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这是一份(20-22)三年中考真题英语分项汇编专题49+说明介绍类(含解析),共196页。
【2022年】
(一)(2022·广东广州·中考真题)
你校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green Schl Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。
注意:
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
My Green Schl Library
I want t design a green schl library.
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【答案】例文
My Green Schl Library
I want t design a green schl library. It is green. It is built entirely frm renewable resurces. It is rund. When yu sit inside, yu will feel very warm. It is cmpsed f waste paper and slar panels. All its energy cmes frm the sun. Yu can read all kinds f bks in it. Yu can als listen t music in it. If yu are tired, yu can als rest inside.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文主要以“My Green Schl Library”为题,并根据题干中的思维导图介绍你所设计的绿色图书馆,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。主要是根据思维导图中的提示描述自己设计的绿色图书馆,写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(二)(2022·湖北宜昌·中考真题)
假如你学校的校园广播《英语之声》栏目以“I lve ________”为主题征稿,请你投稿。
稿件内容:
◆热爱的主题
◆热爱的理由
◆适当的感悟
稿件要求:
(1)请补全标题;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数80词左右。
I lve ________
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【答案】例文
I lve reading
I lve reading very much. I remember it was five years ag that I became interested in reading. At that time, I jined a reading club nline. I was glad t find there were s many bks fr me t read. My teacher encuraged me t read different kinds f bks, and then share my feelings with ther readers. I fund great fun sharing ideas. Ever since then, reading has been my favrite hbby.
Frm reading bks, I can nt nly learn a lt frm them, but als pen a new wrld fr me. It makes me relaxed and brings me a lt f fun. I think mre and mre peple will lve reading in the future.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“我喜欢阅读”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段先引出自己喜爱的事情,接着描述自己喜爱它的原因和经历;第二段描述自己从中得到的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(三)(2022·河北·中考真题)
假如你是学校英文网站的主编,准备在网站设立Dialgue with Teachers专栏(clumn).
请根据下面的提示写一篇短文,谈一谈设立此专栏的目的。
提示:(1)Develp a gd relatinship(understand, becme friends).
(2)Give sme suggestins(n hmewrk, after-schl activities,…).
注意:(1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
We plan t have a new clumn—Dialgue with Teachers n the schl English website. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
We plan t have a new clumn—Dialgue with Teachers n the schl English website. We hpe t help students and teachers understand each ther and eventually becme gd friends thrugh this clumn. If yu have any questins, yu can ask the teacher directly thrugh the clumn, and the teacher will reply n time.
At the same time, sme teachers will put frward sme suggestins n hw t wrk efficiently and slve prblems. Of curse, we will als make suggestins fr after-schl activities. When the exam cmes, sme teachers will give sme suggestins n hmewrk and hw t review.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,谈一谈设立此专栏的目的,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第二、第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。作文可分为两段,第一段介绍设立专栏的目的之一是为了发展良好的关系;第二段介绍设立专栏的目的之一是为了给一些建议 。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(四)(2022·江苏扬州·中考真题)
最近,你校开展了“巧手制书签,书香满校园”主题活动,请你以“A DIY bkmark fr my favurite bk”为题,根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文,向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿,介绍制作书签的目的和过程,并分享制作心得。
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。A DIY bkmark fr my favurite bk
Last week I tk part in ur schl’s Reading & Bkmark-making activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
A DIY bkmark fr my favurite bk
Last week I tk part in ur schl’s Reading & Bkmark-making activity. Its purpse was t help us enjy reading ur favurite bk. My favrite bk is the classic nvel Jurney t the West, ne f the Fur Great Classical Nvels. I like Mnkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In rder t make a bkmark, I prepared a card, scissrs, glue and s n. First, I cut the card int lng strips. And then I drew a picture f a mnkey n the left and wrte a famus saying “Nthing is impssible if yu put yur heart int it.” n the right t encurage me nt t give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it t a thin piece f wd.
Althugh I met sme difficulties in this prcess, I never gave up and I am prud f myself.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文以“A DIY bkmark fr my favurite bk”为题,并结合表格中的内容,描述制作书签的目的和过程,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的,以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方;第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程;第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(五)(2022·山东泰安·中考真题)
让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动,对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以 “My Vlunteer Wrk Plan” 为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。
要求: 1. 可选择表格中的1-2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,词数80-100;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。My Vlunteer Wrk Plan
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【答案】例文
My Vlunteer Wrk Plan
The summer hliday is cming. I am ging t d sme vlunteer wrk. I will help t clean up the city park. Of curse, I will ask mre peple t jin me. I will call up my friends and ask them t cme. We will pick up the litter, the plastic bags and ther waste things. I hpe ur city will be mre beautiful. Besides, I am ging t visit sick kids in hspital. I lve children and enjy getting alng with them. I will sing fr the kids at the city hspital t cheer them up. I hpe they can be better sn.
Nt nly d I feel gd abut helping ther peple, but als I get t spend time ding what I lve t d. All in all, I will enjy myself in the summer hliday.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假期间的志愿者计划。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称采用第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段介绍自己的志愿者计划以及打算做些什么事情;第二段表达自己做志愿者的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(六)(2022·四川达州·中考真题)
初中生活已近尾声,我们即将迎来崭新的高中生活。请以“My Plans fr Senir High Schl Life”为题,从以下五个方面谈谈你的打算:
1.尽快适应新环境;
2.合理利用时间,保证充足睡眠;
3.认真对待学习,取得进步;
4.积极加入社团,交更多的朋友;
5.……
写作要求:
(1)内容包括提示信息并适当发挥,文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。
(2)全文字数不少于90词。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)卷面整洁,书写工整,条理清楚,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确。
参考词汇:adjust t 适应
My Plans fr Senir High Schl Life
My junir high schl days are cming t an end. And nw I am lking frward t my life in senir high schl. T better prepare fr it, I’ve made sme plans.
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【答案】例文
My Plans fr Senir High Schl Life
My junir high schl days are cming t an end. And nw I am lking frward t my life in senir high schl. T better prepare fr it, I’ve made sme plans.
Firstly, I’m ging t adapt t the new envirnment as sn as pssible. Secndly, I plan t make gd use f time and get enugh sleep. Thirdly, I will take study seriusly and make prgress. Furthly, I will jin clubs actively and make mre friends. Lastly, I’m ready t take up my hbby f playing basketball in my free time t nt nly keep healthy but als keep my mind clear by playing basketball.
All in all, my plans will nt be achieved if I just talk, s I’ll put in mre effrts t make them cme true.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My Plans fr Senir High Schl Life”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来行文,时态以一般将来时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己详细的计划;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(七)(2022·四川德阳·中考真题)
假如你是李华。你校校刊征稿,请你以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题,用英语写一篇稿件,简单介绍中国的茶文化。
内容包括:1.茶是中国最受欢迎的饮料之一,有悠久的历史;
2.茶的种类多,许多地方产茶,如:四川、浙江;
3.茶有益身体健康;
4.一天中的任何时候都可以饮茶,朋友聚会时可以饮茶,一个人独处时也可以饮茶;
5.茶是中国传统文化,可以作为礼物送给亲朋好友。
注意:1.词数80词左右(标题已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不能出现自己的真实信息。
Chinese Tea Culture
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【答案】例文:
Chinese Tea Culture
Tea is ne f the mst ppular drinks in China. It has a lng histry. There are different kinds f tea, such as green tea, Pu’er and Tieguanyin. Tea is prduced in many places, such as Sichuan, Zhejiang and Anhui. Tea is gd fr peple’s health. Peple drink tea in any time f the day. Yu can drink tea with yur friends in the party, r enjy it n yur wn. Tea is a symbl f traditinal Chinese culture. Peple ften ffer it as a gift t friends and relatives.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题,用英语写一篇稿件。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍中国的茶的种类,茶的好处,并讲述中国的茶文化等。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主,写作时要认真审题,根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
(八)(2022·浙江湖州·中考真题)
假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“Wrking the Waste int Magic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。
注意:
(1)短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80—100。短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。Hell, everyne! I’d like t tell yu smething abut the shw “Wrking the Waste int Magic” . _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Pssible versin:
Hell, everyne! I’d like t tell yu smething abut the shw “Wrking the Waste int Magic”.
A number f creative wrks were n shw, including clthes made frm waste paper and mdel planes made f used wd and glass. Anther fascinating wrk is a chair that is made f plastic bttles. They are glued tgether and painted in different clrs.
I was mst interested in a backpack fr cmputers. It is made ut f a pair f ld jeans! With the zipper f jeans n the tp, tw pckets n tw sides, the backpack lks bth useful and fashinable. It even has a lg!
I felt amazed at hw waste culd be put t such gd use. It really helps t save energy and build a greener future.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍“变废为宝”的环保作品展的情况,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
(九)(2022·浙江丽水·中考真题)
假如你是李明,你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划,请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
注意:
1)文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3)词数:80~ 100;邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】例文:
Dear David,
Glad t share my scial practice plan with yu.
As it will be the last summer hliday in junir schl, sme classmates and I plan t g n a graduatin trip t Hangzhu, the capital city f Zhejiang. By enjying the beautiful scenery and clrful cultures there, we can pen ur eyes and bring sme unfrgettable memries. After the trip, I will vlunteer t help in ur city library, srting ut bks, guiding readers t the right bkshelves, and f curse, cmmunicating with different peple. I’m sure this experience can nt nly enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning f learning by ding.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时,人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划;最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(十)(2022·四川泸州·中考真题)
开展丰富多彩的课外活动对我们很有好处。请以“Free-time Activities”为题,用英语写一篇短文介绍你及朋友们的课外活动开展情况。
要点提示:
1. 内容:体育,如跑步;艺术,如唱歌绘画;劳动,如做家务、参加志愿者活动;其它,如阅读……。
2. 好处:休息放松,学习新知识,学会新技能,结交新朋友等。
3. 个人观点:……。
要求:
1. 词数110词左右(首句已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容;
3. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语: vlunteer, relax, knwledge, skill
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are gd fr us teenagers.
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【答案】例文
Free-time Activities
Free-time activities are gd fr us teenagers.
My friends and I have a variety f free-time activities. First, we ften run fr an hur n weekends and we always play ftball after class because we all like playing it. If we have time, we will draw sme beautiful pictures t decrate ur schl. What’s mre, we ften help ur parents d the husewrk. Even sme f us d sme vlunteer wrk, such as cleaning the park and visiting the ld. And we als read sme interesting bks and share ur ideas tgether.
Free-time activities are beneficial t us. We can nt nly relax, but als we can learn sme knwledge that can’t be learnt in class. Besides, we can learn sme skills that are imprtant t ur life. The mst imprtant is that we can make many friends wh have the same interest.
In my pinin, we shuld spare sme time t d free-time activities in rder t grw up healthily.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文以“Free-time Activities”为题,并根据题干中的提示写一篇文章,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出;第二段从不同方面介绍自己和朋友的课外活动;第三段介绍课外活动的好处;最后一段发表自己的观点。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(十一)(2022·四川眉山·中考真题)
本周日上午,一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观,现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华,请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括:
1. 自荐目的:成为志愿者;
2. 个人信息:身份,年龄,性格(外向、善于与人相处),本周日上午有空;
3. 个人优势:擅长英语,……;
4. 表达期望:获得机会并能做好,请本周五前回复。
注意:
1. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
参考词汇:三苏祠Sansu Temple
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad t see yur ntice Vlunteers Wanted. Sme freign students…______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】One pssible versin
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad t see yur ntice Vlunteers Wanted. Sme freign students will visit Sansu Temple this Sunday mrning. I’m willing t be a vlunteer.
Let me intrduce myself t yu. I’m a middle schl student aged 15. I’m an utging girl/by wh can always get n well with thers. As fr the time, I will be available this Sunday mrning. My ral English is s excellent that I have n difficulty cmmunicating with freign friends. Mre imprtantly, I knw a lt abut Sansu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding f it.
I believe I can manage it if yu give me a chance. Please reply t me by Friday!(103 wrds)
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,写封邮件自荐成为三苏祠的志愿者,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍自荐的目的,自己的信息和优势,以及自己的期望。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(十二)(2022·四川遂宁·中考真题)
向世界传递中国文化,让世界倾听中国声音。近期,我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华,你想参加此次活动,请根据下面的提示信息,向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封80词左右的自荐信。
要点提示:
1.个人信息:姓名、年龄、班级、性格等;
2.个人优势:
(1)读了很多关于中国历史的书,了解中国历史;
(2)知道很多历史故事,并且擅长用英语讲述它们;
(3) ……
3. 个人感想:
(1)可以培养英语学习兴趣,提高口语表达能力;
(2)让更多的人了解中国历史和文化,并为之感到自豪。
注意:
1.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯。
3.不可逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Yang,
I’m excited t hear that ur schl will hld the activity “telling Chinese stries in English”. I really want t take part in it.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I expect that yu can give me this chance t shw myself and I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Yang,
I’ m excited t hear that ur schl will hld the activity “telling Chinese stries in English”. I really want t take part in it.
It’s my great hnr t intrduce myself. I’m a by frm Class One, Grade Eight. My name is Li Hua and I’m 14 years ld. I’m an utging by. I have many hbbies, especially reading. I have read lts f classics n Chinese histry s I’m familiar with Chinese histry and culture. And I knw plenty f traditinal flk stries, like Hw Yi Shts the Suns, Yu Gng Mves a Muntain and s n. I can even tell them in English. And I can get a strng feeling f satisfactin when I see the lk f jy n their faces while my classmates are listening t me.
In a wrd, this activity is meaningful. We can nt nly create an interest f learning English but als imprve ur spken English thrugh the activity. As a Chinese student, it’s ur duty t make mre peple knw abut ur histry and culture! I’m prud f it! Only in this way can I make it!
I expect that yu can give me this chance t shw myself and I’m lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文主要是写一封自荐信,根据题干中的提示内容进行写作,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出;第二段主要介绍自己的个人信息和个人优势;第三段讲述自己的个人感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
【2021年】
A
(2021·四川乐山市·中考真题)
研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动, 深受学生的喜爱。为此, 请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文, 介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。内容包括:
1. 学习采茶、手工制作, 休验生活;
2.观察动、植物, 亲近自然;
3. 参观名胜古迹、博物馆, 了解历史文化;
4. 观看有意义的影视, 感受国家变化。
注意: 1. 词数80词左右;开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节, 使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
4. 参考词汇: meaningful adj. 有意义的
The study trip is a kind f schl educatin which is held utside and ppular with students.
Our schl has als held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The study trip is a kind f schl educatin which is held utside and ppular with students.
Our schl has als held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went t pick tea in persn and made things by hand t experience life. Secndly, we gt clse t nature and I learnt mre knwledge by watching many plants and animals. Then, after we visited museums as well as places f interest, we understd Chinese histry and culture mre deeply. Finally, we saw sme meaningful mvies and felt the great changes f ur cuntry.
In my pinin, the study trip is very helpful fr us and we will be able t have mre chances t take part in these kinds f activities.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点,写出自己学校的游学经历,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作,时态以一般过去时为主,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
B
(2021·甘肃天水市·中考真题)
学习一门新的语言不是一件容易的事情,不过万事都有规律可循。请根据思维导图提示的语言学习经历和经验,以 “Hw can we becme gd language learners?”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 应包含思维导图提示中所有要点,可适当进行拓展;
2. 词数:80词左右;
3. 书写工整规范;
4. 标题、首末段已给出,不计入总词数,无需抄写在答题卡书面表达作答区域;
5. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Hw can we becme gd language learners?
What makes a gd language learner? There are sme things that gd language learners d and sme things they dn’t d._________________________________________________________________________________
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Dn’t frget that it’s never t late t becme a gd language learner.
【答案】
Hw can we becme gd language learners?
What makes a gd language learner? There are sme things that gd language learners d and sme things they dn’t d.
First, dn’t be afraid f making mistakes. Peple ften get things wrng. Gd language learners ntice their mistakes and learn frm them. Then, d grup activities. Peple use language t cmmunicate with ther peple. Als, be sure t use a dictinary. Gd language learners ften use dictinaries t check the meaning f wrds they dn’t knw. What’s mre, gd language learners have fun with the language. Watch a film, listen t sngs, play vide games r read a bk. At last, think in the language yu’re learning utside the classrm.
Dn’t frget that it’s never t late t becme a gd language learner.
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据思维导图的提示,写一篇题目为“Hw can we becme gd language learners?”的短文。
2.写作指导:本文时态为一般现在时为主,人称主要为第三人称。根据思维导图所给的要点提示进行写作,可适当发挥,注意表达清楚自己的观点,并给出合理的理由和建议来支撑观点,写作时注意语句通顺、语法正确、条理清晰。
C
(2021·河北中考真题)
初中生活已近尾声,同学们即将步入高一级学校。请你仔细阅读下表中的内容和所给提示,从下面两所学校中选择一所你喜欢的学校,并根据该校信息写一篇短文。
提示:(1) Which schl wuld yu like t g t?
(2) Why d yu chse it?
注意:1. 短文须包括表格中你所选学校的全部信息和提示中的两个要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
I wuld like t g t_______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I wuld like t g t Orange Schl.
I like Orange Schl better because it is a private schl and it is well-knwn in ur city. There are a lt f new and mdern teaching facilities. We can have access t the mst advanced equipment and experience the best teaching effects. What’s mre, the teachers in Orange Schl are yung and active. I think it is imprtant and helpful fr us t develp a gd relatinship with teachers. And it is gd fr ur study. Last but nt least, students there have clrful activities and I hpe the schl life will be wnderful there.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,选择一所喜欢的学校进行写作。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的特点、学校老师和学生的情况等。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
D
(2021·湖南岳阳市·中考真题)
根据《中国美好生活大调查》结果,我们的家乡岳阳荣获“中国美好生活城市十大心仪之城”的称号,是湖南省唯一入选的地级市。家乡,一个你成长的地方,请你根据下面的图表信息,以“My Hmetwn—Yueyang”为题,写一篇英语短文向别人介绍你的家乡岳阳。
要求:
1.词数80〜100;
2.请根据以上提示信息,结合实际情况叙述,可适当发挥;
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
4.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
My Hmetwn — Yueyang
Yueyang is ne f the tp ten favrite cities in China._____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My Hmetwn — Yueyang
Yueyang is ne f the tp ten favrite cities in China. It is lcated in the nrtheast f Hunan, cvering abut 15,019 square kilmeters. It has a ppulatin f abut 5.77 millin. Yueyang has a histry f ver 2,500 years. There are different seasns in Yueyang. Yueyang is a place with fresh air and clean water. There are als many places t visit, such as Dngting Lake and Yueyang Twer. Yueyang als has a lt f gd things t eat. Yu can eat fish, rice, crayfish and s n.
D yu like my hmetwn? Welcme t visit my hmetwn.
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据思维导图内容介绍自己的家乡——岳阳,要包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称和一般现在时来介绍岳阳,内容需包含位置、面积大小、人口、历史、天气、环境、名胜和美食等方面,可适当发挥。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
E
(2021·陕西中考真题)
人们常说:“服务他人,快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容,给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文, 介绍你的计划。
要求:
1. 参考表格提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于70 词。(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。)
As we all knw, “Serving thers can bring us happiness.” Summer hliday is cming, I’ll ________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful hliday this summer.
【答案】
As we all knw, “Serving thers can bring us happiness.” Summer hliday is cming. I’ll d sme service in my cmmunity t make it better. First, I’ll g t ur cmmunity center t help and cheer up the ld peple. Fr example, I can sing sngs r tell them sme interesting stries. Secnd, I’m ging t hand ut the leaflets n COVID-19 at ur cmmunity hspital r ther places. Next, I’m als planning t pick up and srt rubbish with my friends in ur cmmunity park. What’s mre, I’ll help the kids with their lessns and lk after them as well.
I’m sure I’ll have a meaningful hliday this summer.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假计划。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时。根据所给的提示要点,介绍自己暑假即将要进行的一些社区服务工作。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
F
(2021·湖北武汉市·中考真题)
孔子学院(Cnfucius Institute)夏令营在汉招募志者。假如你是李华请用英文写自荐信。
内容要点如下:
1.性格外向,喜欢交朋友
2.能用英语讲中国故事和与人沟通;
3.了解中国历史和文化,会唱楚剧;
4.爱好广泛,擅长乒乓球;
5.补充两点有关信息或想法。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60-80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: Chu pera楚剧 culture文化 ping-png乒乓球
Dear sir/madam,
I am Li Hua frm Wuhan. May I have the hnr t wrk as a vlunteer at Cnfucius Institute?____________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear sir/madam,
I am Li Hua frm Wuhan. May I have the hnr t wrk as a vlunteer at Cnfucius Institute? I’m gd at Chinese and English. Chinese histry and culture are my favrites. It’s easy fr me t cmmunicate and tell Chinese stries in bth languages. I’ve gt many hbbies, such as playing ping-png and singing Chu pera. I’m healthy, hard-wrking and like t try new things. I’m utging. I lve t meet different peple and make friends with them. In my eyes, vlunteer wrk is a gd pprtunity t learn smething new.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,写一封自荐信。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要介绍自己的性格、语言能力、兴趣爱好以及想做志愿者的目的。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
G
(2021·江苏扬州市·中考真题)
某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动,你打算以“Spring in my hmetwn”为题写一篇英语短文投稿,请根据以下问题提示完成征文。
提示:
(1) What is spring like in yur hmetwn?
(2) What d peple in yur hmetwn usually d in spring? (three pints)
(3) Hw d yu like yur hmetwn in spring? (tw pints)
要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(3)词数:100 词左右;
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Spring in my hmetwn
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【答案】
Spring in my hmetwn
When spring cmes, everything cmes back t life and the climate becmes warm. Peple feel mre cmfrtable than in winter. The muntains which are very high in my hmetwn becme mre and mre green. Mst flwers blssm as the weather becmes warm. All f these scenes draw a beautiful picture.
Peple begin t climb muntains, have a picnic near rivers. They als fly kites in the parks. They try their best t be clse t nature and enjy the beauty f it. Famers start t sw and wait fr a gd harvest.
As far as I am cncerned, spring in my hmetwn is full f life and pwer. It gives us energy and hpe. I lve the spring in my hmetwn.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Spring in my hmetwn”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,介绍家乡的春天,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段介绍家乡的春天是什么样子的;第二段介绍家乡的人在春天通常做什么;第三段介绍自己对家乡的春天的感受。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
H
(2021·四川自贡市·中考真题)
假定你是李华,你校将为在自贡的英国交换生举办一次中国文化体验活动。请根据以下提示写封邮件给交换生负责人Peter,告知体验活动当天的相关安排,内容包括:
1. 统一集合,乘车前往;
2. 活动内容:参观恐龙博物馆;观看彩灯制作;欣赏二胡演奏等;
3. 注意事项。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇:恐龙:dinsaur 化石:fssil 彩灯:clrful lantern
Dear Peter,
Hw’s everything ging? I’m writing t tell yu smething abut the Chinese cultural activity which ur schl will rganize fr yur exchange students_____________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hpe yu enjy yur trip.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
Hw’s everything ging? I’m writing t tell yu smething abut the Chinese cultural activity which ur schl will rganize fr yur exchange students.
We are ging t meet at the schl gate. Then we’ll g t visit Museum f Dinsaur by cach. There yu’ll see many different kinds f dinsaur fssil. After visiting the museum, we’re ging t watch the clrful lantern prductin. Yu will learn hw t make the clurful lanterns. If yu want t have a try, yu can make them by yurselves. In the afternn, we will g t enjy erhu playing. It’s very interesting. At five ’clck, we will cme back t ur schl.
Hpe yu enjy yur trip.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题目解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求介绍中国文化体验活动,包括活动安排和注意事项。注意要点齐全,层次清晰。
2.写作指导:文章开头结尾已给出,介绍活动用一段,第一人称和第二人称交替使用,时态是一般将来时。使用恰当的连词连接上下文。
I
(2021·山东菏泽市·中考真题)
假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Lisa发来邮件, 询问你的暑假安排。请你根据图片提示, 用英语给她写封回信。
要求:
1. 语言规范, 语句通顺;
2. 应包括图片所有要点, 可适当发挥;
3. 字数:100词左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇:the 1st Natinal Cngress f the CPC 中共一大;publicize 宣传;garbage classificatin 垃圾分类
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. Nw let me tell yu smething abut my hliday plan.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad t hear frm yu. Nw let me tell yu smething abut my hliday plan.
First, I will help my mther d chres at hme, such as sweeping the flr and cleaning the windws. Next, I will d sme vlunteer jbs. I will publicize in my cmmunity hw t d garbage classificatin. Then, I want t travel t learn mre abut Chinese culture. I will travel t Shanghai t visit the site f the 1st Natinal Cngress f CPC in Shanghai. And I will als visit the Suth Lake Red Bat in Jiaxing, Zhejiang. Last but nt least, I will imprve my spken English by jining English clubs. What abut yur plan?
Lking frward t yur reply.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:题干要求根据图示提示向对方介绍自己的暑假安排。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时。根据图片的提示要点,进行一一介绍。从做家务,做志愿工作,旅行和学习英语等四个方面来介绍自己的计划。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
J
(2021·四川眉山市·中考真题)
假定你是李华,请用英语给你的朋友 Jhn 写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好,内容包括:
1.介绍爱好(打篮球);
2.喜欢的原因(增强体质,结交朋友);
3.打篮球经历(从小训练,加入校队);
4.个人的感受(学会合作,……)。
注意:
1.词数 100 左右;
2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Jhn,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jhn,
Hw’s everything ging? It’s my pleasure t share my hbby with yu.
I like sprts, especially basketball. Here are sme reasns. On ne hand, playing basketball is a gd way t make me strnger. On the ther hand, I can make friends with peple wh share the same interest. I have been a fan f basketball since I was five years ld. I almst practice playing basketball every day and I’m a member f ur schl team. By playing basketball, I learn hw t wrk with thers and try my best t realize my gals.
S, hw abut yur hbby? Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据内容提示,写一封邮件,分享自己的兴趣,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称和一般现在时为主,介绍自己的兴趣时要包含所有提示要点,并做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
K
(2021·山东潍坊市·中考真题)
Teens Arund the Wrld是一个国际青少年网站,近日有人发帖,讨论“发现生活中的小欢喜”。假设你是李华,请结合自己的生活体会,用英语跟帖。
注意:
1. 不要出现考生本人信息;
2. 80词左右。
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Li Hua, China
【答案】
Dear Emily,
I think yu’re right. I have vlunteered in Old Peple’s Hme, and this experience made me happy.
Last term, ur schl held an activity t vlunteer in Old Peple’s Hme. I jined it. I helped ld peple there t clean their rms, made their beds, tld stries, sang and danced with them. We all enjyed urselves n that day. I gt a lt f fun helping thers. S I decide t take part in mre vlunteer activities.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。分享曾经让自己开心的生活点滴。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时,描述过去的经历要用一般过去时。先引出主题;再分享自己的经历和感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
L
(2021·浙江台州市·中考真题)
假如你是李华,请给你的外国好友Andrew写一封电子邮件,介绍你校美食文化节(fd festival)的相关内容及举办目的, 并邀请他参加此次美食节。邮件内容包括:
注意:
(1)邮件必须包括表格中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80-100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】
Hi Andrew,
Hw is it ging? Knwing that yu are fnd f fd. I’m writing t invite yu t attend ur schl fd festival.
The festival will begin at 2:00 n Friday afternn, June 25th n the schl playgrund. We are glad t have smething delicius like dumplings and zngzi. We can als ck fd and sell it t ur schlmates t raise mney fr charity. The festival will surely ffer us a gd chance t shw and experience Chinese traditinal fd culture. Besides, it is a gd time fr us t share happiness, lve and team spirit. It’s a great pleasure t have yu here with us.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为电子邮件写作,写作时应注意电子邮件标准格式。根据题目所给提示,学生要在电子邮件中介绍学校美食节、其举办目的以及邀请Andrew参加该活动。
2.写作指导:写作时人称应用第一、三人称,时态应用现在时或将来时。表格所给要点要写全,切勿遗漏,还可适当进行拓展。拓展的内容应与全文内容紧密衔接,并能很好地串联起来。此外还应注意英语的表达问题,语句表达要符合英语表达习惯和语法,不要出现单词拼写及语法时态使用错误。
M
(2021·浙江金华市·中考真题)
假如你叫Daming,本周六你们班要去浙江大学开展研学活动(study tur)。请根据下列表格中的内容,给外籍教师Mike发一份邮件,告知你们的计划,并邀请他一同前往。
注意:
1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;参考词汇供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数:80~100;
4. 邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点:
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Daming
【答案】
Dear Mike,
My classmates and I are ging t Zhejiang University fr a study tur this Saturday. It is ne f the best universities in China and als my dream university. When we are there, we’ll g arund the campus, visit the labs and libraries, and learn abut its histry. We will als talk with the teachers and students there.
Wuld yu like t jin us? If yes, please remember t take yur passprt because we’ll take the train. And we will meet at the schl gate at 7:30 n Saturday mrning.
Lking frward t seeing yu!
Yurs,
Daming
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为电子邮件写作,要注意标准的电子邮件格式,要求根据题目要点提示写出关于浙江大学研学活动的计划,所给要点必须全部包括,并可适当进行拓展。
2.写作指导:写作时应用第一人称,时态应用现在时或将来时。写作时要点要齐全,不要遗漏,思路最好按照所给的要点顺序进行叙述,注意邮件的开头结束标准用语。
N
(2021·浙江丽水市·中考真题)
外教Steve爱好武术,喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据下面的要点,写一封邮件,邀请他到你家过周末。
注意:
(1)文中必须包含上表中的两个要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80~100;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】
Hi, Steve!
I’m Li Hua. I hear yu’d like t experience sme mre Chinese cultures befre ging back. S why nt cme t my hme fr the weekend? I have a gd plan!
As bth f us like sprts, let’s play basketball in the gym arund my hme in the mrning. After that, we can practice writing with a Chinese brush tgether. It’s nt easy, but it makes us peaceful. Yu can als sense the beauty f the Chinese characters. T experience mre, we are ging t make jiazi, ne f the mst traditinal fds in China. It must be meaningful t have jiazi made by yurself. I am sure yu will have great fun.
Wait fr yur reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,写一封邮件,邀请Steve来家里过周末。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段发出邀请;第二段介绍二人可以在周末做什么;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
O
(2021·江西中考真题)
The Value f Negative Results
We all avid failure(失败), and mst f us fear it. Hwever, withut failure, prgress wuld be impssible. What des success usually cme after? Failure. It seems that ne cannt exist(存在)withut the ther.
Accepting failure is nt easy fr many, thugh we are ften unwilling t accept failure because ur prfessinal fame depends n success. ______ In the past ten years, fr example, sme scientific magazines have published reprts f failed tests. It is believed that scientists can learn mre “negative(负面的)” results and that this can finally lead t psitive results.
_______ The ABN AMRO bank started an Institute (机构)f Brilliant Failures t learn mre abut what wrks and what desn’t in banking. Eli Lilly and Cmpany had failure parties t study the drugs(药物)that dn’t wrk.
In fact, ne f the business wrld’s mst famus failures became ne f its biggest successes, in part because the prduct’s makers learned frm their mistakes. _____ The prduct, thugh unique(独特的)at the time, was expensive and heavy; besides, sme f its mst imprtant features(特点)didn’t wrk prperly. As a result, Apple’s CEO, Steve Jbs, believed in the prduct and he began t find ut ways f imprving it. In time, this led t the prductin f the iPhne and the iPad, tw f the cmpany’s mst successful prducts.
______Nt nly shuld we try t learn frm it if we want t succeed, we must als be persistent(执着的). Thugh Apple stpped selling the Newtn in 1998, the first iPhne wasn’t available until 2007. It tk a lt f research and hard wrk t g frm the Apple Newtn t iPhne but in the end, the effrt became successful.
All in all, there is a lt we can learn by studying mistakes. Perhaps the mst imprtant lessn is that failure and success are tw sides f the same cin. ______
A.One truly cannt exist withut the ther.
B.We are brave enugh t face difficulties.
C.In the early 1990s, Apple created a phne called the Apple Newtn.
D.The business wrld already understands the value f negative results.
E. The Apple Newtn has wn ppularity with peple all ver the wrld.
F. Hwever, things are slwly changing, especially in business and science.
G. The stry f the Apple Newtn can teach us an imprtant lessn abut failure.
20.书面表达
失败乃成功之母。本卷阅读理解B部分文章讨论了失败对于获取成功具有重要的价值请你根据下面提示,写一篇英语短文,谈谈你如何借鉴Apple的成功经验,采取有效行动,失败为成功。
写作要点:
1 What have yu learned frm Apple’s stry?
2 Have yu ever experienced a failure? What was it?
3 What will yu d t turn it int a success?
要求:
1短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3词数不少于80。
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【答案】
Failure can lead t success. We shuld study it and learn why we make mistakes, then find ways t slve ur prblems. Als, we shuld never give up!
I nce tried ut fr a speech cmpetitin. I practiced it many times. Unexpectedly, I failed. I’ve never spken in frnt f the public ever since.
Apple’s stry is quite an inspiratin fr me. What can I d t make it? First, be cnfident and try t speak in public places. Secnd, ask my teachers r friends fr sme advice and imprve my language skills. Finally, be persistent and practice speeches ver and ver again.
I’m sure I will succeed sme day.
【分析】
本文介绍了人们对待错误不同态度,过去的时候人们害怕错误,避免错误;现在人们正面错误,从错误中吸取教训,改进产品。
(1).题干解读:本文要求根据阅读理解B部分文章,谈谈如何借鉴Apple的成功经验,结合所给写作要点写一篇文章。内容包括从Apple的故事中学习到了什么,你的失败经历,要如何将失败变为成功。
(2).写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称写作,时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。第一部分介绍从Apple的成功中学习到了什么,时态为一般现在时;第二部分描写自己的失败经历,时态为一般过去时;第三部分为如何把失败变为成功,时态为一般现在时。写作时要行文连贯,条理清晰,语言准确。
P
(2021·山东枣庄市·中考真题)
Write a shrt passage abut yur parents’ changes in the past three years when they get alng with yu. (写一篇关于在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中变化的短文。)(请根据下面的提示, 在答题卡第六节下面, 写出一篇90-120词的短文。
注意∶不要出现自己的信息∶诸如姓名、学校, 人名可以用英文名字。)
l. The title f yur shrt passage. (你的短文的标题。)
2. First, write the general intrductin abut hw yur parents gt alng with yu in the past;
(首先写关于你父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍。)
3. Secnd, write the mst imprtant change and hw it happened.
(其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的, )
4. Third, write abut hw yu feel abut this change.
(最后写一下你对变化的感受。)
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【答案】
Hw my parents have changed!
My parents have changed a lt in the past three years. They used t be strict with me. On Sunday, they always let me stay at hme and study. S I didn’t any friends.
Their biggest change is much gentler than befre. Because I dn’t have any friends, I’m very lnely. I’m nt interested in my study, s my grades are wrse and wrse. Nw my parents let me g ut n Sunday. I have made many friends. We ften help each ther and get better grades.
Nw I get n well with my parents. I lve my parents very much.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时注意根据提示的内容,写出在过去三年里你的父母在与你相处过程中的变化:首先写父母过去是如何和你相处的总体介绍;其次写最重要的一次变化以及是如何发生的;最后写一下你对变化的感受。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来进行写作;时态采用一般现在时为主,用一般过去式介绍过去;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容全面,保证条理清晰。
Q
(2021·浙江温州市·中考真题)
在中国传统文化中, “家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家,温暖而有力量。请你结合下图,以 “Hme”为题,写一篇约110词的英语短文。让外国朋友了解中国文化中的 “家”。
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Hme
Hme means a lt t every Chinese.
When ur family members cme back hme fr reunin, we sit arund the table, sharing ur achievements and happiness. Hme becmes the warmest place.
It’s a place full f lve. Lve can be expressed by gift, family dinner and phne call. Hwever, nne is better than ging back hme and spending time with ur families.
It’s als a place full f strength. Whenever we have difficulties, we can return hme. Thanks t the encuragement and help frm ur families, we can rebuild ur belief and cnfidence t keep mving frward.
S hw lng have yu been away frm hme? Cme back. Hme is always waiting fr yu.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。以“家”为题来介绍中国文化中的“家”。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题;第二段到第四段介绍了家究竟是一个什么样的地方;最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
R
(2021·四川泸州市·中考真题)
假如你是李华,已升入高一级学校,现应邀回校向同学们介绍英语学习方法。请根据下列要点提示,以“T Be a Successful English Learner”为题,写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示:
1.兴趣方面:听英语歌,看英语影片等;
2.习惯方面:用词典查生词,写英语日记等;
3.素养方面:提升听说读写能力,学习中外文化等;
4.意志方面:不畏困难,勇于挑战等;
5.个人观点:……
要求:
1.词数110词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容;
3.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语:develp, imprve, ability, culture, challenge
T Be a Successful English Learner
Dear schlmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m hnred t be invited here t share my ideas abut hw t learn English well. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks fr yur listening.
【答案】
T Be a Successful English Learner
Dear schlmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m hnred t be invited here t share my ideas abut hw t learn English well.
T be a successful English learner, we shuld develp a gd study habit and be gd at thinking and slving prblems. We can lk up new wrds with the help f the dictinary. We can keep diaries every day t imprve ur English. We als shuld make full use f learning resurces. Reading newspapers, listening t English sngs and watching English mvies.
We shuld imprve ur ability t read and learn Chinese and freign cultures.
When yu study English, it’s sure t meet all kinds f different prblems. We shuldn’t feel afraid f them. We shuld d ur best t slve these difficulties and challenge them.
In my pinin, we shuld read and write in English every day. T practice, we can als speak t ur friends and classmates in English.
Thanks fr yur listening.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点,写出如何成为一个成功的英语学习者,可以适当的发挥,从多方面入手,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头和结尾融合起来,用第一人称来写作,时态以一般现在为主,多用情态动词shuld提出建议,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。
【2020年】
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
(一)【2020 •贵州省黔西南州】
61. 假如你叫李华,你们学校刚刚开学,正在开展 “Happy Mnth”活动,请你以 “Learn t BeHappy”为题,给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿,号召同学们返校后快乐生活。
内容包括:
1.新冠疫情使学校延迟开学;
2.通过上网课学习语文、数学和英语等课程;
3.“Happy, Mnth”活动和你的心情:
4.如何快乐生活(至少2点)。
写作要求:
1.结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰;
2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名和学校名称等信息;
3.词数80左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:新型冠状病毒COVID—19
Learn t Be Happy
Gd mrning, everyne! We’re very happy t be back t schl.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe all f us can live happily in this schl. Thank yu fr yur listening!
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文,假如你是李华,学校刚刚开学,正在开展 “Happy Mnth”活动,要求你以 “Learn t Be Happy”为题,题干内容提示,给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿,号召同学们返校后快乐生活。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Learn t Be Happy
Gd mrning ,everyne! I'm very happy t be back t schl.
T prevent the Crid-19, ur schl has delayed (put ff) the pening f this term. But we didn't stp studying. Our schl gave us nline curses such as Chinese, Math, English and s n. We were very happy.
Nw ur schl is carrying ut the plan“happy Mnth”. Hw t be happy? First, I think we shuld have life aims ,with life aims, we can live a happy and meaningful life. Then, we must keep healthy. What’s mre, we shuld be ready t help thers.
I hpe all f us can live happily in this schl. Thank yu fr yur listening!
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:本例文结构严谨,层次分明。根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
2.高分亮点:
短语:put ff,such as,s n,keep healthy,be ready t。
句型:I think we shuld have life aims. 我认为我们应该有生活目标。I think后接宾语从句。
What’s mre, we shuld be ready t help thers. 更重要的是,我们应该准备好帮助别人。be ready t d sth.准备好做某事。
(二)【2020 •黑龙江哈尔滨】
80.假如你是中学生李平,曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈,他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信,向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
写作要点:
1.班会的主题:我的理想
2.介绍你和几名同学的理想:
(1)赵勇:想成为一名勇敢的警察;
(2)张红:想做一名志愿者;
(3)你:想成为一名优秀的医生。
3.说说中学生如何才能实现(realize)自己的理想(ideal)。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear peter,
I'm writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文,介绍班会情况,班会的主题是谈论理想,通过分析可知,除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况,我们应该使用一般过去时态,其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时,注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。
【参考范文】
Dear peter,
I'm writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week. The theme f it was “My Ideal”. Our mnitr hsted the meeting. During it, all f us tk an active part in the discussin and shared ur pinins with each ther.
Zha Yng is ging t be a brave pliceman. He hpes t help peple in danger. Zhang Hng wants t be a vlunteer, she will help peple in need especially the disabled and the hmeless. My dream is t be an excellent dctr, I think it’s a meaningful jb, because I can save peple’s lives and help them ut f danger.
T realize ur ideals, I have sme pinins. Firstly, we must try t wrk harder frm nw n and learn as much knwledge as pssible. Secndly, we shuld believe urselves, because cnfidence is the key t success. Besides, it’s als imprtant t find ut hw successfully peple did it s that we can learn frm them.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文采用分段式,文中衔接流畅,在写作的时候选择了一些相对高级的词汇,也运用多种句型,句式丰富多彩,避免单一化,增加了文章的亮点,润色了文章的内容。
2.高分亮点:
短语:hst the meeting;take an active part in;in danger;a meaningful jb;frm nw n;learn frm。
句型:① I think it’s a meaningful jb, because I can save peple’s lives and help them ut f danger.
②Secndly, we shuld believe urselves, because cnfidence is the key t success.
③Besides, it’s als imprtant t find ut hw successfully peple did it s that we can learn frm them.
(三)【2020 •黑龙江龙东地区】
81.为加强机场服务工作,现面向社会招募志愿者,若你具备以下条件,请致电:63688881。
1)身体健康;2)性格善良、有耐心;3)擅长与人沟通;4)会讲汉语和英语。
请根据以上信息,用5-6句话写一份招聘广告。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Vlunteers wanted
We need vlunteers at the airprt. Are yu in gd health? Are yu kind and patient? Are yu gd at cmmunicating with peple? Can yu speak bth Chinese and English? Please call us at 63688881.
(四)【2020 •黑龙江龙东地区】
83.仔细观察图片描述,展开合理想象,然后写一篇短文。
12 3.45.
提示词:mask(口罩);keep a certain distance(保持一定距离)
要求:1. 话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数:80-100之间。
3. 字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于图画作文。要求观察图片,展开合理想象来写一篇作文。观察图片及提示词可知这里是五条关于预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议。写作时要紧扣图片内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Nvel crnavirus is spreading arund the wrld and many cuntries are fighting against it. We shuld d smething t avid it.
Here is my advice fr everyne. Firstly, if we have t g ut, we must wear masks t prtect urselves. Secndly, we shuld always wash hands t keep germs away. Thirdly, we need t pen the windws very ften t let the fresh air in. Futhly, we shuld take ur temperature ften and if we have a fever we shuld g t the dctr in time. Finally, keeping a certain distance with thers is als very imprtant.
【名师点评】
1. 例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,从图片内容延伸出5条预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议,用上了所给提示词并进行了适当发挥。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
2. 高分亮点:
单词和短语:spread;arund the wrld;fight against;avid;wear masks;keep germs away;take ne's temperature;have a fever;in time;keep a certain distance。
句型:and连接的并列句;以here开头的倒装句;if引导的条件状语从句。
(五)【2020 •湖南省常德市】
61.假设你是Angelica的朋友Alan,请根据第二节(回答问题)材料并按照提示给Angelica回信:1. 恭喜乔迁并简单评述其新居。2. 回复能否参加聚会。3. 若能参加聚会,你会准备什么节目,对整个活动有什么建议等;若不能参会,说明原因,表达自己的心情等。注意:1. 80词以上,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;2. 不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。
Dear Angelica,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Alan
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。本文要求按照提示要点写一封回信,写作中注意要包含所有的提示要点,可适当发挥。时态以一般现在时为主,人称是第一人称。
【参考范文】
Dear Angelica,
I’m glad t receive yur letter last time. First f all, cngratulatins n yur settlement t the new huse,which is s warm and cmfrtable that I’d like t have a lk at nce. The small independent garden is the best design in the huse, and als a gd place t relax. Secndly, I really appreciate yur invitatin f the husewarming party. I’d lve t, but I can’t. As yu knw, the Natinal Pian Grading Test is cming, my curse schedule n these days is already full. I have t devte myself t the preparatin until the end f the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t cme t yur party. But I’ve prepared a gift fr yu and I hpe yu will like it.
May yur party be a great success and enjy yurself that day!
Yurs,
Alan
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:本文采用两段式,第一段:(1)恭喜对方乔迁之喜;(2)告诉对方因为要准备钢琴等级考试无法参加聚会;(3)表示很遗憾并准备了礼物;第二段以祝福结尾。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
2.高分亮点:
短语:be glad t;s…that…;wuld like (lve) t;have a lk;at nce;have t;devte myself t;prepare fr;the end f;enjy yurself。
句型:First f all…Secndly…At last…;which引导的非限制性定语从句;s…that…引导的结果状语从句;and并列句;but并列复合句;As yu knw…;it’s +名词+ that从句。
(六)【2020 •江苏省苏州市】
56.下周一些英国学生将来你校交流学习,他们想了解你校各个俱乐部的情况。假定你是林涛,是学校绿色星球俱乐部的负责人,请你根据你们俱乐部的海报内容,用英语写一篇发言稿来作介绍。
注意:
1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.文中须包括所有要点,每个要点可适当发挥,使文章连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇: wrkshp n. 工作坊
Welcme t ur schl. I’m Lin Ta. I’m glad t intrduce ur Green Planet Club t yu.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let’s wrk tgether fr a green planet. Thank yu!
【写作思路】
本题为材料作文,要求就所给提示介绍学校的绿色星球俱乐部,写一篇发言稿。文章时态用现在时,人称用第一人称。
【参考范文】
Welcme t ur schl. I’m Lin Ta. I’m glad t intrduce ur Green Planet Club t yu.
All ur club members meet every Friday afternn t d smething meaningful.
We have DIY wrkshps. Here, ld clthes can be made int handbags. It’s als fun t use recycled bttles and used wd t make furniture like chairs and desks.
Wrking as vlunteers is ur task as well. We hand ut leaflets and tell peple the imprtance f living a green life. Smetimes, we teach peple hw t separate waste in cmmunities and help clean up parks and streets. Besides, we lk after flwers and trees in ur schl.
Let’s wrk tgether fr a green planet. Thank yu!
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文开头结尾都已给出,需要写作的部分只是画报上的关于俱乐部的简介。例文已包含题目所给全部要点,并进行了适当发挥,文章词句连贯、通顺,符合题目要求,是一篇合格的作文。
2.高分亮点:
短语:be made int,wrk as,hand ut,clean up,lk after。
句型:
(1)Here, ld clthes can be made int handbags.(被动语态)
(2)It’s als fun t use recycled bttles and used wd t make furniture like chairs and desks.(it作形式主语)
(3)Wrking as vlunteers is ur task as well.(动名词作主语)
(七)【2020 •山东省滨州市】
71.假如你是李华, 你的朋友Clark将来滨州。到滨州后, 你计划带他去参观滨州市博物馆。请你根据以下提示给 Clark写一封电子邮件告知其相关信息。
要求:
1. 包含提示中所有信息,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名;
3. 卷面整洁,书写美观,可适当加2-3分
4. 80词左右,开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词∶
品味enjy;展品exhibitin;展览:n display
Dear Clark,
I am happy t knw that yu are cming t Binzhu! I’d like t take yu t visit Binzhu Museum. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
该题目是书信类书面表达,根据题目内容完成电子邮件,短文的开头和结尾已经给出,补充剩余内容即可。
【参考范文】
Dear Clark,
I am happy t knw that yu are cming t Binzhu! I’d like t take yu t visit Binzhu Museum.
Binzhu Museum was built in 2015. There are many kinds f exhibitins n display, s it’s a gd place t enjy the lcal culture and traditinal art. We can g there frm Tuesday t Sunday. It is pen frm 9 a. m. t 5 p. m. , but it is clsed all day n Mnday.
One great thing is that it is free t visit the museum! While visiting the museum we must fllw sme rules, such as being quiet, n smking and n pets. Besides, we are nt allwed t take phts in rder t prtect the exhibitins. If yu want t get mre infrmatin, please visit http:/www, bzsbwg. cm.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文采用四段式结构,第一段提出想要带克拉克参观滨州博物馆,第二段介绍了滨州博物馆的相关信息,第三段介绍了参观博物馆时的注意事项,第四段结尾,向对方表示祝愿;整篇文章内容完整,结构清晰条理;人称主要是第一人称和第三人称,时态主要是一般现在时。
2.高分亮点:
短语:be happy t d sth.;wuld like t d sth.;frm…t…;fllw rules;such as;take phts;in rder t d sth.。
句型:Binzhu Museum was built in 2015. 一般过去时的被动语态was dne;There are many kinds f exhibitins n display. there be句型。
(八)【2020 •山东省聊城市】
46.假如你叫张宁。你的外国明友Steve在信中问起你在校足球队训练的事。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件,说明你的训练情况,其主要内容包括:
1. 星期六到学校训练,为的是备战下周与另外一支校足球队的比赛。
2. 因去年被击败,队员们训练起来比以往更加努力。
3. 对本次比赛以及对球迷的希望。
注意:
1. 邮件词数:80左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,但邮件中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Steve,
It's Saturday tmrrw, but ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Zhang Nin
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。要求根据题目和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
【参考范文】
Dar Steve,
It's Saturday tmrrw, but I am ging t schl. I'm nt ging fr lessns, but t play ftball. I am in ur schl team and we are ging t play against anther schl team next week. The practice starts at 10 a.m. We will arrive as early as we can s that we will have time t warm up. We are training harder than usual because the ther team beat us last year.
I hpe we can beat them this year and I als hpe we will have mre fans t cme t watch ur matches.
Yurs,
Zhmg Ning
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文采用两段式;时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点:
短语:as early as we can;s that;warm up;than usual等。
句型:It's Saturday tmrrw, but I am ging t schl. I'm nt ging fr lessns, but t play ftball.
I hpe we can beat them this year and I als hpe we will have mre fans t cme t watch ur matches.
(九)【2020 •四川乐山市】
71.近年来,在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象;为此,国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你结合自身的体会,就如何培养劳动精神,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括:
1. 上劳动课,学习生活技能;
2. 参加实践活动,如:植树、种菜等;
3. 学做家务,如:整理房间、洗衣服等;
4. 养成良好的劳动习惯。
注意:
1. 词数:80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:劳动课a hardwrking spirit class。
A guideline n hardwrking spirit educatin came ut recently in rder t help mre students f different ages t get wrking spirit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,要点已全部给出,学生按照逻辑将其连接起来即可。时态应用一般现在时,人称应以第一人称为主。
【参考范文】
A guideline n hardwrking spirit educatin came ut recently in rder t help mre students f different ages t get wrking spirit. As a middle schl student, I welcme it warmly.
Firstly, we shuld have hardwrking spirit classes t learn sme basic life skills at schl every week. Secndly, we can take part in ut-f-class activities such as planting trees r grwing vegetables t enrich ur real-wrld wrk experience. Als, we need try t d sme chres at hme, like tidying rms, washing clthes r cking sme dishes. Abve all, we culd frm gd wrking habits and value the imprtance f wrking hard thrugh ur experience.
In a wrd, the hardwrking spirit educatin is necessary and it helps t build us up.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文先是直奔主题,表明自己对培养劳动精神的热烈欢迎;然后从4个方面分别说明了如何培养劳动精神分别是上课、参加活动、做家务以及养成良好习惯;最后总结点题,表明培养劳动精神的重要性。语言流畅,要点齐全,无语法错误。
2.高分亮点:
take part in 参加
such as 例如
try t d sth. 尽力做某事
the imprtance f ……的重要性
In a wrd 简而言之
helps t d sth. 帮助做某事
Firstly, we shuld have hardwrking spirit classes t learn sme basic life skills at schl every week. 不定式作目的状语
Abve all, we culd frm gd wrking habits and value the imprtance f wrking hard thrugh ur experience. 表示连接关系的并列句
(十)【2020 •浙江省嘉兴市】
71.假设你是 David,打算今年夏天去 Batsfrd Arbretum游玩。请给植物园写一封简短的邮件,询问你想了解的信息,如用餐、门票价格等。
注意:
(1)邮件中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(2)词数:30-50。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir r Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
David
【写作思路】
本题为书信作文,要求给植物园写一份邮件进行咨询。时态应用现在时,人称可用第一、二人称。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir r Madam,
Hpe everything ges well.
I am writing t yu tell that I will visit Batsfrd Arbretum this summer. And I’d like t knw whether I can have lunch there r nt. If nt, I will bring my wn fd there. Hw abut the price f the ticket? Can I get a student discunt n this ticket price?
I am lking frward t yur reply. Thank yu.
David
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文为标准书信格式,第一段和最后一段均为标准邮件开头、结尾用语。中间第二段则是按照题目所给提示,就植物园就餐和门票问题进行了提问。例文思路清晰,条理清楚,符合题目所列要求,是一篇合格的范文。
2.高分亮点:
短语:whether … r nt,if nt,be lking frward t,
句型:
(1)I am writing t yu tell that I will visit Batsfrd Arbretum this summer.(宾语从句)
(2)Hw abut the price f the ticket?(hw abut句型)
(十一)【2020 •四川省甘孜州】
71.假定你叫李华。你的笔友Peter发邮件说他打算暑假来四川旅游。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 询问到达时间;
3. 你的接待安排(如参观名胜古迹等)。
参考词汇:名胜古迹place f interest
注意:1. 内容必须包括所给信息;
2. 词数:80左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
3. 可适当增加细节,不得出现个人真实信息。
Dear Peter,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本题属于书信作文,邮件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示内容给笔友Peter回复邮件。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad t hear that yu're planning t visit Sichuan during the summer vacatin. I wuld be very happy if yu culd stay at my huse.
Here is my plan fr yu. First, I have visited many places f interest in Sichuan, such as Munt Emei and the Wrld-famus Jiuzhaigu Nature Reserve. S I will be the best guide fr yu. Secnd, there are many delicius Sichuan dishes fr yu t taste. Sichuan even basts its wn fd museum. Besides, Sichuan Opera is a typical lcal pera in Sichuan Prvince. If time permits, we can g t watch it.
Please let us knw when yu are arriving. I’m lking frward t seeing yu sn.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
1. 例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,先是对Peter的到来表示欢迎,紧接着写自己的接待安排,最后询问Peter到来的时间并表示自己的期待。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
2. 高分亮点:
单词和短语:during;place f interest;such as;besides;lk frward t ding sth.。
句型:that引导的宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句;s连接并列句;there be句型;祈使句;when引导的时间状语从句。
2020年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题22 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
【2020 •海南省】
66.周末是我们生活中重要的一部分,合理利用周末时间对青少年至关重要。某校英语杂志社就“如何让周末生活更有意义”开展征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图,以“Hw t Make Our weekends mre meaningful”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范。
2.所有提示须全部用上,并作适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
4.80词左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hw t make Our Weekends Mre Meaningful
Life n weekends is an imprtant part f ur daily life. Hw can we make ur weekends mre meaningful? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In shrt, let’s make gd use f ur weekends!
【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作,写作时要按说明文格式写。在写作时介绍周末的生活是我们日常生活的重要部分;第二段介绍我们如何让周末生活更有意义;最后一段总结要充分利用周末。
【参考范文】
Hw t Make Our Weekends Mre Meaningful
Life n weekends is an imprtant part f ur daily life. Hw can we make ur weekends mre meaningful? Here are sme f my suggestins.
First f all, the weekend is a great time fr family t get tgether. It's gd t help ur parents d sme husewrk. That can help us understand each ther better and shw ur lve fr them. Secndly, we shuld spend time develping ur interests and hbbies at the weekend. Fr example, I wuld like t chse sme bks t read and cmmunicate with thers after reading Thirdly, we can take part in vlunteering activities, like visiting the ld peple's hme r ding sme cleaning in public places. Last but nt least, t make urselves healthier, taking exercise is a gd chice.
In shrt, let's make gd use f ur weekends
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文采用三段式;用第一、三人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主,在介绍让周末生活更有意义的建议时,叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
高分亮点:
短语:first f all;spend time ding sth;fr example;wuld like t;cmmunicate with;take part in;make gd use f。
句型:Here be句型;It's+形容词+t d sth。
【2020 •广州市】
64.今天的英语课上,班级进行了题为“我送过的一份珍贵礼物,”的主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文,汇报你们四人小组的分享内容,需包括以下要点。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头己给出,不计入词数):
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
In tday's English class, we had a discussin n “A valuable gift I gave”. Here is what we shared in u grup. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇短文要求学生们根据题目中给出的图表,汇报一下你这个小组中四个人送过的珍贵的礼物。写作前,应仔细观察图表中的信息,浏览可知,短文中应介绍清楚这个礼物是谁送给谁的,是什么以及为什么送这个礼物。图表中给出的都是关键词语,学生写作时,应用完整的句子表达。并且对于最后一栏中自己送的礼物,学生需要发挥想象力,结合实际情况,进行补充。短文应以一般过去时态为主来叙述。
【参考范文】
In tday’s English class.we had a discussin n “A valuable gift I gave”.Here is what we shared in ur grup.
A valuable gift given by Bb was a bwl f sup t his parents. In his pinin, he cnsidered it as a gd gift t express his thanks and lve t them. Kate gave a pht album t ne f her gd friends because she wanted t cherish every mment with her/him, hping that their friendship culd last frever. In additin, Lily sent her freign teacher a piece f paper cutting which can fully represent Chinese culture.
Fr me, what I gave t my grandparent was a smartphne. We dn't live tgether and my parents are s busy that we can't meet each ther ften. Hwever, we can have vide chats by smartphne.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文。首先文章内容完整,包括了图表中的所有信息,对最后一栏的内容进行了补充,并对细节进行了拓展,使文章的内容更加充实。短文有三段,第一段是题目中给出的开头;第二段中作者主要介绍了小组中其他三人送的礼物;最后一段介绍了自己送过的礼物。层次清晰,叙述有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,符合表达需要,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,有变化,增强了文章的表现力。
高分亮点:
短语:in ne’s pinin;in additin;each ther。
句型:过去分词作后置定语;动词不定式作目的状语;because引导原因状语从句;现在分词作伴随状语;which引导定语从句;what引导主语从句;s…that引导结果状语从句。
【2020 •遵义市】
第四部分 书面表达
61.2020年3月3日是联合国第七个"世界野生动植物日",我国提出了"维护全球生命共同体"的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们,就是守护我们的未来。下面,让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧!
假如你是熊猫惜惜,请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80词左右的书信。
要求:1.信中包含所给信息内容;2.适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数。
1.基本信息:13岁,来自四川,中国的象征;爱好(自主发挥)。
2.我的烦恼:朋友少,家园常常遭到破坏……
3.我的愿望或建议(自主发挥,至少两条)。
参考词汇:symbl (n. 象征) 、destry (v. 破坏)
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Xixi
【写作思路】
文章是一篇书信作文。主要是以熊猫惜惜的身份向人类写一封信。先是介绍自己,然后告诉自己的烦恼以及期待和愿望。要把题目中给出的要求都写进去,要注意人称之间的转换和时态的应用,还要注意语句之间的连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. I’m ne f yur favrite animals — Panda. I cme frm Sichuan, China. I am 13 years ld. I am a natinal treasure f China and a symbl f China. I usually like t play with my friends. I als like climbing trees and sitting n the trees. I like bambs best. It’s my favrite fd.
But I’ve had sme prblems recently. My hme is ften brken and I dn’t have much rm t mve arund. My friends are fewer and fewer because sme peple have destryed my hme. There is n ne t play with me and I am very lnely. My favrite fd is getting less and less. I’m really sad.
I hpe human friends can help me. I hpe that peple can prtect the envirnment and give me mre space fr live. If yu can cut dwn fewer trees, my friends and I will be very happy.
Yurs,
Xixi
【名师点评】
例文点评:文章分三段描写。第一段是对自己简单的介绍;第二段介绍自己的一些烦恼和忧虑;第三段写自己的期望。整个文章结构完整思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思通俗易懂。
高分亮点:
短语:ne f;cme frm;play with;like ding;mve arund;cut dwn。
句型:because引导的原因状语从句;I hpe+宾语从句;if引导的条件状语从句。
【2020 •牡丹江、鸡西地区】
86.难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行"告别初中生活"的主题班会。假如你是班长, 根据以下提示, 用英语写一则通知。要点如下:
1、时间:7月18日 下午3:00;
2、地点:班级;
3、活动内容:对老师用话语表达谢意, 同学交流、合影等等。
Bys and girls,
The wnderful middle schl life will g t the end. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dn't be late! That's all. Thank yu!
David
【写作思路】
该题目属于通知写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍主题班会的时间、地点以及活动的内容。
【参考范文】
Bys and girls,
The wnderful middle schl life will g t the end. We are ging t have a class meeting at 3:00 n the afternn f July 18. The theme f the class meeting is saying gdbye t ur middle schl life. It will be held in ur classrm. We shuld say a thankful wrd t ur teachers. We can chat freely with ur classmates and take sme phts.
Dn't be late! That's all. Thank yu!
David
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍班会的具体信息,叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:g t the end; have a class meeting; saying gdbye t; chat freely with; take sme phts。
句型:we shuld d和we can d表示建议的句子;and表示并列的句子;Dn't d…祈使句的否定形式。
(B)
87.假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
家庭安全:小心用火用电, 外出时关好门窗;
游泳安全:不独自去游泳, 不去河、湖游泳;
交通安全:过马路要当心, 不在马路上玩耍。
提示词:electricity (n.电)
注意:
1、词数80左右;
2、请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥。
Dear David,
Glad t receive yur e-mail. Our schl has made safety rules fr us t fllw. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Wang Wei
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文,假定你是王伟, 你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。要求根据要点提示,给他回一封电子邮件。首先要注意邮件的格式,然后认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
Glad t receive yur e-mail. Our schl has made safety rules fr us t fllw. Let me tell yu smething abut them.
We are asked t be careful with electricity when we are using it. It is dangerus t play with fire, fr it may cause terrible accidents. We shuld make sure drs and windws are shut befre we leave. Besides, we are nt allwed t swim alne, especially in deep rivers r lakes. If we really want t, we must g t the swimming pl with ur parents r teachers. What's mre, fllwing traffic rules is als very imprtant. Everyne shuld watch ut when crssing the rad. And ur schl warns us nt t play n the rad.
I think these rules are necessary because safety cmes first.
Have a gd summer hliday!
Yurs,
Wang Wei
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点:
短语:play with,make sure,what's mre,watch ut,warn sb(nt)t d sth。
句型:It is dangerus t play with fire.玩火是危险的。It is+形容词+t d sth.去做某事是……的,固定句型。
I think these rules are necessary because safety cmes first. 我认为这些规则是必要的,因为安全第一。I think后接宾语从句,because引导原因状语从句。
【2020 •无锡市】
63.今年“世界读书日”(Wrld Bk Day)的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动,要求介绍你所读过的一本书。你草拟了写作流程图,请根据下图用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
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注意事项:
1.短文须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.提供的书名非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3.词数在90个左右,短文首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文,今年“世界读书日”(Wrld Bk Day)的主题是“Read and Share”,为此你校英语俱乐部正开展征文活动,要求根据草拟的写作流程图,介绍你所读过的一本书,用英语写一篇短文参加活动。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
【参考范文】
The bk I’d like t share with yu is The Old Man and the Sea, written by an American writer Ernest Hemingway. This bk tells abut a fisherman wh is lucky enugh t catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard t take it hme. On the way back, he has t fight against the shark and the sea.
What I like mst abut the bk is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember the well-knwn sentence frm the bk. Man is nt made fr defeat.
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点:
短语:share with,tell abut,fight against,n the way back,give up。
句型:This bk tells abut a fisherman wh is lucky enugh t catch a huge fish at sea. 这本书讲述了一位渔夫的故事,他幸运地在海上捕到了一条大鱼。wh在句中引导定语从句,修饰前面的a fisherman。
【2020 •盐城市】
六、书面表达
81.学校网站英语栏目将组织读书分享征文活动,请根据提示,写一篇短文投稿。
注意事项:
(1)词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My favurite bk
Gd bks are valuable treasures. Amng all the bks I’ve read, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题是一篇话题作文。主要以“My favurite bk”展开描写。文章要写出题目中给出的所有的要点,同时也可以自行发挥,可以使用现在时描写,要注意语言的衔接要自然连贯。
【参考范文】
My favurite bk
Gd bks are valuable treasures. Amng all the bks I’ve read, the Mnkey King is my favurite bk.
The Mnkey King is the main character in the traditinal Chinese bk Jurney t the West. He is nt a nrmal mnkey. In fact,he is brave enugh t fight with any bad persn and he can always win the fights. S I like t read it.
The bk mainly talks abut three things. First f all, it tells us why the mnkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and bjects he can change int. Secndly, the bk shws us hw the mnkey uses his magic stick. Smetimes he can make the stick s small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but nt least, the bk tells us hw the mnkey fights with bad peple. I like t read this part very much because the mnkey always tries his best t win the fights.
The bk teaches us t be brave when we are in truble. And it als tells us t keep fighting t help the weak. Mst imprtantly, it tells us t keep trying in ur lives and never give up.
【名师点评】
例文点评:文章分四段描写。第一段开篇点题最喜欢的书是什么;第二段介绍书名的由来;第三段介绍整本书中的内容;第四段写为什么要读这本书,能够学到什么。整个文章结构完整思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思明确通俗易懂。
高分亮点:
短语:in fact;fight with;talk abut;first f all;try ne’s best t d;be in truble;give up。
句型:hw引导的宾语从句;because引导的原因状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;s…that引导的结果状语从句。
【2020 •丹东市】
B.根据要求完成大作文
95.生活中我们有很多东西需要与人分享,比如:好书、美食、经验、快乐……,请你以“I'd like t share _______ with yu.”为题写一篇短文。
要求:
1.请将题目补充完整;
2.介绍与该主题相关的个人经历,说明分享原因,谈谈个人感悟;
3.语言表达准确,语意通顺、连贯,书写工整、规范;
4.词数70左右;
5.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求以I’d like t share…with yu为题,写一篇作文。学生们首先应该将题目补充完整,想要分享什么,题目中也给出了一些提示,如好书、美食、经验、快乐等等。将题目补充完整后,学生再围绕这一主题,分享自己的经历,说明分享它的原因以及个人的感悟。这是话题作文,文章的内容需要学生们发挥自己的想象力,结合实际生活,写出具体的内容,这是写作中的一个难点。文章应根据表达需要确定时态,以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
【参考范文】
I’d like t share a gd bk with yu
As everybdy knws, bks are the ladder f human prgress. I have read many bks and I wuld like t share my favrite bk the Adventures f Tm Sawyer with yu. I have read it many times. The bk is written by Mark Twain, a famus American writer. Tm wh is the her f the stry is a lively and clever by. He and his best friend Huck Finn ran away t an island. The mst exciting part is when Tm and Huck start their adventures n the island. In my pinin, the stry is s interesting and enjyable that it is wrth reading.
【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文以I’d like t share a gd bk with yu为题目,在文中分享了自己最喜欢的一本书,简单介绍了书的主要角色、内容以及自己喜欢它的原因。文中内容充实、完整,叙述条理,逻辑清晰。短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,谓语动词形式准确,语法规范。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。句式以简单句为主,并使用了并列句、状语从句、被动语态、非谓语动词等复杂结构,表达流畅,意思连贯。
高分亮点:
短语:run away;in my pinin。
句型:As everybdy knws, bks are the ladder f human prgress.;Tm wh is the her f the stry is a lively and clever by.;The mst exciting part is when Tm and Huck start their adventures n the island.;In my pinin, the stry is s interesting and enjyable that it is wrth reading.。
【2020 •沈阳市】
65.为了鼓励学生积极参加体育活动,你的学校即将举办英文征文比赛假设你是李华,请你以Ding sprts makes me ________为题,参与投稿。
要求:
1. 确定主题,说明原因;
2. 围绕主题,进行叙述或阐述;
3. 词数80-100。
注意:
1. 补全标题(参考词语: healthy,happy,relaxed,strng等);
2. 可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以阐述具体观点;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
5. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Ding sprts makes me ________
Recently, sprts have been very ppular with many peple. In my pinin, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文,为了鼓励学生积极参加体育活动,学校即将举办英文征文比赛。假设你是李华,要求你以Ding sprts makes me ____为题,根据要点提示写一篇短文,参与投稿。首先要认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Ding sprts makes me strng
Recently, sprts have been very ppular with many peple. In my pinin, ding sprts makes me strng because it builds up my bdy and mind.
I was shrt and thin befre, s my father always tk me ut fr running. At first, I usually felt tired and wanted t give up. But my father encuraged me t stick with it. Half a year later, I grew taller and strnger. At the sprts meeting this year, I even wn the first prize in the 1, 500-metre race. Since then, I have been strnger and strnger and I dn't fear any difficulty.
In a wrd, ding sprts makes me strng.
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文主要采用第一人称复数展开叙述,文章构严谨,层次分明,紧扣主题。语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点:
短语:in my pinin,build up,want t d sth,give up,encurage sb t d,stick with。
句型:But my father encuraged me t stick with it.但我父亲鼓励我坚持下去。encurage sb t d sth鼓励某人做某事。
Since then, I have been strnger and strnger and I dn't fear any difficulty. 从那时起,我变得越来越强壮,我不再害怕任何困难。strnger and strnger越来越强壮,比较级+and+比较级,表示越来越……。
【2020 •铁岭葫芦岛】
86.根据要求完成小作文。词数:30词左右。
为了方便孩子学习,现在许多家长在孩子就读的高中附近求租房子。假设你是一位家长,名叫杨辉,想求租房子。所需条件:①第二高中附近②有两个房间③租金每月800元。联系方式:1596876xxxx。请你根据以上信息写一则求租广告。
参考词:租货rent
An Ad fr Renting
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【写作思路】
该题目属于应用文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示介绍租房的条件及自己的联系方式。
【参考范文】
An Ad fr Renting
I want t rent a huse with tw rms. It’s better t be near N. 2 High Schl. I hpe the rent culd be 800 yuan a mnth s that I can affrd it. If yu have ne, please cntact Yang Hui at 1596876xxxx.Thank yu!
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍租房的条件叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:want t; rent a huse ; s that; cntact sb. at。
句型:I hpe…宾语从句;it做形式主语的句子;s that引导的目的状语从句。
87.根据要求完成大作文。词数:80-100词。
2020年是不平凡的一年,每个人都可能得到过社会的帮助。我们应该懂得感恩与回报。中考结束后,学校计划在7月25日组织一次"走进社区,做一天志愿者"活动。活动地点:新华社区(Xinhua Cmmunity);集合时间:上午8:30;集合地点:学校门口。
提示:clear ut…, water…, hand ut masks, give away…visit…, take fd t…
请根据以上信息,以A One-day vlunteer Jb为题写一篇短文谈谈你们的活动安排。
要求:
①语意连贯,层次清楚,书写规范。
②用到所有提示信息并进行适当发挥。
③文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
④短文的题目、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A One-day vlunteer Jb
As middle schl students, we shuld be thankful t peple wh helped us. After the exam, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe this activity will make us learn t give ur lve t everyne and sciety.
【写作思路】
本文是一篇话题作文。学校计划在7月25日组织一次"走进社区,做一天志愿者"活动,要求以“一天的志愿者工作”为题写一篇关于活动安排的文章。内容需包括活动时间、活动地点以及具体的活动内容,注意题干中提示的词汇需要全部运用,在此基础上可适当拓展。根据题目要求可知,本文时态为一般将来时,人称为第一人称,注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
A One-day vlunteer Jb
As middle schl students, we shuld be thankful t peple wh helped us. After the exam, ur schl plans t rganize an activity f "ging int the cmmunity and being a vlunteer fr ne day". This activity will be held in Xinhua Cmmunity and we are ging t meet at the schl gate at 8:30 a.m. n July 25.
Firstly, we will help cleaners clean ut the garbage t make sure the cmmunity tidy and beautiful. Secndly, we will arrange sme students give away water and hand ut masks t peple wh wrk under the burning sun. What’s mre, we will visit the aged in the cmmunity and take fd t them.
It’s necessary fr us t take an active part in such vlunteer activities. Thrugh this activity, ur life will be mre meaningful.
I hpe this activity will make us learn t give ur lve t everyne and sciety.
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文结构紧凑,逻辑清晰。首段开门见山,点明志愿活动的时间及地点;第二段介绍志愿活动的具体安排,如打扫卫生、分发口罩、看望老人等;第三段主要介绍活动的意义。该文要点齐全,语句通顺,让人一目了然。文章使用了正确的时态和人称,符合表达的需要。
高分亮点:
短语:plan t d sth;clean ut;make sure;give away;hand ut;take an active part in。
句型:wh引导的定语从句;It’s+形容词+fr sb t d sth。
【2020 •云南省】
56.提示:在课余生活中,你通常做些什么?有什么收获?请以“My After-schl Life”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的课余生活。
要求:
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁,词数不少于60个;
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计;
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上,写在本试题卷上无效。
My After-schl Life
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据内容提示讲述自己的课余生活及收获。
【参考范文】
My After-schl Life
Thugh schl life is very busy, my life after schl is clurful and enjyable.
First f all, I need t finish my hmewrk, which is the first thing I need t d. Only when I finish my hmewrk, will I g t play with my friends happily. Playing badmintn is my favurite sprt after schl. In my pinin, sprt cntributes t my health which is imprtant in daily life.
I am s satisfied with myself, because I nt nly study hard, but als enjy myself after schl. As a student, I need t study. At the same time, I need t enjy my childhd.
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述自己的课余生活及收获叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:first f all; need t; play with; in my pinin; cntributes t; am satisfied with; at the same time。
句型:thugh引导的让步状语从句;Only when… will I…部分倒装结构;which引导的定语从句;because引导的原因状语从句;nt nly…but als…的结构。
【2020 •安徽省】
61.假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hmetwn”专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下:
1.熟悉家乡;
2.乐于交流;
3.擅长英语。
注意:1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: jurnalist (n.记者);clumn (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本题属于书信作文,信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hear yur newspaper needs jurnalists fr the clumn My Hmetwn. I hpe t be a member f the team.
First, I knw a lt abut my hmetwn, such as its histry and culture. Besides, I used t wrk as a jurnalist fr my schl newspaper and I did a very gd jb. I'm easy-ging and always ready t cmmunicate with thers. Mrever, I have a gd knwledge f English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.
I'm sure t be the right persn yu are lking fr. I'd be thankful if I culd get this chance.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,先表达写信目的,然后根据要点提示介绍自己,最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
单词和短语:hpe t d sth.;a member f;such as;besides;used t d sth.;wrk as;d a very gd jb;be ready t d sth.;cmmunicate with;mrever;have a gd knwledge f;be skillful at;in English;lk fr。
句型:and连接并列句;省略that的定语从句;if引导的条件状语从句。
【2020 •福建省】
71. 假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示,用英语写一封电子邮件,向他推荐即将在你校举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动,说明推荐理由,并请他关注线上相关信息。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear David,
I'm pleased t knw that yu're interested in Chinese medicine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文。文中向朋友推荐即将举办的“传统中医进校园”的宣传日活动,并说明推荐理由。
【参考范文】
Dear David,
I'm pleased t knw that yu're interested in Chinese medicine. Nw, I'd like t share with yu sme infrmatin abut Traditinal Chinese Medicine Day in ur schl, which is ging t take place n July 31, 2020.
On that day, a famus dctr will give us a talk n Chinese medicine. And there will be a shw abut its develpment. Als, the film Li Shizhen will be n. I'm sure the activities wuld be very helpful t yu. I hpe yu can visit www. intelschl. cm and have a better understanding f traditinal Chinese medicine.
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评:本文主要以第一人称为主,时态主要采用一般将来时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,句子通顺。
高分亮点:
短语:share with sb abut sth与某人分享某事;take place举行;be helpful t sb对某人有帮助。
句子:there will be a shw abut its develpment句中用的是there be句型;I'm sure the activities wuld be very helpful t yu句中由that引导的宾语从句,引导词that已省略。
【2020 •黑龙江省牡丹江市】
86. (A) 假如你是Gina,今天早晨你在走廊捡到了一部手机,红色外壳(case),壳上面有星星图案。你推测它可能是位女老师的。请写一则招领启事让失主去广播室(bradcasting rm)找李老师认领。
Fund
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Gina
【写作思路】
这是一则给材料作文,由于是一则招领启事,写作时只要将材料提供的内容,介绍清楚物品的情况即可,同时要符合应用文体的格式。文章要用一般现在时。
【参考范文】
Fund
I’m Gina. I fund a smart phne in the schl hallway. It has a red case and there are sme stars in the case. I think it may be a wman teacher’s. I gave it t Mr. Li. If it is yurs, please g t the bradcasting rm and ask Mr. Li fr it.
Gina
【名师点评】
例文点评:文章是一则启事,语言精悍,表达准确意思明确,通俗易懂,主要写出了这则启事的目的,物品描述清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:give sth t;g t sp;ask…fr。
句型:I think+宾语从句;If引导的条件状语从句;There be句型。
【2020 •内蒙古包头市】
71. 假定你是李华,你校将举办校园音乐节(music festival)。请给你的好友Alan写一封电子邮件,介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动,并邀请他与你一起参加此次音乐节。邮件内容包括:
注意:
l. 词数90左右,开头和结尾己经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
参考词汇:摊位 stand 慈善charity
Dear Alan,
Hw is it ging?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据内容提示介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动。
【参考范文】
Dear Alan,
Hw is it ging? Our schl will hld a music festival next Sunday n the schl sprts field. Knwing that yu are fnd f music, I'm writing t invite yu t jin us.
The festival will start at 10: 00 am and last abut tw hurs. Students frm my schl will give fantastic perfrmances, including playing the vilin, pian, guitar and s n. Besides, we can sing sngs and dance t music. Meanwhile, sme f my classmates will sell tickets and I will wrk at a fd stand. All f the mney will g t charity.
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
例文点评:例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍音乐节的相关内容和主要活动叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:hld a music festival;are fnd f;and s n;sing sngs and dance t music;at a fd stand; lk frward t。
句型:Knwing that…现在分词作状语的句子;and表示并列的句子;that引导的宾语从句。
【2020 •四川攀枝花】
71. 初中毕业了,我们又将进入高一级的学校学习,利用这个暑假,我们更应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示,以"My Summer Vacatin Plan"为题,用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示:
1. 放松自己:看电影,锻炼身体,和父母去旅行等;
2. 学习新技能:做饭、游泳、骑自行车等;
3. 努力学习:阅读书籍,复习知识,为以后学习做准备等。
要求:
1. 词数80~100,开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
2. 要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
My Summer Vacatin Plan
With the summer vacatin cming, I will make a plan fr it. First, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题属于话题作文,题目的开头已给出。要求根据要点提示和要求写一篇题为“My Summer Vacatin Plan”的短文,介绍自己的暑假安排。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
My Summer Vacatin Plan
With the summer vacatin cming, I will make a plan fr it. First, I plan t relax myself, such as watching mvies and traveling with my parents. I'll exercise every day, fr it is gd fr ur health t play sprts. Then, I am ging t spend sme time learning cking, swimming and bike riding. In my pinin, these skills will be useful and helpful in my future life. At the same time, I'll read sme bks t pen up my eyes. I als plan t review knwledge t prepare fr future study.
I think I'll have a meaningful summer vacatin.
【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,第一段介绍了自己打算如何放松自己、要学习哪些新技能及暑假期间的学习安排,第二段属于自主发挥,写出自己的感想。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
单词和短语:make a plan;plan t d sth.;relax neself;such as;be gd fr;spend sme time ding sth.;in ne's pinin;at the same time;pen up ne's eyes;prepare fr。
句型:fr连接的表示因果关系的并列句;省略that的宾语从句。
【2020•黄冈市】
62.习主席在全国教育大会上强调,中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。假如你是李华,请根据以下要点提示写一篇英语演讲稿,简单谈谈如何做一个新时代合格的中学生。
要点提示:
1.爱国爱家,诚实守信,善良感恩;
2.努力学习,做个有创造力的人;
3.多参 加体育锻炼,保持身心健康;
4.善于发现生活中的美,热爱大自然,守护家园;
5.积极参加校内外的各种劳动。
写作要求:
1.词数90左右 (开头已经给出,不计人总词数);
2.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇: keep ne's prmise 守信; be thankful t sb. 感恩某人; creative有创造力的; nature自然; prtect保护; beauty美; activity活动
Bys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Tday I'm glad t share my ideas abut hw t be gd students_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧接文章开头继续写作,根据内容提示讲述一个新时代合格的中学生应该做的事情。
【参考范文】
Bys and girls,
My name is Li Hua. Tday I'm glad t share my ideas abut hw t be gd students.
First f all, we must lve ur cuntry and hme. We need t keep ur prmise. We shuld be kind and be thankful t ur parents and friends. Secnd, we must wrk hard. It is necessary fr us t be active and creative. Third, it is helpful t take exercise, and keep us healthy bth physically and mentally. Als, we can find the beauty f the nature. It is imprtant fr us t lve the nature and prtect the envirnment. What’s mre,we can take part in all kinds f activities in and ut f schl.
【名师点评】
例文主要用第一人称进行写作,主要采用一般现在时态来写作。讲述一个新时代合格的中学生应该做的事情分五个方面来写,叙述完整且条理清晰。
高分亮点:
短语:share my ideas;first f all;keep ur prmise;be thankful t;take exercise;keep us healthy;prtect the envirnment;what’s mre; take part in; all kinds f。
句型:hw+动词不定式的结构;it 做形式主语的句子;and表示并列的句子。
【2020•湖北省咸宁市】
53.众志成城抗疫情,齐心向阳迎春天。随着新冠肺炎疫情的有效控制,各校已经陆续复学,久别的师生回到了熟悉的校园。复学后,王老师在班上将开展一个主题为“Share yur life at hme during the COVID-19”的演讲活动,让同学们分享疫情期间居家生活的经历和感受。假如你是李华,请从以下四个方面写一份演讲稿。
写作要求:
1. 文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名。
2. 文章须包含所提供主要信息,可适当发挥;行文连贯,条理清晰。
3. 词数80~100个,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总字数。
Hell, everyne! Lng time n see. It's my hnr t share my life at hme during the COVID-19 with yu. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,主要是介绍疫情期间居家生活的经历和感受,从学习、家务活、业余活动和感受四个方面来写,根据写作的内容应用第一人称和一般过去时。
【参考范文】
Hell, everyne! Lng time n see. It's my hnr t share my life at hme during the COVID-19 with yu. At hme, I had nline classes n the Internet. I culd see my teacher thrugh the cmputer r the cellphne. After having the class, I did my hmewrk. Then, I used the cellphne t send the phts f hmewrk t my teachers. In the spare time, I cleaned my rms, learnt t ck the dishes fr my parents, and s n. Besides, I watched TV, listened t music, r did sprts at hme. At that time, thugh we culdn't g ut because f the COVID-19, we had a happy and warm family life. We shuld study hard frm nw n and treasure the present life.
【名师点评】
例文包含了所有要点,时态使用正确,表达有条理,语句通顺,意思连贯,使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点:
短语:thrugh the cmputer r the cellphne;use sth. t d;send sth. t sb.;in the spare time;listen t music;frm nw n。
句型:①时间状语从句 After having the class, I did my hmewrk.
②让步状语从句 At that time, thugh we culdn't g ut because f the COVID-19, we had a happy and warm family life.
【2020•荆门市】
61.青少年是祖国的未来。在创建全国文明城市的过程中,你市举办了“美德少年”评选活动。请根据以下提示,以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书,号召大家积极争做“美德少年”。
要点:
1. 在学校:努力学习知识,养成良好的学习习惯,爱运动;
2. 在家里:经常与家人交流,感恩父母,分担家务,知错就改;
3. 在社会:遵守规则,在公共场合不要大声喧哗,注意安全;
4. 发表你的观点。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4. 词数:80-100(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future f ur mtherland, and als the symbl f ur city. What shuld we d t becme a virtue teenager f ur city?
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【写作思路】本文是一篇话题作文,以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题,用英语写一篇倡议书,号召大家积极争做“美德少年”,并从学校、家庭、社会三方面谈谈自己的观点和做法。结合所给材料,可知主要考查一般现在时态,人称主要为第一人称,注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用,写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future f ur mtherland, and als the symbl f ur city. What shuld we d t becme a virtue teenager f ur city?
At schl, we shuld study hard and frm gd learning habits. In ur spare time, we can d regular exercise t build up a gd bdy. It's ur duty t help parents d sme husewrk at hme and we shuld always be thankful fr what ur parents have dne fr us. Parents will be happier if we can cmmunicate mre with them. Smetimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and crrect them timely. What's mre, I suggest we bey the rules in public and dn't speak ludly. Last but nt least, keep in mind that safety is first.
In my pinin, we are suppsed t d all f the abve. I sincerely hpe everyne can jin us and try t be a virtue teenager.
【名师点评】
本文结构紧凑,逻辑顺畅。首段开门见山,直接点明文章“争做美德少年”的主旨,第二段从学校、家庭以及社会三方面浅谈自己作“美德少年”的方法,最后一段总结全文,升华文章立意。另外文章语言简练,运用简单的句式结构将题目主要内容完整表述。
高分亮点:
短语:in ur spare time;build up;be thankful f;make mistake;last but nt least;be suppsed t。
句型:It+be+名词+不定式(it作形式主语);if引导的条件状语从句。
【2020•湖北省恩施州】
61.红星中学面向全校学生选拔“恩施代言人”,宣传地方文化及土特产等。你被荣幸地选定,请你用英语简要为恩施代言。
要点提示:
1.恩施的地理位置(湖北西南);
2.主要特色(如:文化、土特产、风景名胜等),至少包含两个方面;
3.欢迎到恩施来。
写作要求:
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯:
2.条理清晰,字迹工整,词数不少于80;
3.文章开头与结尾已给出,不计人总词数:
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:农产品 agricultural prducts 硒 Se
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm hnred t have been elected as ne f the spkespersns fr Enshi._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks fr listening.
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm hnred t have been elected as ne f the spkespersns fr Enshi.
Enshi lies in the suthwest f Hubei. The ppulatin there is abut 3500000 and the peple there are friendly and helpful. Whenever yu cme, yu will keep a big smile n yur face. The weather there is cmfrtable and pleasant, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. Enshi is surrunded n three sides by muntains, there are lts f turist attractins, such as the Great Canyn, the Tenglng Cave and s n. The scenery there is s attractive that yu will lse yurselves in it. What's mre, with the develpment f Enshi, the transprtatin there is becming quicker and easier. The Hurngxi Superhighway and Yiwan Railway have been built up already. That's a gd chance fr Enshi t develp better.
In a wrd ,welcme t my beautiful hmetwn--Enshi!
Thanks fr listening.
【2020•湖北省十堰市】
56.“人间烟火味,最抚凡人心”,2020年初,由于新冠肺炎的爆发,很多人都不得不待在家里,而不能外出打工谋生。"地摊"如雨后春笋在各大城市涌现。假如你是李华,在本周班会上将代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次摆地摊的体验活动。内容如下:
参考词汇:
radside the standard 地摊 Renmin Square n. 人民广场
experience v.& n. 体验, 经历 meaningful adj. 有意义的
要求:
1. 必须包含所给的全部的要点及内容, 可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。
3. 词数80至100。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Fellw students,
This year due t the impact f COVID-19 utbreak, many peple have t stay at hme and can't g utside t wrk t earn a living. Radside Stands have sprung up in many big cities. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
该题属于材料写作。要求以李华的身份,在班会上代表老师用英语通知学生参加一次摆地摊的体验活动。写作时注意问题信息要写齐全。
【参考范文】
Fllw students,
This year, due t the inspact f COVID-19 utbreak, many peple have t stay at hme and can't g utside t wrk t earn a living. Radside Stands have sprung up in many big cities. This Sunday evening ur class plans t experience this activity. Here is the infrmatin yu need t knw.
The activity will last fr tw hurs. We'd better arrive at Renmin Square at 7 p.m. We will sell different kinds f things such as newspapers and drinks. We can als sell sme ld things including bks, tys and bikes. Besides, if yu are gd at DIY, I think cakes and cards made by hand will be ppular.
As fr the mney we get, I suggest that we can give it away t the peple in need. Hpe yu can take an active part in it. Thrugh the activity, we can nt nly get sme scial experience but als spend a meaningful night.
【名师点评】
例文采用三段式,第一大段总体说班级要组织地摊体验活动;第二大段陈述组织地摊体验活动的时间及具体要求;第三大段陈述从这次活动中的收获及想法。本文结构清晰,段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析,时态主要以一般现在时为主。
高分亮点:
短语:stay at hme,earn a living,had better d sth,different kinds f,be gd at,give away,take an active part in,nt nly…but als…。
句型:1.现在完成时 Radside Stands have sprung up in many big cities.
2. 条件状语从句 Besides, if yu are gd at DIY, I think cakes and cards made by hand will be ppular.
3.宾语从句 I suggest that we can give it away t the peple in need.
(2020 •湖南省张家界市)
41.请根据下面的提示为学校读书俱乐部写一篇招聘广告。
要求:
1.内容必须包含所提示信息,可适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
3.不少于50词。
Bk Lvers Wanted
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【写作思路】
文章是一篇招聘广告,主要以“Bk Lvers Wanted”为主题展开描写,根据题目中所给的表格信息写出具体的内容,突出这个俱乐部的优点优势,吸引人们能够加入,要注意语言表达要简洁通顺。
【参考范文】
Bk Lvers Wanted
Welcme t ur Bk Club! Our club has just been established fr several years. If yu lve reading r want t make new friends, yu can jin us. There will be a lt f bk lvers like yu. We have many activities in ur club, such as reading bks tgether and sharing ideas abut bks and s n. If yu can jin ur club, we will be very happy. Our club has a lt f facilities that can prvide a wide range f help when yu need it.
Finally, I hpe yu can jin us! Please call at 929—3160.
【名师点评】
文章分两段描写。第一段主要是描写俱乐部的一些具体的情况,亮出一些吸引人的优点;第二段期待对方的加入,以及给出联系方式。整个文章思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思明确易懂。
高分亮点:
短语:want t d;a lt f;such as;call at;and s n。
句型:if引导的条件状语从句;that引导的定语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;I hpe+宾语从句。
(2020 •益阳市)
B)作文
51.益阳市正在为创建全国文明城市(natinal civilized city)招募志愿者。假设你是李华。想成为一名志愿者,请你用英文给志愿者协会写一封邮件,谈谈你能做的志愿者工作。
内容包括:打扫城市公园;到老人之家帮忙:分发传单、张贴通知……
要求:
1. 词数60-80,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名称等信息。
参考词汇:vlunteer clean up wash hand ut put up
Dear madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in N. 1 Middle Schl. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文。文中描述自己想申请成为一名志愿者,并介绍自己能做的事情。
【参考范文】
Dear madam,
My name is Li Hua. I am a student in N. 1 Middle Schl. I want t be a vlunteer, because helping ther peple makes me feel gd. It’s als a gd chance fr me t imprve myself.
I can d many things. Fr example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am gd at singing, s I can sing lts f sngs and tell sme stries fr the ld peple at the Old Peple’s Hme. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clthes. I can als hand ut leaflets and put up ntices. I sincerely hpe I can wrk as a vlunteer and d smething helpful.
I'm lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文采用的是第一人称,时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态,并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强,句子通顺。
高分亮点:
短语:want t d sth想要做某事;fr example例如;clean up打扫;be gd at ding sth擅长做某事;hand ut分发;put up张贴。
句子:I want t be a vlunteer, because helping ther peple makes me feel gd句中because引导原因状语从句;I sincerely hpe I can wrk as a vlunteer and d smething helpful句中由that引导的宾语从句,引导词that已省略。
(2020 •常德市)
61.假设你是Angelica的朋友Alan,请根据第二节(回答问题)材料并按照提示给Angelica回信:1. 恭喜乔迁并简单评述其新居。2. 回复能否参加聚会。3. 若能参加聚会,你会准备什么节目,对整个活动有什么建议等;若不能参会,说明原因,表达自己的心情等。注意:1. 80词以上,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;2. 不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。
Dear Angelica,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Alan
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。本文要求按照提示要点写一封回信,写作中注意要包含所有的提示要点,可适当发挥。时态以一般现在时为主,人称是第一人称。
【参考范文】
Dear Angelica,
I’m glad t receive yur letter last time. First f all, cngratulatins n yur settlement t the new huse,which is s warm and cmfrtable that I’d like t have a lk at nce. The small independent garden is the best design in the huse, and als a gd place t relax. Secndly, I really appreciate yur invitatin f the husewarming party. I’d lve t, but I can’t. As yu knw, the Natinal Pian Grading Test is cming, my curse schedule n these days is already full. I have t devte myself t the preparatin until the end f the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t cme t yur party. But I’ve prepared a gift fr yu and I hpe yu will like it.
May yur party be a great success and enjy yurself that day!
Yurs,
Alan
【名师点评】
本文采用两段式,第一段:(1)恭喜对方乔迁之喜;(2)告诉对方因为要准备钢琴等级考试无法参加聚会;(3)表示很遗憾并准备了礼物;第二段以祝福结尾。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
3.高分亮点:
短语:be glad t;s…that…;wuld like (lve) t;have a lk;at nce;have t;devte myself t;prepare fr;the end f;enjy yurself。
句型:First f all…Secndly…At last…;which引导的非限制性定语从句;s…that…引导的结果状语从句;and并列句;but并列复合句;As yu knw…;it’s +名词+ that从句。
(2020 •湖南省邵阳市)
56. 今年, 新冠肺炎在全球爆发蔓延,很多人被感染、死亡。你的非洲网友Bb获知中国抗击新冠病毒取得了巨大成功,来信向你询问预防新冠肺炎感染的方法。假如你是李华,请根据下面要点提示给Bb写封回信。
要点提示:
要求:1. 语言表达准确,语句通顺,可适当发挥;
2. 80 词左右。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:sneeze 打喷嚏
Dear Bb,
Learning that yu want t knw the ways t prevent Cvid-19, I'm glad t share sme gd ideas with yu.
Firsty,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文,要注意书信的基本格式。题目要求以李华的名义给非洲的网友Bb写一封回信,主要向其介绍预防新冠肺炎的方法。根据图中的要点提示进行回复,如戴口罩、勤洗手等,可适当拓展。另本文时态为一般现在时,人称以第二人称为主,注意主谓一致问题。
【参考范文】
Dear Bb,
Learning that yu want t knw the ways t prevent Cvid-19, I'm glad t share sme gd ideas with yu.
Firstly, yu shuld wear a mask if yu have t g ut. Dn't g t crwded places, like supermarkets. Secndly, yu shuld wash yur hands with running water r sap whenever yu tuch smething. Remember t wash them slwly and carefully. And never fail t pen the windws regularly t let in sme fresh air and d keep yur rm clean. Besides, cver yur nse and muth when sneezing. If yu dn't feel well, g t see a dctr. Mst imprtant f all, yu shuld frm a gd habit. G t bed early and get up n time. Be sure t have enugh sleep, and take mre exercise!
I hpe these ways are f sme use t yu, and I believe everything will be ging well again sn!
Best wishes.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
本文格式正确,符合书信作文的基本格式。文章结构紧凑,层次清晰,根据图中的要点向Bb提出了合理的建议,如戴口罩、勤洗手、勤通风、养成好习惯等,文章要点齐全,符合文章表达的要求。使用了正确的时态和人称,符合表达的需要。文章还运用了状语从句、祈使句等句式结构,丰富了文章的内容。
高分亮点:
短语:be glad t;wear a mask;remember t d sth;frm a gd habit;g t bed early;get up n time。
句型:D型祈使句;if引导的条件状语从句。
【2019年】
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
(一)【2019 •广东】
假如你是李华,英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校。该校校长读到以上这篇短文后,对广东文化产生兴趣,准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流。请你写一篇发言稿,在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排。
内容包括:
1. 推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物。
2. 介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排。(包括活动的时间、地点和内容)
参考活动:欣赏粤剧(Cantnese pera),体验功夫(kung fu),参加广东历史讲座等。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Gd evening, everyne. I am Li Hua, chairman f the Students Unin. I am very pleased t welcme yu t the party. _______________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe yu'll enjy yur stay here!
【写作思路】
这是一篇要求向来你校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流的学生介绍研学活动的相关安排。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般将来时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Gd evening, everyne. I am Li Hua, chairman f the Students Unin. I am very pleased t welcme yu t the party. In Guangdng, yu can enjy many traditinal fds. Such as shrimp dumplings, beef r fish balls, chicken feet and s n. Especially fish balls and chicken feet are really very delicius.I think yu will lve them. Tmrrw, in the mrning, we'll g t the biggest theatre in Guangzhu. Yu are ging t enjy Cantnese pera there. We will g t Zhngshan Park in the afternn. Yu can experience Chinese Kung fu there. It is amazing. We will attend a lecture n histry f Guangdng in the evening.
I hpe yu' ll enjy yur stay here!
(二)【2019 •深圳市】
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tny 对“中国红”一词很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现,请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信帮助他了解。
提示词:婚礼 wedding,中国结 Chinese Knt,红包 red packet, 代表 stand fr
Dear Tny,
It’s great t receive yur letter. I’m writing t tell yu smething abut Chinese red. ____________________
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I truly hpe my letter will help yu understand better abut Chinese red.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tny,
It’s great t receive yur letter. I’m writing t tell yu smething abut Chinese red. Chinese red, cnsidered as the symblic clr f China, is extremely ppular with Chinese peple. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us gd luck.
Peple in ur cuntry attach such great imprtance t Chinese red that they use many red bjects in sme imprtant events. Fr instance, in a wedding, yu can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding rm is decrated with red. What’s mre, the huses are als filled with red paper cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knts during the Spring Festival. Children will get red pckets fr best wishes as well. Obviusly, Chinese red plays a significant rle and enjys the highest ppularity in China.
I truly hpe my letter will help yu understand better abut Chinese red.
Yurs,
Li Hua
(三)【2019 •重庆市A卷】
你正在组织一项暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动。作为发起人,请你写一篇发言稿,在你校“英语时光”广播中号召更多的同学参加。
要求:
1. 80—100词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息:
1. 活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……)
2. 活动构想(时间、地点、内容……)
3. ……
Hell, everybdy. I am planning a summer trip called “Be a Kid in the Muntain”. _____________________
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Thank yu!
【写作思路】
这是一篇发言稿,也就是材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下在暑假期间到山区为期一周的游学和帮扶活动的情况。目的是:号召更多的同学参加。主要从活动缘由(孤独、帮扶、游学……);活动构想(时间、地点、内容……)和其他方面来介绍。时态为一般现在时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
Hell, everybdy. I am planning a summer trip called "Be a kid in the Muntains". It will prvide us with a meaningful week staying with the students in the muntains.
As many f their parents leave fr the city t wrk, thse students might feel lnely and sme may even find it hard t g n studying. S we can bring them sme schl things like bks and pens fr their study, and prepare sme interesting stries t share. In the daytime, we can g hiking and d sme teamwrk. In the evening, we can d such activities as ppular games and grup dance arund the fire.
Isn't that exciting? Cme and jin us. Let's be "a kid in the muntains".I believe it will bring sunshine t the children in the muntains as well as mre cnfidence t us.
Thank yu!
【名师点评】
(1)高分句型一 As many f their parents leave fr the city t wrk,thse students might feel lnely and sme may even find it hard t g n studying.由于很多父母都去城市工作,这些学生可能会感到孤独,有些人甚至觉得很难继续学习。it hard t g n studying.中的it是形式宾语。
(2)高分句型二 I believe it will bring sunshine t the children in the muntains as well as mre cnfidence t us.我相信它会给山里的孩子们带来阳光,也会给我们带来更多的信心。句子it will bring sunshine t the children in the muntains as well as mre cnfidence t us.是宾语从句。作believe的宾语。
(四)【2019 •江苏省宿迁市】
某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。
注意事项:
1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容要包括表中要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯通畅;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名,校名、地名等。
Here is my design fr the new app. ___________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Here is my design fr the new app. It is named Happy English Learning. This app includes English news, English mvies, English sngs, English games and s n. It can make it easy fr students t study tgether. It is true that vcabulary is very imprtant in English study. Students can enlarge their English vcabulary by using this app. Their English listening skills can be greatly imprved. They can als practise their spken English by singing English sngs and watching films. In a wrd, students can have fun learning English by using this app.
I think the new app shuld be suitable fr students f different ages.
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了不少的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如and s n,make it easy,in English study,watch films,in a wrd,have fun,be suitable fr等。而固定句型It can make it easy fr students t study tgether.和It is true that vcabulary is very imprtant in English study./ I think the new app shuld be suitable fr students f different ages.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
(五)【2019 •湖北省孝感市】
随着年龄的增长,你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示,以“Great changes arund me”为题,写一篇短文。
写作要点:
1. 过去,道路狭窄(narrw),房屋老旧,空气……河水……
2. 现在。路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利;高楼林立;蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小鸟歌唱;人们……
3. 感受……
写作要求:
1. 要点齐全,省略号处须作适当发挥,但不要逐句翻译;
2. 语句连贯,条理清晰,详略得当,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何宾实的信息(地名、校名和人名等);
4. 100词左右,短文的题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Great Changes arund Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place arund me. ___________________________________
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【参考范文】
Great Changes arund Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place arund me. The rads used t be narrw and crwded. The huses were ld and small. The air wasn't fresh enugh. Smetimes, there was terrible smell. The river was plluted badly and there was rubbish in it.
Nwadays, the rads are wide and clean. It's really cnvenient fr peple t g ut. We can chse different kinds f transprtatin t g anywhere. Lts f tall buildings have been built in the city. Mst f us have mved t big beautiful huses. The sky is blue and the clud is white .The birds are singing happily. My hmetwn lks like a big garden with green trees, grass and clrful flwers.
Our cuntry is rich and strng, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time ges n, ur life will becme better and better!
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如take place,arund me,used t be,cnvenient fr,g ut,different kinds f,lts f,mst f us,lk like,live a happy life,g n,becme better and better等。而固定句型It's really cnvenient fr peple t g ut.和固定句型The river was plluted badly and there was rubbish in it.以及I'm sure as time ges n, ur life will becme better and better!等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
(六)【2019 •湖北省武汉市】
学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明,请根据以下内容提示用英语完成征文。
内容要点如下:
1. 三口之家,家庭幸福,邻里和睦;
2. 父母为教师,在校深受欢迎;
3. 分担家务,周末户外活动;
4. 相互陪伴,经常交流,良好家规助我成长;
5. 请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。
注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2.词数:60 – 80;
3.内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4.标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: ppular adj. 受欢迎的 activity n. 活动 rule n.规矩
My Family
I’m Li Ming. _____________________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,介绍我的家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起:
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求,抓住要点,词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲,我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的,而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥,因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪,就可以动笔写作了,在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词,使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,格式是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
【参考范文】
My Family
I’m Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three peple in it. They are my father, my mther and me. My parents are teachers, they are ppular amng students. We get alng well with ur neighbrs. At hme, I try my best t d sme husewrk. On weekends, we ften g ut fr utdr activities. We accmpany with each ther, cmmunicate with each ther. Gd family rules help me grw up. I study hard, all the teachers and classmates like me. My hme is a warm place.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如get alng well with, try ne’s best t d, accmpany with, cmmunicate with, help sb d以及grw up,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(七)【2019 •浙江省温州市】
最近,用手机APP买菜的人多了。手机菜场菜品丰富、洗净配好、预约送菜上门……外国朋友对此也很感兴趣。
请你以A New Use f the Mbile Phne为题,写一篇110词左右的英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。
【小词典】
acknwledge v.承认,认可 bne n. 骨骼 chest n. 胸部
cipher n. 标记 crwd n. 大众 elect v. 选举,推选
franc n. 法国法郎 invisible ad. 不可见的 muscle n. 肌肉
prfund adj. 深刻的 radi telescpe射电望远镜 reflect n. 反射
signal n. 信号 stimulate v. 刺激 te n. 脚趾
A New Use f the Mbile Phne
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以A New Use f the Mbile Phne为题,写一篇英语短文介绍手机买菜带来的便利,让外国朋友了解中国人民生活中的这个新变化。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
【参考范文】
A New Use f the Mbile Phne
Preparing fr meals is tiring. Yu may have t spend hurs getting everything ready fr cking. Nw in China, new mbile apps are here t help.
These apps prvide yu with meat, fish, and vegetables, almst everything yu need fr a meal. Yu, an rder whenever yu like and decide n the time fr them t arrive. If yu like. they can be washed, cut and packed fr a certain dish. Sme apps even guide yu t ck step by step, making cking easier.
Cmpared with the traditinal way f ging t the market, mbile apps save yur time and energy. With such a new use f the mbile phne, yu can enjy a mre relaxing life.
(八)【2019 •泰州市】
为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想。
活动内容:
1.上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;
2.下午参观市民广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。
你的感想:
1.师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;
2.倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习报效祖国;
3. ……(考生自己发挥)
要求:
1.词数100左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
2.所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥。
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
参考词汇:市民广场Civic Square
In rder t enrich Junir 3 students' after-schl life, ur schl rganized a scial practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students f ur grade tk part in it. _______________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周末你校所组织的一次社会实践活动。所提供的材料中列举了活动内容和你的感想。主要从:1.上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;2.下午参观市民广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。以及表达师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习报效祖国;(自己在发挥一些)。这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
In rder t enrich Junir 3 students' after-schl life, ur schl rganized a scial practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students f ur grade tk part in it. In the mrning, we visited the Peple’s Park. In the park, we enjyed the beautiful scenery, danced and sang, and tk pictures. I wuld like t thank my teachers and classmates fr their help. In the afternn, we visited the Citizen’s Square. In Peple's Square, we watched the pht exhibitin and learned abut the great changes f ur cuntry and hmetwn in the past 70 years. After seeing these pht exhibitins, I was inspired and determined t study hard t serve my cuntry.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I wuld like t thank my teachers and classmates fr their help. 我要感谢我的老师和同学们的帮助。该句话用到了wuld like t d sth. 丰富了语言。
【高分句型二】
In Peple's Square, we watched the pht exhibitin and learned abut the great changes f ur cuntry and hmetwn in the past 70 years. 在人民广场,我们看了70年来的摄影展,了解了祖国和家乡的巨大变化。该句话的语言简练,层次分明,语意明确,用简单的句子表达了丰富的内涵。使人读起来朗朗上口。
(九)【2019 •湖北省随州市】
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分,是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生,我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:1. 历史悠久,约5000年前神农首次发现茶可以饮用;
2. 种植广泛,安溪和杭州尤以茶闻名:
3. 喝茶有很多好处:有利健康,醒脑提神等;
4. 世界各地许多人喜欢喝茶并收集茶具。
写作要求:1. 文章必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:80词左右;(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数)
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
China is famus fr tea. ____________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
茶是中国传统饮食文化的组成部分,是生活中不可或缺的饮品。作为中学生,我们应了解茶并传播茶文化。请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语短文。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第三人称单数,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
China is famus fr tea. Chinese tea has a lng histry. It's said that Shen Nng was the first t discver tea as a drink abut 5, 000 years ag. Tea is prduced in many different areas Anxi and Hangzhu are widely knwn fr their tea.
There are lts f advantages f drinking tea. It's gd fr health. A cup f ca can make yu relaxed and fresh. It seems that many peple all ver the wrld lve drinking tea and cllecting tea scts.
As middle schl students,we shuld knw abut tea culture and spread it arund the wrld.
【名师点评】
这篇短文是一篇优秀的作文,文中用到了一些好的句型:There are lts f advantages f drinking tea.It's gd fr health. A cup f ca can make yu relaxed and fresh. It seems that many peple all ver the wrld lve drinking tea and cllecting tea scts.这些给文章增色不少。
(十)【2019 •山西省】
阅读是同学们未来参与社会应具备的关键能力,无论你喜欢哪种阅读方式,它都能让你增长知识,开阔眼界。最近,某出版社在两万人中,针对人们喜欢的阅读方式做了一项调查,下图是相关的统计结果,其中包括电子阅读和纸质阅读的人数。
请你用两段话写一篇短文,第一段用百分比简要说明图表内容,第二段从图表中选出一项你喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈谈这种阅读方式的好处。
要求:
1. 词数不少于 80 词;
2. 首句已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇仅供参考;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
WORD BANK reading n mbile phnes thers bks reading paper
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对一个人们喜欢的阅读方式的调查结果进行介绍,并结合实际,谈一谈自己喜欢的阅读方式。审题可知,短文应主要包括两部分内容:首先仔细观察图表,用百分比简要说明图表内容;然后选择其中一项你喜欢的阅读方式,结合自己的经历,谈一谈这种阅读方式的好处。短文应以一般现在时为主,根据表达需要选择适当的人称,第二部分内容应以第一人称为主叙述。写作时应注意:文章应包括题目中的所有内容,尤其注意仔细观察图表,将图表中的信息表达清楚、准确。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构考虑,选择适当的句型、短语和词汇,语句通顺,表达清楚。句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句和复合句,以及其他复杂结构,提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使上下文意连贯、自然。
【参考范文】
Recently, a survey was dne amng 20,000 peple abut the ways f reading. Here is what we have learned frm it. 60% f the peple like t read n mbile phnes r e-readers, while nly 38.4% chse t read paper bks. S we can knw that mre and mre peple prefer t read e-bks rather than paper bks. Hwever, whatever way f reading we chse, it can help increase ur knwledge and pen ur eyes.
As fr me, I am still used t reading paper bks. Whenever I pen a paper bk, the smell f paper reminds me f the stries in the bks frm my mm when I was a little kid. Just because f this, I gt int the habit f reading. S when I read paper bks nw, they always bring me the ld feelings. On the ther hand, cmpared with the electrnic devices, reading paper bks is gd fr eyes. S yu see, I believe e-bks wn’t take the place f paper bks in my heart.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了图表中的统计结果,并谈论了自己喜欢的阅读方式。短文有以下几个优点:首先文章内容完整,结构清晰,短文分两段,第一段介绍了图表中的调查结果;第二段结合自己的经历谈论了自己喜欢的阅读方式。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,表达清楚。句式结构文章,以简单句结构为主,也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、表语从句等复合句结构,长短句结合,调整了文章节奏,提升了作文档次。文章中较好的句型有:Here is what we have learned frm it.、S we can knw that mre and mre peple prefer t read e-bks rather than paper bks. 、Hwever, whatever way f reading we chse, it can help increase ur knwledge and pen ur eyes.、Whenever I pen a paper bk, the smell f paper reminds me f the stries in the bks frm my mm when I was a little kid.、On the ther hand, cmpared with the electrnic devices, reading paper bks is gd fr eyes.等。
(十一)【2019 •甘肃省兰州市】
假如你是李华,你校校报的英语专栏正在开展以“美丽的黄河风情线” (The Beautiful Yellw River Custm Turist Line)为主题的英语征文活动,你打算参加。请根据以下内容要点用英语写一篇短文。
1. 风情线总览(the Yellw River, run thrugh the city f Lanzhu, a famus rad called Binhe Rad, alng the Yellw River);
2. 聚焦景观(Zhngshan Bridge, waterwheel(水车), many parks);
3. 休闲娱乐(fly kites, play chess);
4. 特色游览(g sightseeing, sheepskin raft(羊皮筏子),water bus)。
要求:1. 80词左右;
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,书写规范;内容上可适度发挥。
注意:不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息(除所给身份外)。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下美丽的黄河风情线。主要从风情线总览、聚焦景观、休闲娱乐和特色游览四个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
The Beautiful Yellw River Custm Turist Line
The Yellw River is ur mther river. D yu knw what scenic spts the beautiful Yellw River has? Let me tell yu! The Yellw River flws thrugh Lanzhu. There is a famus highway called Binhe Rad, which runs alng the Yellw River. Alng the Yellw River there are many parks, as well as the picturesque Zhngshan Bridge, beautiful waterwheel and s n. There are many places fr leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and s n. There, yu can enjy special turs, such as sightseeing, sheepskin raft and water bus. The beautiful Yellw River is waiting fr yu!
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
There is a famus highway called Binhe Rad, which runs alng the Yellw River. 有一条著名的公路叫做滨河路,它沿着黄河行驶。句子which runs alng the Yellw River.是由which引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
There are many places fr leisure and entertainment, such as flying kites, playing chess and s n. 有很多休闲娱乐的地方,如放风筝、下棋等。该句话用there be结构来写。
(十二)【2019 •浙江省金华、义乌、丽水市】
某英文网站正在举办以“My Schl Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:1. 文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点,可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用;
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
3. 词数:80—100;
4. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Schl Life
I’m Li Hua frm Sunny Hill Middle Schl in China. I’d like t share my schl life with yu. ___________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。某英文网站正在举办以“My Schl Life”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
【参考范文】
My Schl Life
I’m Li Hua frm Sunny Hill Middle Schl in China. I’d like t share my schl life with yu.
We have many subjects at schl such as Chinese, English and s n. I am fcused mre n Chinese, fr I think it’s getting mre and mre widely used thrughut the wrld. Our teachers are kind and helpful. Whenever I have prblems, they are always ready t give me a hand.
Schl activities are rich and clrful. I ften play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lts f fun. I like reading as well. S I ften spend my free time reading in the schl library.
My schl life is wnderful and I enjy it very much.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
I ften play basketball with my classmates,which brings me lts f fun.
我经常和我的同学打篮球,这给我带来了很多乐趣。which引导非限定性定语从句。
【高分句型二】
S I ften spend my free time reading in the schl library.
所以我经常花我的空闲时间在学校图书馆阅读。spend…ding sth花费……做某事。
(十三)【2019 •广州市】
广州某电台英文频道将设Welcme t Guang zhu栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Anyne cming t Guangzhu is sure t have a gd time _________________________________________
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Guangzhu is waiting fr yu.
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容:广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处,并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作,为时内容丰富、充实,应对每个话题进行拓展,详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意:首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容,不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构,要分清主次,合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式,提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Anyne cming t Guangzhu is sure t have a gd time. Lcated in the suth f China,Guangzhu, with a histry f mre than tw thusand years, plays a significant rle in bth ecnmy and culture f China.With mderate as well as cmfrtable climate, Guangzhu is famus as a flwer city fr its distinctive fd.
I strngly recmmend Cantn Twer-a badly well-knwn scenic spt. First f all, Cantn Twer is s grand and beautiful especially in the evening that yu can't help being fascinated by it. In additin, when yu arrive at the tp f Cantn Twer, yu have such a valuable chance t lk dwn at the full view f Guangzhu. Last but nt least, yu can take a large number f nice phts in a setting f Cantn Twer.
As far as I am cncerned, there is n dubt that Guangzhu is gd chice fr yu t visit. I am sure that yu will enjy yurself while making a visit in Guangzhu.
Guangzhu is waiting fr yu.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含来了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍:第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色,简单的几句话包含了大量的信息;第二段是主体段,主要给读者推荐了一个好去处,并阐述了自己的理由;第三段和第四段是一个结尾,对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰,叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯,简单句与复合句结合,使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如Lcated in the suth f China,Guangzhu,with a histry f mre than tw thusand years,plays a significant rle in bth ecnmy and culture f China、I strngly recmmend Cantn Twer-a badly well-knwn scenic spt.、Last but nt least. yu can take a large number f nice phts in a setting f Cantn Twer.、As far as I am cncerned, there is n dubt that Guangzhu is gd chice fr yu t visit. I am sure that yu will enjy yurself while making a visit in Guangzhu.等。
(十四)【2019 •广西北部湾经济区】
暑假将至,你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan fr Summer Hliday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. 学习计划
2. 运动计划
3. 娱乐计划
4. 你的愿望
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Plan fr Summer Hliday
Summer hliday is cming. _________________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“My Plan fr Summer Hliday”为题,根据所给出的材料提示写一篇短文。本文时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系;要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,以便使文章更有档次。
【参考范文】
My Plan fr Summer Hliday
Summer hliday is cming. I will make a plan fr it. First, I will finish my hmewrk. Then I'll read mre gd bks. And I plan t read fur great bks t imprve myself. Secnd, I will keeping exercising and learn t play table tennis. It's gd fr my health. Third, I'll g t Nanning fr tw weeks. Als, I plan t climb Nanshan tea sea. I hpe I can be a vlunteer. I want t visit the ld peple, give them gifts and sing fr them.
I'm lking frward t having a gd summer in the vacatin.
(十五)【2019 •湖北省黄石市】
假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tm写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给Tm回封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括:1. 读几本好书;
2. 参加社会实践活动;
3. 帮父母做家务;
4. 和朋友一起锻炼;
5. 邀请Tm。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息;
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词忙:有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature wrks
社会实践活动scial practice activities
Dear Tm,
I'm very happy t hear frm yu. _____________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Tm,
I'm very happy t hear frm yu. Hw are yu ging these days? Summer vacatin is cming sn. Here I’d like t share my hliday plan with yu. First f all, I am ging t read sme gd bks t pen up my mind. What’s mre, I’ll take part in sme vlunteer activities t raise awareness f serving the sciety and imprve my scial cmmunicatin ability. Of curse, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and s n. Last but nt least, I am abut t invite yu t visit my hmetwn, Huangshi and I really want t meet yu.
Hw abut yurs? I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如wuld like t d, share sth with, be ging t, pen up ne's mind, take part in, awareness f serving the sciety, f curse, and s n, be abut t d, invite sb t d, lk frward t ding以及first f all, what’s mre和last but nt least,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
(一)【2019 •浙江省杭州市】
假定你是李平,最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮件。以下是邮件的一部分,请你阅读后回复,词数80左右。
Subject:
Frm: Linda
T: Li Ping
...
I’m really lking frward t meeting yur brther when he cmes t Rme in the summer. I can shw him arund the city! Please tell me smething abut him! Hw ld is he? What des he lk like? What kind f persn is he and what’s he interested in?
Hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Lve,
Linda
Subject:
Frm: Li Ping
T: Linda
Dear Linda,
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Yurs,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们对Linda的电子邮件进行回复。写作前,应先阅读Linda的来信,了解信中她想知道的事情,然后有针对性地给她进行介绍。审题可知,Linda在信中提到她想要了解你哥哥的一些情况,她提出了三个问题,“他多大了”;“他是什么样子的”;“他是怎样的人以及他的兴趣”,回信中应对Linda的这些提问进行回答,并根据表达的需要,补充一些细节内容,使文章更加充实、丰富。短文应使用一般现在时、第三人称来叙述,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意:首先内容应符合题目要求,并且叙述要注意层次和结构;其次应注意英语的表达问题,应符合英文句式的特点以及表达习惯,不能写汉语式的英语。可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯、自然。
【参考范文】
Dear Linda,
Thank yu s much fr agreeing t shw my brther arund Rme. Nw let me tell yu smething abut my brther. He is thirteen years ld, easy-ging and humrus-we get alng really well. He lves different cultures. He is interested in museums and likes trying lcal fd.
My brther is als cute. He’s f medium height with shrt straight black hair. He is gd at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.
Thanks again fr yur help!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者以李平的身份给Linda写了回信,介绍了哥哥的一些情况。首先短文内容符合题目要求,按照Linda在来信中的提问,介绍了哥哥的年龄、外貌、兴趣爱好等信息。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以一般现在时、第三人称单数来叙述,符合题目要求,尤其注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化,这是学生们学习中的一个难点。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。短文中主要使用了简单句、并列句和复合句,还使用了非谓语动词,如动词不定式、现在分词等。文章中较好的句型和短语有:Thank yu s much fr agreeing t shw my brther arund Rme.、He is thirteen years ld, easy-ging and humrus-we get alng really well. 、He is interested in museums and likes trying lcal fd.、He’s f medium height with shrt straight black hair.、 He is gd at Chinese kungfu, and usually wears T-shirts and jeans.等等。
(二)【2019 •甘肃省敦煌市】
我们生活学习在美丽的甘肃。假设你所在的学校正在组织一个“让世界了解甘肃、让走向世界"的活动,请根据以下思维导图的提示,以" The Intrductin f Gansu Prvince"为题,写一篇介绍甘肃的英语短文。
要求:1. 文中需包含思维导图中的主要内容;
2. 句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范;
3. 可做适量拓展;
4. 词数:80词左右。(标题需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域,不计入总词数)
The Intrductin f Gansu Prvince
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,介绍甘肃省。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
The Intrductin f Gansu Prvince
Gansu Prvince lies in the nrthwest f China. It cvers an area f 425,900 square kilmeters. There are 26 millin peple living there. Lanzhu is the capital city f Gansu Prvince. The weather in Gansu is different frm place t place and the temperature is usually quite different frm day t night. If yu want t g travelling in Gansu,May t Octber is the best time. Mga Grtt which is the wrld famus art palace and Jiayuguan Pass,the western end f the Great Wall,are tw f the must-see places f interest in Gansu.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好地完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如lie in, there be, the capital city f, be different frm, end f, places f interest以及which引导的定语从句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(三)【2019 •湖南省郴州市】
在英语课上, 老师将组织以“说出你的烦恼”(Speak ut yur wrries)为主题的交流活动。假如你是李华, 请根据以下表格中提供的信息, 用英语写一篇发言稿, 说出你的烦恼和愿望。
要求:
1短文须包含表格中的所有信息, 并适当发挥;
2词数:80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Hell, everyne,
I am Li Hua. I'd like t speak ut my wrries and wishes. __________________________________________
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That's all. Thank yu.
【写作思路】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想,增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【参考范文】
Hell, everyne,
I am Li Hua. I'd like t speak ut my wrries and wishes. My teachers are t strict. They have t much hmewrk t d every day.And I feel stressed t much.I wish I can have less hmewrk. I think my parents are t strict with me.They give us little time fr utdr activities. It's hard fr me t cmmunicate with their parents.I wish I can have mre chances t play with my friends. I wish I can get n well with my parents.
That's all. Thank yu.
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
(四)【2019 •山东省滨州市】
即将毕业,请以“My favrite teacher”为题,写一篇英语短文,短文包括以下内容:
1. 老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等;
2. 以事例描述喜爱的原因;
3. 表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。
要求:
1. 要点齐全,并适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实 姓名与校名;
3. 卷面整洁,书写美观,课适当加2-3分;
4. 词数:80词左右,开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。
My favrite teacher
It’s time t graduate frm junir high schl. I’d like t write smething abut my favrite teacher. ________
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【参考范文】
My favrite teacher
It’s time t graduate frm junir high schl. I’d like t write smething abut my favrite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lvely and utging girl wh lves singing and reading. She is f medium height and has lng straight hair.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was s shy that I was afraid t take part in the English cmpetitin. She encuraged me nt t give up any chance t shw myself t thers. Thanks t her, I changed my attitude and wn the first prize.
I will never frget the wnderful time we were tgether. Best wishes t her!
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如graduate frm,f all the teachers,f medium height,s that,be afraid t d,take part in,give up,encurage sb. t d,at the weekends,thanks t sb.,the first prize等。而并列结构She is f medium height and has lng straight hair./ I changed my attitude and wn the first prize.和She is a lvely and utging girl wh lves singing and reading./ When I was in Grade Seven, I was s shy that I was afraid t take part in the English cmpetitin./ I will never frget the wnderful time we were tgether.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
(五)【2019 •广西百色市】
假设李华是你的同班同学,请根据以下提示及要求,用英语写一篇题为" My Classmate"的短文。
提示:1. 他个子高,长相英俊,成绩优秀,擅长运动;
2. 他乐于助人(举一个例子);
3. 对他的评价。
要求:1. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名;
2. 词数80左右。
My Classmate
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【参考范文】
My Classmate
Li Hua is my classmate and my gd friend.He is tall and handsme.His grades are excellent and he always des well in exams.He is als gd at sprts because he thinks health is very imprtant.【高分句型一】(外貌和特长)He is ready t help thers.He ften helps me with my English. Last year he helped a ten﹣year﹣ld by wh lst his way find his mther.(乐于助人)I think Li Hua is a kind persn.Everybdy in my class likes him very much. (对他的评价)I hpe we will be gd friends frever.【高分句型二】(愿望)
(六)【2019 •湖南省岳阳市】
假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙,墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴滴,以及考前老师的温馨提示.忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光,请你以"Preparatin fr High Schl Entrance Exam"(备战中考)为题,写一篇80﹣100词的短文.
要求:(1)请阐述图中信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
(3)字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确.
Preparatin fr High Schl Entrance Exam
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【参考范文】
Preparatin fr High Schl Entrance Exam
Time flies,ur junir high schl life is cming t an end.I can't frget the time when I was preparing fr the high schl entrance examinatin.【高分句型一】(点题)On the pht wall f ur classrm, we recrded the dribs and drabs f ur study and life befre the high schl entrance examinatin.We listen t the teacher carefully in class and take ntes carefully at the same time.We g t bed after finishing ur hmewrk every day.(学习区)We eat healthy fd and exercise every day.Getting enugh sleep is als imprtant.【高分句型二】(生活区)The teacher ften reminds us t avid making mistakes.We must be n time fr class.He als taught us t relax.(提示区)
(七)【2019 •浙江省台州市】
似如你是李华,一个英国游学团要来你们学校,学校需要一些志愿者,你想成为其中的一员。请读下面的招募启事,写一封应征邮件。
Vlunteers Wanted
Sme students frm the UK will cme t ur schl t have a study tur. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’ re lking fr sme vlunteers t help us.
Can yu intrduce yurself(English ability and persnality)?
Can yu plan an activity abut Chinese culture and explain yur purpse?
If yu are interested, please email us at Andrew@l63. cm.
注意:(1)请回复招募启事中所提及的两个问题, 可适当发挥;
(2)应征邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息;
(3)词数:80~100;
(4)邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Andrew,
I’m Li Hua. ______________________________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm a 17-year-ld girl frm Class 3, Grade 2. I wuld like t becme a vlunteer fr the American students.(点明目的)My English is gd and I can talk with freigner fluently. In additin, I'm interested in sprts, which is why I'm in gd health.【高分句型一】When my friends get in truble, I ften help them actively. I'm gd at taking up with thers. Besides I like travelling a lt and I'm quite familiar with ur city.(自我介绍)I plan t rganize an activity abut Chinese traditinal culture s that British friends can understand China better.【高分句型二】(计划的活动)
I'm sure I can becme friends with the English students. Lking frward t yur answers.(愿望)
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
In additin,I'm interested in sprts,which is why I'm in gd health.此外,我对体育感兴趣,这就是为什么我健康状况良好.
which引导非限制性定语从句.
【高分句型二】
I plan t rganize an activity abut Chinese traditinal culture, s that British friends can understand China better.我计划组织一次关于中国传统文化的活动,让英国朋友更好的了解中国.
plan t d sth计划做某事;s that 引导目的状语从句.
(八)【2019 •新疆维吾尔族自治区】
初中生活即将结束,请你想一下,谁是你最喜欢的老师?他、她长什么样子?你 为什么喜欢他、她?以 My favrite Teacher 为题,用英语写一篇短文,请根 据要点进行描述,可以结合具体事例,也可以适当增加自己想写的内容。
要点:
1. What des he/ she lk like?
2. Why d yu like him/her?
3. ……
注意:
1.词数 80~100;
2.可适当增加细节及要点以外的内容,要求行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文,本文所给要点是几个问题,故动笔前先要阅读要点,找出问题的答案。写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将问题所涉及内容表达完整;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第一人称,一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
My favrite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-ld wman. She is tall and has lng straight hair.
And she ften wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening t her. Her classes are very interesting and creative, because she has different ways f teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all knw she is always ready t help thers. When we are in truble, she can try her best t help us. We all like her, and she likes us, t.
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如:be strict with对……严格;be ready t d sth准备做某事;in truble处于困难中;try ne's best d t sth尽力做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。
(九)【2019 •山东省德州市】
假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生,你的学校正在参加全市文明校园的评选.以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息.请你根据表格内容,写一篇短文,向社会宣传自己的学校,并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事,为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。
要求:(1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
(3)80~100词,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
I'm frm N.3 Middle Schl. My schl is making its effrt t be a civilized schl. Let me intrduce it.
There are many experienced teachers in my schl.They help us make prgress in many ways.
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【写作思路】
这是一篇根据表格信息介绍自己学校的材料作文。根据题干要求可知,本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作。内容包括:1. 师资情况:①有经验的老师帮助我们进步。②班主任和蔼可亲,与人为善。2. 学校设施:①一个大图书馆。②运动场。③一些科学实验室。3. 学校环境:①不同种类的树木和花卉。②安全教育课。4. 谈谈为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事。另外,写作时还需注意语句间的衔接,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。常用的重点句型和短语有make prgress,be friendly,as fr,try ne's best t d sth,make ur schl mre beautiful。
【参考范文】
I'm frm N.3 Middle Schl. My schl is making its effrt t be a civilized schl. Let me intrduce it.
There are many experienced teachers in my schl. They help us make prgress in many ways. And ur head teacher is very friendly, t. Fr schl facilities, we have a library, yu can read bks t learn mre. Yu als can d sprts in the playgrund. Yu can find smething new in the science labs. As fr ur schl envirnment, there are different kinds f trees and flwers. S ur schl is clean and beautiful. We als have safety educatin classes, these classes can prtect urselves. Finally, ur students are plite, t. It will make ur schl full f civilizatin.
Let's try ur best t make ur schl mre beautiful and make it a civilized schl.
(十)【2019 •荆门市】
为弘扬中华传统文化,你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华,请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友Jhn。
要点:
1. 时间:5月16日下午2:30;
2. 地点:学校操场;
3. 内容:校长在开幕式上致辞;戏曲知识竞赛;师生戏曲表演等;
4. 感受:对传统文化有了进一步的了解……
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名;
2. 语言通顺,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 要点齐全,内容可适当发挥;
4. 词数:80—100 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:戏曲 pera (n.) 开幕式 pening ceremny ( n.)
表演 perfrmance ( n.) 致辞 make a speech
Dear Jhn,
Hw is everything ging? I’m writing t share with yu an activity called Opera Entering Campus in ur schl.
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Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jhn,
Hw is everything ging? I’m writing t share with yu an activity called Opera Entering Campus in ur schl.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm n May 16 n the playgrund. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the pening ceremny, inspiring us students t learn mre abut Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting cmpetitin abut pera knwledge. In the end, we enjyed wnderful pera perfrmances put n by sme teachers and students wh are talented in pera.
Thrugh this activity, we have a better understanding f pera and get clser t Chinese traditinal culture. I hpe yu can have a chance t cme t China and experience Chinese culture n yur wn.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如be hld,n the playgrund,in the beginning,make a speech,at the pening ceremny,after that,in the end,put n,have a chance等。而we enjyed wnderful pera perfrmances put n by sme teachers and students wh are talented in pera./ Thrugh this activity, we have a better understanding f pera and get clser t Chinese traditinal culture. /I hpe yu can have a chance t cme t China and experience Chinese culture n yur wn.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
(十一)【2019 •四川省眉山市】
假如你是李华,打算邀请你们的外教Jack来你家共度端午佳节,并观看一年一度的龙舟赛。请根据以下要点,用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
要点:1. 端午节的时间(农历五月五日)、来由(纪念屈原);
2. 活动安排:学包粽子、观看龙舟赛(时间:下午两点;地点:东坡湖;赛况)。
参考词汇:农历 lunar calendar
注意:1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点,并作适当发挥;
2. 词数:80词左右(开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Dear Jack,
The Dragn Bat Festival is cming in a few days. _______________________________________________
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Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文属于应用文体,介绍端午节并邀请你的外教杰克来你家共度端午佳节。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
The Dragn Bat Festival is cming in a few days. It’s a great hnr fr me t invite yu t cme t my hme t celebrate the Dragn Bat Festival.
Dragn Bat Festival is ne f the mst imprtant Chinese traditinal festivals in China. It’s n May fifth in Chinese lunar calendar. Dragn Bat Festival has a lng histry, which is in hnr f the great ancient Chinese pet Qu Yuan.
We will make zngzi and watch the dragn bat race at 2:00 p.m. at the Dngp lake which is nt very far frm my hme.
If yu are interested in it, please dn’t hesitate t cntact me. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如it is a great hnr fr me t d sth, ne f the+形容词最高级+名词复数, a lng histry, far away frm, hesitate t d以及which引导的定语从句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(十二)【2019 •广西柳州市】
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件,将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括:
注意:
1. 词数70左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:
高大健壮tall and strng 运动d sprts 听音乐listen t music
最喜欢的科目favrite subject风趣幽默funny and humrus
乐于做某事be ready t d sth. 相处get n with
Dear Jack,
Hw is everything ging? Nw I am writing t intrduce my classmate Chen Dng t yu.
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I'm sure yu'd like t have such a persn as yur friend. With my best wishes
Yurs,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
Hw is everything ging?Nw I am writing t intrduce my classmate Chen Dng t yu. He is a 16-year-ld by. He has rund face, black hair and bright eyes. He is tall and strng. He likes smiling very much.(高分句型一)(要点一,介绍男同学的外貌及特征)He likes ding sprts, reading and listening t music. His favrite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He is humrus and funny. He is ready t help thers and easy t get n with thers. 【要点二,介绍同学的性格】 He likes ding sprts, reading and listening t music. His favrite subject is English, because he thinks it is very interesting. He als spends much time taking part in after-schl activities.(高分句型二) He likes winter very much, because he thinks winter is a seasn t d many fun things,such as skating, making snwman and s n.【要点三,介绍同学的喜好】 His dream is becming an English teacher, because he wants his students t get gd grades. 【要点四,介绍同学的理想】 I'm sure yu'd like t have such a persn as yur friend.With my best wishes!(要点五,美好的祝愿)
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
He likes smiling very much.此句是一般现在时的陈述句.运用短语like ding sth "喜欢做某事",短语very much "非常,很".此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑。"
注意like后加ding
【高分句型二】
He als spends much time taking part in after-schl activities.此句是一般现在时的陈述句。运用短语spend sme time (in)ding sth "花时间做某事"。短语take part in "参加",此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动。"
(十三)【2019 •广州市】
广州某电台英文频道将设Welcme t Guang zhu栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Anyne cming t Guangzhu is sure t have a gd time _________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Guangzhu is waiting fr yu.
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容:广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处,并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作,为时内容丰富、充实,应对每个话题进行拓展,详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意:首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容,不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构,要分清主次,合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式,提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Anyne cming t Guangzhu is sure t have a gd time. Lcated in the suth f China,Guangzhu, with a histry f mre than tw thusand years, plays a significant rle in bth ecnmy and culture f China.With mderate as well as cmfrtable climate, Guangzhu is famus as a flwer city fr its distinctive fd.
I strngly recmmend Cantn Twer-a badly well-knwn scenic spt. First f all, Cantn Twer is s grand and beautiful especially in the evening that yu can't help being fascinated by it. In additin, when yu arrive at the tp f Cantn Twer, yu have such a valuable chance t lk dwn at the full view f Guangzhu. Last but nt least, yu can take a large number f nice phts in a setting f Cantn Twer.
As far as I am cncerned, there is n dubt that Guangzhu is gd chice fr yu t visit. I am sure that yu will enjy yurself while making a visit in Guangzhu.
Guangzhu is waiting fr yu.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含来了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍:第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色,简单的几句话包含了大量的信息;第二段是主体段,主要给读者推荐了一个好去处,并阐述了自己的理由;第三段和第四段是一个结尾,对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰,叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯,简单句与复合句结合,使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如Lcated in the suth f China,Guangzhu,with a histry f mre than tw thusand years,plays a significant rle in bth ecnmy and culture f China、I strngly recmmend Cantn Twer-a badly well-knwn scenic spt.、Last but nt least. yu can take a large number f nice phts in a setting f Cantn Twer.、As far as I am cncerned, there is n dubt that Guangzhu is gd chice fr yu t visit. I am sure that yu will enjy yurself while making a visit in Guangzhu.等。
(十四)【2019 •广西北部湾经济区】
暑假将至,你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan fr Summer Hliday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. 学习计划
2. 运动计划
3. 娱乐计划
4. 你的愿望
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Plan fr Summer Hliday
Summer hliday is cming. _________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“My Plan fr Summer Hliday”为题,根据所给出的材料提示写一篇短文。本文时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系;要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,以便使文章更有档次。
【参考范文】
My Plan fr Summer Hliday
Summer hliday is cming. I will make a plan fr it. First, I will finish my hmewrk. Then I'll read mre gd bks. And I plan t read fur great bks t imprve myself. Secnd, I will keeping exercising and learn t play table tennis. It's gd fr my health. Third, I'll g t Nanning fr tw weeks. Als, I plan t climb Nanshan tea sea. I hpe I can be a vlunteer. I want t visit the ld peple, give them gifts and sing fr them.
I'm lking frward t having a gd summer in the vacatin.
(十五)【2019 •湖北省黄石市】
假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tm写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给Tm回封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括:1. 读几本好书;
2. 参加社会实践活动;
3. 帮父母做家务;
4. 和朋友一起锻炼;
5. 邀请Tm。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息;
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词忙:有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature wrks
社会实践活动scial practice activities
Dear Tm,
I'm very happy t hear frm yu. _____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Tm,
I'm very happy t hear frm yu. Hw are yu ging these days? Summer vacatin is cming sn. Here I’d like t share my hliday plan with yu. First f all, I am ging t read sme gd bks t pen up my mind. What’s mre, I’ll take part in sme vlunteer activities t raise awareness f serving the sciety and imprve my scial cmmunicatin ability. Of curse, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and s n. Last but nt least, I am abut t invite yu t visit my hmetwn, Huangshi and I really want t meet yu.
Hw abut yurs? I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如wuld like t d, share sth with, be ging t, pen up ne’s mind, take part in, awareness f serving the sciety, f curse, and s n, be abut t d, invite sb t d, lk frward t ding以及first f all, what’s mre和last but nt least,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(十六)【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】
(注意:文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名,否则不给分)
假如你叫Tm,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。
提示:1. 聚会内容:唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏;
2. 内容要涵盖提示中的信息,字数30-50词。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think we will have a gd time
Tm
【写作思路】
假如你叫Tm,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。虽然主要内容已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’ll have a birthday party at 7:00 p. m. this Friday. I’d like t invite yu t my hme. Let me tell yu the way t my hme. Walk alng Green Street and take the secnd crssing n the left/turn left at the secnd crssing. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games. I think we will have a gd time.
Tm
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。文中需要发挥的内容写的不错,一些比较好的句型,如I’d like t invite yu t my hme. Let me tell yu the way t my hme. Walk alng green Street and take the secnd crssing n the left/turn left at the secnd crssing等。
(十七)【2019 •四川省广元市】
假如你叫李军,你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象,在政府两年的帮扶下,你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动,请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,参加本次活动。
内容要点:
要求:1. 词数:70词左右。短文开头语已给出,但不计入总词数。
2. 短文中必须包括所有要点,但不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks t the gvernment, my family has changed a lt in the last tw years. __________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
My name is Li Jun. Thanks t the gvernment, my family has changed a lt in the last tw years.(点题)
My family used t be pr and we lived in a small and ld huse.【高分句型一】I dn't have any new clthes. My grades drpped because my mther was sick and culdn't affrd t see a dctr. Smetimes, I even want t leave schl t supprt my family.(过去)Nw, with the help f the gvernment, great changes tk place in ur lives. 【高分句型二】 We live in a new huse. My mther is healthy. I can als set my mind n my study and make great prgress in my study. Our life is imprving day by day.(现在)
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
My family used t be pr and we lived in a small and ld huse.
我家以前很穷,我们住在一个小和旧房子。used t d sth过去常常做某事。
【高分句型二】
Nw, with the help f the gvernment, great changes tk place in ur lives.
现在,在政府的帮助下,巨大的变化发生在我们的生活。with the help f 在……的帮助下。
2019年中考真题英语分项汇编
专题21 书面表达
考点2说明介绍类
(一)【2019 •广西北部湾经济区】
暑假将至,你校English Club 在社刊上发起了征文活动,题目为“My Plan fr Summer Hliday”。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. 学习计划
2. 运动计划
3. 娱乐计划
4. 你的愿望
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名,否则不予评分;
4. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Plan fr Summer Hliday
Summer hliday is cming. _________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇给材料作文。要求以“My Plan fr Summer Hliday”为题,根据所给出的材料提示写一篇短文。本文时态主要为一般将来时和一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称辅以第三人称。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系;要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型,特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化,以便使文章更有档次。
【参考范文】
My Plan fr Summer Hliday
Summer hliday is cming. I will make a plan fr it. First, I will finish my hmewrk. Then I'll read mre gd bks. And I plan t read fur great bks t imprve myself. Secnd, I will keeping exercising and learn t play table tennis. It's gd fr my health. Third, I'll g t Nanning fr tw weeks. Als, I plan t climb Nanshan tea sea. I hpe I can be a vlunteer. I want t visit the ld peple, give them gifts and sing fr them.
I'm lking frward t having a gd summer in the vacatin.
(二)【2019 •大庆市】
文娱、体育、户外等丰富多彩的课外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-class Activities Make My Life Clrful”为题,为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。
内容包括:
1. 简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动;
2. 该课外活动给你带来的收获及感受(交朋友;放松自我)。
写作要求:
1. 词数80词左右;开头已写好,不计入总词数;
2. 文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
After-class Activities Make My Life Clrful
Nwadays after-class activities are becming mre and mre imprtant ______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文,让我们写一篇关于After-class Activities Make My Life Clrful的英文稿件,并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来。写作需要用第一人称,注意各种时态的交替运用。内容要点包括:简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动,时态用一般过去时;你参加过的课外活动给你带来的收获和感受,时态以一般现在时为主和一般将来时为主;最后总结自己的心得体会。
【参考范文】
After-class Activities Make My Life Clrful
Nwadays, after-schl activities are becming mre and mre imprtant. There are many different kinds f activities, fr example, arts and sprts. I jined a vlleyball club last year. I am used t playing vlleyball after schl.
In the vlleyball club, I've made lts f friends. We ften play vlleyball after schl. Whether it is ht r cld, we never stp playing it. I feel happy while playing vlleyball. And it is als a gd way t relax myself. I think I will cntinue t play vlleyball after schl in the future.
All in all, after-schl activities make my life mre clrful and meaningful.
【名师点评】
高分句型一:I am used t playing vlleyball after schl. 我习惯放学后打排球。be used t ding sth.习惯于做某事。
高分句型二:And it is als a gd way t relax myself. 这也是放松自己的好方法。动词不定式t relax myself用作后置定语。
高分句型三:All in all, after-schl activities make my life mre clrful and meaningful. 总之,课外活动使我的生活更加丰富多彩,更有意义。
mre clrful and meaningful用作my life的宾语补足语。
(三)【2019 •广元】
假如你叫李军,你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象。在政府两年时间的帮扶下,你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动,请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,参加本次活动。
内容要点:
要求:1. 词数:70词左右。短文开头语已给出,但不计入总词数。
2. 短文中必须包括所有要点,但不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks t the gvernment, my family has changed a lt in the last tw years. __________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题要求把过去的家乡和现在进行比较,得出现在变得更好的结论。描述过去的状况,要用一般过去时;描述现在的变化,要用现在完成时态。介绍自己家乡的变化,用第一人称。
【参考范文】
My name is Li Jun. Thanks t the gvernment, my family has changed a lt in the last tw years. My family used t be very pr and we lived in an ld and brken huse. What’s mre, my mther wasn’t in gd health and she ften fell ill. I was wrried abut her all the time, s my grades drpped. Hwever, with the help f the gvernment, we have mved int a new huse. T ur jy, my mther has becme better. As fr me, I have made great prgress at schl because f my hard wrk. All in all, ur life has gradually imprved.
【名师点评】
短文第一句“My family used t be very pr and we lived in an ld and brken huse.”运用固定搭配“used t d”描述过去的家乡条件不好。下一句用短语“what’s mre”(而且)表示语气递进;短语“fall ill”(生病),介绍过去健康状况不好。当比较现在时,用副词“hwever”(然而)。短语“t ur jy”(令我高兴的是)和“as fr me”(对我来说),作者结合亲身感受,介绍了身边的变化。最后用“all in all”(总而言之)进行总结,得出结论,即家乡的变化很大。
(四)【2019 •广州市】
广州某电台英文频道将开设 Welcme t Guang zhu栏目,目前面向全市中学生征集“微州”英文介绍。请你写一篇英语短文,向栏目投稿。短文需包括下图所有提示内容。
注意:1. 词数:80词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数);
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Anyne cming t Guangzhu is sure t have a gd time. ________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Guangzhu is waiting fr yu.
【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们用英语介绍广州这座城市。题目中用图示展示了短文中应包括的内容:广州市的位置、历史、特色、气候特点以及广州的一个好去处,并阐述理由。学生们应根据这些提示进行写作,为时内容丰富、充实,应对每个话题进行拓展,详细地对广州进行介绍。短文应使用一般现在时,第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述。写作时应注意:首先短文中应包括题目中要求的所有内容,不要遗漏要点。各个内容应叙述清楚、内容具体。同时注意文章结构,要分清主次,合理安排各个写作内容。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式,提升作文档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Anyne cming t Guangzhu is sure t have a gd time. Lcated in the suth f China,Guangzhu, with a histry f mre than tw thusand years, plays a significant rle in bth ecnmy and culture f China. With mderate as well as cmfrtable climate, Guangzhu is famus as a flwer city fr its distinctive fd.
I strngly recmmend Cantn Twer-a badly well-knwn scenic spt. First f all, Cantn Twer is s grand and beautiful especially in the evening that yu can't help being fascinated by it. In additin, when yu arrive at the tp f Cantn Twer, yu have such a valuable chance t lk dwn at the full view f Guangzhu. Last but nt least, yu can take a large number f nice phts in a setting f Cantn Twer.
As far as I am cncerned, there is n dubt that Guangzhu is gd chice fr yu t visit. I am sure that yu will enjy yurself while making a visit in Guangzhu.
Guangzhu is waiting fr yu.
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了广州这座城市。短文有以下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含来了题目中要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。作者从五个方面对广州进行了介绍:第一段中介绍了广州的位置、历史、气候和特色,简单的几句话包含了大量的信息;第二段是主体段,主要给读者推荐了一个好去处,并阐述了自己的理由;第三段和第四段是一个结尾,对自己的介绍进行总结。文章层次清晰,叙述条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯,简单句与复合句结合,使文章富有节奏的变化。文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如Lcated in the suth f China,Guangzhu,with a histry f mre than tw thusand years,plays a significant rle in bth ecnmy and culture f China、I strngly recmmend Cantn Twer-a badly well-knwn scenic spt.、Last but nt least. yu can take a large number f nice phts in a setting f Cantn Twer.、As far as I am cncerned, there is n dubt that Guangzhu is gd chice fr yu t visit. I am sure that yu will enjy yurself while making a visit in Guangzhu.等等。
(五)【2019 •湖北省黄石市】
假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tm写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给
Tm回封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩。
内容包括:1. 读几本好书;
2. 参加社会实践活动;
3. 帮父母做家务;
4. 和朋友一起锻炼;
5. 邀请Tm。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关信息;
4. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词忙:有意义的 meaningful 经典文学作品classic literature wrks
社会实践活动scial practice activities
Dear Tm,
I'm very happy t hear frm yu. _____________________________________________________________
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【写作思路】
本文属于材料作文,写信告诉汤姆你的暑假计划并邀请汤姆来黄石玩。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Tm,
I'm very happy t hear frm yu. Hw are yu ging these days? Summer vacatin is cming sn. Here I’d like t share my hliday plan with yu. First f all, I am ging t read sme gd bks t pen up my mind. What’s mre, I’ll take part in sme vlunteer activities t raise awareness f serving the sciety and imprve my scial cmmunicatin ability. Of curse, exercise is must. I will run, play basketball, ride a bike and s n. Last but nt least, I am abut t invite yu t visit my hmetwn, Huangshi and I really want t meet yu.
Hw abut yurs? I am lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如wuld like t d, share sth with, be ging t, pen up ne’s mind, take part in, awareness f serving the sciety, f curse, and s n, be abut t d, invite sb t d, lk frward t ding以及first f all, what’s mre和last but nt least,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(六)【2019 •吉林】
假如你是李华,想参加China Daily 举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的2019年夏令营活动。请给主办人Mr. Smith写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。内容包括:1.个人信息与兴趣爱好2.梦想职业与个人计划
写作要求;1.词数90词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure t intrduce myself t yu. ____________________________________________________
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I d hpe t jin in the activity and lk frward t yur reply.
Best wishes!
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本文属于申请信,给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件,包含个人信息与兴趣爱好和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure t intrduce myself t yu.
My name is Li Hua.I like reading and writing.I spend lts f time reading in the library with my classmates after schl.And I have a habit f keeping a dairy.I want t be a writer when I grw up.S After knwing yur summer camp,I feel very excited because it's abut dream jb experience.If I have this kind f pprtunity t experience my dream jb,I will cherish this chance.After wrk,I will spend mre time making a summary.
I d hpe t jin in the activity and lk frward t yur reply.
Yurs Sincerely,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如like ding, spend+时间+ding sth, keep a diary, grw up以及If I have this kind f pprtunity t experience my dream jb,I will cherish this chance中if引导的条件句用一般现在时,主句用一般将来时,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
(七)【2019 •山东省聊城市】
假如你叫陈伟,2019年6月22日和23日是你中考后的第一个周末,请你制定一个周末活动计划,并用英语给你的英国笔友Alan写一封电子邮件,说明你的活动安排。
主要活动内容包括:
1. 6月22日上午在家读书;下午与家人和朋友外出活动;
2. 6月23日到朋友家附近的公园捡垃圾;
3. 你对本次活动的期待。
注意:
1. 邮件字数:80词左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,但邮件中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给击,不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
I'm ging t enjy myself during the cming weekend. ___________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Chen Wei
【写作思路】
写作要求以电子邮件的形式介绍自己中考后的第一个周末活动计划。写作时要仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确要点:分别从时间和活动安排来介绍,根据表达的内容确定句子的时态,就本文而言应该用一般将来时态,会用到be ging t结构,人称为第一人称。在时间的表达上注意介词的正确使用,在某一天的早晨、下午、晚上用介词n。写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使用恰当的连词,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Alan,
I'm ging t enjy myself during the cming weekend. On the mrning f 22nd June, I'm ging t get up a little late and then read an interesting strybk. In the afternn I'm ging ut with my family and friends. We're ging t take a walk in the cuntry near ur hme r g swimming in the lake. And n 23rd June we're ging t cllect liter in the park near my friend's huse. I think it's ging t be a great weekend-busy but gd fun!
Yurs,
Chen Wei
(八)【2019 •四川省内江市】
假设你叫李华,你校英语报正在以“我最喜欢的一天”为题,向中学生开展征文活动。请你根据如下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。
1. 你最喜欢的是星期五;
2. 原因:
(1)这天有你最喜欢上的音乐课(从小就喜欢音乐,音乐老师和音乐课很有趣);
(2) ……
要求:
(1)所写内容必须包括以上要点和自行补充要点;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
(3)内容连贯并进行合理拓展;
(4)100词左右;题目已经写好,不计入总词数。
My Favrite Day
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【写作思路】
本文是一篇给材料作文。要求以“我最喜欢的一天”为题,根据所给出的内容提示写一篇英语短文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时,人称主要用第一人称。写作中注意理顺要点,防止漏写,注意表达的条理性、连贯性;注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误;要使用自己有把握的句式、单词,词汇,句式要丰富多样,避免句式单一。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
【参考范文】
My Favrite Day
Everyne has their favrite day. My name is Li Hua.Nw let me intrduce my favrite day.My favrite day is Friday.Because it has my favrite music class.I have lved music since childhd.I als like my music teacher. Her music class is very interesting.There's a P.E. class n Fridays.I like playing ftball in PE class.I think it's gd fr my health.We can als develp friendship thrugh sprts.This is als a time which I can spend tgether with my parents.S I think this is the best day f the week and I lve it best.
【点睛】
首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅。
(九)【2019 •黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市】
假如你叫Tm,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。
提示:1. 聚会内容:唱歌、吃生日蛋糕、玩游戏;
2. 内容要涵盖提示中的信息,字数30-50词。
Dear Jack,
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I think we will have a gd time
Tm
【写作思路】
假如你叫Tm,和Jack是同学。请用英语写一则邀请函,邀请他于本周五晚上7点来你家参加你的生日聚会,并告诉他你家的地址(参看下图)。虽然主要内容已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’ll have a birthday party at 7:00 p. m. this Friday. I’d like t invite yu t my hme. Let me tell yu the way t my hme. Walk alng Green Street and take the secnd crssing n the left/turn left at the secnd crssing. At the party, we can sing, eat a birthday cake and play games.
I think we will have a gd time.
Tm
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。文中需要发挥的内容写的不错,一些比较好的句型,如I’d like t invite yu t my hme. Let me tell yu the way t my hme. Walk alng green Street and take the secnd crssing n the left/turn left at the secnd crssing等。
(十)【2019 •江苏省无锡市】
假设你叫李文,是无锡阳光中学(Wuxi Sunshine Middle Schl)的一名学生。今天暑期,你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言,此次会议的主题是A Green Wrld。你草拟了发言流程图,请根据下图写一篇英文发言稿。
注意事项:
1. 发言稿须根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 流程图中包括部分非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3. 词数在 90 个左右,发言稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总数。
4. 发言稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
5. 发言稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,根据李文的发言流程图写一篇英文发言稿。主题是A Green Wrld。因为今天暑期,你将代表你校赴瑞士参加“模拟联合国”会议并发言,主要从介绍自己、中国为“绿色世界”已经做的和“我”是怎样做得。这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时和现在完成时,人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen!
My name is Li Wen. I’m a student f Wuxi Sunshine Middle Schl. This year, I am fifteen years ld. China has made its wn effrts fr the green wrld. Many factries have met the discharge standards. We have made use f many new energy surces. Fr example: wind, slar and hydrelectric pwer. What shuld we d as middle schl students? First f all, we shuld turn ff the lights in time. Secndly, when we take a shwer, we shuld save water. Third, when we g shpping, we shuld use clth bags instead f plastic bags. If s, we have made ur due effrts fr envirnmental prtectin.
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
China has made its wn effrts fr the green wrld. 中国为绿色世界做出了自己的努力。
Many factries have met the discharge standards. 许多工厂的排污都达到了排放标准。
We have made use f many new energy surces. 我们利用了许多新能源。
这三句话,简短而有力量,体现了作者的语言功底深厚。
【高分句型二】
Third, when we g shpping, we shuld use clth bags instead f plastic bags. 第三,我们去购物时,应该用布袋代替塑料袋。句子when we g shpping,是由when 引导的时间状语从句。
(十一)【2019 •岳阳市】
假如下面是你们班教室里的照片墙,墙上记录了中考前学习和生活的点点滴流,以及考前老师的温馨提示。忘不了备战中考时充实而快乐的时光,请你以“Preparatin fr High Schl Entrance Exam”(备战中考)为题,写一篇80-100词的短文。
1. 请阐述图中信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确。
Preparatin fr High Schl Entrance Exam
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【写作思路】
这篇作文要求我们以Preparatin fr High Schl Entrance Exam为题,介绍备战中考的时光。题目中用照片墙的形式呈现了备战的具体内容,并给出了一些关键词,学生们应依据这些图片和关键词,展开合理的想象,充实细节内容,并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知,这篇短文的主要内容应包括三个方面:分学习、生活和提示三个方面解析介绍,注意分清层次和结构,合理安排各个方面的信息,注意上下文的衔接、过渡应自然。短文应以第一人称为主来叙述,时态应为一般过去时,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不要根据汉语思维逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主,清晰、准确地表达自己的意思。而为了提升作文档次,应在文中穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【参考范文】
Preparatin fr High Schl Entrance Exam
High Schl Entrance Exam is arriving. I still remember the days when ur teachers and students wrked tgether t prepare fr it. In rder t get a gd grade, we all listened t the teachers carefully in class and tk ntes at the same time. After class, we finished ur hmewrk n time. If we had sme difficult prblems, ur teachers wuld explain t us in details. All the teachers encuraged us nt t give up and keep n studying. Besides, t study well, health cmes first. Our teachers tld us t eat healthy fd, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and s n. We als did exercise every day and had enugh sleep. The teachers tld us nt t feel stressful and learn t relax. We must be careful in the exam and avid making mistakes. What’s mre, we must be n time. We all felt tired and nervus, but what a full and happy time!
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较不错的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,回忆了自己和老师们一起备战中考的一段充实、快乐的时光。题目以照片墙的形式展示了备战的过程和内容,非常新颖独特,分析照片墙可知,文章应从三个方面进行介绍:学习、生活以及老师对学生的提示。这篇短文也正是按照这个思路进行展开叙述的。短文层次很清晰,叙述也很清楚。短文主要使用了一般过去时态,符合表达的需要,语法规范,注意了动词过去式的变化,尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。语句通顺,句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。句子以简单句为基础,也使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句句型,调整了文章的节奏。短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如I still remember the days when ur teachers and students wrked tgether t prepare fr it.、If we had sme difficult prblems, ur teachers wuld explain t us in details.、Besides, t study well, health cmes first. Our teachers tld us t eat healthy fd, such as eggs, meat, vegetables and s n.、We must be careful in the exam and avid making mistakes.等等。
(十二)【2019 •贵州省遵义市】
假如你是遵义育才中学的大明,你们学校与上海阳光中学正在实施"山与海对话"( Dialgue Between Muntain And Sea)项目.今年暑假,你的"手拉手"活动伙伴小海将来遵义进行首次交流活动.请根据下列提示给他写一封80词左右的书信.内容包括:
注意:1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数.
提示词:遵义海龙囤Zunyi Hailngtun Castle 遵义会址 Zunyi Cnference Site
Dear Xiahai,
I'm glad t hear that yu are cming t Zunyi because f the prject Dialgue Between Muntain And Sea. Nw let me tell yu smething abut me and my city.__________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Welcme t my city! I'm lking frward t meeting yu.
Yurs sincerely,
Daming
【写作思路】
本题是一篇材料作文,也是书信作文。注意书信格式。本文人称主要是第一称,时态主要是一般现在时和一般将来时。认为阅读材料,认真审题,确定主题,提示要点就是本文的提纲要点,根据要点适当发挥,列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容,条理清楚。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有连贯性。写完以后,注意再读一遍,看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误(时态、主谓一致等)。
【参考范文】
Dear Xiahai,
I'm glad t hear that yu are cming t Zunyi because f the prject Dialgue Between Muntain And Sea. Nw let me tell yu smething abut me and my city.I am furteen years ld. I am utging and like making friends. I like sprts, like playing balls and running. I als like cllecting stamps. Our schl life is very clrful. We can nt nly study very hard but als d all kinds f activities after class. After schl, we ften d sme sprts such as playing basketball, vlleyball, Pingpng and s n. I jin basketball club. I play basketball every Thursday afternn after schl.The natural envirnment in Zunyi is beautiful and there're many famus scenic spts and histrical sites in Zunyi, like Zunyi Hailngtun Castle and Zunyi Cnference Site. If yu want t knw mre abut Zunyi's histry and culture, yu can g nline fr it.
Welcme t my city! I'm lking frward t meeting yu.
Yurs sincerely,
Daming
【名师点评】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。语言要规范,时态运用要正确,叙述清楚条里,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。注意书写的规范:大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。注意检查:单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
写作六步法:
1.审题:文体,时态,人称。
2.抓住要点:要点是否齐全,适当补充。
3.扩充句子:通过增加状语,定语,连词,使句子意思饱满充实。
4.连句成文,合理使用连词。
5.改正错误:拼写是否错误,语法时态是否正确,连词是否恰当等。
6.誊写作文:注意书写工整美观整洁。
(十三)【2019 •广西柳州市】
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack想结交更多的中国朋友。请用英文写封邮件,将你的男同学陈东介绍给他。内容包括:
注意:
1. 词数70左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:
高大健壮tall and strng 运动d sprts 听音乐listen t music
最喜欢的科目favurite subject风趣幽默funny and humrus
乐于做某事be ready t d sth. 相处get n with
Dear Jack,
Hw is everything ging? Nw I am writing t intrduce my classmate Chen Dng t yu.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm sure yu'd like t have such a persn as yur friend. With my best wishes
Yurs,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
Hw is everything ging? Nw I am writing t intrduce my classmate Chen Dng t yu.
Nw I am writing t intrduce my classmate Chen Dng t yu.He is a 16-year-ld by.He has rund face ,black hair and bright eyes.He is tall and strng.He likes smiling very much.(高分句型一)(要点一,介绍男同学的外貌及特征.)He likes dingh sprts.reading and listening t music.His favurite subject is English .because he thinks it is very interesting.He is humrus and funny.He is ready t help thers and easy t get n with thers. 【要点二,介绍同学的性格.】He likes ding sprts.reading and listening t music.His favurite subject is English.because he thinks it is very interesting.He als spends much time taking part in after-schl activities.(高分句型二) He likes winter very much, because he thinks winter is a seasn t d many fun things,such as skating ,making snwman and s n.【要点三,介绍同学的喜好.】 His dream is becming an English teacher,because he wants his students t get gd grades.【要点四,介绍同学的理想.】 I'm sure yu'd like t have such a persn as yur friend.With my best wishes!(要点五,美好的祝愿.)
Yurs,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
高分句型一
He likes smiling very much.此句是一般现在时的陈述句.运用短语like ding sth "喜欢做某事",短语very much "非常,很".此句可翻译为"他很喜欢笑."
注意like后加ding
高分句型二
He als spends much time taking part in after-schl activities.此句是一般现在时的陈述句.运用短语spend
sme time (in)ding sth "花时间做某事".短语take part in "参加".此句可翻译为"他还花大量时间参加课外活动."
(十四)【2019 •广西玉林市】
每周星期一的升旗仪式( Flag﹣raising ceremny)是你们学校的常规活动,你的英国笔友Bb对你校的升旗仪式很感兴趣.假定你是张华,请你给Bb写一封电子邮件,介绍下你校升旗仪式的情况.
内容要点:
1.升旗的时间和地点;
2.参加升旗的人员;
3.升旗活动的意义;
4.你的感想;
参考词汇:(仅供参考)
要求:
1.包括所有内容要点,不要逐句翻译,可以适当发挥;
2.80词左右,语法正确.(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名称。
Dear Bb,
Hearing that yu are interested in Flag﹣raising ceremny f ur schl ,I am glad t tell yu smething abut it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hpe yu can experience the Flag﹣raising ceremny f ur schl.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Bb,
Hearing that yu are interested in Flag﹣raising ceremny f ur schl ,I am glad t tell yu smething abut it.Every Mnday mrning at eight 'clck, we hld a flag﹣raising ceremny n the schl playgrund. (升旗的时间和地点)All teachers and students must attend the ceremny. (参加升旗的人员)When the natinal flag is rising, we must sing the natinal anthem and salute it. 【高分句型一】
Raising the natinal flag is an imprtant means f patritism educatin and cllectivism educatin.(升旗活动的意义)The natinal flag is the symbl f a cuntry. At this mment, a sense f missin and respnsibility appears in my mind.I'm prud f my mtherland. I must wrk hard t make ur cuntry mre and mre beautiful.【高分句型二】(感想) Hpe yu can experience the Flag﹣raising ceremny f ur schl.
Yurs,
Zhang Hua
(十五)【2019 •内蒙古呼和浩特市】
临近毕业,学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动,假设你是Rainbw小组的组长zhangHng,请你为你的组员Li Ming 进行综合素质的评价,写一份素质报告。
内容包括:1. 他的爱好;
2. 他的优点(两条);
3. 他的缺点或存在的问题;
4. 你对他的建议(两条)。
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 要点必须包括所有相关信息,并适当发挥,但不得出现真实班级、姓名等;
3. 词数:不少于80 词 (所给内容不计入总词数)。
Li Ming is a member f my team called Rainbw. _______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Li Ming is a member f my team called Rainbw. Generally speaking, he is a warm- hearted and utging by. He can als get n well with teachers and classmates. In his spare time, he likes reading bks n histry. S he knws a lt f knwledge abut histry.(他的爱好和优点)
But as a famus saying ges, "Every cin has tw sides ",smetimes he desn't wrk hard enugh n his lessns.(他的缺点或存在的问题)
I advise him t spend mre time n the subjects frm nw n.What's mre, he had better answer questins in class actively s that he can make great prgress.【高分句型一】(给他的建议)
I'm sure if he can try hard t imprve himself wh will be an excellent student sn.【高分句型二】(总结全文)
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
What's mre, he had better answer questins in class actively s that he can make great prgress.更重要的是,他最好在课堂上积极回答问题,这样他才能取得很大的进步.
had better d sth最好做某事;s that引导目的状语从句.
【高分句型二】
I'm sure if he can try hard t imprve himself wh will be an excellent student sn.我相信如果他能努力提高自己,他很快就会成为一名优秀的学生.
if引导条件状语从句.
(十六)【2019 •宁夏回族自治区】
第四届“丝绸之路”宁夏国际马拉松赛将于2020年5月举行。假定你叫李华,你想成为本届马拉松赛的一名志愿者。请用英语给组委会写一封申请信,内容包括:
1.个人优势:擅长英语,性格开朗,做事认真,爱好运动。(至少再补充两点)
2.个人承诺:尽力提供优质服务。
注意:
1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:vlunteer志愿者
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. I'm very glad that the 4h"Silk Rad” Internatinal Marathn will be held in Ningxia in May,2020. _________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs truly.
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h "Silk Rad" Internatinal Marathn will be held in Ningxia in May,2020.I'd like t be a vlunteer.
I'm a girl f 15,a middle schl student.First f all,I d well in English.【高分句型一】I'm utging.I take everything seriusly.Besides,I am interested in sprts and I have been a vlunteer befre.【高分句型二】What's mre,I'm always ready t help thers and gd at wrking with peple.(个人优势)I prmise I'll try t ffer my best service during the race.I will be very happy if I can be chsen as a vlunteer.(个人承诺)
I'm lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs truly,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
First f all,I d well in English.首先,我的英语很好.
First f all首先
d well in在……某方面干得好
【高分句型二】
Besides,I am interested in sprts and I have been a vlunteer befre.此外,我对体育感兴趣,我曾经是一名志愿者.
be interested in 对…有兴趣
(十七)【2019 •四川省广元市】
假如你叫李军,你家于2017年被列为“精准扶贫”的帮扶对象,在政府两年的帮扶下,你家变化巨大。时值学校校报举办“家的变化”主题征文活动,请你根据以下内容要点,用英语写一篇70词左右的短文,参加本次活动。
内容要点:
要求: 1. 词数:70词左右。短文开头语已给出,但不计入总词数。
2. 短文中必须包括所有要点,但不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥。
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
My name is Li Jun. Thanks t the gvernment, my family has changed a lt in the last tw years. __________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
My name is Li Jun. Thanks t the gvernment, my family has changed a lt in the last tw years. (点题)
My family used t be pr and we lived in a small and ld huse.【高分句型一】I dn't have any new clthes.My grades drpped because my mther was sick and culdn't affrd t see a dctr.Smetimes, I even want t leave schl t supprt my family.(过去)Nw, with the help f the gvernment, great changes tk place in ur lives.【高分句型二】 We live in a new huse.My mther is healthy.I can als set my mind n my study and make great prgress in my study.Our life is imprving day by day.(现在)
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
My family used t be pr and we lived in a small and ld huse.
我家以前很穷,我们住在一个小和旧房子.used t d sth过去常常做某事.
【高分句型二】
Nw, with the help f the gvernment, great changes tk place in ur lives.
现在,在政府的帮助下,巨大的变化发生在我们的生活.with the help f 在…的帮助下.
Why yu made it
help enjy reading yur favurite bk(name, type f bk, what yu like mst)
Hw yu made it
Materials & Tls
● card
● scissrs, glue…
Steps
● cut the card int…
● draw a picture f…
● write(yur favurite sentence frm the bk r a famus saying r…)
● …
Hw yu felt
…
Vlunteer Wrk
◎Help in the city library ◎Clean up the city parks
◎Hld a charity bazaar(义卖) ◎D vlunteer wrk in a hspital
◎Visit the ld peple’s hme ◎…
What were n shw
What they are made f/frm
What yu think
➢clthes
➢chairs
➢mdel planes
➢ …
➢waste paper
➢plastic bttles
➢used wd and glass
➢ …
➢creative
➢save …
➢ …
Scial Practice Plan
What t d
Why t d s
●vlunteer t d...
●make a survey abut...
●have a graduatin trip t...
●…
●be helpful...
●learn mre abut...
●pen ne’s eyes...
●…
Dear David,Glad t share my scial practice plan with yu.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Ming
Names
Items(条目)
Purple Schl
Orange Schl
Schls
public, a lng histry
private, well-knwn
Teachers
hard-wrking
yung and active
Students
less hmewrk
clrful activities
Places
Activities
Cmmunity center
help the ld, sing sngs, tell stries, …
Cmmunity hspital( s)
handut the leaflets(宣传册)n COVID-19, …
Cmmunity park(s)
pick up rubbish, water flwers, …
…
…
Teens Arund the Wrld
Subject: Discver the little happiness in daily life
Hey, guys! These days many teenagers say they nearly frget hw t smile. In fact, little happiness is everywhere in ur daily life. Try t think abut ne thing that makes yu feel happy. What happened and what did yu d at that mment? Please share yur stry with us.
Emily, England
Time
2: 00 p.m. Friday, June 25th
Place
the schl playgrund
Activities
ck, have smething delicius ...
Aims
experience Chinese fd culture, raise mney fr charity.
T: Andrew
Frm Li Hua
Hi, Andrew
Hw is it ging?___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur reply.
Li Hua
内容要点
参考词汇
When and where t g
Zhejiang University, this Saturday
Hw t g
by train
What t d
visit …, talk with …, learn abut ..., …
What t take
passprt, …
Others
meet at the schl gate, 7: 30 a.m., …
内容要点
参考词汇
weekend plan/activities
sprts (r music/drawing)
paint, play basketball, ….
experience f Chinese cultures
make jiazi, write with a Chinese brush, …
T
Steve@mail.cm
Subject
Weekend Plan
Hi, Steve!
I’m Li Hua. I hear yu’d like t experience sme mre Chinese cultures befre ging back. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
1. 简介:建于2015年,馆藏丰富,可以品味当地文化与传统艺术。
2. 开放时间:周一全天闭馆周二至周日9: 00—17: 00
3. 入场:免费
4. 注意事项:
5. 博物馆网址:httpwww. bzsbwg. cm
Frm
Bb
Kate
Lily
Yu
T
parents
gd friend
freign teacher
(请补充)
What
sup
Pht album
Paper cutting
(请补充)
Why
thanks and lve
friendship
culture
(请补充)
Chse a bk
"Alice in Wnderland"
"Gulliver's Travels"
...
Describe the bk
Wh is it abut?
What happened?
What kind f bk?
Tell the reasn
Why d I like it?
...
My favurite bk
*What’s the name?
*What’s it abut?
*Why d yu like it?
…
Time
10 a.m. next Sunday
Place
schl sprts field
Activities fr students
sell tickets, wrk at fd stands… (all f the mney will g t charity)
play the vilin, pian…
sing sngs, dance t music…
…
1
Study
have nline classes (上网课), d hmewrk …
2
Husewrk
clean the rms, ck the dishes …
3
Leisure activities
d sprts, watch TV …
4
Feeling
warm happy …
时间
周日晚上7:00—9:00
本周
地点人民广场
内容
1. 出售报纸,饮料。
2. 出售旧物:书,玩具,自行车等。
3. 出售自制的蛋糕、卡片等。
你的想法和建议
……
Bk Club
students
lve reading
want t make friends
...
activities
read bks tgether
share ideas abut bks
...
cntact
Call at 929—3160
地位
最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表
幸福,可以带来好运
使用场所
婚礼,春节等
表达方式
剪纸,中国结,红包,灯笼
名称
Happy English Learning
内容
英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等。
好处
1. 便于和同学一起学学习;
2. 帮助学生扩大词汇量;
3. 有利于提高英语听力;
4. ……(自主发挥,至少一点)
其他方面
……(自主发挥,至少一点)
内容要点
参考词汇
Subjects
English, Science,...
Teachers/Classmates
kind, helpful,...
Activities
sprts, hbbies,...
Wrries
Wishes
t strict, t much hmewrk …
little time fr utdr activities…
hard t cmmunicate with…
….
less hmewrk…
mre chances …
get n well with …
…
学
习
区
Listen t the teacher
生
活
区
Eat healthy fd
提
示
区
Avid making mistakes
Take ntes
Exercise
Learn t relax
Finish ding…
Have enugh sleep
Be n time
...
...
...
1. Teachers' team
(师资)
①experienced teachers
help us make prgress
②friendly head teachers
grw as a persn
2. Schl facilities
(设施)
①a big library
read bks t learn mre
②a playgrund
d sprts
③sme science labs
find smething new
3. Schl envirnment
(环境)
①different kinds f trees and flwers
be clean and beautiful
②safety educatin classes
prtect urselves
4. ?
…
…
年龄与外表
16岁;高大健壮
兴趣与爱好
喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐;最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人
风趣幽默;乐于助人、容易相处
过去
1. 家庭贫困,房屋破旧。
2. 母亲生病,为母担忧,成绩下滑。
现在
3. 住进新房,母亲康复,学习进步。
4. 生活日趋改善。
过去
1. 家庭贫困,房屋破旧。
2. 母亲生病,为母担忧,成绩下滑。
现在
3. 住进新房,母亲康复,学习进步。
4. 生活日趋改善。
学习区
Listen t the teacher
生活区
Eat healthy fd
提示区
Avid making mistakes
Take ntes
Exercise
Learn t relax
Finish ding…
Have enugh sleep
Be n time
…
…
…
自我介绍
年龄、性格、爱好……
校园生活介绍
社团活动……
家乡介绍
自然环境,名胜古迹……
你的建议
上网了解更多有关遵义的历史与文化……
年龄与外表
16岁;高大健壮
兴趣与爱好
喜欢运动、阅读和听音乐;最喜欢的科目是英语
性格与为人
风趣幽默;乐于助人、容易相处
过去
1. 家庭贫困,房屋破旧。
2. 母亲生病,为母担忧,成绩下滑。
现在
3. 住进新房,母亲康复,学习进步。
4. 生活日趋改善。
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