12 读后续写：具象构造大法（PPT课件版）

这是一份12 读后续写：具象构造大法（PPT课件版），共27页。

1.关于天气寒冷cld的环境描写
2.关于风wind的环境描写
3.关于雨rain的环境描写
4.关于雪snw的环境描写
5.关于星星star的环境描写
6.关于黑夜dark的环境描写
7.关于安静quiet的环境描写
8.关于祥和peaceful的环境描写
例1：关于天气寒冷cld的环境描写
练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：她觉得冷。She felt cld.具象描写：她觉得冷。她把衣领拉高，裹紧围巾，手插到口袋里并把脸侧开来躲避刺骨的寒风。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
She felt cld. She pulled her cllar up, tightened her scarf, shved her hands deep int her pckets and turned her face away frm the biting wind.
2.概括描写：这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。This winter, the weather is unusually cld.具象描写：这个冬季，天气异常寒冷。世界似乎在这一刻停住了，河流也停下了脚步。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This winter, the weather is unusually cld. The wrld seems t have stpped at this mment, and the river has stpped its ftsteps.
例2：关于风wind的环境描写
用风衬托恶劣环境的时候，形容风的词常有：n wind无风, strng wind强风, biting wind刺骨的风练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：这几天净刮大风。It’s been very windy these last few days. 具象描写：这几天净刮大风。楼上的标杆在风中猛烈的摇晃着。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It’s been very windy these last few days. The pst n the building staggered vilently in the wind.
2.概括描写：外面刮起了大风。Outside, there was a strng wind.具象描写：外面刮起了大风，吹的树枝乱摆，地上的灰尘乱飞，让人睁不开眼睛。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Outside, there was a strng wind, and the branches were blwing in disrder. The dust n the grund was flying in disrder, which made peple unable t pen their eyes.
例3：关于雨rain的环境描写
用雨衬托恶劣环境的时候，常用的词有：a heavy dwnpur大暴雨，rain cats and dgs下倾盆大雨，be caught in the rain被雨淋练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：下着倾盆大雨。It was raining cats and dgs. 具象描写1：下着倾盆大雨，雷声隆隆。(thunder)________________________________________________________________________________
It was raining cats and dgs with thunders raring.
具象描写2：雨倾盆而下，风吹着拍打着窗户。(windws)________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：树在雨中随着风疯狂地飞舞。(wind)________________________________________________________________________________
The rain came puring dwn with the winds blwing and beating against the windws.
The trees were dancing madly with wind in the rain.
例4：关于雪snw的环境描写
练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：现在天黑了，雪还在落下。It’s dark nw and the snw is still falling.具象描写：现在天黑了，雪还在落下，一团团的雪花随风飘落。________________________________________________________________________________
It’s dark nw and the snw is still falling, clumps f wet flakes drifting windlessly dwn.
2.概括描写：雪花飘落在地上。Snwflakes drifted t earth.具象描写：雪花在微风中懒洋洋地雪花飘落在地上，公园像是被一层厚厚的白色毯子覆盖。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Snwflakes drifted lazily t earth n gentle breeze. The park was cvered in a thick blanket f white.
例5：关于星星star的环境描写
练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。1.概括描写：在晴朗的夜晚，天空中布满了星星。On a clear night, the sky appears t be filled with stars.具象描写：在晴朗的夜晚，天空中布满了星星。星星像一颗颗美丽的珍珠在夜空中闪烁。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On a clear night, the sky appears t be filled with stars. The stars like beautiful pearls twinkle in the night sky.
2.概括描写：天上的星星在照耀。The stars are shining in the sky.具象描写：天上的星星在照耀，就像钻石般镶嵌在这深蓝的夜空中。________________________________________________________________________________
Shining the sky, the stars are like diamnds inlaid in the deep blue sky.
例6：关于黑夜dark的环境描写
练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：黑夜降临了。（2016年浙江高考卷）It was getting dark.具象描写1：黑夜降临了。一片漆黑立刻笼罩了整个森林。更糟糕的是，气温突然急剧下降。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It was getting dark. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest. Even wrse, the temperature suddenly drpped dramatically.
具象描写2：天很黑。太阳躲在山后，在黑暗中很难看到任何东西。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：那一刻，除了天空中的几颗星星发出微弱的光外，天已经完全黑了。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It was dark. The sun hid himself behind the muntains, making it hard t see anything in the thick darkness.
At that mment, it was cmpletely dark except the faint light given ut by a few stars in the sky.
例7：关于安静quiet的环境描写
练习：补充翻译具象描写的内容。概括描写：很安静。It was quiet.具象描写1：很安静，除了我自己的心跳，一点声音也听不到。________________________________________________________________________________
It was quiet. Nt a single sund culd be heard except my wn heartbeat.
具象描写2：夜很静，只有钟摆滴答滴答地响。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：班上所有的同学都在写作业，没有任何人发出响声，安静得连根针掉在地上都能听得见。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The night was very quiet except fr the ticking f the clck.
All the students in the class were writing the hmewrk, and n ne made a sund. It was s quiet that yu culd hear a pin drp.
例8：关于祥和的a peaceful的环境描写
概括描写：那是一个祥和的地方。It was a peaceful place.具象描写1：当我沐浴在阳光下，感觉琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我的每一寸肌肤。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch f my skin.
具象描写2：雾蒙蒙的山上点缀着小农场和村庄。________________________________________________________________________________具象描写3：我的脚步声只伴随着优雅地随风飘扬的芦苇。________________________________________________________________________________
Mist-cvered muntains were dtted with small farms and villages.
The sund f my ftsteps was accmpanied nly by the gracefully waving reeds.