中考英语二轮复习之小题必刷+大题突破大题突破09 书面表达之书信作文（含解析）

这是一份中考英语二轮复习之小题必刷+大题突破大题突破09 书面表达之书信作文（含解析），共27页。

【大题突破】
(一)（2022·四川·统考中考真题）
假设你叫李平，你的姐姐李蓉今年七月要去伦敦Linda家住一段时间。请你根据表格信息，用英语给Linda写一封邮件，介绍你姐姐的基本情况。
注意：
(1)文中不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等；
(2)文中应包含表格所给信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
(3)词数80-100。
Dear Linda,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Ping
(二)（2022·山东烟台·统考中考真题）
假设你是李华。你校为弘扬中华优秀传统文化，于5月16日在礼堂（schl hall）举办了一年一度的中华传统文化展评活动，有剪纸、绘画、诗词大赛（petry cmpetitin）等。你的英国朋友Jhn对活动很感兴趣，请你给他写一封邮件。主要内容包括：
1. 展评的时间及地点；2. 展评的内容及你的感受；3. 邀请Jhn明年来参加。
要求：
1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 须包含所有要点提示，并可适当补充，以使语句通顺，行文连贯；
3. 邮件中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。
Dear Jhn,
Hw is everything ging? I’m writing t intrduce ur schl’s annual Chinese Traditinal Art Exhibitin t yu. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Hua
(三)（2022·山东临沂·统考中考真题）
假定你是李嘉，请阅读下面的邮件，用英语表示愿意帮忙并根据邮件内容回复。可以适当发挥。要求：
1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
(四)（2022·北京·统考中考真题）
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语：manners, shake hands, plite, gift, chpsticks
提示问题：· What d we d when we meet peple fr the first time?
· Hw d we behave prperly at table?
(五)（2022·浙江杭州·统考中考真题）
假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件，接受邀请并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Li Ping
(六)（2023·陕西西安·西北大学附中校考二模）
假如你是李磊，你的英国笔友Tm将来你们学校做交换生，他想了解你们学校的情况，请你回复一封电子邮件，介绍你们学校的校规（至少三条），并从生活、学习等方面给他一些合理的建议。
参考词汇：schl unifrms, be late fr, talk in class, fight with, be friendly t, get n well, fllw the rules...
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、意思连贯、书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等）；
4.词数：80词左右。
Dear Tm,
I am glad yu will cme t ur schl as an exchange student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am lking frward t yur cming.
Yurs,
Li Lei
(七)（2023·上海徐汇·统考一模）
Write at least 60 wrds accrding t the given situatin（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。
假设你是Je，你校校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目（sectin）。
备选栏目如下：
·Schl sprts
·Wrd games and crsswrd puzzles
·Schl clubs
·Bk r Film reviews
·Pems by students
请给校报写封邮件，谈谈你的选择，并简要说明理由。
注意：
1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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(八)（2022·湖北荆门·统考中考真题）
湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会近期在荆门成功举办，其景区已向市民开放，现面向全市中学生招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英文写一封自荐信。
要点：
1. 性格开朗，待人友善；
2. 面对困难，勇于挑战；
3. 对园艺兴趣浓厚，了解园林文化；
4. 有做志愿者的经历；
5. ……
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥； 4. 词数：80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：The Third (Jingmen) Garden Exp in Hubei Prvince湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会；garden culture园林文化；gardening园艺
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua frm Jingmen. Can I have the chance t wrk as a vlunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Exp in Hubei Prvince? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
(九)（2022·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）
“双减”政策实施后的第一个暑假即将来临，假如你是Zhang Wei，你的英国笔友Tm来信询问你今年的暑期计划，请你给他写一封回信，内容要点如下：
要求：1. 至少写四点暑期计划，可适当发挥；2.语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数80左右。书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
4. 请勿在文中出现其实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tm,
Hw is everything ging with yu? In yur letter, yu asked me abut my summer hliday reslutins. Nw I’m writing t tell yu sme details.
Firstly, _________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I hpe I’ll spend a meaningful and clrful summer hliday.
Yurs,
Zhang Wei
(十)（2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·统考中考真题）
假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
写作要点：
因他的信任而高兴。
你的看法：
(1)遵守规则是重要的；(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。
3.告诉他如何做一名遵守规则(bey the rules)的中学生。
写作要求：
1.不得使用其实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。
Dear Peter,
Hw’s it ging? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
(十一)（2023·安徽阜阳·统考一模）
假如你是Jim。前段时间你的朋友李华一直在帮助你学习中文歌和了解中华文化。现在你已经回国，请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括：
1. 表达感激之情；
2. 回忆各种收获；
3. 发出邀请。
注意：
1. 必须包含所有要点，词数80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和学校的名称。
Dear Li Hua,
Hw are yu ding these days?
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lking frward t seeing yu sn.
Yurs,
Jim
(十二)（2022·浙江宁波·统考二模）
假设你是来自地球旅行的外星人，你惊讶地发现很多地球人在破坏自己的家园，令你庆幸的是也有很多人在竭力保护地球。请根据以下的信息向一家杂志社写一篇关于地球之行的文章。
注意：
（1）可以适当增加内容，要求意思、语句连贯；
（2）词数：100个左右（短文开头已给出，可以选择使用，不计入总词数）。
peple n the earth:
（1）cut dwn many trees
（2）pur dirty water int the river
（3）eat many kinds f animals
（4）be vlunteers t plant trees and help prtect animals
（5）in their daily life
Dear Editr,
I’m Dlly frm Pandra(潘多拉星球). Last week I paid a visit t the earth.___________
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(十三)（2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·校考模拟预测）
假如你是中学生李平，最近你收到了你的笔友Peter的来信，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封回信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生应该如何成就一个更好的自己。
写作要点：
1. 班会的主题：如何成就一个更好的自己（Hw t Make Yurself Better?）
2. 介绍一下同学们的想法：
（1）50%的同学认为中学生应该健康生活；
（2）五分之一的同学认为中学生应该不怕挑战；
3. 说说中学生应该如何成就一个更好的自己。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
（2）可以适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
（4）至少80词。
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad t hear frm yu. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
(十四)（2023·安徽合肥·校考一模）
假如你是来自美国的Nancy，你和你的父母正在中国旅游。请根据内容要点提示，给你的朋友Anna写一封信。要点提示：
1. 写信时你们正在九寨沟国家公园(Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park)；
2. 你与父母于7月26日从纽约飞往北京；
3. 在北京你们参观了颐和园(the Summer Palace)、天安门广场(Tian’an men Square)和紫禁城(the Frbidden City)，还去爬了长城；
4. 你们拍了许多照片；
5. 你已为她买了一些纪念品(suvenir)，希望她能够喜欢。
Dear Anna,
I’m writing t yu frm Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park in Sichuan, China. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs
Nancy
姓名
Li Rng
年龄
16
外貌
中等身高、黑色短发
性格
随和、外向、友好
爱好
历史、博物馆、烹任、打篮球
衣着
T恤、牛仔裤
Dear Li Jia, Hw’s it ging? We’re ding a prject at schl abut hw teenagers arund the wrld relax. I’d really like yu t help me, if yu can! S, can yu tell me:
-what is yur favrite way t relax?
-hw lng yu’ve dne it?
-hw ften yu d it?
-whether relaxing is imprtant and why?
Thanks very much, and write sn!
Bert
Dear Bert, Thanks fr yur e-mail. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Li Jia
Dear Chris,I’m glad t knw that yu’re interested in Chinese scial manners.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe the abve is helpful. Please feel free t ask fr mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
T: LiPing@mail.cm
Subject: Exchange Visit!
Hi there, Li Ping!My name’s Jack and I’m ging t be at yur schl fr the exchange visit next mnth. I’m really excited abut it!
Well, why am I writing right nw? fr ne thing, I really want t knw smething abut the interesting activities at yur schl, s culd yu intrduce ne f them? Als, I am interested in Chinese culture. S what d yu suggest I d after schl?
Take care and hpe t hear frm yu sn.
Jack
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Linda,
I’m glad t write t yu. Tday I want t intrduce my sister Li Rng t yu.
She is 16 years ld. She is f medium height and she has shrt black hair. She is easy-ging, ut-ging and friendly. She likes histry because she thinks it helps her learn abut the histry and culture f the past. She likes t g t museums and she likes the cultural atmsphere f the museum. She likes cking and she always cks fr us. She likes playing basketball and she ften plays basketball n weekends. She ften wears T-shirts and jeans.
I hpe yu will help her and she wn’t give yu any truble.
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据表格内容介绍姐姐的基本情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍姐姐”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、爱好和穿着”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望对方帮忙，姐姐不会给对方添麻烦。
[亮点词汇]
①向…介绍…②f medium height中等身高③learn abut学习关于……④n weekends在周末
[高分句型]
①She likes histry because she thinks it helps her learn abut histry and culture f the past.（because引导的原因状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）
②I hpe yu will help her and she wn’t give yu any truble.（and连接并列句）
2．例文
Dear Jhn,
Hw is everything ging? I’m writing t intrduce ur schl’s annual Chinese Traditinal Art Exhibitin t yu.
In rder t prmte the excellent traditinal Chinese culture, ur schl held the annual traditinal Chinese culture exhibitin and evaluatin activities at the schl hall n May 16th, including paper-cutting, painting, petry cmpetitin and s n. Amng all the activities, I like the Chinese Petry Cntest best. And I wn the third prize in the cntest. These activities nt nly cultivated the habit f learning traditinal culture, but als arused the interest in it. What’s mre, we benefited a lt frm them.
I hpe yu will cme next year and yur participatin will make a difference.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
题干解读：
本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容向Jhn介绍展评并发出邀请，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
写作指导：
写作时主要以第三人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍展评的时间，地点，内容和感受；第三段发出邀请。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
3．例文
Dear Bert
Thanks fr yur e-mail. It’s great. I’d like t tell yu abut hw I relax.
Music, mvies and sprts can make me relaxed, but my favrite way t relax is hiking. At the age f 12, I went hiking with my parents fr the first time. And I have been in lve with it since then. I g hiking with my friends r parents n weekends. We can enjy the fresh air and the peaceful cuntry scene. Als, we can have a talk happily.
Relaxing is very imprtant fr me. If I keep studying fr a lng time withut relaxing, I’ll feel very tired and even I’ll have a headache. This is bad fr my health. Hwever, if I relax myself by hiking, I’ll feel happy, energetic and creative. All in all, relaxing is gd fr my bdy and mind.
Best wishes!
Li Jia
【详解】
题干解读：
这是一篇材料作文，要求根据来信内容提示进行邮件回复，学生需要围绕题目所给提示，结合自身经历来谈谈平时放松自己的方式。
写作指导：
写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时并根据内容结合其他的时态。正文可分为三段式：第一段承接开头；第二段介绍自己最喜欢的放松方式是什么和什么时候开始以及频率；第三段讲述放松对自己的重要性和原因。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
4．例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad t knw that yu’re interested in Chinese scial manners. China is a cuntry with a lng histry, s there are many custms here. Let me tell yu sme f them.
Firstly, yu are suppsed t shake hands when yu meet smene fr the first time. Secndly, yu shuld bring a gift when yu are invited t a party and be sure t arrive n time r a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when yu eat meals with thers, it’s rude t pint at thers with yur chpsticks. And dn’t make nise when yu have yur sup.
I hpe the abve is helpful. Please feel free t ask fr mre infrmatin.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
题干解读：
本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题，给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
写作指导：
写作时要以第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
5．One pssible versin:
Dear Jack,
I’m pleased t knw that yu’re cming fr the exchange visit.
We have many interesting schl activities. Amng them, the singing cmpetitin is the mst ppular. It ffers a great chance t shw ur talents and helps us t learn smething new. As fr Chinese culture, I suggest yu visit the Hangzhu Natinal Tea Museum. Yu can learn abut the histry f Chinese tea there.
Hpe this helps. And tell me if there is anything else yu need t knw.
Li Ping
【详解】
题干解读：
题目要求根据邮件内容进行回复，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
写作指导：
写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍学校的一些有趣的活动，以及介绍关于中国文化的活动。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
6．例文
Dear Tm,
I am glad yu will cme t ur schl as an exchange student. Let me tell yu sme rules f my schl.
First, we must wear schl unifrms. Secnd, we can’t be late fr schl. Besides, we can’t talk in class. Third, we can’t run in the hallways. Finally, we can’t fight with ur classmates, r ur parents will be called t schl. When yu cme t ur schl, yu shuld be friendly t the classmates and get alng well with them. At the same time, yu need t bey the schl rules. If yu want t get gd grades, yu shuld study hard. And yu can ask yur teachers and classmates fr help if yu have any prblems.
I am lking frward t yur cming.
Yurs,
Li Lei
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍校规；
第二步，具体介绍校规并给对方在生活、学习上的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be late fr迟到②besides此外③at the same time同时④ask sb. fr help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①When yu cme t ur schl, yu shuld be friendly t the classmates and get alng well with them.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If yu want t get gd grades, yu shuld study hard.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Editr,
I’m glad t hear that yu are selecting the mst ppular sectin. Frm the pint f my view, my favrite ne is the Schl sprts. There are several reasns which can accunt fr my pinin as belw. First f all, every teenager has his wn sprts idl. In this clumn, we can get the latest sprts infrmatin in time. Secndly, in this clumn, we can ften get sme sprts suggestins, which will help students t arrange sprts reasnably during schl.
Yurs,
Je
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据题目要求谈谈你喜欢的栏目及原因。不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目的消息；
第二步，谈谈你最喜欢哪个栏目；
第三步，谈谈你选择这个栏目的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①Frm the pint f my view在我看来②First f all首先③help sb t d sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m glad t hear that yu are selecting the mst ppular sectin.（宾语从句）
②There are several reasns which can accunt fr my pinin as belw.（定语从句）
8．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua frm Jingmen. Can I have the chance t wrk as a vlunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Exp in Hubei Prvince? As a vlunteer, nt nly can I help peple in need, but als I can learn a lt frm the experience.
Outging and energetic, I get n well with thers. When facing challenges in life, I always chse t deal with them bravely instead f staying behind. Gardening is exactly what I’m fnd f and I have a gd knwledge f different garden cultures which are quite helpful fr the jb. Last but nt least, my experience f being a vlunteer in the Flwer Exp last year wn high praise frm thers.
I hpe t wrk as a vlunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Exp in Hubei Prvince s as t help peple knw mre abut the different garden cultures in Hubei Prvince.
Lking frward t yur early reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容写一封自荐信介绍自己的情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，申请做第三届（荆门）园林博览会的志愿者；
第二步，介绍自己的相关情况和优势；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get n well with与……相处融洽②deal with处理③be fnd f喜欢④Last but nt least最后但同样重要的
[高分句型]
①As a vlunteer, nt nly can I help peple in need, but als I can learn a lt frm the experience.（nt als...连接并列句）
②Gardening is exactly what I’m fnd f and I have a gd knwledge f different garden cultures which are quite helpful fr the jb.（what引导的表语从句和which引导的定语从句）
9．[例文]
Dear Tm,
Hw is everything ging with yu? In yur letter, yu asked me abut my summer hliday reslutins. Nw I’m writing t tell yu sme details.
Firstly, I want t have a gd rest and relax myself. I will listen t sme music r watch sme TV. Secndly, I will read sme bks. I like reading very much. S I read a bk every week t braden my hrizns. Thirdly, I will be a vlunteer t help thse in need. Finally, I will help my parents d sme husewrk at hme.
All in all, I hpe I’ll spend a meaningful and clrful summer hliday.
Yurs,
Zhang Wei
【详解】
题干解读：
本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示，给英国笔友Tm回一封关于你今年的暑期计划的信。
写作指导：
本文时态以一般将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时包含要点，且自己需要再加一点暑期计划，可使用过渡词Firstly，Secndly，Thirdly以及Finally使文章更通畅，最后确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
10．例文
Dear Peter,
Hw’s it ging? I am very happy fr yur trust and I wuld like t give yu sme advice fr yur prblem. Yu feel quite upset these days because yu have t many rules t bey. Sme f them are frm yur family and sme frm yur schl. In my pinin, fllwing sme rules is imprtant and even necessary. Mre ften than nt, beying rules will make us ppular amng ur classmates.
Since rules are imprtant, what can yu d t bey the rules? The mst essential thing is t raise yur awareness f beying the rules. That is t say, yu have t understand the imprtance f beying the rules and accept them frm the bttm f yur heart. Rules may limit yur freedm, but they d regulate yur behavir. As lng as yu have the awareness, yu can start frm ding small things in daily life. Fr example, yu shuld listen t teachers carefully in class instead f making nise r disturbing teachers. In the schl, yu’d better nt run after thers, because it is dangerus. When yu have different ideas frm yur parents, yu shuld cmmunicate with them patiently rather than quarrel r even turn a cld shulder twards them.
S much fr my advice and wait fr yur gd news.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】
题干解读：
本文为一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示信息，就笔友Peter遇到的苦恼谈谈自己的看法并告诉Peter如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
写作指导：
本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段要表达因得到对方的信任而感到高兴，并谈谈对遵守规则的看法：(1)遵守规则是重要的；(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。第二段要告诉对方具体如何做一名遵守规则的中学生，即提建议。提建议时，可用情态动词shuld和固定句式“Yu’d better nt...”等，使语气更委婉。最后，总结全文、表达祝福，并署名。
11．例文：
Dear Li Hua,
Hw are yu ding these days?
I am writing t cnvey my gratitude fr yur kind help and care during my stay in yur cuntry, withut which I wuldn’t have enjyed it s much.
Guided by yu, I had a chance t visit sme places f interest in China and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks t yur generus help, I d believe that I have a better understanding f yur cuntry and culture. What’s mre, I learned sme Chinese sngs with yur help.
I will be mre than pleased if I have the pprtunity t repay yur kindness. I will shw yu arund my cuntry.
Lking frward t seeing yu sn.
Yurs,
Jim
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的关键信息，写感谢信感谢李华的帮助并邀请他到自己的国家。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写信的目的是表示感谢；
第二步，回忆自己的收获；
第三步，邀请对方到自己的国家。
[亮点词汇]
①places f interest 名胜古迹②thanks t 多亏了
[高分句型]
①I am writing t cnvey my gratitude fr yur kind help and care during my stay in yur cuntry, withut which I wuldn’t have enjyed it s much.（“介词+which”引导定语从句）
②I will be mre than pleased if I have the pprtunity t repay yur kindness.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．例文
Dear Editr,
I’m Dlly frm Pandra(潘多拉星球). Last week I paid a visit t the earth. But I was surprised t find that many peple n the earth are destrying their wn hmes. Fr example, they cut dwn many trees, pur dirty water int rivers and eat many kinds f animals. At the same time, I am glad that there are many peple trying t prtect the earth. Sme peple becme vlunteers t plant trees and help prtect animals. In additin, there are a lt f peple t save water in daily life. Besides, sme peple g t wrk by bike instead f by car.
I believe the earth will becme better and better with the effrts f these peple.
【详解】
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己看到有人在破坏地球，也有很多人在保护地球；
第二步，具体阐述破坏地球和保护地球的行为；
第三步，最后表达自己的想法。
[亮点词汇]
①fr example例如②at the same time同时③in additin此外④instead f而不是
[高分句型]
I am glad that there are many peple trying t prtect the earth.（that引导的宾语从句）
13．参考例文
Dear Peter,
I’m very glad t hear frm yu. I’m writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week. The tpic f the class meeting was Hw t Make Yurself Better. Abut half f ur classmates believe that middle schl students shuld live a healthy life. One fifth f them think that we shuld nt be afraid f challenges.
In my pinin, it’s very imprtant fr us t make urselves better. First f all, we shuld live a healthy life. Fr example, we shuld eat mre fruit and vegetables, take exercise every day and get enugh sleep. What’s mre, we shuld wrk hard at all the subjects. Besides, it is necessary t have a gd relatinship with family and friends. Last but nt least, it’s ur respnsibility t take care f ur parents and try t d what we can d t help ther peple.
By ding these, I’m sure we can make urselves better.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封回信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：书信开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，介绍班会的主题；
第二步，先按照要点提示介绍同学们的一些看法，再列点介绍中学生如何成就更好的自己的方法，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达祝愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①live a healthy life健康生活②have a gd relatinship with family and friends与家人、朋友建立良好的关系
[高分句型]
①I’m writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week.（过去分词作定语）
②In my pinin, it’s very imprtant fr us t make urselves better.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
14．例文
Dear Anna,
I’m writing t yu frm Jiuzhaigu Natinal Park in Sichuan, China. It is a wrld-famus Natinal Park in China. My parents and I flew t Beijing frm New Yrk n 26th July. We visited the Summer Palace, Tian’an men Square and the Frbidden City. We als climbed the Great Wall. We tk a lt f beautiful phts. What’s mre, we ate delicius fd such as Beijing Rast Duck.
I bught sme small suvenirs fr yu and I’m sure yu will like them.
Yurs
Nancy
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍去北京的旅行情况；
第二步，买了一些纪念品给对方，确定对方会喜欢的。
[亮点词汇]
①take phts拍照②a lt f许多③what’s mre并且
[高分句型]
①I’m sure yu will like them.（省略that的宾语从句）