2024届高考英语一轮复习-满分技法3　24个续写句式——让续写最吸睛课件

这是一份2024届高考英语一轮复习-满分技法3　24个续写句式——让续写最吸睛课件，共52页。
第1组　无“灵”主语句，写“情”最细腻[句式1]a burst/wave/surge/rush/ripple/sense/feeling f＋表情感状态的名词＋有灵动词＋sb.表“某人感到……”或“一阵/一种……向某人袭来”[微解]用于该句式的有灵动词(短语)有：seize/take hld f “抓住；攫住”，get the better f/defeat “击垮”，sweep/fld/rush ver “袭来”，run thrugh/pass thrugh “掠过”，tear pieces “把……撕碎”，creep upn/n “袭来”，cme ver “影响”，fail “使失望；有负于”，escape “被忘掉；被忽视”，chke “使哽咽”，desert “背离”等。
[佳句]①Suffering and despair defeated me，and I fell sbbing n the drstep.(《简·爱》)痛苦和绝望击垮了我，我倒在门阶上哭泣。 ②(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)Mther felt a wave f pride and warmth sweep ver her.妈妈感到一阵自豪和温暖。③(2020·浙江卷)The plar bear came near.Hrrr slwly crept n/flded ver/rushed ver/swept ver us.北极熊走近了。恐惧慢慢向我们袭来。
[句式2]主语是表示身体部位或“音、容、笑”的名词＋有灵动词(短语)[微解]这类名词有：face，eye，heart，hand，finger，laughter，smile，tears，vice等； 动词(短语)有：flash “掠过”，brighten/light up “照亮”，well up “涌出”，spread acrss “浮现”，fill ...“用……装满”，clud ver “显得阴沉(恐惧、愤怒、忧愁)”等。
[佳句]①I was relieved when a bright，sweet vice interrupted us.(《简·爱》)一个清亮甜美的声音打断了我们，我松了一口气。②(2020·浙江卷)At the sight f the frightening wlf，I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.看到那只可怕的狼，我吓得喉咙发紧，两腿发软。③When she realized the little by had lied，a lk f disappintment passed ver/spread acrss/flashed/crssed her face.意识到小男孩儿说了谎时，她的脸上掠过失望的神情。
[句式3]表行为或动作的名词＋有灵动词[微解]常见的表行为或动作的名词有sight，taste，smell，thught，sense，idea，visit，arrival等。谓语是send，remind，make，leave，drive (驱使)等有灵动词。
[佳句]①The thught f ging back t Thrnfield fr an evening with Mrs Fairfax bred me.(《简·爱》)一想到要和费尔法克斯太太一起回桑菲尔德过夜，我就厌烦了。②The thught f getting lst in such darkness filled us with wrry and fear.想到可能在这样的黑暗中迷路，我们既担忧又害怕。③Many trubles visited the pr ld lady last year.这位可怜的老妇人去年遇到了许多麻烦事。
[句式4]表自然现象等的名词＋有灵动词[微解]这类名词有：fg，snw，night，earthquake等。谓语是：fall，blanket (覆盖)，cme，strike，hit，threaten 等有灵动词。
[佳句]①A strm was gathering，but we stayed there until thunder and lightning crashed.(《简·爱》)暴风雨即将来临，但我们一直待在那里，直到雷电交加。②Night fell，the wind grew strnger，and the freezing weather had driven everyne indrs.夜幕降临，风刮得更大了，由于天气寒冷，大家都躲进了室内。
[句式5]表时间和地点的名词＋有灵动词[微解]这类名词有：the twn，the fllwing year等。谓语是witness(见证)，find，see，lead t等有灵动词(短语)。
[佳句]①Dad suggested that we shuld walk alng the river，which wuld lead us t the farm huse.爸爸建议我们沿着河走，沿着河我们会来到农舍。②The fllwing year saw/witnessed the death f his mther.第二年，他的妈妈去世了。
第2组　巧用状语，写“情”更具体[句式6]表“情感”的介词短语，主＋谓[微解]常用的表情绪的“t ne's＋情感名词或in/with＋情感名词”，如with delight/anger/ terrr“高兴地/生气地/惊恐地”等介词短语置于句首，能使情感细节描写更为具体。
[佳句]①Mrs Fairfax annunced with great excitement that he was planning a huse-party at Thrnfield.(《简·爱》)费尔法克斯太太激动地宣布他打算在桑菲尔德举办家庭晚会。②(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)When their mther saw the delicius and perfect breakfast in frnt f her，she widened her eyes in surprise.当他们的妈妈看到美味完美的早餐在她面前时，她惊讶地睁大了眼睛。
[句式7]with ne's eyes full f＋(tears f＋)情感名词，主＋谓[微解]该结构作伴随状语，可使动作或对话描写更生动。
[佳句]①(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)His mther listened attentively t the children，with her eyes full f excitement and gratitude.他妈妈认真地听着孩子们说话，双眸满是兴奋和感激。②With her eyes full f tears f pride and jy，she explained that these were all hme-made and tasty.她双眸满是自豪高兴的眼泪，她解释说，这些都是自己做的，很好吃。
第3组　让阅卷老师眼前一亮的“某人想到”[句式8]idea，thught ...＋hit/struck/ccurred t＋sb.[微解]该句式也可用it作为形式主语：It suddenly hit/struck/ccurred t/dawned n sb.＋that 从句，其中 that从句是真正的主语。
[佳句]①(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)It hit/struck/ccurred t/dawned n them that they culd make breakfast fr mther t celebrate Mther's Day.他们突然想到他们可以给妈妈做早餐庆祝母亲节。②(2021·浙江卷)I was struck/hit by the thught that I shuld have my wn mney and planned hw t spend it.我突然想到我应该有自己的钱，并计划如何使用它。
[句式9]sth.crssed/flashed thrugh/sprang t/came t/ppped int/jumped ut f sb.'s mind[微解]该句式也可用it作为形式主语：It crssed/flashed thrugh/sprang t/ppped int/jumped ut f sb.'s mind ＋ that从句
[佳句]①The thught sprang t her mind that maybe she had left the dr pen when she left hme.她突然想起也许她离开家时没把门关上。②A memry f yesterday crssed her mind，and she laughed herself t death.回想起昨天的事，她笑得要死。
[句式10]ne's mind began t race/ne's mind raced 某人开始转动脑筋/某人拼命地转动脑筋[微解]race在句中意为“快速运转”。[佳句]①My mind raced as I tried t wrk ut what was happening.我拼命地转动脑筋，想要搞清楚发生了什么事儿。②My mind raced，trying t think f a place t have a picnic.我的脑子飞快地转着，努力想一个野餐的地方。
第4组　用动作链，营造画面感[句式11]主语＋动作A，动作B and 动作C/主语＋动作A，动作B，动作C and动作D[微解]该句式中连词and连接三个或三个以上的动作，构成动作链，动词的时态是一致的。
[佳句]①(2021·浙江卷)I apprached dad，prudly tk ut f my wn mney and handed it t him.我走近爸爸，骄傲地拿出我自己的钱递给他。②She drpped the list，sat dwn at the table，and ran her hands thrugh her hair.她把名单扔到一边，在桌子旁坐下，用手捋了捋头发。
[句式12]主语＋动作A and 动作B，非谓语动词[微解]该句中连词and连接两个或两个以上的动作，构成动作链。非谓语动词作状语，可置于句首或句尾。
[佳句]①Putting his ladder against the wall，he climbed and peered ver.(《秘密花园》)他把梯子靠在墙上，爬上去往外看。②Putting n his cat，he strmed ut and slammed the dr shut.他穿上外套，怒气冲冲地跑了出去，把门重重地关上。③He std up and walked t the windw，thinking hard.他站起身，走到窗前，苦思冥想。
[句式13]主句，非谓语动词＋and＋非谓语动词[微解]在该句中，两个或三个非谓语动词，构成一个动作链，描写主语具体的动作。主句部分中，谓语可以是表示情感状态的描写，非谓语动词部分可置于句首或句尾。
[佳句]①She hurried in the directin f west Lndn，pushing past peple n the pavement，and running acrss crwded streets withut lking.(《雾都孤儿》)她急匆匆地朝伦敦西部的方向赶去，推搡着人行道上来往的行人，连看也不看一眼就跑步横穿车水马龙的街道。②He patted my head，hlding my hands gently and telling me nt t wrry.他拍拍我的头，轻轻地握着我的手，告诉我不要担心。
第5组　适当修饰，精准化描写动作[句式14]形容词(短语)，主＋谓……/主＋谓……，形容词(短语)[微解]形容词(短语)在句中作状语，表人物做某个动作的原因、结果或状态，可放句首或句末，增强感染力，使描述更生动形象。
[佳句]①Exhausted，he flpped dwn int a chair.(《秘密花园》)他筋疲力尽，一屁股坐到椅子上。②(2020·浙江卷)Frtunately，we gt in the helicpter，safe and sund.幸运的是，我们安然无恙地上了直升机。
[句式15]主语＋具体动词＋副词/介词结构[微解]常用的高频副词有：cheerfully，curiusly，eagerly，excitedly，fiercely，firmly，jyfully，immediately，impatiently，restlessly，swiftly，suddenly等。如在体现动作的迅速时，可添加以下修饰语：suddenly，immediately，withut pausing，withut delay等。
[佳句]①Helen spke clearly，slwly，and ludly.(3个副词连用)海伦讲话的声音清晰、缓慢而且洪亮。 ②(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)Plitely and excitedly，he asked Mrs Meredith t teach him hw t make ppcrn.他礼貌而兴奋地请梅瑞狄斯太太教他如何做爆米花。 ③In n time，the wlf was scared away and disappeared in the distance.不一会儿，狼就被吓跑了，消失在远处。
[句式16]with＋名词/代词(＋介词)＋主谓[微解]该结构常见的有：with ne's help，with＋身体部位，如 with her pale lips “用苍白的嘴唇”，with a trembling/shaking hand “用颤抖的手”等。
[佳句]①He pened the dr with a shaking/trembling hand，then lked up and dwn the street.(《雾都孤儿》)他用颤抖的手打开了门，然后来回扫视了一下街面。②With ne hand n the bars，he fired the spray at the wlf.他一手握把，用喷雾剂喷狼。
第6组　用全部倒装句，刻画生动画面[句式17]描写人或物空间位置变化的全部倒装句：表运动方向的副词：away，ff，dwn，up，in 地点副词短语＋g/flee/run/rush/dash ...等表运动的谓语动词＋名词[微解]读后续写中，人物不可能一直在一个场景里，总会有时空变化，如：发生火灾冲进房间救人、放学后回家……在描写人或物空间位置变化时，应灵活使用这类倒装句。
[佳句]①(2021·新高考Ⅰ卷)Upstairs went the twins，carrying the breakfast they had made.双胞胎端着他们做的早餐上楼去了。②Out f the darkness came a familiar vice，which made us jyful.黑暗中传来熟悉的嗓音，使我们高兴起来。
[句式18]描写静态场景/一些写景画面的全部倒装句：表地点的副词/介词(短语)＋be/lie/stand/sit ...等静态动词＋主语[微解]这个句式可用来描写静态的场景，使读者如临其境，非常生动且有画面感。
[佳句]①In frnt f her was anther lng passage and she just managed t catch sight f the rabbit hurrying dwn it.在她的前面是另一条长长的过道，她正好看到兔子匆匆沿过道而行。②At the ft f the muntain runs a small stream lined by green trees.一条小溪从山脚下流过，溪边树木葱葱。
第7组　善用修辞，才更吸睛[句式19]明喻：A＋表“像”的词汇＋B　A像B[微解]明喻是将具有某种共同特征的两种不同事物连接起来的一种修辞手法。明喻的标志词常用like，as，as if/thugh。
[佳句]①I culd nt bear the thught f never hearing that laughter any mre.Fr me，it was like a spring f fresh water in the desert.(《小王子》)我无法忍受再也听不到那笑声了。对我来说，它就像沙漠里的一股清泉。②The bus full f passengers went slwly as a snail went.这辆满载乘客的公交车就像蜗牛爬行一样缓慢。
[句式20]明喻：A as＋adj./adv.＋as＋a(n)＋B　A像B一样……[微解]常见的as ...结构有：as busy as a bee “忙如蜜蜂”，as hungry as a wlf “饥饿如狼”，as prud as a peacck “傲如孔雀”，as brave as a lin “勇猛如狮”，as pretty as a picture “美如图画”。
[佳句]①I fund her lying n her bed; she was as lvely as a flwer and as drunk as a mnkey.(《了不起的盖茨比》)我发现她躺在床上，貌美如花，酩酊大醉。②She stepped ut her car and ran int the huse，as happy as a bird t get hme again.她下了车，跑进屋里，高兴得像只归巢的小鸟。
[句式21]暗喻：A＋be动词＋B　A是B[微解]暗喻是直接将A事物当作B事物描写，A和B事物之间的联系或相似之处是暗含的。不用like，as if等标志词，通过be 动词或动词产生联系。[佳句]①Life is an unexplred river，full f twists and turns.生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。②Yu are a peach.你真好。
[句式22]拟人：主语(表“动物/自然现象/含蓄抽象”的名词)＋用于人的谓语[微解]拟人是以物拟人，赋予动物、自然现象或含蓄抽象的概念以人类的行为特点和生命力，具体形象地表达情感，使文章更生动形象。[佳句]①With the yellw shirt dancing in the breeze，she flashed back t her happy life with Tm.黄衬衫在微风中飞舞，她又回想起她和汤姆的幸福生活。②The wind was whispering in the trees，and birds n the trees were singing a beautiful sng.风在林间低语，小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。
[句式23]夸张：数词/量词/形容词＋名词；副词＋形容词/动词[微解]运用丰富的想象，过激的词汇，如数词、量词、动词、介词短语或形容词(miserable，hrrible，splendid)或副词(extremely，awfully，terribly，perfectly，hrribly)等渲染和修饰微不足道的事情，达到夸张的效果。
[佳句]①Tm ften cmplained，and with millins f reasns.汤姆总有千千万万个理由来抱怨。②At the news，I was ver the mn/n the tp f the wrld.听到这个消息，我乐不可支。
[句式24]排比：词语/句子＋词语/句子，(and)＋词语/句子[微解]排比是把结构相同或相似、意思密切相关、语气一致的词语或句子成串排列在一起增强语势、强调内容，令文章增色。
[佳句]①N cld winter culd make him cld，and n warm summer day culd make him warm.(《圣诞颂歌》)寒冷的冬天不能使他感到寒冷，温暖的夏天也不能使他感到温暖。②The first snw came.Hw beautiful it was，falling s silently n the muntains，n the grass，and n the rfs.初雪来了。多么美啊，如此悄无声息地飘向群山，飘在草地上，落在屋顶上。
[对点训练]　按要求补全下面各句1．他拦下了车，拿着箱子跳进了车里，然后对司机说，“请到警察局去。”(并列谓语动词)He ________________，_______________________________________________，“G t the plice statin，please.”2．老人坐在夕阳下，看报纸，听收音机。(现在分词短语作伴随状语)The ld man sat under the sunset，___________________________________________．
stpped the taxi
jumped in with the suitcase and tld the driver
reading the newspaper and listening t the radi
3．当夜幕降临时，简坐在草地上，盯着广阔的天空，既害怕又饥饿。(谓语动词＋现在分词)As night was beginning t fall，Jane ________________，_______________________，frightened and hungry.4．史蒂夫听到这个令人满意的结果后，一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。(无灵主语句)After Steve learned this satisfactry result，_____________________________________ ____________________．
sat n the grass
staring at the vast sky
a sense f jy and happiness swept
ver/flded ver him
5．她快乐极了。我心中也涌起喜悦。(无灵主语句)________________________________，and a wave f jy als welled up in me.6．当他听说他的朋友出了事故时，他眉头紧锁，满脸愁容。(无灵主语句)When he heard the news f his friend's accident，___________________________________________________．7．面对周围的混乱情况，他深感绝望。(无灵主语句)He gazed at the cnfusin arund him and _____________________________________ ________________．
A wild jy seized/swept ver her
a frwn std n his face and his face cluded ver
a feeling f despair seized/verwhelmed/
swallwed him
8．她带着灿烂的笑容走到他面前。他立刻激动得热泪盈眶。(明喻)She came up t him，___________________________________．In n time his eyes were filled with warm excited tears.9．爱如风，你看不见，但你能感受到它。(明喻) _______________________;yu can't see it but yu can feel it.10．爱胜过一切，它能打败世间的任何困难。(拟人)Lve matters mre than anything，which ______________________________________．
with a smile shining like a diamnd
Lve is like the wind
can cnquer any difficulty in the wrld
11．追随你的梦想吧，宇宙会在原本只有墙的地方为你敞开大门。(拟人)Fllw yur dream and the universe __________________________________________．12．当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。(夸张)When they tld the news，I _________________________________________．
will pen drs where there are nly walls
was ver the mn/n the tp f the wrld