2024年高考英语读后续写核心素养与实战演练 专题02 读后续写：环境描写（原卷版+解析版）

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注意：环境描写只是起画龙点睛的作用，环境描写不要写太长，且环境描写一定为你的内容服务，而不是为了看起来高大上。所以我也提醒大家写作的时候千万不要本末倒置，写一些无关紧要的套句或者环境描写只会对情节起到反作用。那么接下来我们先看看环境描写的常见作用以及常见的环境描写素材。
自然环境描写在读后续写中的作用
1.衬托或突出人物性格、心理等
2.暗示或推动故事情节发展
3.增添或烘托某种气氛和意境，奠定基调
4.揭示主题，深化主旨
1.气氛氛围（1）
A heavy silence blanketed the rm.（描写房间的寂静）
A hush fell upn the class. （描写教室寂静）
The huse smelled musty and damp, and a little sweet, as if it were haunted by the ghsts f lng-dead ckies.(描写屋内环境）
An abslute darkness ruled the frest.（描写黑暗）
It didn’t take t lng fr the frest t be envelped in darkness.(描写森林变暗）
There were a deathly stillness in the huse.（描写死寂）
There was a mment f sinister silence, then a multitudinus stirring f the leaves.（描写暴风雨前的死寂）
An air f sadness settled ver the grup. （描写悲伤氛围）
It suddenly seemed frighteningly quiet. The air was charged with tensin.（描写紧张气氛）
The silence f the frest was ripped apart by a sund like a raring wind.（描写狂风打破寂静）
There was n view anywhere, nthing but the ppressive and silent scrub.（描写死寂的树林）
2.气氛氛围（2）
the blue sky 蓝天the sngs f birds 鸟鸣the thundering cluds 雷霆万钧的云the fragile flwers 娇嫩的花the green grass 青草the fragrant rses 芬芳的玫瑰the setting / rising sun 落日 / 冉冉升起的太阳 Dark cluds were gathering in the sky.乌云密布。
The night sky was lit up by flashes f light. 一道道灯光照亮了夜空。
The cluds had spread and nearly cvered the entire sky. 云彩扩散开来，几乎遮住了整个天空。
The sun was nw high in the suthern sky. 太阳正高挂在南边的天空上。
The sun went in, and the breeze became cld. 云层遮住了太阳，微风有了些凉意。
The mist melted rapidly in the mrning sun. 在早晨的阳光下，薄雾涣然消散了。
The muntain area is cvered entirely in dense jungle. 山区完全掩映在茂密的丛林中。
We climbed up a winding track twards a muntain refuge. 我们沿着一条蜿蜒的小道爬向山上的一处避难所。
The muntain tp was cvered with snw. 山顶被积雪覆盖。
The regin is uninhabited except fr a few muntain villages. 除了几个小山村之外，这个地区杳无人烟。
Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed fr the destinatin.沐浴在阳光下，享受着美丽的风景，我们向目的地出发。
3.江河湖海、山川峡谷、植物草地
The gurgle f the stream sthed me. （描写潺潺流水）
A clear little stream ran quite merrily alng its narrw way.(描写欢快的溪流）
The fragrant flwers attracted lts f birds, lingering arund them.(描写花香鸟语）
The lake mirrred the sky abve, bth f them blameless blue and shimmering.(描写天空映衬下的湖面）
The water was deep blue and sunlight glittered n its lking glass-clear surface.（描写波光粼粼的水面）
Dawn sent shimmering rays ver the placid cean, bestwing a glden path frm the shre t the hrizn.(描写黎明的海洋）
The expanse f blue water stretched in every directin t the hrizn, frthy waves lapping at a sand beach.(描写海水拍打沙滩)
The beach was bathed in the amber-like sunshine.（描写阳光下的沙滩）
Ripping crystal streams stretched away int the distance frm the twering bluffs like the beautiful streamers f a fairy maid.（描写瀑布）
The meadw was a glrius expanses f grass and meadw flwers, grass rustling gently in the breeze.(描写青青草地)
Patches f weeds dtted the muntainside.（描写杂草）
The meadw flwed like a sea f green ver the hill, studded with the purple f thistles.(描写漫山的花草）
The peak lked t him exactly like a giant fist, with the thumb sticking straight up.(描写山峰）
The valley seemed t grw quieter and quieter as he sat and stared at the bright delicate blueness. (描写山谷的寂静）
4.天气（风雨雷电，阴晴冷暖，雾雪冰霜）
The wind, s sft and cld, clicked thrugh tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slpe.（描写柔风）
A gust f wind blew and parted the drping branches f the weeping willw like a curtain.（描写微风拂柳）
A light breeze blew, swaying the tree branches and making the rays f light glimmer and dance as if there was a fairytale wrld hidden deep within.（描写微风）
The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. (描写微风）
The fragile little tree cracked and fell in the wild hwling wind.（描写狂风）
The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(描写寒风）
It was the dur that always precedes a thunderstrm, and a nameless fear clutched at my heart. (描写暴风雨来临前）
Wind and rain nw whipped the huse.（描写风雨击打窗户）
The drizzle kissed me n my cheeks gently. （描写细雨）
It has rained withut ceasing fr many days, with great gusts f wind.（描写刮风下雨）
The thunder was rumbling in the distance. (描写雷电）
A fierce wind was raring while the punding rain was beating the grund. The rumble f thunder was heard in the distance.（描写风雨雷电）
The sharp claps f thunder pierced the quiet night.（描写雷声）
Thugh the rain stpped, the wind rushed by and whistled and made strange sunds.(描写雨停风来）
A glimmer f light spilled int the crridr. 一缕微光洒入走廊。（描写阳光洒进走廊）
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber-like sunshine was kissing every inch f my skin.（描写阳光）
The sun drpped thrugh and laid n his head and shulders.
The sun was at it’s highest, like a vicius unblinking yellw eye staring dwn at me frm the cludless sky.(描写正午毒辣的阳光）
In this heat even the trees appear defeated.(描写天气极热）
When I drew the curtains back, the sunlight flded in.（描写阳光洒进窗户）
The fg was beginning t clear and a full mn shne brightly. （描写雾气消散）
The mist melted rapidly in the mrning sun.(描写薄雾消散）
The feathery snwflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.(描写下雪）
The wind hwled, piling up snw in drifts, blinding the night with ice-white dust. (描写晚上下雪场景）
5.动物（飞禽走兽，鱼虫）
Birds were chattering/twittering smewhere.（描写鸟喳喳叫）
The clear blue sky was dtted with fluttering larks.(翩翩飞舞的云雀）
The frest is the rchestra cnsisted by birds, playing ne enchanting symphny after anther.(描写鸟的合唱）
The birds flew thrugh that ever develping canvas f the dawn, as if their wings were fine quills, drawing such buyant hues.(描写鸟在天空飞翔的美妙画面）
The hwl f wlves thundered and made the hair n her neck rise.（描写狼叫）
Then, n his back, with his tail lashing and his jaws clicking, the shark plwed ver the water as a speed-bat des.(描写鲨鱼）
The shark’s jaws pened wide, revealing rws f razr-sharp teeth.(描写鲨鱼）
6.春夏秋冬
My fingers lingered almst uncnsciusly n the familiar leaves and blssms which had just cme frth t greet the sweet suthern spring. （描写春意盎然）
The previusly denuded branches ffered their wands f tight green bud t the brilliant rays f spring.(描写枯枝发芽)
The new spring grass sht up as time itself had sped up.(描写春草）
An verwhelming trrent f heat flew thrugh the atmsphere, filled with uneasy discmfrt. （描写夏天的热）
Fallen leaves danced dwn in the cl mid-autumn air, bidding farewell t sweet summer and welcming the autumn in.(描写夏去秋来）
The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strlled dwn the street.(描写秋天脚下的落叶)
The autumn breeze tusled her hair and pinked her cheeks.(描写秋风拂面）
The leaves had almst fallen ff, creating a sea f fiery clrs that crunched beneath ur feet.(描写秋天落叶）
Freezing winter marched int the village. (描写寒冬）
The earth seemed benumbed by his icy tuch, and the very spirits f the trees had withdrawn t their rts, and there, curled up in the dark, lay fast asleep.（描写寒冬）
The street glistened with fresh snw and the sky was a blameless blue.(描写冬天的雪)
7.天空、日出日落
White cluds flw in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the brad cean.（描写蓝天白云）
White cluds flw in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the brad cean.（描写白云）
The sun rises as a canpy f gld, bright amid the blue, bidding the stars t take their nightly rest.(描写日出）
The sun drpped thrugh and laid n his head and shulders.(描写日落）
The garden lked s beautiful with the setting sun reflected in the windws.(描写夕阳）
The stars in the night sky sparkled like diamnds. (描写星空）
The stars that dtted the sky lit up the night.(描写星空）
Clusters f stars decrated the vast sky like sparking jewels. (描写星空）
The mn under siege by stars seemed t lighten the night bringing frth stars that shne and hung in the blackness.(描写星空)
读后续写冲刺训练常用词块
1.a rm facing suth 一间朝南的房间
2.a village surrunded by muntains一个群山环绕的村庄
3.a favrable lcatin 一个优越的位置
4.a remte village一个偏远的村庄
5.dwntwn area闹市区
6.be situated at...位于/坐落于…….
7.a vilent/fierce strm 狂风暴雨
8.in the warm spring sunshine 在春天温暖的阳光里
9.be arranged in gd rder 井井有条
10. in the puring rain 在瓢泼大雨中
11.clear up(天气）放晴
12.cntinuus/cnstant snw 连续不断的大雪
13.be bathed in the sunshine 沐浴在阳光中
14.a dark,rainy night 漆黑的雨夜
15.in a mess一片混乱
读后续写冲刺训练常用语句
1.They fund the farm green with vegetables,the little huse livable and hmey.
他们发现农场上长着绿油油的蔬菜，小屋布置得舒适温馨。
2.The breeze suddenly swung arund t their backs and began t gather strength.
微风突然转向，朝他们身后吹来，而且越吹越强。
3. The curse headed nrth fr five miles, wandered west fr a hilly mile, then
turned suth again alng a winding rad.
跑道的路线先是北上五英里，然后向西折上一英里的山道，然后再重新往南转入一段蜿蜒曲折的道路。
4.It was raining lightly as he walked dwn the steps.
他走下台阶时，天正下着小雨。
5.The strm stpped and the sun came ut.
暴雨停了，太阳出来了。
6. All was quite and there was nly mnlight.
只有月光，周围一片寂静。
7.They were bumping ver a sandy track t the weed-chked 120-acre field.
他们颠簸在一条沙路上，朝一块面积120公顷，杂草丛生的田地开去。
8.It was a typical summer evening in June.The air was delicate and there was acmplete,abslute silence.
这是六月一个典型的夏日傍晚。空气柔和清新，四周静悄悄的，没有一丝声响。
9.The air was rich with spring;the sun was warm and yellwed n the asphalt.
空气中洋溢着春天的气息；太阳暖洋洋的，柏油马路上铺着一层黄色的光。
10.On that day the muntain was full f flwers,and the trees had new greenleaves.
那天山上开满了花，树上也长出了新的绿叶。
场景描写训练句式
As ______________________________________, （天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）he quickened his steps.
2. __________________(微风) strked his head , as if cmfrting all his tiredness.
3. Frm the distance, he saw _______________(昏暗的灯光) in the village.
4. She had n chice but t stp fr anther night. _________________(一股冷风吹来) and she started t miss the warmth f Tm’ s hug.
5. Silence between dad and me made me mre nervus and scared. At that mment, it was cmpletely dark _____________________(除了微弱的光) given ut by a few stars in the sky.
6. The dark, rainy evening, the wind, the thundering cluds_____________________(完全把我镇住了).
7. I clsed my eyes in the speeding car. ___________________________________________(蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深深的山谷)and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascinatin.
8. ______________________(泥土熟悉的芬芳)rse up t greet her. Wandering in the wds, Ally slwed her pace t find the little guy in the mixed air.
9. The sun lked at her with a glwing smile and the flwers____________________(快乐地朝着她点点头).
10. The breeze patted her n the face, warm and cmfrtable. Hwever, it seemed that Ally culdn’t catch sight f the wd warbler（莺） after a lng time wait.__________________(太阳落山), Ally was abut t leave.
模拟训练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jhn Blanchard std up, straightened his army unifrm(制服), and studied the crwd making their way thrugh the statin. He lked fr the girl whse heart he knew, but whse face he had never seen, the girl with a rse.
His interest in her began thirteen mnths ag in a library. Taking a bk ff the shelf, he fund himself fascinated, nt with the wrds f the bk, but with the ntes penciled in the margin (页边的空白). The sft handwriting shwed a thughtful sul and brilliant mind. In the frnt f the bk, he discvered the wner's name, Miss Hllis Maynell. With time and effrt he fund her address. She lived in New Yrk City. He wrte her a letter intrducing himself and inviting her t crrespnd (通信). The next day he was shipped verseas fr military service.
During the next year and ne mnth, the tw begun t knw each ther by mail. Each letter was a seed falling n bth hearts. A rmance was budding. Blanchard asked fr a phtgraph, but she refused. She felt that if he really cared, it wuldn't matter what she lked like.
When the day finally came fr him t return frm Eurpe, they scheduled their first meeting — 7 pm at the Grand Central Statin in New Yrk. “Yu'll recgnize me，” she wrte. “By the red rse I'll wear my dress.” S at 7：00 he was in the statin lking fr a girl whse heart he lved, but whse face he'd never seen.
A yung lady was cming tward him. Her figure was lng and slim; her blnde hair lay back frm her ears; her eyes were blue as flwers; her lips and chin had a gentle firmness, and in her pale green suit she was like springtime cming alive. He went tward her, entirely frgetting t ntice that she was nt wearing a rse. As he mved, a middle aged wman whispered, “Ging my way, Sir？”
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
Almst uncntrllably he made his way t the wman, and then he nticed that she was wearing a red rse.
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Paragraph 2：
The wman's face bradened int a big smile.
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翻译小练习：
约翰·布兰查德看到这个40多岁的女人很失望。
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2. 没错，她就是他等的那个女孩。
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3. 尽管他想跟着那位年轻的女士，他还是停下来，朝那位女士走去，向她打招呼，并拿出他在图书馆里找到的那本书。
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4. “我是约翰·布兰查德，你一定是霍利斯·梅内尔小姐。我非常高兴你能见到我，我可以请你吃饭吗？”
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5. “我不知道这是怎么回事，”她回答说，“但是刚才路过的那个穿着淡绿色西装的年轻女士求我把红玫瑰戴在我的外套上。
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6. 她说如果你要请我吃饭，我应该告诉你她在街对面的餐厅等你。她说这是个考验！”
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