十年(14-23)高考英语真题分项汇编专题 26 书面表达书信类（含解析）

这是一份十年(14-23)高考英语真题分项汇编专题 26 书面表达书信类（含解析），共54页。

2023年
Writing 1
【2023▪新高考I&II卷】
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua frm Class 3. I think it’s nt a gd idea t randmly pair up students fr the spken English training after class. The reasns are as fllws.
T begin with, randmly pairing up students may lead t unbalanced language abilities within the grups. This can hinder the prgress f students as the mre advanced ne may dminate the cnversatin, leaving little rm fr the ther students t imprve. Besides, students may feel uncmfrtable r less mtivated if paired with smene wh they dn’t get alng with r have difficulty cmmunicating with.
My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners. This way, everyne can feel mre cmfrtable practicing and imprving their spken English tgether.
Thank yu fr cnsidering my suggestin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
首先：t begin with → first f all
提高：imprve → prgress
建议：suggestin → advice
选择：chse → select
2句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestin is t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
拓展句：My suggestin is that we are suppsed t grup students based n their language abilities r t let students chse their wn partners.
Writing 2
【2023年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
(1)活动形式；
(2)活动内容。
注意：(1)词数100左右；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim
Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
I think yu can carry ut this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding f “Green Beijing” thrugh getting invlved in different activities by themselves. Yu can shwcase garbage classificatin n site, plant trees and publicize sharing ecnmy, which will all fit int the theme f “Green Beijing”.
Hpefully, yu will get sme inspiratin frm my suggestins. Wish yu success.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestin→tip
提供：ffer→prvide
开展：carry ut→cnduct
主题：theme→tpic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Hearing that yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
拓展句：Since yu are planning a club activity with the theme f “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing t ffer yu my suggestins.
2022年
Writing 1
【2022新高考I&II卷】
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：
1. 节目介绍；
2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Carline,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Carline,
This is my first time that I have invited yu t attend ur prgram —Talk and Talk. It is ten years since Talk and Talk was established. This is an amazing prgram where yu can share yur ideas with students.
Nw, when having truble in learning English well, plenty f students urge t knw hw t deal with it. As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a lt. If yu are available n this Sunday, I tgether with the whle Talk and Talk staff am waiting fr yur cming.
I’d appreciate it if yu take my invitatin int cnsideratin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校广播站“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Carline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建立：establish→set up
了不起的：amazing→fabulus
帮助：aid→assistance
许多：plenty f→a lt f
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As ur distinguished freign language teacher, yur aid can help us a lt.
拓展句：Yu are ur distinguished freign language teacher, whse aid can help us a lt.
Writing 2
【2022年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．建议交流的具体内容及其原因；
2．交流时间和其他相关事项。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Jim,
Hw’s everything?
I’m writing t invite yu t give us an nline talk n English writing. Our classmates seem t be weak in rganisatin. Wuld yu please give us sme suggestins n hw t cnnect sentences lgically, hw t develp a paragraph, and hw t structure an essay?
The talk will last abut an hur, and yu can decide n a date at yur cnvenience. Please let me knw which platfrm yu’ll use. It wuld be great if we culd have a 10-minute questin and answer sessin at the end f yur talk.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份电子邮件，邀请英国好友Jim为班级做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
Writing 3
【2022年浙江1月】假定你是李华， 在“中国-爱尔兰文化节” 活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友 Chris， 现在他已回国， 请你给他 写
一封邮件， 内容包括：
1. 回忆活动经历； 2. 分享个人收获； 3. 希望保持联系。
注意：
1 . 词数 80 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
答案：
Dear Chris,
Hw are yu ding these days? It has been a year since yu came back t Ireland. I miss yu s much. I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival tw years ag. It was at that festival that yu shared s many interesting things abut yur cuntry tgether, thrugh which I learned a lt abut yur fd, culture and histry. We really enjyed urselves there. What’s far mre imprtant is that we became gd friends then. Thugh I felt a little srry that yu left China last year, I am pleased t knw yu are leading a happy life in yur hmetwn.
I hpe we can keep in tuch ften.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在文化节上结识的外国朋友写一封信叙旧。
【详解】1.词汇积累
返回：cme back t → return t
思念：miss→ yearn
分享：share → exchange
玩得开心：enjy neself→ have a gd time → have fun
开心的：pleased→ happy →delight→ cntent
过着快乐的生活：lead a happy life→ live a happy life
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句： It has been a year since yu came back t Ireland. I miss yu s much.
拓展句： It has been a year since yu came back t Ireland and I miss yu s much.
Writing 4
【2022年浙江卷6月】假定你是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验，内容包括：
1.位置与开放时间； 2.室内设施和功能。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Dear Michael,
Gd news ! Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, cnsisting f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen t us students in ur schl library.
Lcated n the third flr beside the nline reading rms, it can be accessible frm 8 am till 9 pm thrughut the weekdays. Thse rms are equipped with mdern electrnic facilities, all f which are linked t the Internet. It’s really cnvenient fr us t d sme grup prjects. Why nt ask ur grup members t g and experience it?
Early reply and we can reserve ne rm fr ur prject.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解题导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”，请你给你的留学生同学Michael写一封信，邀请他一同体验。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
由……组成：cnsist f→ be made up f
位于：be lcated n→ be situated n
与……相连接： be linked t →be cnnected t
预定：reserve→bk
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, cnsisting f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen t us students in ur schl library.
拓展句：Recently, a newly-furnished sectin, which cnsists f eight Grup Learning Rms, has been pen
2021年
Writing 1
【2021年全国甲卷】
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会，并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括：
1.阐明写信事由；
2.征求建议；
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Wrd came that ur schl is ging t hld a class meeting whse tpic is related t Chinese traditinal custms. Because this activity will be presented n the English website, I sincerely want yu t ffer me sme advice.
As far as we knw, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western cuntries. In rder t get mre clicks, yu’d better tell me which Chinese culture yu westerners prefer. What’s mre, if I want t decrate my website with sme Chinese elements, what shuld I d? Knwing yu are interested in China, I d believe yu can help me slve these puzzles.
If pssible, yu can reply t me as sn as pssible. I will take yur advice int cnsideratin. I really appreciate yur help.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2021年北京卷】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.表达歉意并说明原因；
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. I hpe the change wn’t cause yu t much truble.
Hw abut ging ut next Saturday mrning? If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at the schl gate at 9: 00. Please let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
In additin, next Saturday, there will be a flwer shw in Beihai Park. Then we can g t see the flwers tgether.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件，就因故不能赴约而致歉并建议再约。
【详解】1.词汇积累
通知：tell→infrm
麻烦：prblem→truble
怎么样：what abut→hw abut
适合：fit→suit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I shuld be available anytime next weekend.
拓展句：I shuld be available anytime next weekend s that I can g ut with yu and have a gd time.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m srry t infrm yu that I can’t g ut with yu this weekend. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been tld that I have t g and visit my sick grandfather in the cuntryside, wh was suddenly admitted t the hspital. (运用了wh引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] Please let me knw what time suits yu best.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
2020年
Writing 1
【2020·新课标Ⅲ】
假定你shi 李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1. 剧情简介；
2. 指导内容；
3. 商定时间地点。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 结束语已为你写好。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Miss Evans,
Hw is everything ging! I am writing in sincerity t ask yu a favr regarding a play we adapted accrding t the textbk.
We’d like t cmbine yur culture with urs by adapting the classic nvel The Steambat fr a shrt English play. The play is set n a big strm after midnight, n the raft dwn the river navigatin, we see a steambat that is ging t sink. We saved a scared by. Hwever, the adaptin is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dn’t want anything inapprpriate t spil the play. S wuld yu please spare sme time t review the draft script attached t this email and make necessary changes? If it is cnvenient, may I pay yu a visit at yur ffice next Tuesday t give yu mre details?
Given yur busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if yu ffer t give sme prfessinal advice. Lk frward t yur early reply. Best regards!
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于《the Steambat》改编短剧的支持。第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分总法
第一段说明写这封邮件的目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
write t；accrding t ；cmbine ； adaptin ；challenge；attached t ；cnvenient
第三步：连词成句
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
Writing 2
【2020年北京卷】
第一节
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：
1. 条件及要求；
2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hw are yu ding? I hpe everything's OK with yu.
Our schl's drama club plans t start practising. Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place. Wuld yu please recmmend ne fr us?
He r she shuld be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in bth directing and teaching.
Thank yu fr yur help. Please take care f yurself. Remember t wear a mask when necessary.
Best wishes,
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情滞留英国。复学在即，作为俱乐部负责人，你给Jim写一封电子邮件，请他推荐一名外籍指导教师，内容包括：1. 条件及要求；2. 表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：drama club (戏剧俱乐部)；plan t d sth.(计划做某事)；in ne's place(代替某人)；recmmend(推荐)；a native English speaker(以英语为母语的人)；currently (目前)；experienced(熟练的)；bth…and…(两者都……)；take care f(照顾)；wear a mask(戴口罩)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Since yu're away in Britain, we need a drama teacher t be in yur place.运用原因状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然。
2019年
Writing 1
【2019年全国卷 Ⅰ】假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.个人优势；
3.能做的事情。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.结束语已为你写好。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I'm Li Hua, an utging by, wh is studying in Lndn. I am writing t apply t be a vlunteer f yur team, having heard that a Chinese Painting Exhibitin will be held in this lcal city. I have sme advantages fr the jb.
First f all, having lived in China fr sixteen years and having learnt English since I was a child , I have a gd cmmand f English and Chinese, which is beneficial fr intrducing Chinese paintings. Besides, having a gd knwledge f Chinese paintings because f my familiarity with Chinese painting culture, I can get freigners and the lcals t knw mre abut it. Last but nt least，thrugh my intrductin and effrts, I believe, I can strengthen the friendship between China and England. I wuld appreciate it if yu culd take my applicatin int cnsideratin.
【语篇解读】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。
【详解】1.审题立意
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态用一般现在式。
2.谋篇布局
书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。
3.关键词
根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇有：vlunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibitin，lcal city，advantages，a gd cmmand f，beneficial fr，familiarity with，appreciate ，take my applicatin int cnsideratin。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误，并增加一些细节和过渡性的词汇，如First f all, Besides, t begin with，mrever，as fr me，Last but nt least，等，使全文衔接自然，语义流畅。
Writing 2
【2019年全国卷Ⅱ】假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛，内容包括:
1.比赛信息；
2.赛前准备；
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m writing t let yu knw that we will have a vlleyball match next mnth. The match will take place in ur schl gym n the afternn f July 4th. We will play against the team frm HngXing High Schl. In rder t win the match, we shuld get fully prepared and practice hard. S frm tmrrw, we need t train fr tw hurs after schl every day. Please cme t the schl gym at 6:30 pm frm Mnday t Friday.
Yu’re an excellent player. With yu n the team, we are cnfident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard tgether!
Cheers,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
今年的书面表达沿袭近几年的体裁，仍旧是应用文。本次书面表达要求考生写一封邮件告知队友有关比赛的信息。
【详解】本篇书面表达是一封告知信。首先要告知写信目的；然后简明扼要地告知排球比赛的时间、地点以及赛前的准备事项，注意事件信息的三要素：时间、地点、人物，要交代清楚；第三则要表达对队友的期待和鼓励。
Writing 3
【2019年全国卷III】假定你是李华，你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加，内容包括:
1.时间；
2.活动安排；
3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【范文】
Dear Allen,
Dear Allen,
Hw’s everything ging? I’m writing t invite yu t take part in the Music Festival, which will be held in the Art Center f ur schl .
With the aim f enrich ur campus life, the Music Festival will start frm July 5 t July 7, lasting 3 days. In rder t make us knw mre abut Chinese traditinal music, the perfrmances will fcus n sme classical Chinese musical frms, such as flk sngs, Beijing peras as well as playing sme traditinal instruments.
As yu can imagine, what great fun there will be. Wuld yu like t cme and enjy the excitement with me? Please d sme practice and get ready t play yur favrite music at the festival.
Lking frward t yur early reply .
Yurs,
Li Hua

I am writing t tell yu that a music festival will be held in ur schl We can take part in the music festival in the schl hall next Friday afternn. In the music festival，we invite sme famus singers and pianist t perfrm，wh will als give sme lessns t the students. In additin，sme students can have a chance t cperate with this musicians. As a music fan，yu are bund t participate in the festival. If pssible，yu are we I cme t perfrm in the festival，which will be a great experience. Hpefully，yu can take part in it and dn't miss the chance.
【解析】
今年的书面表达要求考生写邮件，告知英国朋友音乐节的情况。
【详解】首先确定提纲。先介绍写作目的，之后介绍音乐节的时间、活动安排等具体信息，最后欢迎他表演节目。
第二，根据提纲，确定关键词语，如：Hw is everything ging? a music festival，in the schl hall，The pening ceremny等。
第三，注意选用合适的连接词将各要点串联起来。
Writing 4
【2019年浙江卷6月】假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
1.表示感谢；
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助；
3.临别祝愿。
注意:
1.词数80左右；
2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能选漏要点，跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am s regretful t knw that yu are ging t return t yur hme befre lng. We get alng well during yur stay in China and yu ffered me lts f help. I wuld like t express my gratitude t yu fr yur help with my English. While studying in China, yu always spent yur free time in helping me plish up my ral English. It is yu wh shared me with rich knwledge f English and English culture. Never will I frget yu and yur kindness. It is my hpe that yu can remember me as ften as pssible.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Writing 5
【2019年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括:
1.交通出行；
2.必备衣物。
注意:
1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m pleased that yu’re cming t tur in China.
I suggest that yu begin frm Beijing, and I’ll shw yu arund. Tianjin will be yur next stp. After that, yu can g t Shanghai, where yu can stay fr a week. Yu can take high-speed trains t bth cities. Summer in these cities is ht and rainy, s take summer wear plus an umbrella with yu.
Lking frward t yur arrival.
Yurs,
Li Hua

【写作指导】
本文是一篇应用文，要求给朋友写回信。
【详解】红星中学高三学生李华的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。要求给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。本文时态应采用一般现在时和一般将来时，用第一人称和第二人称来写。文章可以分为三部分来写：首先表达欢迎Jim来中国；然后交代交通出行和必备衣物；最后盼望朋友的到来。注意使用高级词汇和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意使用连接词、衔接词，使文章自然、流畅。
Writing 6
．【2018年浙江卷11月】假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：
1. 行程信息；
2. 钱包特征；
3. 联系方式。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. On 1st Nvember, 2018 I flew business class n yur flight 753 frm China t Lndn.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I barded the plane. Hwever, n arrival in Lndn Heathrw Airprt, I fund it gne. I guess it must have slipped ut f my pcket during the flight. It is a black leather ne with arund 200 dllars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it. Alng with the items mentined abve, the wallet cntains a family pht, my precius memry. As yu can imagine, these matter a lt t me.
Has anybdy happened t find it? Please email me at xxx@gglemail.cm
Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信
【详解】第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特征；3. 联系方式。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing t reprt the lss f my wallet. barded the plane, n arrival…, I fund it gne. it must have……Has anybdy happened t find it? Thank yu fr yur time and supprt.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
Writing7
【2019年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High Schl.
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Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs，
Li Jin
【写作指导】
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
【范文】
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High Schl. I gt the news that yur schl will send teachers t my schl fr a week-lng summer exchange. During the activity，yu will give a lecture n Western art. Yu want t seek fr advice n what tpic the lecture will be abut. Frm my persnal nte，music is my pririty.
I am interested in all kinds f music，amng which Jazz is my favrite. I want t knw abut the histry f jazz，and sme famus jazz singers. I wuld appreciate it if yu can add sme sessins f enjying jazz.
Thank yu fr yur time.
Yurs，
Li Jin
2018年
Writing 1
【2018年全国Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1．到达时间；
2．合适的礼物；
3．餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【解析】本文是一篇书信类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要齐全1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
Hw are yu ding? Learning that yu are abut t pay a visit t a Chinese friend and cnfused abut the Chinese custms, I am writing t put frward sme advice.
Firstly, I wuld like t suggest that yu arrive 5 t 10 minutes earlier, which is cmmn in Chinese traditinal culture. Secndly, if I were yu, I wuld bring sme apprpriate gifts with me, such as suvenirs frm my wn cuntry. Besides, table manners are als what yu shuld pay attentin t. Fr example, yu are nt suppsed t stick yur chpsticks int yur fd. Instead, laying them n yur dish is a smart chice.
If yu have any ther prblems, please dn’t hesitate t cntact me.
Yurs
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2018年全国Ⅲ卷】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：
1. 学校的体育场馆；
2. 主要的运动项目；
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted t hear frm yu. Yu asked me in yur last letter abut the physical exercise in ur schl and the fllwing infrmatin may give yu a rugh sketch.
T begin with, a fabulus new stadium has been built up, which has becme the new landmark in ur schl. Mrever, with the stadium set up, a wide range f sprts events are able t be held, f which ping-png, ftball as well as running cmpetitins enjy great ppularity. As fr me, I’m intxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength t cnfrnt the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite yu t cme t ur schl and see fr yurself.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。
Writing 3
【2018年浙江卷6月】假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
1. 口语能力：
2. 相关经验；
3. 应聘目的。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。
第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：
1. 口语能力：2. 相关经验；3. 应聘目的。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组）。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
Writing 4
【2018年北京卷】 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
(1) 表示欢迎；
(2) 推荐他上哪所大学；
(3) 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：(1). 词数不少于50；
(2). 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
I’m s glad t hear yur future educatin plan in Beijing in yur last letter. First I wuld like t express my warmest welcme t yu and I am sure yu will have the mst unfrgettable experience during yur cllege in Beijing.
Learning yur keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest yu apply fr Peking University, ne f the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature majr is perfect fr yu where yu can be cmpletely saked in Chinese prfund histry and rich culture. As fr preparatin, sme reading in advance in needed like The Stry f the Stne while sme nline curses f spken Chinese can be helpful fr yu t adapt int the Chinese language envirnment.
I sincerely hpe yur dream will cme true and it’s my pleasure t shw yu arund in Beijing when that day cmes. If yu have further questins, please feel free t let me knw.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Writing 5
【2018年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
（1）比赛的时间、地点；
（2）邀请他的原因；
（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛 the Wrld Adlescent Rbtics Cmpetitin
Dear Chris,
I have gd news t tell yu. ______________________________________________________________
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I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】略
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
点睛：书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。
2017年
Writing 1【2017年新课标Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
（1）时间和地点；
（2）内容：学习唐诗；
（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Leslie,
I am very happy that yu have made great prgress in learning Chinese and yu are interested in Chinese culture. Nw I’ll tell yu the next learning prgramme. On July 20, we are ging t learn pems f the Tang Dynasty which yu are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a freign learner, it is difficult fr yu t understand the true meaning and the culture f them. Therefre, befre class, yu can read sme bks related t the histry f the Tang Dynasty t better appreciate the pems.
Be sure t g t the Lecture Hall n time. Yu cannt miss the wnderful pems.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：（1）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
Writing 2
【2017年新课标Ⅱ卷】假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1.展览时间、地点；
2.展览内容。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, ne f yur students in yur cultural class. I knw yu're interested in ne f Chinese traditinal art frms—paper­cutting. S I invite yu t attend an exhibitin f it.
It'll be held frm June 10 t July 10 this year and the pening time is frm 9：00 am t 7：00 pm frm Mnday t Saturday and the place f the exhibitin is at the City Gallery, which is lcated at 118, Jian Gu Rad, Hai Dian District. Shall we g there tgether this Friday afternn? I will meet yu at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if yu like.
Yu knw we Chinese have a lt f traditinal art frms, f which paper­cutting is ne f the mst ppular. In the exhibitin, yu will enjy many special kinds f paper­cuttings. Maybe yu can learn ne r tw skills f the cutting.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
【解析】题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸paper­cutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。
Writing 3
【2017年新课标Ⅲ卷】假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
球队活动；
报名方式及截止日期。
注意：
词数100左右；
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【话题解读】
该篇书面表达是书信类文体，但是与体育有关，要求考生按照所给提示进行写作，可增加细节以使行文连贯。在写作本文时考生需注意以下几点：1. 确定文章的结构：书信的开头、正文和结尾。2. 确定文章的要点：写信的目的；表示感谢。3. 确定文章的布局。4. 确定文章的时态，在本文中根据要求判断应该用一般现在时和一般将来时。5. 正确使用较高级词汇和多种句式，如定语从句、状语从句、主语从句等。6. 准确使用一些恰当的连接成分以使语意更连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua. I am writing t invite yu t jin the table tennis team in ur schl. It is knwn that we can benefit a lt frm playing table tennis. It can prevent us frm getting shrtsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As t the activities, we plan t invite experienced players t give training t us every Friday afternn. At the same time, we will divide the members int several grups t practice at 5:00pm after schl.
If yu are interested, sign up n ur schl website befre August 10.
I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Writing 4
【2017年浙江卷】假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 参加者；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动：登山、野餐等。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【范文】
Dear Chris,
Hw are yu nw? ①The purpse f my writing is t tell yu that there will be an utging fr us these days. I wuld be hnred t have yu there with us, enjying the clrful days.
The ccasin will start n the next Sunday mrning. ②We will g t Siming Muntain, where we can have a climb. What’s mre, we can als hld a picnic party with the lcal peple.
I really hpe yu can make it. And I d lk frward t receiving yur reply letter as sn as pssible.
【写作思路】本试题是一篇半开放的作文，写作文体是电子邮件，写一封邀请信给Chris。要点提示中只列出了大概内容,包括3点(参加者，时间、地点和活动)，具体细节需要考生自己发挥。邀请信一般分为以下几部分：首先，要列出写信的目的，并发出诚挚邀请；其次，要就邀请的具体内容给予明确的说明，什么时间，什么地点,做什么事情等；最后，要再次表示邀请，希望对方参加。
Writing 5
【2017年北京卷】你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：＂长江之行＂或者＂泰山之旅＂。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 你建议的线路；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jim,
I’m happy t receive yur letter and knw yu’re cming t China.
Of the tw trips t the Yangtze River and Munt Tai, bth are highly recmmended. Persnally, I prefer the tur alng the Yangtze, the lngest river and ne f the mther rivers f Chinese civilizatin. Yu can learn a lt abut the histry f China and Chinese peple. Mrever, the scenery alng the river is amazing, with many well-knwn sightseeing spts. That’s why I think the trip alng the Yangtze will be a better chice.
Hpe yu’ll have a gd time in China.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文为提纲类作文。首先，学生要仔细阅读提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。 其次，要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语， 按照一定逻辑关系来写。 最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态,语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文是一封信，按照内容要求可以确定文章的框架结构，三段式，其中第一段写你所建议的路线，第二部分是本文的主体，要阐述你所建议的路线的原因，好让他们有很好的掌握，最后一段，提出你的祝愿。写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】
本文内容齐全，结构严谨，层次分明，布局合理，语言精练，同时运用高级句子。表语从句的使用：That’s why I think the trip alng the Yangtze will be a better chice.高级词汇的使用：highly recmmended。连接词的合理使用：Persnally，mrever。
Writing 6
【2017年天津卷】假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs. Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
（1）简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
（2）告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备（如深入了解天津等）；
（3）希望她有机会重访天津。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：第十三届全运会 the 13th Natinal Games
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. ______________________________________________________________
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【参考范文】
Dear Mrs. Green,
I’m s glad t hear frm yu. While it has been mre than a year since yu taught us English, I’ve missed yu a lt, thinking abut thse happy mments when we stayed with yu. Actually, I’ve been ding pretty well in my studies as well as in my life. Apart frm my academic studies, I always manage t find time fr what I’m interested in. Fr example, I have successfully gt admitted as a vlunteer fr the 13th Natinal Games, which is scheduled t be held at the end f this August. T get admitted, I have made gd preparatins befrehand, trying t knw as much as I culd abut my city, Tianjin.
By the way, it’s my sincere hpe that yu can spare sme time fr a visit t Tianjin again, which has changed greatly since yu left.
Please let me knw if yu cme t Tianjin.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】这是一封邮件，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时要注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般现在时和现在完成时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出来。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。
2016年
Writing 1
【2016年新课标Ⅰ卷】假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（frmat）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I am Li Hua. I am writing t tell yu smething abut my plan fr the cming summer vacatin and I als want yu t d me a favr.
In rder t get sme practical experience, I am planning t take a part-time jb in a freign capital cmpany. I have already finished my jb applicatin and persnal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an applicatin and the persnal resume, s I dn’t even knw if there are smething t pay attentin t. S, I’m writing yu the letter, hping yu can give me sme help. I will be very grateful if yu can help me.
Lking frward t yur reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yurs,
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2016年新课标Ⅱ卷】假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（phtgraphy club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信，请他提供作品。信的内容包括：
1．主题：环境保护；
2．展览时间；
3．投稿邮箱：intlphtshw@gmschl.cm.
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Our schl phtgraphy club is ging t hld an Internatinal High Schl Student Phtgraphy Shw. The theme f the shw is envirnmental prtectin. It will start frm June 15th and last fr three weeks. Any student wh is interested is welcme t participate. I knw yu take gd pictures and yu’ve always wanted t d smething fr envirnmental prtectin. I remember yu shwed me sme phts n that theme the last time yu visited ur schl. This is surely a gd chance fr mre peple t see them. If yu want t jin, yu can send yur phts t intlphtshw@
Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本文属于半开放作文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Peter写信，建议他参加你校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展。文章要使用第一人称和一般现在时为主的时态。要点：1. 校摄影俱乐部举办的国际中学生摄影展，主题为环境保护；2.展览时间6月15日，持续三周；3.知道对方对摄影很感兴趣，也恰好有环保方面的图片，希望对方能够参加本次展览。4.投稿邮箱：intlphtshw@gmschl.cm。在写作时，注意书信的格式以及过渡用语的正确使用；同时尽量使用熟悉的词汇及短语，尤其注意不要出现中国式英语，恰当使用一些复合句或者谚语以增加获得高分的可能性。
Writing 3
【2016年新课标Ⅲ卷】假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bb约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 另约时间。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Bb,
I’m srry t say that I cannt g t the bkstre with yu n Friday afternn. I have just fund that I have t attend an imprtant class meeting that afternn. I hpe the change will nt cause yu t much truble.
Shall we g n Saturday mrning? We can set ut early s that we’ll have mre time t read and select bks. If it’s cnvenient fr yu, let’s meet at 8:30 utside the schl gate. If nt, let me knw what time suits yu best. I shuld be available any time after schl next week.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：题目要求写一封道歉信，李华因不能和Bb一起去书店而向Bb道歉，文章应使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；另约时间。注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯。
Writing 4
【2016年北京卷】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1. 该人物是谁；
2. 该人物的主要贡献；
3. 该人物对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s great t hear frm yu. I feel prud knwing yur interest in Chinese histry.
As fr my favurite figure in Chinese histry, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his bk, Haigu Tuzhi (Maps and Recrds f the Wrld), intrduced mdern technlgies and ideas t China. That pened ur eyes t the wrld. In fact, he inspires me t majr in English in cllege t be a bridge between China and the wrld.
Interested in knwing mre? I can find yu sme bks! Just let me knw.
Cheers!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
题材新颖，要求介绍中国历史人物，内容包括喜欢的历史人物、他的贡献和对你的影响。不少于50词，使用一般现在时和一般过去时以及第一人称和第三人称进行写作。
题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。
2015年
Writing 1
【2015年新课标Ⅱ卷】假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing hme）陪老人们国重阳节（the Duble Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：
1. 出发及返回时间；
2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结语已为你写好。
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Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear Lucy,
I’d like t invite yu t jin us fr a visit t the nearby nursing hme next Saturday fr the Duble Ninth Festival. It is the day fr the elderly in ur culture. We’ll g and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly peple there. We’ll als spend sme fun time tgether singing, dancing and playing games, which we hpe will make them happy. We shuld be back arund 4 ’clck in the afternn. If yu are able t cme with us, please let us knw and we’ll wait fr yu at the gate at 9 in the mrning.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs
Li Hua
【解析】
辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般将来时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
Writing 2
【2015年重庆卷】Bkcrssing. Cm 是一个面向全球的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（cntrlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：
·表明写信目的
·选择一种分享方式
·简述作出该选择的理由
·希望了解更多信息
注意：（1）词数不少于80；
（2）在答题卡上做答
（3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）
Dear Sir r Madam,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Learning that yu are rganizing this activity t share bks wrldwide, I am writing t apply fr it fr the simple reasn that I lve reading and I wn a large number f bks.
Yu’ve intrduced tw ways t share bks: wild release and cntrlled release. Of the tw, the latter wins my favr. By the means f cntrlled release, I nly need t deliver bks t ther participants, nt nly are bks shared but it can build up a bridge cnnecting readers frm different parts f the wrld as well.
If yu culd prvide mre specific infrmatin, I wuld be well grateful. Lking frward t yur reply.
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，不拖拉，使用短语：apply fr申请；Lking frward t盼望着；Learning that yu are rganizing this activity t share bks wrldwide, I am writing t apply fr it fr the simple reasn that I lve reading and I wn a large number f bks.这句话运用learning做伴随状语，reasn后面跟着一个同位语从句；nt nly are bks shared but it can build up a bridge cnnecting readers frm different parts f the wrld as well.这个句子nt nly but als连接两个句子，第一个句子需要用部分倒装；
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】本题的解题思路，一、表明写信目的：申请参加该活动（添加得知消息）；二、选择一种分享方式：二者选一；三、阐述理由 ；四、书信结尾（添加希望）；注意表达句式1. Between them, I wuld like t chse…2. Of the tw, I prefer the latter t the frmer.表示希望的表达句式1. I am lking frward t mre infrmatin.2. I wuld appreciate it if yu wuld ffer mre infrmatin.
Writing 3
【2015年北京卷】假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括：
1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）；
2. 说明你打算参加的原因；
3. 询问对方的意向。
注意： 1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。
提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragn Bat Training Camp
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m writing t tell yu my exciting plan fr the summer hliday. I want t jin a Dragn Bat Training Camp. I wnder if yu’d like t g with me.
This camp will pen n July 20th, It ffers teenagers like yu and me a chance t enjy sprts and learn abut Chinese culture. If yu are interested in it, let me knw and I’ll send yu mre infrmatin.
Hpe t meet yu at the training camp this summer.
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing t tell yu my exciting plan fr the summer hliday；I wnder if yu’d like t g with me.
文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。
【考点定位】应用文类书面表达
Writing 4
三节 书面表达（满分30分）
【2015年陕西卷】假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Vlunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held n June 15-17, 2015, is nw lking fr 20 student vlunteers t prvide service fr Talent Shw, Speech Cntest, and English Debate. If yu are interested, please send an applicatin email at yur earliest cnvenience t Ms. Chen at chenlashi@aef.cm.
写作要点：
1.表达写信意图；
2.陈述应征目的；
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求：
1.邮件词数不少于100；
2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数；
3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯；
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student frm Class 2, Grade 3.
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Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
Dear MS Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student frm Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing t apply fr the psitin as a student vlunteer.
I really want t btain this precius pprtunity because, by ffering my service, I will be able t imprve my rganizatinal ability, cmmunicatin skills as well as my cnfidence in speaking English in public.
As an utging girl, I get alng well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a gd cmmand f English that I am elected as assistant t my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand t her in several English activities f my class, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up t yur expectatins. I will be gratefull if yu culd give me a kind cnsideratin.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a gd cmmand f English that I am elected as assistant t my English teacher.运用了s…that…句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand t her in several English activities f my class, which have been appreciated by bth teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply fr the psitin, as well as, in public, get alng well with,,have such a gd cmmand f, lent a helping hand t, live up t等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
【考点定位】考查提纲作文
【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。
Writing 5
【2015年四川卷】假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharn 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电于邮件。
表达给她提供帮助的意愿；
说明你能胜任辅导的理由；
给出讲好普通话的两点建议；
提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。
Hi Sharn,
This is Li Xia. I learned frm yur pst that yu want t imprve yur Mandarm
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Li Xia
【参考答案】
Hi Sharn,
This is Li Xia. I learned frm yur pst that yu want t imprve yur Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit fr it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin fr many years. In additin ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must fr me t cmmunicate with thers in my daily life. S I’m quite cnfident that I can help yu learn Mandarin.
Learning Mandarin takes time, s if yu want t learn it well ,yu shuld spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying ges, practice makes perfect. Besides, yu can als read sme bks in Chinese、see sme Chinese films and listen t sme Chinese radi prgrammes. Speaking and listening are very imprtant fr a language learning, by which yu are sure t make great prgress.
In yur pst, yu say yu can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager t imprve my English. S, if yu allw me t help yu learn Mandarin, yu can als help me imprve my English. We can cntact each ther by vide chat every night fr half an hur in English and half an hur in Chinese, s that we can imprve ur ral speaking.
Hpe fr yu early reply!
Yurs Sincerely
Li Xia
【亮点说明】本文要点齐全，结构完整。使用多种句式，如定语从句：I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must fr me t cmmunicate with thers in my daily life.、表语从句：It is just what I want.等。还使用了大量短语等。
Writing 6
【2015年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津，你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示，写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系，并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
（1）自我介绍；
（2）拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等；
（3）询问对方的其他需求。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇： 学生会 the Student Unin
Dear Chris,











【参考答案】略
【考点定位】考查提纲作文。
【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。考生写完之后要检查是否有语法错误，看能否运用所学的知识将简单句变为复杂句，当然，没有把握的句子不要写。
2014年
Writing 1
【2014年新课标Ⅰ卷】假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
参考词汇：住宿—accmmdatin
答案：
Dear Sir/Madam.
I am a student in China and I plan t g t Britain t attend a summer schl during the vacatin. I’ve seen yur ad and I'd like t knw smething mre abut yur six-week English curse.First, when, will the curse start and hw many class hurs are there per week. Besides I wish there wuld nt be t many students in a class. I’d als like t knw hw much I have t pay fr the curse and whether accmmdatin is included.Wuld there be hst family r university drmitry?
I am lking frward t yur early reply
Yurs faithfully.
Li Hua
Writing 2
【2014年安徽卷】 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Wrried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪
Hi Wrried.:
I’m srry t knw that yu’re having such a had time at the mment.


Yurs,
Jamie
【答案】
Hi Wrried:
I’m srry t knw that yu’re having such a bad time at the mment. The truth is everyne will have ne f thse perids when things seem t be wrng, s yu dn’t have t wrry s much. The imprtant thing is t learn t cntrl yur temper s that yu may nt d r say anything yu’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk t smene yu trust abut hw yu feel. This is a gd way f letting yur anger ut withut hurting thers r yurself. Secnd, g utdrs and play team games with yur friends，as physical exercise is an effective way t get rid f anger .And third, remain ptimistic abut yur future. Such a psitive attitude twards life can be helpful in lifting yur spirits.
I hpe yu’ll sn feel calmer and carry n as nrmal.
Yurs，
Jamie
Writing 3
【2014年北京卷】你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
注意： 1.词数不少于50.
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yurs,
Je
【答案】
Dear Chris,
Hw is everything ging?
I remember we planned t visit Yunnan in July but nw because my left ft was injured, I cannt g with yu as planned.
I’m srry abut it. Can I suggest that we put it ff until early August? I wish yu culd understand.
I’m lking frward t hearing frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Je
Writing 4
【2014年四川卷】假设你是李夏I你的美国笔友Sam来信关心你参加商考的情况，请根据以下要点回信告知。
1. 考试日期与科目；
2. 考试准备情况；
3. 考试吋的状态；
4. 对试题的感受；
5. 可能的考试结果。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好；
3. 可以适当增加细节.以使行文连贯；
4. 文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：cllege entrance examinatin
Dear Sam,
Thank yu fr yur cncern. _____________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Xia
【答案】
One pssible versin :
Dear Sam ,
Thank yu fr yur cncern. I am glad t tell yu smething abut what yu asked abut ur cllege entrance examinatin .
The cllege entrance examinatin falls n June 7and June 8 every year ,and the subjects that we shuld prepare fr are different depending n each prvince .Generally speaking , we are busy reviewing and preparing fr it the mment we enter senir three ,which is cnsidered a vital perid .With the exam appraching , mst students will feel nervus and upset .But by nw when I am sitting the exam , I feel calm ,because I think the exam is neither t easy nr t difficult . I am sure I will get a gd result .But whatever the result is, I will face it calmly. After all , I have made every effrt ,and I wn’t regret .
Best wishes !
Yurs ,
Li Xia
Writing 5
【2014年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津，得知美国学生Chris作为交换生，下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示，给他写封邮件：
（1）表示欢迎；
（2）介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如气候、饮食等）；
（3）介绍本班情况；
（4）希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊。
注意：
（1）请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
（3）词数不少于100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
交换生 exchange student
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, mnitr f Class One, Grade Eleven. ________________________________________________
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Yurs,
Li Jin
【答案】
One pssible versin:
Dear Chris，
I’m Li Jin, mnitr f Class One, Grade Eleven. Welcme t ur class in China. I'm glad yu can jin ur class, which is a wnderful grup. Every student nt nly enjys studying, but is ready t help each ther. S if yu jin us, I’m sure yu can get alng well with them and quickly make friends with them, t.
The climate here is changeable. Nw, it is very cl in autumn and cld in winter, s dn't frget t bring different kinds f clthes with yu. In yur spare time, yu can visit sme famus places f interest in ur city, as well as tasting all kinds f delicius traditinal Chinese lcal fds. We Chinese use chpsticks t have Chinese fd instead f frks and knives. And I can be yur tur guide if yu like.
As an American, there is n dubt that yu are familiar with yur cuntry. S if it is cnvenient t yu, please bring a map f America and sme phts f yur families，friends, and sme famus buildings with yu, and give us sme speeches t intrduce yur schl life and different culture f America. And we’ll exchange ur different lives and cultures tgether then.
lking frward t yur cming!
Yurs
Li Jin
Writing 6
【2014年浙江卷】 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需
要购置科普类图书（ppular science bks）和文学类图书（literary bks）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。
注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。
Dear Mr. Wang,
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Yurs sincerely
Li Yue
【答案】
Dear Mr. Wang,
Knwing that ur library is ging t buy bks, I’d like t give sme suggestins.
What we need mst are ppular science bks. Usually ppular science bks explain basic principles f nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and aruse ur curisity abut scientific discveries.
In additin t reading fr knwledge, we read fr fun and inspiratin. That is why I recmmend anther categry f bks：literary bks. Classic wrks, written by masters, present great thughts thrugh fascinating stries and language. They nt nly ffer us jy and excitement, but als encurage us t think critically.
I’ll be glad if yu can cnsider my recmmendatin.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Yue
【试题分析】根据提示你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，可知这里应该是考生比较熟悉的书信格式。 学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。先写这个内容来引出你要提出的建议。在写推荐的两类书时，要写出为什么要推荐这些书。