北师大版高中英语必修第二册UNIT5 Section G 单元写作专题课件

这是一份北师大版高中英语必修第二册UNIT5 Section G 单元写作专题课件，共13页。
Section G　单元写作专题主题写作——人与自然1．写作任务假设你是李华，是新华中学的一名学生，你们学校正在举行安全月活动，请你写一篇关于地震逃生的文章向校报投稿。内容提示如下：(1)地震发生时，你在教室或宿舍中；(2)你在校园中活动；(3)你正好在上学或放学的途中。注意：(1)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Editor，I'm Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for your reading.Yours，Li Hua2．写作思路(一审、二定、三明确、四分段)(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题体裁：应用文——安全建议信主题：向校报投稿介绍地震发生时的个人安全防护(2)二定：确定时态和人称(与体裁和主题息息相关)时态：以一般现在时为主人称：以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅(3)三明确明确写作要点：介绍写信的目的——分享地震中的逃生技巧(三种常见的情况)(4)四分段(与写作要点息息相关)结合写作要点，正文部分可分为三段。3.素材整理(1)关键句式It's my honour to do sth.，brochure, life­saving, as follows, in the dormitory, keep calm, run out of, instead, such as, happen to do, move to the open areas, besides, stay seated, last but not least, observe the surroundings(2)完成句子①我很荣幸有写关于逃生的小册子的机会。 ______________ have such a chance to write a brochure __________．②我认为地震时我们应该按照下面的去做。I think we should do _________ when in the earthquake.③如果我们正在教室里学习或者在宿舍里休息，我们应该保持冷静。____ we are studying in the classroom or resting in the dormitory, we should _________．It's my honour toon life­savingas followsIfkeep calm④不要企图跑出大楼。Don't _____________ the building.⑤而是找一个安全的可以藏身的地方，比如课桌或床的下面。 ________， find a safe place ________ we can hide ourselves such as under a desk or bed.⑥如果恰好在校园里活动，我们应该快速转移到空旷的地方去。If we ___________ in the school yard, we should move to the open areas quickly.try to run out ofInsteadwherehappen to play⑦还有，如果我们在上学或放学的路上，我们应该待在车里坐着不动或骑自行车远离树木和电线。 ________，if we are on the way to or from school, we should ________ in the car or ride our bikes ________ trees and power lines.⑧最后但同等重要的是，我们应该保持冷静并观察周围环境。______________，we should be calm and ________ the surroundings.Besidesstay seatedaway fromLast but not leastobserve4．整理成文__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________整理成文Dear Editor，I'm Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. It's my honour to have such a chance to write a brochure on life­saving. I think we should do as follows when in the earthquake.If we are studying in the classroom or resting in the dormitory, we should keep calm. Don't try to run out of the building. Instead, find a safe place where we can hide ourselves such as under a desk or bed. If we happen to play in the school yard, we should move to the open areas quickly such as the playground. Besides, if we are on the way to or from school, we should stay seated in the car or ride our bikes away from trees and power lines. Last but not least, we should be calm and observe the surroundings.Thank you for your reading.Yours，Li Hua5．写作练习假设你是李华，上周末去某个岛上游玩，看见很多可爱的动物，听岛上的一位老人说，现在动物的数量日益减少，如果不采取措施，有些动物可能会灭绝。回来后你给野生动物保护协会写了一封信，就保护野生动物提出一些建议。注意：①词数80左右；②开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：增强意识raise one's awarenessDear Sir/Madam，I'm writing to express my concerns on how to protect the wildlife on the island I visited last weekend._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li Hua写作练习One possible version：Dear Sir/Madam，I'm writing to express my concerns on how to protect the wildlife on the island I visited last weekend. It's said that the number of the wildlife is decreasing year by year. If some measures aren't taken, wildlife will be in danger of disappearance．As far as I'm concerned, laws concerning wildlife protection should be made to punish those illegal hunters. It is necessary to set up national reserves. What's more, something should be done to raise people's awareness of protecting wildlife. Please help the poor wildlife. I am sure that they will survive with your help. Yours， Li Hua