（2） 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封申请信。
第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子：I’m writing to apply for…，a good command of English，communicate with，get along with等。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，本文时态应以现在时为主，人称为第一人称。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

Writing 6
（2022·全国·高考真题）假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students. Now, when having trouble in learning English well, plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it. As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot. If you are available on this Sunday, I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for your coming. I’d appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封邮件邀请你的外教Caroline来你校的广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：attend→participate in
建立：establish→set up
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty of→a lot of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As our distinguished foreign language teacher, your aid can help us a lot.
拓展句：You are our distinguished foreign language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot.
Writing 7
（2020·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:
1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear George,
        I'm writing to invite you to join us in the “Chinese speech contest for foreigners” to be held in our school. The activity is scheduled at 8:00 a.m. on January 20th in the lecture hall.
        The theme of the speech contest is “differences between eastern and western customs”, through which the foreign students are bound to gain a better understanding of Chinese splendid traditional culture and meanwhile strengthen their love of China.
        Immensely fascinated by its mysterious culture and age-old history, you can, undoubtedly give us a wonderful and impressive performance. You are expected to sign up for the contest at www. Chinesespeechcontestforforeigners.com. I'd appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
                                                                             Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。
第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组） ：Chinese speech contest（中文演讲比赛）；be scheduled（安排）；be bound to（必然）；gain a better understanding of（更好地了解）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
Writing 8
（2019·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括：
1. 时间；
2. 活动安排；
3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【分析】今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。
第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。
第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
Writing 9
（2018·浙江·高考真题）假定你是李华，得知外教Mr. Hall今年寒假不回国，想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信，内容包括：
1.时间
2.一同过节的家人
3.活动
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Mr. Hall,
       I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19. It’s traditionally a time for family reunion, so my parents and my brother will all be there. We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner. We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. You may even get a gift from my parents. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
Best wishes
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇书信类作文。要求给外教Mr. Hall写封信，邀请他到你家过春节。
【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：
1. 介绍同学们的听说训练情况；
2. 希望提供更有效的学习方法;
3. 询问对方的意向。
第二步:列提纲
celebrate the Spring Festival， have a big dinner，make dumplings，able to come，pick up
第三步：连词成句1. I’m writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January19.
2. We’ll make dumplings together and have a big dinner.
3. We’ll also play card games and watch the Spring Festival Gala onTV.
4. If you’re able to come, I’ll go and pick you up at your place.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
表因果关系：so
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
Writing 10
（2017·全国·高考真题）假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
球队活动；
报名方式及截止日期。
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Eric，
I was informed that our school Ping­pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping­pong.
As you know, playing ping­pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.
Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】由要点可知，邮件是邀请对方报名参加乒乓球队，所以主体时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主(介绍乒乓球运动的好处)，一、二人称为辅。在写作时要注意邀请信的交际性，比如：开篇点明写信目的，最后期待回复。同时还要注意根据提示内容进行合理发挥。

Writing 11
（2019·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 交通出行；
2. 必备衣物。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that you’re coming to tour in China.
I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I’ll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.
Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行；2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。