专题六 读后续写 第1讲　宏观把握　感知读后续写 课件-2024年高考英语二轮复习

这是一份专题六 读后续写 第1讲　宏观把握　感知读后续写 课件-2024年高考英语二轮复习，共24页。PPT课件主要包含了第1讲，考情分析等内容，欢迎下载使用。

宏观把握　感知读后续写
新课程标准中指出写作部分主要考查学生的写作能力，其中包括写作的流利性、准确性和得体性。读后续写为主要的考查形式之一，要求考生阅读故事性短文，根据其中情节续写故事，使之完整。读后续写提供一段350词左右的语言材料，体裁一般以记叙文或夹叙夹议文为主，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给两段段落开头语进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。读后续写主要考查考生的记叙文阅读理解能力，由读到写的思维能力和记叙文书面表达能力。
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2.评分时，应先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于120的，酌情扣分。4.评分时，应主要考虑以下三个方面： ①续写内容的质量、完整性以及情节的合理性(与原文情境的融洽度)；②应用语法结构和词汇的准确性、恰当性和多样性；③上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
5.单词拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.书写较差以致影响交际，酌情扣分。
牢记“7,3,4”法则
(2023·浙江1月)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I was invited t a ckut n an ld friend’s farm in Western Washingtn.I parked my car utside the farm and walked past a milking huse which had apparently nt been used in many years.A nise at a windw caught my attentin，s I entered it.It was a hummingbird(蜂鸟)，desperately trying t escape.
She was cvered in spider-webs(蛛网) and was barely able t mve her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand，I lked arund t see hw she had gtten in.The brken windw glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece f clth int the hle and tk her utside，clsing the dr securely behind me.When I pened my hand，the bird did nt fly away；she sat lking at me with her bright eyes.I remved the sticky spider-webs that cvered her head and wings.Still，she made n attempt t fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the windw t lng and was t tired? Or t thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path tward my car where I kept a water bttle，she began t mve.I stpped，and she sn tk wing but did nt immediately fly away.Hvering(悬停)，she apprached within six inches f my face.Fr a very lng mment，this tiny creature lked int my eyes，turning her head frm side t side.Then she flew quickly ut f sight.
During the ckut，I tld my hsts abut the hummingbird incident.They prmised t fix the windw.As I was departing，my friends walked me t my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew t the center f ur grup and began hvering.She turned frm persn t persn until she came t me.She again lked directly int my eyes，then let ut a squeaking call and was gne.Fr a mment，all were speechless.Then smene said，“She must have cme t say gdbye.”
注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。A few weeks later，I went t the farm again.__________________________________________________________________________________ I was just abut t leave when the hummingbird appeared.______________________________________________________________________