2024年高考英语读后续写+概要写作课件汇总新题型-读后续写-第5篇

这是一份2024年高考英语读后续写+概要写作课件汇总新题型-读后续写-第5篇，共26页。PPT课件主要包含了CONTENTS，原则方法，写作指导 四个原则，写作指导，四个步骤，说明文，记叙文，议论文，实战演练，概要写作等内容，欢迎下载使用。

Principles and Methds
概要是将原文“浓缩”后产生的新语篇，通过删除原文中的细节,减少例证，简化描述内容来实现语言的简洁性。评分标准要求： 40＜标准词数＜80
涵盖全部要点是概要写作基本要求。
对原文准确理解是概要写作的前提。
概要是用自己的语言对原文内容要点的概括和转述，不是再创作，要忠于原文，绝对不能出现来自于原作者以外的其他观点。
01 速读全文，弄清文体结构
速读全文，了解文章体裁，弄清语篇结构。理解段意和文意(各种文体的大致结构，见下一张PPT)
完全使用自己的语言表达全部的内容要点，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，有效使用语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。
根据文体结构，在文中找到并划出主题句，以及能体现内容要点的关键词。
认真检查、修改、润色，然后规范誊写到答题卡上，做到字迹工整，卷面整洁。
03 根据要点，转换表达
02 根据结构，划出全部要点
04 仔细检查，规范誊写
体裁不同，结构不同，找要点的方法也不同
找出记叙文的6要素：何人(wh)在何时(when)何地(where)因何原因(why)做了何事(what)，结果如何(hw)。其中，最重要的要点是某人做了某事。
1.事物描述类：对象+结构/性质+功用2.问题解决类：问题+(解决的)方法或措施3.社会现象类：现象+原因+后果(+措施或建议)
论点+论据：其关键在于找出主题句或结论句。若文中有一分为二的观点，不可漏掉其中任何一方。
Writing Practice
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Are yu smetimes a little tired and sleepy in the early afternn? Many peple feel this way after lunch. They may think that eating lunch is the cause f the sleepiness. Or, in summer, they may think it is the heat. Hwever, the real reasn lies inside their bdies. At that time—abut eight hurs after yu wake up—yur bdy temperature ges dwn. This is what makes yu slw dwn and feel sleepy.
Scientists have tested sleep habits in experiments where there was n night r day. The peple in these experiments almst always fllwed a similar sleeping pattern. They slept fr ne lng perid and then fr ne shrt perid abut eight hurs later. In many parts f the wrld, peple take naps(小睡) in the middle f the day. This is especially true in warmer climates, where the heat makes wrk difficult in the early afternn.
Researchers are nw saying that naps are gd fr everyne in any climate. A daily nap gives ne a mre rested bdy and mind and therefre is gd fr health in general. In cuntries where naps are traditinal, peple ften suffer less frm prblem such as heart disease.
Many wrking peple, unfrtunately, have n time t take naps. Thugh dctrs may advise taking naps, emplyers d nt allw it! If yu d have the chance, hwever, here are a few tips abut making the mst f yur nap. Remember that the best time t take a nap is abut eight hurs after yu get up. A shrt sleep t late in the day may nly make yu feel mre tired and sleepy afterward. This can als happen if yu sleep fr t lng. If yu d nt have enugh time, try a shrt nap—even ten minutes f sleep can be helpful.
Writing Prcess
Step1. 速读全文，弄清文体结构
快速浏览全文，了解文章体裁，弄清语篇结构，理解段意和文意。
“现象+原因+结果或措施”型说明文
现象： tired and sleepy in the early afternn
原因： eight hurs after yu wake up—bdy temperature ges dwn.
结果或措施： naps in the middle f the day
段落大意：Paragragh 1：人们午后困倦的真正原因。Paragragh 2：在许多地区人们在中午都有午睡习惯，尤其是在气候温暖的地区，以及午睡对任何地方的人的健康都有好处。Paragragh 3：关于午睡的小贴士——午睡的最佳时间是起床后8个小时，不要睡得太迟，也不要睡得太久；如果没有时间睡，小睡一会，如10分钟也是有益的
文章大意：本文主要介绍了人们午后困倦的原因(在醒来后8小时左右体温就会下降)，午睡的好处，以及关于午睡的小贴士：午睡的最佳时间，不宜迟睡或睡得过久，小睡一会也有帮助。
要点1. 现象：Are yu smetimes a little tired and sleepy in the early afternn? Many peple feel this way after lunch. 原因： eight hurs after yu wake up—yur bdy temperature ges dwn.
Step2. 根据结构，划出全部要点
根据文本结构，在文中找到并划出主题句，以及所有能体现内容要点的关键词：说明文跟议论文一样，主题句一般出现在段首或段尾，或转折处(如hwever, but, in fact等)。
要点2. 结果或措施：In many parts f the wrld, peple take naps in the middle f the day. This is especially true in warmer climates.
(3)If yu d nt have enugh time, try a shrt nap—even ten minutes f sleep can be helpful.
要点3. 午睡的益处：... is gd fr health...要点4. 关于午睡的建议： (1)Remember that the best time t take a nap is abut eight hurs after yu get up. (2)A shrt sleep t late in the day may nly make yu feel mre tired and sleepy afterward. This can als happen if yu sleep fr t lng.
要点1. Are yu smetimes a little tired and sleepy in the early afternn? Many peple feel this way after lunch. eight hurs after yu wake up—yur bdy temperature ges dwn.转换：Many peple feel a little sleepy in the early afternn. This is because their bdy temperature ges dwn at abut eight hurs after they wake up.
Step3. 根据要点，转换表达
用自己的语言将所有要点一个不漏地表达出来。
要点2. In many parts f the wrld, peple take naps in the middle f the day. This is especially true in warmer climates.转换：In many places f the wrld, peple take naps after lunch, especially in warmer climates.
要点3. is gd fr health... 要点4：Remember that the best time t take a nap is abut eight hurs after yu get up. A shrt sleep t late in the day may nly make yu feel mre tired and sleepy afterward. This can als happen if yu sleep fr t lng.
转换：A nap is gd fr health. Eight hurs after yu get up is the best time t take a nap. Dn’t sleep t late r fr t lng.
要点5. If yu d nt have enugh time, try a shrt nap—even ten minutes f sleep can be helpful. 转换：If yu have n time t take a nap, a shrt nap is als helpful.
写好初稿后，请检查是否包括了所有内容要点，是否准确使用了相应的语法结构和词汇，是否使用了语句间的连接成分，结构是否紧凑，是否是使用自己的语言，在语言表达中是否有语法错误和单词拼写错误，等等。 要检查无误后，就要认真规范地誊写，做到字迹工整，卷面整洁。也要注意计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。
Step4. 仔细检查，规范誊写
One pssible versin: Many peple feel a little sleepy after lunch. This is because their bdy temperature ges dwn at abut eight hurs after they wake up. (要点1)In many places f the wrld, peple take naps, especially in warmer climates. (要点2) A nap is gd fr health. (要点3) Eight hurs after yu get up is the best time t take a nap. Dn’t sleep t late r fr t lng. (要点4) If yu have n time t take a nap, a shrt nap is als helpful. (要点5)
Sample Cmmentary
1. 涵盖了所有内容要点。
2.使用了自己的语言来表达。
3. 使用了相应的语法结构和词汇。如：说明原因时用了This is
4. 逻辑严密，结构紧凑。
5. 词数为82词，符合词数标准。