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专题35 书面表达 考点3 咨询建议类-中考英语真题分项汇编（全国通用 第01期）
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这是一份专题35 书面表达 考点3 咨询建议类-中考英语真题分项汇编（全国通用 第01期），共13页。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
Hw t be gd students in the new era
____________________________________________________________________________________________
健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“Hw t keep healthy?”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：
1．文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息；3．词数80左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Hw t keep healthy?
Nwadays, peple pay much mre attentin t health. It is necessary fr everyne t learn sme ways t keep healthy.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
王梅的英国朋友Tny要来中国学习汉语，下面是Tny给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。
注意：（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于备选名字。
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
备选名字：王健（Wang Jian）；李聪（Li Cng）；张友好（Zhang Yuha）Hi Tny,
I’m very happy t knw that yu’ll cme t China t learn Chinese.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Wang Mei
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than ther girls since I was little. Fr a lng time, this really trubled me. I feel mre wrried because I will start my senir high schl life sn! I am afraid that the students in the new schl will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide t lk mre beautiful, s I want t lse weight by dieting. What d yu think f my plan? Can yu give me sme advice?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Amy
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs, Li Hua
假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ping
通过阅读理解A篇我们感受到户外活动的有趣。本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文（先介绍你喜shuld (√)
shuldn’t (x)
d sprts every day
refuse t exercise
keep a balanced diet
have junk fd
eat fruit and vegetables
stay up t late
have enugh sleep
play cmputer games a lt
keep happy
sit fr a lng time
...
...
Yu knw, in English, given names (名字) cme first and family names (姓) cme last. Hw abut Chinese names? And can yu help me chse a Chinese name and tell me its meaning?
TO LiPing@mail.cm
SUBJECT C U sn!
Hi Li Ping
Next week I’ll be with yu in Hangzhu. I can’t wait! It’s ging t be s cl! We can d lts f exciting things tgether! I need t pack fr my trip. What shuld I bring with me? Is there a swimming pl r tennis center nearby?
I’d like t get yu a gift frm where I live. What wuld yu like me t get yu?
I’m s excited abut the trip! See yu sn.
Jack
欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议），向社团投稿。
备注：如果出现地名，请以East________代替，例如：East Muntain…要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80-120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy t hear there will be an utdr activity in ur schl at the end f this mnth. ____________________________________________________________________________________________Hpe my suggestins help.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以“珍惜”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据以下图示完成一篇英语演讲稿。
要求：
1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
参考词汇：
value (v. 珍惜) respect (v. 尊敬)
relatives (n. 家人) safety (n. 安全)
Value Imprtant Things Arund Us
Gd mrning, everyne! I am Li Hua. Life is clurful. There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks fr yur listening.
你校英文报就“网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。
注意：
1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格 (一空一词)；
2. 须全面反映图文信息；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数80左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________
写作要点
参考句型
1. What utdr activity d yu like?
We’d better…
Maybe we can…
It’ll be better if…
…
2. Why d yu like it?
3. Hw d yu arrange (安排) it?
(when, where, what t d… )
参考答案
例文
Hw t be gd students in the new era.
The 21st century is a time full f challenges and chances. It is imprtant fr us t knw hw t be gd students in this new era. Tday I’m glad t share my ideas abut hw t be gd students.
First, we shuld lve ur cuntry as well as ur family. We must keep ur prmise and be thankful t peple wh helped us. We shuld be friendly with ur classmates. Secnd, we shuld study hard and be creative. We shuld help each ther and learn frm each ther. Third, we shuld take mre physical exercise t keep ur bdy and mind healthy. We shuld als d husewrk frequently and learn t be independent.
As lng as we wrk hard, we will be excellent middle schl students.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生；
第二步，从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生；
第三步，从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as以及
②help each ther互相帮助
③learn t d学习做
[高分句型]
①We must keep ur prmise and be thankful t peple wh helped us.（wh引导的定语从句）
②As lng as we wrk hard, we will be excellent middle schl students.（as lng as引导的条件状语从句）
例文
Hw t keep healthy?
Nwadays, peple pay much mre attentin t health. It is necessary fr everyne t learn sme ways t keep healthy.
We shuld d sprts every day. We shuldn’t refuse t exercise. Running fr an hur every day is gd fr health. We shuld keep a balanced diet. Eat mre fruit and vegetables. We shuldn’t have junk fd, because they are bad fr health. We had better nt stay up t late. Getting enugh sleep is helpful. We shuldn’t paly cmputer games a lt. It is bad fr ur eyes. Sitting fr a lng time is als bad fr ur health. We may feel pain in my shulder and back. We shuld have a happy md. We can keep happy by listening t music and talking t ur friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文“如何保持健康”的主题；
第二步，根据提示材料提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attentin t 注意
②keep healthy 保持健康
③refuse t d sth. 拒绝做某事
④keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食
⑤be bad fr 对……有坏处
[高分句型]
①It is necessary fr everyne t learn sme ways t keep healthy.（动词不定式作主语）
②We shuldn’t have junk fd, because they are bad fr health. （because引导原因状语从句）
例文
Hi Tny,
I’m very happy t knw that yu’ll cme t China t learn Chinese. There is n dubt that it is very imprtant and useful t learn Chinese well.
We always put ur family name first. They are frm ur family, and it’s surely ur Chinese traditin. Then given names cme last. Secndly, I prefer Li Cng as yur Chinese name. I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. Just like yu! As far as I am cncerned, the names are the culture f a cuntry. A gd name stands fr a gd luck.
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Wang Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求针对邮件内容给出答复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明学好中文的必要性；
第二步，介绍中国的姓名文化并为对方推荐一个名字；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①imprtant and useful重要的和有用的
②Chinese traditin中国传统
③stand fr代表
[高分句型]
There is n dubt that it is very imprtant and useful t learn Chinese well.（There is n dubt that...句型）②I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. （省略that的宾语从句）
例文
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting. As yu mentined in the letter, I have sme advice fr yu.
Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident and psitive, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. Inner beauty is mre imprtant than appearance. Secndly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very imprtant fr lsing weight. Thirdly, ding prper exercise is necessary. Yu’d better get up early in the mrning and d sme sprts regularly.
The mre yu exercise, the healthier yu’ll be. I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs, Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；
第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①there is n need t d sth没必要做某事
②stay away frm…与……保持距离
③have curage t d sth有勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.（宾语从句）
②Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
例文
Hi Jack,
I am s glad t receive yur email. I can’t wait t see yu, t.
It will be very ht in Hangzhu next week, s yu shuld bring sme T-shirts and shrts as well as sme sunscreen. There is a big swimming pl near my huse. We can swim in it fr free. In additin, there is a tennis center three kilmeters frm my hme, s we can als g t play tennis. I like English lcal prducts very much. If it is cnvenient fr yu, please bring me sme.
I am lking frward t meeting yu.
Li Ping【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件；
第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心；
第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait t d迫不及待做
②as well as和，以及
③lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①It will be very ht in Hangzhu next week, s yu shuld bring sme T-shirts and shrts as well as sme sunscreen. （s引导并列句）
②If it is cnvenient fr yu, please bring me sme.（if引导的条件状语从句）
例文1：
Dear sir,
I’m happy t hear there will be an utdr activity in ur schl at the end f this mnth. I like climbing muntains with my classmates. We can enjy the beauty f nature. We can als make friends and help each ther n the way.
T make the activity mre interesting, I hpe t g t East Muntain n June 25th. Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the schl gate at 7:30 a.m. and g there by bus. We can cllect sme histry stries abut the famus muntain s that we can share them tgether. It’ll be nice if we can try sme lcal fd fr lunch there. In the afternn, we can pick up the rubbish t prtect the envirnment. Then we can g hme at 4:30 p.m. We’re sure t have great fun.
Hpe my suggestins help.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
例文2：
Dear sir,
I’m happy t hear there will be an utdr activity in ur schl at the end f this mnth. I like travelling t the cuntryside with my classmates. I can nt nly enjy fresh air but als take exercise. It’s a gd experience t learn abut nature.
T make the trip mre interesting, I’d like t share my suggestins. Firstly, I hpe t g t East Farm n June 25th because it’s nt far. Secndly, we’d better d sme farm wrk. We can talk with the farmers s that we canknw abut different plants. After that, fr lunch, maybe we can ck and eat the vegetables which grw there. Finally, it’ll be better if we can make friends with the children in the cuntryside in the afternn. I’m sure we will have a nice time.
Hpe my suggestins help.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你喜欢的户外活动。
第二步，说明理由。
第三步，就活动安排提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty f nature自然之美
②hpe t d希望做某事
③pick up拾起，捡起
[高分句型]
①Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the schl gate at 7:30 a.m. and g there by bus. (原因状语从句)
②It’ll be nice if we can try sme lcal fd fr lunch there. (if引导条件状语从句)
例文
Value Imprtant Things Arund Us
Gd mrning, everyne! I am Li Hua. Life is clurful. There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life.
First, we shuld value ur lives. We shuld stay away frm dangerus things like fire. We shuld pay attentin t ur safety. Secnd, we shuld value ur health. We shuld d much exercise t make us healthy. We shuld als get enugh sleep s that we can d everything well. Thirdly, we shuld value ur relative and friends. We shuld shw lve and respect fr the elderly. We had better spend mre time cmmunicating with them. Fr friends, we shuld trust each ther and help them in need. We shuld get n well with them. Finally, we shuld value the time and make gd plans fr ur study. Dn’t waste time n useless things.
Thanks fr yur listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，分别从珍惜生命，珍惜健康，珍惜亲朋好友，珍惜时间等方面介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①stay away frm远离
②pay attentin t注意
③spend time ding sth花时间做某事
④get n well with sb与某人和睦相处
[高分句型]
①There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life.（there be句型）
②We shuld d much exercise t make us healthy. （动词不定式作目的状语）
③We shuld als get enugh sleep s that we can d everything well.（s that引导目的状语从句）
例文：
Stay Safe Online
With the wide f spread f the f the Internet, we have easy access t almst everything we want t knw. Meanwhile, there are als hidden dangers that we can’t see thrugh. Then what shuld we d t stay safe nline?
First f all, prtect yur privacy. Dn’t give away yur persnal infrmatin like name r address. Secnd, dn’t click n any strange link s as t avid prperty lss. Third, never see strangers yu meet nline. Finally, always be plite in the virtual wrld. Try nt t be a target fr a cyberbully.
Only when we bey the rules abve ca we build a healthy and harmnius nline wrld.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出我们面对的网络安全问题。
第二步，对如何保证网络安全提出一些建议。
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①with the wide f spread f随着……广泛传播
②first f all首先
③give away泄露
④click n点击
[高分句型]
①Meanwhile, there are als hidden dangers that we can’t see thrugh. (that引导定语从句)
②Then what shuld we d t stay safe nline? (动词不定式表目的)
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。
Hw t be gd students in the new era
____________________________________________________________________________________________
健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“Hw t keep healthy?”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。
要求：
1．文章必须包含以下表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；
2．文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息；3．词数80左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Hw t keep healthy?
Nwadays, peple pay much mre attentin t health. It is necessary fr everyne t learn sme ways t keep healthy.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
王梅的英国朋友Tny要来中国学习汉语，下面是Tny给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以王梅的名义回复。
注意：（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的两个问题，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名，所起名字只限于备选名字。
（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
备选名字：王健（Wang Jian）；李聪（Li Cng）；张友好（Zhang Yuha）Hi Tny,
I’m very happy t knw that yu’ll cme t China t learn Chinese.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Wang Mei
假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
参考词汇: diet(v.节食), appearance (n.外貌), inner beauty (内在美)
Dear Li Hua,
I have been a bit larger than ther girls since I was little. Fr a lng time, this really trubled me. I feel mre wrried because I will start my senir high schl life sn! I am afraid that the students in the new schl will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide t lk mre beautiful, s I want t lse weight by dieting. What d yu think f my plan? Can yu give me sme advice?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Amy
要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；
4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs, Li Hua
假定你是李平，请你对英国朋友Jack的邮件进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Jack,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Ping
通过阅读理解A篇我们感受到户外活动的有趣。本月底你校将举办一次户外活动，为了更好地开展这次活动，校英语社团正在向学生征集意见。假设你是张华，请根据表格内容写一篇短文（先介绍你喜shuld (√)
shuldn’t (x)
d sprts every day
refuse t exercise
keep a balanced diet
have junk fd
eat fruit and vegetables
stay up t late
have enugh sleep
play cmputer games a lt
keep happy
sit fr a lng time
...
...
Yu knw, in English, given names (名字) cme first and family names (姓) cme last. Hw abut Chinese names? And can yu help me chse a Chinese name and tell me its meaning?
TO LiPing@mail.cm
SUBJECT C U sn!
Hi Li Ping
Next week I’ll be with yu in Hangzhu. I can’t wait! It’s ging t be s cl! We can d lts f exciting things tgether! I need t pack fr my trip. What shuld I bring with me? Is there a swimming pl r tennis center nearby?
I’d like t get yu a gift frm where I live. What wuld yu like me t get yu?
I’m s excited abut the trip! See yu sn.
Jack
欢的户外活动，再说明理由，最后就活动安排提出合理的建议），向社团投稿。
备注：如果出现地名，请以East________代替，例如：East Muntain…要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80-120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir,
I’m happy t hear there will be an utdr activity in ur schl at the end f this mnth. ____________________________________________________________________________________________Hpe my suggestins help.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
漫漫人生，有得有失。幸运的是，我们拥有许多美好。活在当下，请珍惜身边的一切美好。假如你是李华，你们学校将于下周举行以“珍惜”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据以下图示完成一篇英语演讲稿。
要求：
1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部图示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；
3. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
参考词汇：
value (v. 珍惜) respect (v. 尊敬)
relatives (n. 家人) safety (n. 安全)
Value Imprtant Things Arund Us
Gd mrning, everyne! I am Li Hua. Life is clurful. There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life. ________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks fr yur listening.
你校英文报就“网络安全”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示，以“Stay Safe Online”为题投稿。
注意：
1. 请先在答题卡上填写图示中空格 (一空一词)；
2. 须全面反映图文信息；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数80左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________
写作要点
参考句型
1. What utdr activity d yu like?
We’d better…
Maybe we can…
It’ll be better if…
…
2. Why d yu like it?
3. Hw d yu arrange (安排) it?
(when, where, what t d… )
参考答案
例文
Hw t be gd students in the new era.
The 21st century is a time full f challenges and chances. It is imprtant fr us t knw hw t be gd students in this new era. Tday I’m glad t share my ideas abut hw t be gd students.
First, we shuld lve ur cuntry as well as ur family. We must keep ur prmise and be thankful t peple wh helped us. We shuld be friendly with ur classmates. Secnd, we shuld study hard and be creative. We shuld help each ther and learn frm each ther. Third, we shuld take mre physical exercise t keep ur bdy and mind healthy. We shuld als d husewrk frequently and learn t be independent.
As lng as we wrk hard, we will be excellent middle schl students.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，从品德方面介绍如何成为好学生；
第二步，从学业方面介绍如何成为好学生；
第三步，从生活方面介绍如何成为好学生。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as以及
②help each ther互相帮助
③learn t d学习做
[高分句型]
①We must keep ur prmise and be thankful t peple wh helped us.（wh引导的定语从句）
②As lng as we wrk hard, we will be excellent middle schl students.（as lng as引导的条件状语从句）
例文
Hw t keep healthy?
Nwadays, peple pay much mre attentin t health. It is necessary fr everyne t learn sme ways t keep healthy.
We shuld d sprts every day. We shuldn’t refuse t exercise. Running fr an hur every day is gd fr health. We shuld keep a balanced diet. Eat mre fruit and vegetables. We shuldn’t have junk fd, because they are bad fr health. We had better nt stay up t late. Getting enugh sleep is helpful. We shuldn’t paly cmputer games a lt. It is bad fr ur eyes. Sitting fr a lng time is als bad fr ur health. We may feel pain in my shulder and back. We shuld have a happy md. We can keep happy by listening t music and talking t ur friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文“如何保持健康”的主题；
第二步，根据提示材料提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attentin t 注意
②keep healthy 保持健康
③refuse t d sth. 拒绝做某事
④keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食
⑤be bad fr 对……有坏处
[高分句型]
①It is necessary fr everyne t learn sme ways t keep healthy.（动词不定式作主语）
②We shuldn’t have junk fd, because they are bad fr health. （because引导原因状语从句）
例文
Hi Tny,
I’m very happy t knw that yu’ll cme t China t learn Chinese. There is n dubt that it is very imprtant and useful t learn Chinese well.
We always put ur family name first. They are frm ur family, and it’s surely ur Chinese traditin. Then given names cme last. Secndly, I prefer Li Cng as yur Chinese name. I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. Just like yu! As far as I am cncerned, the names are the culture f a cuntry. A gd name stands fr a gd luck.
Lking frward t seeing yu.
Yurs,
Wang Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求针对邮件内容给出答复，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明学好中文的必要性；
第二步，介绍中国的姓名文化并为对方推荐一个名字；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①imprtant and useful重要的和有用的
②Chinese traditin中国传统
③stand fr代表
[高分句型]
There is n dubt that it is very imprtant and useful t learn Chinese well.（There is n dubt that...句型）②I think this name represents intelligence and cleverness. （省略that的宾语从句）
例文
Dear Amy,
I have received and read yur letter, in which yu said yu wanted t lse weight by dieting. As yu mentined in the letter, I have sme advice fr yu.
Firstly, there is n need t care abut what thers think f yu. The mst imprtant thing is t be cnfident and psitive, as it will help yu have curage t face and vercme yur truble. Inner beauty is mre imprtant than appearance. Secndly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very imprtant fr lsing weight. Thirdly, ding prper exercise is necessary. Yu’d better get up early in the mrning and d sme sprts regularly.
The mre yu exercise, the healthier yu’ll be. I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.
Yurs, Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；
第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；
第三步，总结全文，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①there is n need t d sth没必要做某事
②stay away frm…与……保持距离
③have curage t d sth有勇气做某事
[高分句型]
①I hpe my advice will be helpful t yu.（宾语从句）
②Stay away frm high-fat fd and eat mre fruit and vegetables instead.（祈使句）
例文
Hi Jack,
I am s glad t receive yur email. I can’t wait t see yu, t.
It will be very ht in Hangzhu next week, s yu shuld bring sme T-shirts and shrts as well as sme sunscreen. There is a big swimming pl near my huse. We can swim in it fr free. In additin, there is a tennis center three kilmeters frm my hme, s we can als g t play tennis. I like English lcal prducts very much. If it is cnvenient fr yu, please bring me sme.
I am lking frward t meeting yu.
Li Ping【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先表示自己很开心收到对方的邮件；
第二步，具体阐述他需要带的东西以及介绍家附近的游泳池或网球中心；
第三步，最后介绍自己想要对方带什么。
[亮点词汇]
①can’t wait t d迫不及待做
②as well as和，以及
③lk frward t期待
[高分句型]
①It will be very ht in Hangzhu next week, s yu shuld bring sme T-shirts and shrts as well as sme sunscreen. （s引导并列句）
②If it is cnvenient fr yu, please bring me sme.（if引导的条件状语从句）
例文1：
Dear sir,
I’m happy t hear there will be an utdr activity in ur schl at the end f this mnth. I like climbing muntains with my classmates. We can enjy the beauty f nature. We can als make friends and help each ther n the way.
T make the activity mre interesting, I hpe t g t East Muntain n June 25th. Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the schl gate at 7:30 a.m. and g there by bus. We can cllect sme histry stries abut the famus muntain s that we can share them tgether. It’ll be nice if we can try sme lcal fd fr lunch there. In the afternn, we can pick up the rubbish t prtect the envirnment. Then we can g hme at 4:30 p.m. We’re sure t have great fun.
Hpe my suggestins help.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
例文2：
Dear sir,
I’m happy t hear there will be an utdr activity in ur schl at the end f this mnth. I like travelling t the cuntryside with my classmates. I can nt nly enjy fresh air but als take exercise. It’s a gd experience t learn abut nature.
T make the trip mre interesting, I’d like t share my suggestins. Firstly, I hpe t g t East Farm n June 25th because it’s nt far. Secndly, we’d better d sme farm wrk. We can talk with the farmers s that we canknw abut different plants. After that, fr lunch, maybe we can ck and eat the vegetables which grw there. Finally, it’ll be better if we can make friends with the children in the cuntryside in the afternn. I’m sure we will have a nice time.
Hpe my suggestins help.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你喜欢的户外活动。
第二步，说明理由。
第三步，就活动安排提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the beauty f nature自然之美
②hpe t d希望做某事
③pick up拾起，捡起
[高分句型]
①Since it’s a little far, we’d better meet at the schl gate at 7:30 a.m. and g there by bus. (原因状语从句)
②It’ll be nice if we can try sme lcal fd fr lunch there. (if引导条件状语从句)
例文
Value Imprtant Things Arund Us
Gd mrning, everyne! I am Li Hua. Life is clurful. There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life.
First, we shuld value ur lives. We shuld stay away frm dangerus things like fire. We shuld pay attentin t ur safety. Secnd, we shuld value ur health. We shuld d much exercise t make us healthy. We shuld als get enugh sleep s that we can d everything well. Thirdly, we shuld value ur relative and friends. We shuld shw lve and respect fr the elderly. We had better spend mre time cmmunicating with them. Fr friends, we shuld trust each ther and help them in need. We shuld get n well with them. Finally, we shuld value the time and make gd plans fr ur study. Dn’t waste time n useless things.
Thanks fr yur listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，分别从珍惜生命，珍惜健康，珍惜亲朋好友，珍惜时间等方面介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①stay away frm远离
②pay attentin t注意
③spend time ding sth花时间做某事
④get n well with sb与某人和睦相处
[高分句型]
①There are many imprtant things we shuld value in ur daily life.（there be句型）
②We shuld d much exercise t make us healthy. （动词不定式作目的状语）
③We shuld als get enugh sleep s that we can d everything well.（s that引导目的状语从句）
例文：
Stay Safe Online
With the wide f spread f the f the Internet, we have easy access t almst everything we want t knw. Meanwhile, there are als hidden dangers that we can’t see thrugh. Then what shuld we d t stay safe nline?
First f all, prtect yur privacy. Dn’t give away yur persnal infrmatin like name r address. Secnd, dn’t click n any strange link s as t avid prperty lss. Third, never see strangers yu meet nline. Finally, always be plite in the virtual wrld. Try nt t be a target fr a cyberbully.
Only when we bey the rules abve ca we build a healthy and harmnius nline wrld.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出我们面对的网络安全问题。
第二步，对如何保证网络安全提出一些建议。
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①with the wide f spread f随着……广泛传播
②first f all首先
③give away泄露
④click n点击
[高分句型]
①Meanwhile, there are als hidden dangers that we can’t see thrugh. (that引导定语从句)
②Then what shuld we d t stay safe nline? (动词不定式表目的)
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