高中英语2024届高考复习咨询求助信写作讲解与练习

这是一份高中英语2024届高考复习咨询求助信写作讲解与练习，共7页。试卷主要包含了写作模版，语料积累，美句赏析，练习等内容，欢迎下载使用。
一、写作模版
【介绍】
求助信是因为特定事由向他人寻求帮助和建议的书信题材。求助的具体内容应该包括：背景信息、写信目的、求助原因、求助内容、寻求帮助、期待回复等，咨询信同。
【例题】
假定你是高三学生李华。因新冠疫情高考延迟了一个月。面对新形势，你对学习感到迷茫，所以写信给心理学家Dr.Smith询问缓解压力的方法。内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.咨询内容；
3.期待回复。
【写作框架】
第一段：求助背景/咨询事宜/写信目的
首段句式参考：
l I have sme prblems in bthers me a lt.S I have n chice but t turn t yu.
l I’m srry t bther yu, but I have sme difficulties here and I need yur assistance.
l I tried t..., but in vain, which makes me upset/which wrries me a lt.
l After reading yur advertisement published in the magazine, I am writing t yu fr further/mre infrmatin/details abut …
第二段：具体咨询事宜/期望
正文段句式参考：
l I’m lacking in experience/at a lss and accrdingly cnfrnted with many challenges and frustratins nw.
l The being my biggest prblem, I feel the time and my life is in a mess．
l I wuld appreciate it if yu culd be s kind as t give me sme advice n the pints I mentined abve．
l I wuld be much bliged t yu if yu tell me the necessary prcedures.
第三段：表达感激/期盼回复
尾段句式参考：
l I’d be grateful if yu culd lend me a hand/yu culd d me a favr at yur earliest cnvenience.
l I’m eager t get yur timely help.
l Eagerly lk frward t yur respnse/reply．
l Yur timely attentin t my inquiry wuld be highly appreciated.
l I am lking frward t yur prmpt reply t this letter.
【参考范文】
Dear Dr.Smith,
I’m Li Hua, a Senir Three student in China.Knwing yu are an excellent psychlgist, I’m writing t cnsult yu abut ways f releasing pressure.
As yu knw, the spread f the COVID-19 in China leads t a ne-mnth delay in the Cllege Entrance Examinatin.Nt knwing what the future hlds, I’m at a lss hw t imprve my study.Culd yu please be kind enugh t ffer sme practical ways t ease my stress s that I can fcus n my study?
Yur kind help wuld be greatly appreciated.I am lking frward t a reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【结构模版】
模板一
Dear ________,
Hw is everything ging.I am writing t ask yu fr a favr.Recently I ______________.(描述自己情况)
T begin with, ______________(具体问题1) has always been a big headache fr me, which makes me feel upset smetimes, s I wnder if yu culd recmmend______________.(推荐方案) Besides, I als have difficulty in ding ______________(具体问题2) n which I sincerely hpe yu can prvide sme suggestins.Finally, I’d appreciate it if yu culd be s kind as t give me sme advice n the tw pints I mentined abve.
Thanks again fr yur reading, and yur prmpt attentin t this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yurs,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear________,
_______________(自我介绍).I’m encuntering sme prblems which truble me a lt.I have n idea hw t deal with them and hpe that yu will be very kind t help me.
Here are the prblems that have been disturbing me lately.I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard t ___________(困难1).Besides, ________is anther terrible headache fr me.(困难2).What’s mre, what trubles me mst is that __________(困难3).
Hpefully, yur kind and timely help wuld be ffered t me.I am lking
frward t yur earliest reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
二、语料积累
1.
询问某事
inquire abut sth.
2
参加会议
attend a cnference
3
帮我一个忙
d me a favr
4
包括入场费
cver the entrance fees
5
为某人提供某物
furnish sb with sth
6
关于
regarding/cncerning
7
感激的
bliged
8
必要的
indispensable
9
额外收费
additinal charge
10
学习安排
academic arrangement
11
面对
cnfrnt
12
好的建议
instructive advice
13
吸引
exert a peculiar fascinatin n sb
14
更多的信息
further infrmatin
15
很感兴趣
take a genuine interest in
16
指导方针
recmmended guidelines
17
咨询某人某事
cnsult sb fr sth
18
相关事宜
issues cncerned
19
对...感到困惑
at a lss ver
20
由于
given/wing t
21
寻求一些有效的方法
seek sme effective appraches
22
一团乱麻
be in a mess
23
因此
accrdingly/cnsequently
24
急需某物
be in urgent need f
25
回复
be in respnse t
26
在你方便时
at yur earliest cnvenience
27
尽早适应目前状况
adapt t current situatin sner
28
扮演重要的角色
play a significant rle in
29
有着很多的挑战和困扰
with many challenges and frustratins
30
帮助某人做某事
assist sb in ding
31
做某事有困难
have difficulty/truble (in) ding sth
32
遇到一些问题
encunter sme prblems
33
忙于做某事
be ccupied with sth
34
为某事做准备
make preparatins fr
35
学以致用
put sth in use
36
让某人失望
let sb dwn
37
克服恐惧
vercme the fear
38
渴望做某事
be anxius/eager t d sth
39
费心地去做某事
take the truble t d sth
40
提供一些有益的指导
ffer sme cnstructive guidance
三、美句赏析
（一）首段
1.
[情景]你要去参加英文歌唱比赛，非常迷茫，就写信向外籍教师Jasn咨询相关建议。
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[答案]Having signed up fr an English singing cmpetitin, I’m writing t cnsult yu fr sme suggestins n issues cncerned ver which I am ttally at a lss.
2.
[情景]你不敢和别人交流，和同学相处不是非常融洽，所以写信向你的外国笔友咨询。
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[答案]Owning t lack f cmmunicatin with thers, I failed t get n well with my classmates, s I’m writing t seek sme effective appraches t address the prblem.
3.
[情景]你正在计划星期天去伦敦旅游，互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确，请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件询问有关情况。
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[答案]Lndn exerts a peculiar fascinatin n me and I am cnsidering ging fr a day tur, s I wuld like t knw whether yu can furnish me with infrmatin regarding it.
4.
[情景]假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英国进行为期六周的英语学习，一则学校广告引起了你的注意，于是你给该校写封信询问有关情况
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[答案]I am Li Hua, a student in China.Intending t attend a summer schl in Britain during the vacatin and yur ad greatly aruses my interest, I am writing t inquire abut yur six-week English curse.
（二）正文段
1.
[情景]你向外籍老师请教唱英文歌时的发音技巧。
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[答案]In rder t plish up my perfrmance, I wnder if yu culd instruct me in sme prnunciatin skills.
2.
[情景]你代表学生会向美国合作学习订购一批符合要求的杂志，为你校举办的美国文化节作准备。
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[答案]T rganize the festival, we’re nw in urgent need f sme American ppular magazines that can reflect mdern American sciety.
3.释义：我们希望您寄送的杂志的内容能适合高中生阅读。
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[答案]we wuld appreciate it if yu culd see t it that the cntents f the magazines are suitable fr senir high schl students.
4.译文：最后，我想知道课程的费用是多少，并且住宿费是否包含在内。
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[答案]Ultimately, I’d als like t knw hw much I have t pay fr the curse and whether accmmdatin is included.
（三）尾段
1.译文：因此，如果您能就以上问题给我提些建议，我会非常感激。
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[答案]Thus, I wuld be grateful if yu culd be s kind as t give me sme advice n the tw pints I mentined abve.
2.译文：如果能得到您尽早的回复，我会非常感激。
___________________________________________________________________
[答案]I wuld be much bliged if yu culd reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
3.译文：非常抱歉打扰到您，并且对您的帮助致以感谢。
___________________________________________________________________
[答案]Srry t bther yu, and yur kind help wuld be greatly appreciated.
四、练习
【填空】
调查显示，中国长江江豚（finless prpise） 受人类活动影响而频临灭绝，目前总数不足 1000 只。江豚的生存环境十分糟糕， 航运 （shipping）、非法捕捞、气候变化、水污染等是导致江豚死亡的主要原因。假设你是李华，现请用英文给 WWF（世界自然保护基金组织）写一封信，请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括：
1.说明写信目的
2.简述江豚现状
3.希望 WWF 如何帮助（比如：资助江豚保护项目等）
4.表示感谢并期待回复
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m a student frm Chngqing, China.Learning frm the survey that Finless Prpise’s __________ __________ (生存环境) is extremely terrible in China and they are __________ __________ (灭绝), I am writing t draw attentin frm yu and __________ (缓解) the situatin.
Due t lack f human prtectin, the number f Finless Prpise is becming wrryingly smaller, nly less than 1000 left at present.Therefre, it's high time that immediate and effective measures shuld __________ __________ (take) t change the situatin.I am hping that WWF will play a significant rle in prtecting it by funding sme prgrams aiming t helping Finless Prpise r __________ __________ (起草) sme rules n hw t prevent it frm dying ut.
I __________ __________ (呼吁) yur kind cnsideratin n my request.And I wuld appreciate it a lt if yu culd prvide sme assistance.I'm expecting yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
[答案]
Dear Sir r Madam,
I’m a student frm Chngqing, China.Learning frm the survey that Finless Prpise’s living cnditin is extremely terrible in China and they are dying ut, I am writing t draw attentin frm yu and ease the situatin.
Due t lack f human prtectin, the number f Finless Prpise is becming wrryingly smaller, nly less than 1000 left at present.Therefre, it's high time that immediate and effective measures shuld be taken t change the situatin.I am hping that WWF will play a significant rle in prtecting it by funding sme prgrams aiming t helping Finless Prpise r drawing up sme rules n hw t prevent it frm dying ut.
I appeal t yur kind cnsideratin n my request.And I wuld appreciate it a lt if yu culd prvide sme assistance.I'm expecting yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【改错】
假设你是育才中学的学生会主席李华，受美国亚特兰大ELCA高中(Eagle’s Landing Christian Academy) 学生会主席Peter邀请，计划下个月带领10位学生会成员赴该校进行为期一周的交流，请你给对方写一封邮件咨询相关准备工作。内容包括：
1.感谢对方的邀请；
2.询问相关事宜（最佳到达时间、具体日程安排、需要携带的物品）;
3.期盼尽早得到答复。
请找出下文10处错误：
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman f the Student Unin f Yucai Middle Schl.Thank yu s much fr invite us t have a ne-week cmmunicatin activity at yur schl and I am writing t enquiry abut further details.
I am planned t take 10 members f ur Student Unin t g t yur schl next mnth, hping t make gd use f this pprtunity t cmmunicate and learn frm each ther.S I’d like t knw what is the best date f ur arrival.Abve all, culd yu pssibly send me a specific daily schedule f the activity in advance such that I can prepare better fr the trip? Last but nt the least, this being ur first experience t g t America, wuld yu be kind enugh t ffer sme suggestins n what necessities we special need t take with us?
We are really exciting and lking frward t the activity.I wuld appreciate if yu culd give me a favrable reply at yur earliest cnvenient.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
[答案]
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, Chairman f the Student Unin f Yucai Middle Schl.Thank yu s much fr inviting us t have a ne-week cmmunicatin activity at yur schl and I am writing t enquire abut further details.
I am planning t take 10 members f ur Student Unin t g t yur schl next mnth, hping t make gd use f this pprtunity t cmmunicate and learn frm each ther.S I’d like t knw what the best date f ur arrival is.Abve all, culd yu pssibly send me a specific daily schedule f the activity in advance s that I can prepare better fr the trip? Last but nt least, this being ur first experience t g t America, wuld yu be kind enugh t ffer sme suggestins n what necessities we specially need t take with us?
We are really excited and lking frward t the activity.I wuld appreciate it if yu culd give me a favrable reply at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作】
Mrs.Zhang最近在与儿子的相处中有点麻烦，特email某青少年杂志寻求帮助。内容包括：
1.孩子随着年龄的增加，身体出现了某些变化，如皮肤油腻、出现红点；
2.母子争吵，孩子情绪焦躁，不听安慰，不想求医。
注意：
1.词数：不少于80字；
2.可适当增加某些细节；
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【答案】
Dear Editr,
I’m writing t ask fr advice n my relatinship with my teenage sn.T tell the truth, I ften struggle t get alng with him.Recently we have argued with each ther a great deal.
He is anxius abut his skin because it has started t becme very ily, with lts f red spts.He is always angry these days and seems less cnfident.I keep telling him that these changes are nrmal, and that things will turn ut just fine.Of curse, I wanted t shw my cncern fr his cnditin, s I asked him t see a dctr.But then he became angry and we had a big argument.He tld me that I was putting even mre press n him by talking abut his spts all the time.In the end, I sent him t his rm.He finally calmed dwn, but it tk sme time.
The whle experience was really terrible and I d nt want t g thrugh the same thing again.What shuld I d?
Best wishes,
Mrs.Zhang