备考中考英语专项复习 中考英语建议类写作讲解

这是一份备考中考英语专项复习 中考英语建议类写作讲解，共3页。试卷主要包含了一、 beginning等内容，欢迎下载使用。
Write a passage f at least 60 wrds n the tpic “A suggestin t my dear schl!” (以“给学校的一个建议！”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Questins fr reference nly(以下问题仅供参考)
What aren’t yu satisfied with in yur schl? Yur reasns?
What is yur suggestin?
Wuld yu give yur pssible slutin(s)?
写作思路：
审题：此篇作文是观点类作文，“给学校的一个建议”。
第一步，首先要说明自己对学校的什么感到不满意。与此同时说明自己对这些方面感到不满意的原因，原因至少给出2至3条。
第二步，针对提出的不满或不足之处给出自己的建议，建议至少给出2至3条。
第三步，总结全文，给出针对这些问题的解决方案。
2.一、 beginning：
毫无疑问，每个学校都有自己的问题，例如。。。
There is n dubt that each schl has his wn prblems, such as ...
就如我所说的，我提出这些问题的原因如下：
As far as I am cncerned, I am nt satisfied with these prblems because f the fllwing reasns.
二、pinins
在我看来，要做到以下几点。
As far as I am cncerned, we shuld d as fllwing tips.
首先，。。。
At first, ...
其次，。。。
In additin, ...
最后，。。。
Last but nt least, ...
Cnclusin:
总而言之，。。。
All in all, ...
范文：
I am a secnd year student f yur middle schl,waiting t tell yu abut my humble pinins f the learning envirnment in ur schl. Althugh we are enjying the mdernized buildings equipped with advanced cmputers, sufficient lights and well-installed desks and chairs, we d find it hard fr us t cncentrate n study when we are in the classrms. Fr ne thing, the annying nise made by vans and cars disturbs ur studies. Fr anther, the classrms, which are suppsed t be used fr self-study, are unavailable, fr they are usually ccupied fr meetings by varius kinds f assciatins. Faced with such a hard nut, we shuld find ways crack it. I suggest that ur schl shuld cnstruct sme special lanes fr the traffic and prvide assciatins with specific rms t have their meetings in rder t prvide a letter learning envirnment fr us. I appreciate yur sincere cnsideratin f my suggestins and hpe that ur schl will be ideal fr academic studies.
范文分析：
文章的第一句就表明了自己的观点，提出了问题“he learning envirnment in ur schl”。
接下来说明了提出这个问题的原因。“ Fr ne thing, the annying nise made by vans and cars disturbs ur studies. ”和“Fr anther, the classrms, which are suppsed t be used fr self-study, are unavailable, fr they are usually ccupied fr meetings by varius kinds f assciatins.”
第三部分针对问题提出的建议和解决方法。“I suggest that ur schl shuld cnstruct sme special lanes fr the traffic and prvide assciatins with specific rms t have their meetings in rder t prvide a letter learning envirnment fr us.”最后总结全文，重申自己的观点，并表达了希望问题能被解决的心愿。