天津市部分地区2023-2024学年高一上学期期中英语试卷汇编：书面表达

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天津市河西区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中质量调查英语试题
51. 假设你是学生会主席李津，周日将组织学生参加户外活动。请你根据以下提示给英语外教Mr. Smith写一封邀请信，希望他参加你们的活动。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：学生会 Students’ Unin
Dear Mr. Smith,
Are yu free this Sunday?
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天津市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题
第二节：书面表达(满分25分)
56. 假设你是晨光中学李津，请给你的外教Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们年级举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动。
邮件内容包括：
(1)介绍读书活动的相关信息(例如：时间、地点、活动内容等)；
(2)说明你发出邀请的原因；
(3)询问对方的意向。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100字；
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs
Li Jin
天津市红桥区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
61. 假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。
内容要点：
1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；
2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；
3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that yu feel stressed abut study. _____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
天津市南开区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
61. 假设你是晨光中学的李津。 刚进入高中时，你的学习压力很大，妈妈为了鼓励你写了很多卡片。请你把这段美好的回忆分享给你的好友Chris， 内容包括：
(1) 开学后感到的压力(如学习或交友等)；
(2) 妈妈通过写卡片的方式帮助你减轻压力；
(3) 你的变化和感受。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、 行文连贯；
(3)文章中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名；
(4) 信的开头及格式已为你写好，不计入词数。
参考词汇：感到有压力 feel stressed； 减轻压力 reduce pressure
Dear Chris,
While I was cleaning up my bkshelf this weekend, I fund sme cards.
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Yurs sincerely
Li Jin
天津市河北区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
51. 假设你是晨光中学高一年级的学生李津。进入高中后你感到英语学习难度加大，英语学习有困难，所以你准备给外教Mr Smith写邮件，向他请教如何学好英语。
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(1)你写信的目的；
(2)你在英语学习中遇到的困难(至少写出二点)；
(3)你期望得到 Mr Smith 的回复并表示感谢。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Mr Smith,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Jin
Li Jin
参考答案
天津市河西区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中质量调查英语试题
【答案】One pssible versin:
Dear Mr. Smith,
Are yu free this Sunday? Our Students’ Unin wuld like t hst an utdr activity this Sunday in rder t get clse t nature and take exercise.
The main activities will include planting vegetables, watering flwers and feeding the chickens, ducks and geese. It will start at 8 a.m. and end at 11 a.m. We will get tgether at the gate f ur schl at 7:30, and then walk t Guang Ming Farm, which is abut 2 kilmeters away frm ur schl. If yu are interested in these activities, please jin us.
I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以学生会主席的身份，结合提示给英语外教Mr. Smith写一封邀请信，希望他参加周日的学生户外活动。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
举办：hst→hld/rganize
为了：in rder t→in a bid t/in an effrt t
包括：include→cver/invlve
对……感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in/be keen n
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our Students’ Unin wuld like t hst an utdr activity this Sunday in rder t get clse t nature and take exercise.
拓展句：Our Students’ Unin wuld like t hst an utdr activity this Sunday s that we can get clse t nature and take exercise.
[高分句型1] We will get tgether at the gate f ur schl at 7:30, and then walk t Guang Ming Farm, which is abut 2 kilmeters away frm ur schl. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] If yu are interested in these activities, please jin us. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
天津市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题
【答案】Dear Jim,
I hpe that everything ges n well with yu. I’m writing t invite yu t jin us in the English reading circle t be held in ur schl. We’ll feel hnred if yu are present.
The activity is scheduled at 8:00 am this Friday in the auditrium. Aiming t imprve the students understanding f the beauty f freign literature, the reading circle will allw students t cmmunicate with each ther face t face, sharing their wn reading experience tgether. As we cnsider that yu can give us sme prfessinal intrductins t English literature and sme valuable suggestins n English reading, we sincerely hpe that yu can cme t jin us.
Wuld yu be kind enugh t spare sme time fr us? Thank yu in advance. Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jim写一封邮件，邀请他参加年级举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸的：hnred→privileged
提高：imprve→enhance
宝贵的：valuable→precius
考虑：cnsider→take int cnsideratin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing t invite yu t jin us in the English reading circle t be held in ur schl.
拓展句：I’m writing t invite yu t jin us in the English reading circle, which will be held in ur schl.
【高分句型1】We’ll feel hnred if yu are present.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）
【高分句型2】As we cnsider that yu can give us sme prfessinal intrductins t English literature and sme valuable suggestins n English reading, we sincerely hpe that yu can cme t jin us.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句，that引导的宾语从句）
天津市红桥区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
【答案】Dear William,
Recently, I have heard that yu feel stressed abut study. Here is sme advice n hw t study effectively.
First f all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remve ur pressure, making study an easy jb. Anther way t keep up ur spirits is t take part in sprts. Nt nly des exercise build up the bdy, but als it prvides us time t relax and fresh ur mind, making us memrize things faster and lnger. Music, t, is anther effective means f refreshing and helping us cncentrate better.
Last but nt least, we shuld exchange ideas with ur classmates. Thrugh the cmmunicatin we can find supprt, which will encurage us t vercme difficulties in ur study.
I hpe these can benefit yu
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；
2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；
3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
sme advice; study effectively; in a relaxing way; remve ur pressure; keep up ur spirits; take part in sprts; music; effective means f refreshing; exchange ideas with ur classmates; encurage
第三步：连词成句
1. Here is sme advice n hw t study effectively.
2. First f all, learn in a relaxing way.
3. This will remve ur pressure, making study an easy jb.
4. Anther way t keep up ur spirits is t take part in sprts.
5. Nt nly des exercise build up the bdy, but als it prvides us time t relax and fresh ur mind, making us memrize things faster and lnger.
6. Music, t, is anther effective means f refreshing and helping us cncentrate better.
7. Last but nt least, we shuld exchange ideas with ur classmates.
8. Thrugh the cmmunicatin we can find supprt, which will encurage us t vercme difficulties in ur study.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）【只写范文中出现的衔接词，如果没有，提供相关的衔接词，写上（供参考）】
1.表文章结构顺序：First f all, Last but nt least
2.表并列补充关系：What is mre, Besides, Mrever, Furthermre, In additin As well as, nt nly…but (als), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：Hwever, On the cntrary, but, Althugh+clause(从句), In spite f+n./ding, On the ne hand…, On the ther hand… Sme…,while thers…,as fr, s…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because, As, S, Thus, Therefre, As a result（供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
[高分句型1] Here is sme advice n hw t study effectively.(疑问词加动词不定式在句中作介词宾语)
[高分句型2] Nt nly des exercise build up the bdy, but als it prvides us time t relax and fresh ur mind, making us memrize things faster and lnger.(Nt nly…but als…引导部分倒装，句中并且运用了现在分词作结果状语)
[高分句型3] Thrugh the cmmunicatin we can find supprt, which will encurage us t vercme difficulties in ur study.(非限制性定语从句出现在句中)
天津市南开区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
【答案】Dear Chris,
While I was cleaning up my bkshelf this weekend, I fund sme cards. It culd be inferred frm the handwriting that they were written by my mther t me. I read it carefully and a famus qute came int my sight, which read “Gd helps thse wh help themselves”. It inspired me t slve all difficulties by myself. After the new high schl started, I felt a lt f pressure. I had sme truble in learning and making friends. My mther helped me relieve stress and encuraged me by writing cards.
Frm then n, I studied happily, made gd friends, and made great prgress. Recalling my mther’s cards, my heart still feels incredibly warm.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Chris写信，分享刚进高中时，妈妈写卡片鼓励自己、帮助自己减轻压力的美好回忆。
【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：famus→well-knwn
解决：slve→tackle
开始：start→begin
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My mther helped me relieve stress and encuraged me by writing cards.
拓展句：It is my mther that helped me relieve stress and encuraged me by writing cards.
【高分句型1】I read it carefully and a famus qute came int my sight, which read “Gd helps thse wh help themselves”. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】After the new high schl started, I felt a lt f pressure.(运用了after引导的时间状语从句)
天津市河北区2023-2024学年高一上学期11月期中英语试题
【答案】Dear Smith,
I am Li Jin, ne f yur students in Class 6. Having met many difficulties in learning English, I am writing this letter t ask fr help.
T begin with, I dn’t understand what my teacher says in class r the listening materials. Besides, there are s many new wrds in the texts that it is difficult fr me t memrize. I can’t remember new wrds clearly and quickly. In additin, I can’t express my thughts and feelings since I am pr nt nly at ral English but als at grammar. I wnder if yu culd help me imprve my English.
I’d appreciate it if yu can reply t me at yur earliest cnvenience.
Yurs,
Li Jin
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给外教Mr Smith写邮件，向他请教如何学好英语。
【详解】1.词汇积累
向……求助：ask sb. fr help→turn t sb. fr help
首先：t begin with→first f all
困难的：difficult→hard
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having met many difficulties in learning English, I am writing this letter t ask fr help.
拓展句：I am writing this letter t ask fr help because I have met many difficulties in learning English.
[高分句型1]T begin with, I dn’t understand what my teacher says in class r the listening materials.（运用了what引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Besides, there are s many new wrds in the texts that it is difficult fr me t memrize.（运用了s…that…引导结果状语从句）
An Outdr Activity
Aims
get clse t nature, take exercise
Time
7:30 get tgether at the schl gate, 8:00 start, 11:00 end
Place
Guang Ming Farm, 2 kilmeters away
Activities
plant vegetables, water flwers, …