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中考英语一轮复习 考点详解+真题练习专项突破57 书面表达之叙事描写类(含解析)
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这是一份中考英语一轮复习 考点详解+真题练习专项突破57 书面表达之叙事描写类(含解析),共8页。试卷主要包含了 头绪分明,脉络清楚, 突出中心,详略得当, 用活语言,准确生动等内容,欢迎下载使用。
叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式,以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体:
这一类的书面表达动词使用率最高,且富于变化,用得最多的是动词的过去时态,其他各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时,如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格,那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点:
1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚
写好书面表达,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个"W"和一个"H"来展开,分别是why, what, when, where, wh及hw。
2. 突出中心,详略得当
在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。
3. 用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。
1. Amng varius kinds f things/persns in my mind ... is the mst unfrgettable ne.
2. On a sunny/rainy mrning, while I f all... Then ... After that... In the end ...
3. He/she/this was ne f the mst meaningful/enjyable/unfrgettable persns/things that I have ever met/ experienced, I will remember him/her frever.
加分句子:
1. Sth impressed me greatly...
2. What impressed me mst is that...
经典句型:
1. Last Sunday(Saturday...), it was sunny(rainy, windy, fggy)
2. I gt up very early (late). After breakfast I went t with my friends by bike, bus...
3. We enjyed urselves.
4. We frgt the time. We didn’t cme back until 5 ’clck.
5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy.
6. I thught I wuld never frget this trip.
7. Last summer, my parents and I went t Beijing fr ur hlidays.
8. We visited a lt f places f interest.
9. We had a gd time there.
10. We bught a lt f things. The clthes here are gd and cheap.
人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格,塑造人物形象,反映生活,表现主题,模版如下:
开门见山,引出要介绍的人物
正文(时间、地点、人物……)
感想
I will never frget my English teacher…She is a beautiful wman…
It was…’clck, I did…in…
I realize that…
叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。
写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构,模版如下:
介绍景观
介绍旅行经历
总结旅行感受
… is ne f the mst beautiful scenery spts.
I vlunteered a guide t intrduce…
It was a busy and tired day but I was very happy.
(2021·内蒙古通辽·中考真题)
我们国家历史悠久,地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民;有绿水青山,美丽的风景;有独特的美食,传统的饮食文化。请以”Beautiful China”为题,写一篇作文,描写大美中国,表达我们对祖国的热爱。
要求:
1.思路清晰,语句通顺,书写规范。
2.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。
3.词数:80词左右的短文。
Beautiful China
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【答案】
Beautiful China
China is a cuntry with a lng histry and vast land. There are hardwrking and kind peple, wh make China mre and mre prsperus and strng. There are many clean lakes and green hills, which make China have beautiful scenery. There is rich and unique fd that creates its traditinal fd culture. China is famus as its fd tasting turism resurces hme and abrad.
This is beautiful China, and I lve it very much.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目是写一篇英语短文。要求根据题目要求,并以”Beautiful China”为题,写一篇作文,描写大美中国,表达我们对祖国的热爱,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称来描述中国的特点;时态采用一般现在时为主;描述中国时,应描写细致、突出亮点;短文需要叙述完整,保证条理清晰。
A
(2022·河南三门峡·二模)
生活中总会有一些事情让你感受到快乐、悲伤、孤独、坚持,或者会让你感受到成功、友情、亲情、成长等等,请你以At that time I felt ________为题,来记述你生活当中或精彩或难忘的一刻。
要点:1.简单描述这件事;
2.描写你当时的感受或体会;
3.你准备以后怎么做。
要求:1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2.词数100左右。
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【答案】
At that time I felt happy
During my life, I remember many things well. And the happy ne that I will never frget is the day last summer in Tai’an when my father and I went muntain climbing tgether.
Unluckily, it began t rain n the half way. I gt wet all thrugh, felling cld and tired. S I wanted t give up. Hwever, my father encuraged me nt t give up. He said, “We wn’t see the fantastic scenery unless we reach the tp.” He really cheered me up. We gt t the tp at last and enjyed the beauty f the nature that I had never seen.
I gt such a strng feeling f satisfactin. Frm that I knw I shuld never give up when I meet difficulties. I will study hard and never give up easily.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“在那时我感觉开心”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般过去时为主,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段介绍自己的经历;最后一段介绍自己从这段经历中学到了什么。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
B
(2022·江苏·淮安市淮安区教师发展中心学科研训处一模)
“淮安网”正在举行“美在淮安”的宣传活动,计划通过网络将淮安的景色、名胜、文化等特色进行推广,现向中学生征文。请以“Spring in my hmetwn”为题,写一篇英语短文投稿,向外籍友人介绍淮安的美。内容必须包括以下几点:
1. 介绍家乡春天的景色(需要有具体描写);
2. 人们在春天开展的活动(至少三点);
3. 你对家乡春天的感受和想法(至少两点)。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
2. 词数在80—100之间(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Spring in my hmetwn
Huai’an is a beautiful city, especially in spring.__________________________________________________
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【答案】
Spring in my hmetwn
Huai’an is a beautiful city, especially in spring. Spring in my hmetwn Huai’an is a beautiful city, especially in spring. As the weather becmes warmer, everything is green and many flwers start t smile. The wind blws gently and peple feel mre cmfrtable at this time. All these make my hmetwn a beautiful place. Yu can see many families have a picnic near rivers. And children learn t fly kites in parks, running and laughing. Mrever, mre peple can get clse t nature/g ut int nature and enjy the attractive views. Spring in my hmetwn is full f life and energy. It gives us hpe and encurages us t wrk. I lve the spring in Huai’an. Welcme t my hmetwn!
【详解】
1. 题干解读:题目要求以“Spring in my hmetwn”为题,写一篇英语短文,向外籍友人介绍淮安的美;要求包含所有内容提示。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时为主;采用第三人称口吻;可直接采用一段落格式,介绍春天的景色、春天的活动以及你的感受和想法。注意无语法和拼写错误。
C
(2021·广东·阳西县教育局教学研究室一模)
韩愈的《师说》云:“师者,所以传道、授业、解惑也。”而一名优秀的班主任可以培养学生的好习惯,可以激发学生的进取心,可以感化学生的心灵,可以……
假设你是李雷,你们学校英语广播站正在进行“优秀班主任”系列人物介绍,请你写一篇广播稿。
内容包括:
1. 介绍你的班主任Mr. Zhang (包括年龄、外貌、性格等);
2. 描写一件有关他的典型事例 (包括起因、经过、结果等);
3. 表达你的感受。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文开头已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Gd mrning, everyne. I am glad t intrduce my class adviser, Mr. Zhang. __________________________
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Gd mrning, everyne. I am glad t intrduce my class adviser, Mr. Zhang.
Mr. Zhang is in his fifties. He’s tall and heavy. He lks serius, but he’s kind t us.
Once, I gt int a fight with anther by. After we were sent t his ffice, we didn’t dare t lk at him in the eyes. But t ur surprise, he didn’t speak angrily t us. Instead, he tld us patiently why we shuldn’t behave like that. He was s friendly that we felt very srry abut it.
This is my class adviser, wh always cares abut us like a father.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,题目要求是根据提示内容,向你们学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿,介绍你的班主任Mr. Zhang。不能照抄翻译原文,可适当发挥,但必须包含所有提示信息;内容要紧扣主题,语句要通顺、连贯;80词左右,作文开头已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上;在写作中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
2.写作指导:首先要认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点,围绕主题展开作文;在写作中要注意谓语动词的时态,以及人称与数的变化,不要出现语法错误;要保证语句通顺,意思连贯,逻辑合理。其次,可从以下四个方面展开作文:一是点明介绍的人物(开头已给出);二是介绍班主任的年龄、外貌和性格;三是写典型的事例,要包括起因、经过、结果;四是写自己的感受。