高中考试英语13.应用文之祝贺信

这是一份高中考试英语13.应用文之祝贺信，共8页。试卷主要包含了词数100左右；，开头语已为你写好等内容，欢迎下载使用。
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：
自我介绍；
祝贺苏琳生日；
感谢工作人员；
索取苏琳三岁生日照。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、开头语已为你写好。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Greetings frm China!
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Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
Greetings frm Chian!
I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lver since I was a child. Abut three years ag I was delighted t learn that Baiyun gave birth t her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grw n yur website. Nw she’s ging t be there. I’d like t wish her a happy birthday and t express my thanks t yu fr yur hard wrk, because f which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.
By the way, culd I have a pht f Sulin taken n her third birthday? Thank yu very much in advance.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【范文点评】
本文写作的内容要点如下：1.自我介绍；2.信息来源；3.祝贺生日；4.感谢照顾；5.索取照片；6.合适的结尾。这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文要活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，注意结合简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹。
亮点词汇：.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth t v.产生，生育
亮点句式：I’d like t wish her a hay birthday and t express my thanks t yu fr yur hard wrk, because f which Sulin and her parents are living a hay and healthy life in the US. 我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。评析：定语从句的使用。
开头常用句式
It was exciting news fr me t learn f …
Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm cngratulatins n …
It was a great pleasure t send yu my cngratulatins n …
I was delighted t learn f yur success /achievements in …
I am really happy t learn that yu have been elected…
结尾常用句式
Wish yu gd luck!
We wish t share yur hnr and jy.
I wish yu success and fulfillment in the years ahead.
May all g wnderfully in yur new pst!
May every happiness be yurs!
All my best wishes fr an even mre prsperus future/successful career!
May each succeeding year bring yu great happiness and prsperity.
Every gd wish t yu fr much health, happiness, and prsperity!
必背模板
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Dear ______ ,
I have learned with delight that yu ______(祝贺事由). I wuld like t extend t yu my utmst cngratulatins n ______. Yu must be ______. And I feel very happy fr yu. ______(所取得的成绩)is quite exciting news! I knw this is surely wing t ______(被祝贺人过去的努力).It is a reward yu richly deserve fr yur ______(被祝贺人的优点). Kindly let me knw when yu ______(咨询对方何时有空).
I hpe ______(表达自己的愿望).
My best wishes fr yur further success.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear_____________,
Gd news travels fast! It was delightful fr me t hear that ______________ . Please accept my sincere cngratulatins t yur ___________. I have been watching yur prgress with admiratin all the years, and I knw mre than anyne else hw much effrt yu have put in. Nw yu prve t me a matured and well-runded________ in every respect. Judging frm yur current success / achievement, I am cnfident that in the future ___________ .
May all the years ahead fulfill yur dreams!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
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Dear_____________,
Cngratulatins n yur _______ . I knw hw hard yu have been wrking and I am very prud f yu fr yur achievement. I understand fr sure that it is yur hard wrk / yur excellent ability that leads yu t the current success. This new psitin, n the ther hand, adds a new dimensin t yur life and is bund t ________ . What’s mre, I als believe that .
May all ges beautifully in yur new pst!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
思路点金
日常生活中，无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，都需要写上一封信向对方表示祝贺。信中应表示为对方而高兴。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信既可以正式写，也可以随便写，具体视场合而定。对不太熟悉的朋友适合正式写，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。
祝贺信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺；围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；表达美好祝福。
祝贺信写作分三步走:说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->再次表达良好祝愿。在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。贺信必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。
必背范文
假如你是高三学生李华，得知你的英国笔友Reed被剑桥大学(University f Cambridge)录取，请你给他写一封电子邮件。要点如下：
1.向Reed表示祝贺；
2.介绍自己目前的学习情况；
3.请教学习方法
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
Dear Reed,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】Dear Reed,
I am very excited and inspired by the news in yur e-mail that yu have been admitted t University f Cambridge. First f all, I’d like t give my cngratulatins t yu n yur great success. Meanwhile, I als want t enter a famus university just like yu.
Nw I want t tell yu smething abut myself. As yu knw, I’m busy preparing fr the Cllege Entrance Examinatin right nw. I have been wrking very hard and smetimes have t stay up late ding all srts f papers. Hwever, I’m always feeling stressed ut and wndering whether my effrts will pay ff, which makes me frustrated and exhausted. Will yu be kind enugh t give me sme advice?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li HuaDear_______,
(1)I have learned with delight that yu______.
(2)I wuld like t extend t yu my utmst cngratulatins n __ __.
(3)Yu must be very prud f yur ______.
(4)And I feel very happy fr yu.
(5)____ _ is quite exciting news!
(6)Yu are really__ .
(7)I knw this is surely wing t__ _ .
(8)It is a reward yu deserve fr yur __ .
(9)With yur___ __, I am sure that yu will be a success in whatever yu undertake.
(10)Kindly let me knw when yu____ .
(11) I hpe .
(12)My best wishes fr yur further success.
Sincerely Yurs,
Li Hua
(1)获悉值得祝贺的消息，说出祝贺事由
(2)表达祝贺
(3)描述对方的心情
(4)表达自己的心情
(5)被祝贺人所取得的成绩
(6)对对方的赞美
(7)对方取得成绩的原因
(8)对对方取得成绩的肯定，说出被祝贺人的优点
(9) 被祝贺人的优秀品质，表达对对方的祝福
(10)咨询对方的情况和时间
(11)表达愿望
(12)表达自己真诚的祝福