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Part 1：by using simile marker “like”——用like作喻词
1. The smile n her face shne like a diamnd. （情感描写）
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
2. I feel like I am flating in an cean f sadness.（情感描写）
我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。
3. The scenery alng the jurney is just like a breath-taking landscape painting. (景物描写)
沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。
4. The icy wind started hwling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.(景物描写)
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。
5. Clusters f stars decrated the vast sky like sparkling jewels.(景物描写)
繁星像珊珊发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。
【小试牛刀】
1. 这本书陪伴了我很久就像一位我的老朋友似的。
2. 他茫然地看着我就像一个傻子。
3. 他就像一头疯牛一样冲我吼。（mad cw）
4. 他非常着急就像热锅上的蚂蚁一样。
5. 他僵在那里一动不动就像一块石头。
【参考答案】
1. The bk has accmpanied me fr quite a lng time like an ld friend.
2. He lked at me blankly like a fl.
3. He shuted at me like a mad cw.
4. He is anxius like an ant n a ht pan.
5. He std still like a stne.

Part 2：by using simile marker “”——用作喻词
1. The smile n her face was as vibrant as the sun n a summer day（情感描写）
她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。
2. Father rushed t his sn's schl, nly t discver the building was as flat as pancake煎饼.(景物描写)
父亲冲到儿子的学校后，才发现这座建筑已经变成一片废墟。
3. I reached ut t tuch her face, which was as cld as the ice. (人物描写)
我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。
更多搭配：
as busy as a bee 忙忙碌碌
as hungry as a wlf 饥肠辘辘
as prud as a peacck 傲如孔雀
as brave as a lin 勇猛如狮
as pretty as a picture 美如画

【小试牛刀】
1. 我的心和蜂蜜一样甜。
2. 他的心和石头一样硬。
3. 他的身体和牛一样壮实。
4. 我们面前的景色美如一幅画。
5. 这辆公交车走的像蜗牛一样慢。
【参考答案】
1. My heart is as sweet as hney.
2. His heart is as hard as a stne.
3. His bdy is as strng as a cw.
4. The scenery befre us is as beautiful as a picture.
5. The bus went as slwly as a snail.
Part 3：by using simile marker “as if”——用as if作喻词
1.Mrs Sather lked at my eyes as if (she were) seeing my inner self lcked away inside. （动作描写）
Sather老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。
2. She swept her sn int her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted t squeeze the breath ut f him.（动作描写）
她眼睛湿润，把儿子拥进怀里，仿佛想把他的呼吸挤出来。
3.Her hair grew greyer and greyer, as if( it were )cvered with snw and frst.
（肖像描写）
他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。
4. She felt as if her heart had been ripped frm her bdy.（情感描写）
她感觉自己心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。

【小试牛刀】
1. 他感觉彷佛整个世界都崩塌了。
2. 他在操场上自由地奔跑彷佛他是一只快乐的小鸟。
3. 他无辜地看着我好像他什么都不知道似的。
4. 他感觉他的心脏被刀子捅了一刀。（stab）
【参考答案】
1. He felt as if the whle wrld had fallen apart n him.
2. He was running n the sprts field as if he was a happy bird.
3. He lked at me inncently as if he didn't knw anything.
4. He felt as if his heart had been stabbed by a knife.

二、metaphr暗喻
暗喻是比喻修辞的一种，用一种事物比喻另一种事物，本体喻体都出现，中间常用喻词“是”等连接，有时不用喻词。暗喻的典型形式为：甲是乙，而不用like, as等喻词。
Mney smetimes is a pisn.
钱有时候是一种毒药。
Part 1：by using the link wrd “be”——通过be动词联系
1. Her hair was a flwing glden river streaming dwn her shulders. （肖像描写）
她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。
2. The beautiful park was a scented carpet f clr.(景物描写)
美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。
3. Stp being such a baby. (人物描写)
别这么幼稚好不好。
4. Life is an unexplred river. full f twists and turns.(哲理)
生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。
Part 2：by using the verbs——通过动词联系
1. I felt a lump in my thrat, tearing welling up in my eyes.（情感描写）
我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。
2. He desn't have an idea f his wn. He just parrts what ther peple say.(人物描写)
他没有自己的观点，只会鹦鹉学舌。
3. A heavy silence blanketed the rm.（环境描写）
整个房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。
4. The by wlfed dwn the fd.（动作描写）
小男孩狼吞虎咽。

找出下面句子里面的修辞
1. My very thught was like the ghstly rustle f dead leaves.
2.He lked as if he had just stepped ut f my bk f fairy tales.
3. Wind and rain nw whipped（鞭打） the huse.
参考答案：1. 明喻 2.明喻 3. 暗喻

找出下面句子里面的修辞
1. My mther is like a cat in winter, ffering warmth t me.
2.The wind sunded like a rar f a train passing by.
3. Husehld and medical supplies streamed in by plane, train, truck and car.
参考答案：1. 明喻 2. 明喻 3. 暗喻
三、persnificatin拟人
Part 1：把自然现象当作人来描写
1. The wind std up and gave a shut . (景物描写)
大风凛冽，发出怒吼。
2. The breeze gently kissed her cheeks. (景物描写)
微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。
3. The feathery snwflakes danced in the night air, making a beautiful picture.(景物描写)
鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。
4.The mist swallwed him up. (景物描写)
薄雾把他包围起来。
5.The icy wind started hwling, stinging my face.(景物描写)
寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
6. Stars winked at me in a darkening sky.(景物描写)
夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。
7. Immediately, an abslute darkness ruled the frest.(景物描写)
顷刻间，黑暗统治了森林。
Part 2：把含蓄抽象的概念当作人来描写
1. Fear seized/swallwed him.（情感描写）
恐惧把他吞噬了。
2. Anger chked my wrds.（情感描写）
我气得说不出话来。
3. A gd idea suddenly struck me.
我突然想到一个好主意。
4. Smile tk hld f him.（情感描写）
他笑容满面。
5. Anxiety trn him int pieces.（情感描写）
她焦虑不安，十分崩溃。
6. Curage/Cnfidence deserted him.（情感描写）他没信心了。
7. Excitement deprived me f all pwer f speech.（情感描写）
我兴奋的啥也说不出来了。

Part 3：把动物当作人来描写
1. In the dead f night, the crickets蟋蟀 played n the terrace f the huse.
寂静的夜，蟋蟀旁若无人地在房子的阳台上玩。(景物描写)
2. Birds n the tree are singing a beautiful sng.(景物描写)
树上的小鸟在树上唱着美妙的歌曲。
3. The frgs are giving a cncert---mixed chrus.(景物描写)
青蛙在举办音乐会---混声大合唱。
4.Fireflies patrl the grass with small lanterns (景物描写)
萤火虫提着小灯笼在草丛中巡逻。
【练习】
1. 夏天的微风轻轻地抚摸着我的脸。
2. 细雨轻轻地亲吻着我的脸颊。
3. 我能听到到处都是鸟儿在歌唱。
4. 这个教堂目睹了这个城市20年的变化。
【参考答案】
1. The summer breeze tuched my face gently.
2. The drizzle kissed me n my cheek gently.
3. I culd hear birds singing everywhere.
4. The church has witnessed the city's changes in the past 20 years.
四、hyperble 夸张
Hyperble：It is the deliberate use f verstatement r understatement t achieve emphasis.
夸张是比喻修辞的一种，是以言过其实的说法表达强调的目的，它可以加强语拾势，增加表达效果。
Part 1：使用数词或量词
1. My heart brke in abut a millin pieces.（情感描写）
我的心成了碎片。
2. She was half dead with fear.（情感描写）
她吓得半死。
3. Thanks a millin.
非常感谢你。
4. I‘ve tld yu a millin times.
我都告诉你多少次了。
5. The backpack weighs a tn.
背包很重。
Part 2：使用动词
1. The yung girl brught the huse dwn with her perfrmance.
这位年轻姑娘的表演博得了满堂喝彩。
2. It made me jump ut f my skin. （情感描写）
吓得我魂不附体。
3.I almst laughed my head ff.（情感描写）
我都快笑死了。
4. My bld frze.（情感描写）
我的血液都凝固了。
5. She cried her eyes ut. （情感描写）
她痛哭涕流。
6. It brught her heart int her muth.（情感描写） 让她的心悬到了嗓子眼。
7. My heart sank when he left.（情感描写）当他离开时我心都碎了。
Part 3：使用形容词和副词
在日常对话中，人们常用形容词或者副词去修饰微不足道的事情，目的就是为了渲染一种气氛，强调某种意义的事情。
如副词：extremely；awfully；terribly；perfectly；hrribly等等
形容词：miserable; hrrible; splendid等等
例如： It's beautiful, heavenly beautiful.(景物描写)
那儿很漂亮，就像天堂那般漂亮。

Part 4：使用介词短语
1. She went hme in a fld f tears.（情感描写）
她泪如泉涌地回家去了。
类似表达：She shed flds f tears.
2. When they tld the news, I was ver the mn/ n the tp f the wrld.（情感描写）
当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。
3. He was bent ut f shape（情感描写）
他非常生气（气到变形）

找出下面句子里面的修辞
1.The wind whispers in the tree.
2. The nise was lud enugh t wake the dead.
3. His speech brught the huse dwn.
4. The ld Venice fell asleep again.
参考答案：1.拟人 2. 夸张 3.夸张 4. 拟人

找出下面句子里面的修辞
1. The sun brke thrugh the cluds and jumped ut f the sea.
2. The birds danced happily n the branch.
3. She eats like a bird.
参考答案：1. 拟人 2. 拟人 3. 明喻

找出下面句子里面的修辞
1. The lud music almst drve me up a wall.
2. The night gently lays her hand at ur fevered heads.
3. The vlcan spit ut lava frm its muth.
4. He is dying fr this pprtunity.
参考答案：1. 夸张 2. 拟人 3. 拟人 4. 夸张
模拟训练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Old Man Dnvan was a mean man wh hated children. He threw rcks at them and even sht at them with a shtgun. At least that’s what we had heard.
His small farm brdered ur neighbrhd where my yunger sister, Leigh Ann, and I lived when we were grwing up. His farm was lng, narrw, and quaint. It held tw treasures. One was his beautiful fruit.
There were many varieties f fruit: pears, apples, and lts mre I just can't think f. The fruit naturally drew the children t his land. It made them int thieves. But my sister and I didn't dare t take his fruit because f the hrrible rumrs we had heard abut Old Man Dnvan.
One summer day, we were playing in a nearby field. It was time t head back hme. My sister and I were feeling very daring that day. There was a shrt cut t ur huse that went thrugh the Dnvan farm. We thught he wuldn't be able t see us run acrss his prperty arund the luscius fruit trees. We were almst thrugh the farm when we heard, "Hey, girl!" in a gruff, lw vice. We stpped dead in ur tracks! There we were, face t face with Old Man Dnvan. Our knees were shaking. We had visins f rcks punding ur bdies and bullets piercing ur hearts.
"Cme here," he said, reaching up t ne f his apple trees. Still shaking, we went ver t him. He held ut several ripe, juicy, red apples. "Take these hme,” he cmmanded. We tk the apples with surprised hearts and ran all the way hme. Of curse, Leigh Ann and I ate the apples.
As time went n, we ften went thrugh Old Man Dnvan's farm, and he kept n giving us mre luscius fruit. One day, we stpped by t see him when he was n his frnt prch. We talked t him fr hurs. While he was talking, we realized that we had fund the ther hidden treasure: the sweet, kind hearthidden behind his gruff vice. Sn, he was ne f ur favrite peple t talk t. Unfrtunately, his family never seemed t enjy ur cmpany. They never smiled r welcmed us in.
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Every summer, we wuld visit Mr. Dnvan and talk t him.
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The next winter, wrd gt arund that Old Man Dnvan had died.
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翻译小练习：
1. 我们和他分享了我们在学校的丰富多彩的经验，而他像往常一样不断地给我们分发美味的水果。
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2. 随着时间的推移，我们似乎更像是一个家庭而不是好朋友，他的家人渐渐地以温暖的微笑迎接我们。
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3. 但有一年夏天，我们被告知他病得很重，我们焦急不安，感觉坐立不安。
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4. 第二天，我们直接赶到医院看他的健康状况。
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5. 尽管他很虚弱，但他安慰我们说这没什么大不了的。
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6. 我们是从他的家人那里知道真相的。
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7.老人Dnvan在照看水果时从树上摔下来，头部受了重伤，需要动手术。
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8. 手术可能不会成功，他是生是死是一场赌博。
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9. 听到这个坏消息，我和妹妹简直不敢相信，直到我们回到家，看到墙上挂着他的笑脸。
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10. 我感到喉咙哽了一下，眼里涌出泪水。
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11. 家人走近我们，欢迎我们。“对你的损失我很抱歉。”
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12. 我给了他们一个大大的拥抱。在回家的路上，风呼啸着穿过树林，仿佛在为Dnvan的死而哀悼。
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13. 我意识到我们坐在一起聊天的日子一去不复返了。
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14. 我意识到我们有幸尝到他种的美味水果的日子一去不复返了。
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15. 然而，他却给我们留下了一份隐藏的宝藏——他那颗永远不会随着时间流逝而消亡的善良的心。
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参考答案：
1. 我们和他分享了我们在学校的丰富多彩的经验，而他像往常一样不断地给我们分发美味的水果。
We shared with him ur clrful experience at schl while he kept giving ut his luscius fruits t us as usual.
2. 随着时间的推移，我们似乎更像是一个家庭而不是好朋友，他的家人渐渐地以温暖的微笑迎接我们。
As time went by, we seemed t be mre a family than gd friends and his family gradually came t greet us with a warm smile.
3. 但有一年夏天，我们被告知他病得很重，我们焦急不安，感觉坐立不安。
But ne summer, we were infrmed that he was seriusly ill and we were anxius and restless, feeling like sitting n pins and needles.
4. 第二天，我们直接赶到医院看他的健康状况。
The next day, we rushed straight t the hspital t see his health cnditin.
5. 尽管他很虚弱，但他安慰我们说这没什么大不了的。
Weak as he was, he cmfrted us that it wasn’t a big deal.
6. 我们是从他的家人那里知道真相的。
It was frm his family that we knew the truth.
7.老人Dnvan在照看水果时从树上摔下来，头部受了重伤，需要动手术。
Old Man Dnvan had fell frm a tree while lking after the fruits and his head was seriusly hurt and need an peratin.
8. 手术可能不会成功，他是生是死是一场赌博。
The peratin might nt succeed and it was a gamble whether he wuld live r die.
9. 听到这个坏消息，我和妹妹简直不敢相信，直到我们回到家，看到墙上挂着他的笑脸。
Hearing the bad news, my sister and I just culdn’t believe it until we went back hme and saw his smiling face n the wall.
10. 我感到喉咙哽了一下，眼里涌出泪水。
I felt a lump in my thrat, tears welling up in my eyes.
11. 家人走近我们，欢迎我们。“对你的损失我很抱歉。”
The family apprached and welcmed us. “ I’m srry fr yur lss.”
12. 我给了他们一个大大的拥抱。在回家的路上，风呼啸着穿过树林，仿佛在为Dnvan的死而哀悼。
I gave them a big hug. On my way back hme, the wind whistled thrugh the trees, as if murning fr the death f Dnvan.
13. 我意识到我们坐在一起聊天的日子一去不复返了。
I realized gne were the days when we sat tgether chatting with each ther.
14. 我意识到我们有幸尝到他种的美味水果的日子一去不复返了。
I realized gne were the days when we were lucky enugh t have a taste f the luscius fruit grwn by him.
15. 然而，他却给我们留下了一份隐藏的宝藏——他那颗永远不会随着时间流逝而消亡的善良的心。
Hwever, he left us a hidden treasure-- his kind heart, which shall never die away with the passage f time.
参考范文：
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Every summer, we wuld visit Mr. Dnvan and talk t him. We shared with him ur clrful experience at schl while he kept giving ut his luscius fruits t us as usual. As time went by, we seemed t be mre a family than gd friends and his family gradually came t greet us with a warm smile. But ne summer, we were infrmed that he was seriusly ill and we were anxius and restless, feeling like sitting n pins and needles. The next day, we rushed straight t the hspital t see his health cnditin. Weak as he was, he cmfrted us that it wasn’t a big deal. It was frm his family that we knew the truth. Old Man Dnvan had fell frm a tree while lking after the fruits and his head was seriusly hurt and need an peratin. The peratin might nt succeed and it was a gamble whether he wuld live r die.
Paragraph 2
The next winter, wrd gt arund that Old Man Dnvan had died. Hearing the bad news, my sister and I just culdn’t believe it until we went back hme and saw his smiling face n the wall. I felt a lump in my thrat, tears welling up in my eyes. The family apprached and welcmed us. “ I’m srry fr yur lss.” I gave them a big hug. On my way back hme, the wind whistled thrugh the trees, as if murning fr the death f Dnvan. I realized gne were the days when we sat tgether chatting with each ther. I realized gne were the days when we were lucky enugh t have a taste f the luscius fruit grwn by him. Hwever, he left us a hidden treasure-- his kind heart, which shall never die away with the passage f time.
模拟训练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Waking with Misty
In 2004, when my daughter Becky was ten, she and my husband, Je, were united in their desire fr a dg. As fr me, I shared nne f their desire.
But why, they pleaded(恳求 ). “Because I dn’t have time t take care f a dg.” But we'll d it. " Really? Yu're ging t walk the dg? Feed the dg? Bathe the dg? ” Yes, yes, and yes.
“ I dn't believe yu. " “We will.” We prmise
They didn’t. Frm day tw, neither thught t walk the dg. While I was slw t accept that I wuld be the ne t keep track f her shts, t schedule her vet appintments, t feed and clean her, Misty knew this n day ne.
Quickly, she and I develped smething very similar t a Vulcan mind meld. She' d lk at me with thse sad brwn eyes f hers, beam her need, and then wait, trusting I wuld understand. In n time, she became fifth appendage (附加物), snring n my hme-ffice cuch as I wrked, cradling against my feet as I read, and splaying acrss my stmach as I watched televisin.
Even s, part f me cntinued t dislike walking duty. Je and Becky had prmised. “Nt fair,” I'd ludly remind anyne within earsht upn ur return hme
Then ne day --January 1, 2007, t be exact ---my husband’s dctr uttered an unthinkable wrd: leukemia(白血病. With that, I spent eight t ten hurs a day with Je in the hspital ding anything and everything I culd t ease his discmfrt. During thse six mnths f hspitalizatins, Becky, 12 at the time, adjusted t ther adults being in the huse when she returned frm schl.
My wrk clleagues adjusted t my taking ff at a mment’s ntice fr medical emergencies. Every part f my life changed: n part f my ld rutine remained.
Save ne: Misty still needed waking. At the beginning, when friends ffered t take her thrugh her paces, I declined because I knew they had their wn husehlds t deal with.
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As the mnths went by, I began t realize that I actually wanted t walk Misty.
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After Je died in 2009, Misty slept n his pillw.
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1. 在我意识到这一点之前，我们之间的心已经变得足够强大，一直让我着迷。
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2. 在那些日子里，我大部分时间都花在了乔恩医院，几乎没有时间照顾贝基，更不用说米斯蒂了。
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3.但是无论什么时候只要我能陪她走一会儿，她就会是世界上最幸福的女孩，一秒钟像疯了似的在我周围跳跃，另一秒又像闪电一样冲了回来。
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4. 就在这一刻，我会感到有点放松。
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5. 晚上，当我躺在床上睡不着，或者醒来时，像往常一样，米斯蒂总是陪着我。
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6. 有一段时间，我觉得世界末日到了，我所有的希望都没有了，这当然是米斯蒂感觉到的。
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7. 每天，我的家里都会看到她玩新把戏或者做鬼脸来取悦我。
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8. 她一看见陌生人，就不再像以前那样大声吠叫，好像为了不打扰我似的。
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9. 渐渐地，我的生活改变了，深深的悲伤变成了对这样一个好伴侣的依恋和感激。
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10. 贝基一家三口，米斯蒂和我，带着希望又活跃起来了。
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参考答案：
1. 在我意识到这一点之前，我们之间的心已经变得足够强大，一直让我着迷。
Befre I knew it, the mind meld between us had grwn strng enugh t keep me spellbund, always.
2. 在那些日子里，我大部分时间都花在了乔恩医院，几乎没有时间照顾贝基，更不用说米斯蒂了。
In thse days, with mst f my time taken up attending t Jein hspital, little time was spared t take care f Becky, let alne Misty.
3.但是无论什么时候只要我能陪她走一会儿，她就会是世界上最幸福的女孩，一秒钟像疯了似的在我周围跳跃，另一秒又像闪电一样冲了回来。
But whenever I did manage t walk her fr a while, she wuld be the happiest girl in the wrld, ne secnd jumping abut me like mad, and anther dashing ahead befre rushing back like lightning.
4. 就在这一刻，我会感到有点放松。
It was at this mment that I wuld feel a little relaxed.
5. 晚上，当我躺在床上睡不着，或者醒来时，像往常一样，米斯蒂总是陪着我。
At night, when I lay wide awake r wke up with a start, as was ften the case, Misty was always there keeping me cmpany.
6. 有一段时间，我觉得世界末日到了，我所有的希望都没有了，这当然是米斯蒂感觉到的。
Fr a time, I felt the wrld was at an end, all f my hpes gne, which was sensed by Misty f curse.
7. 每天，我的家里都会看到她玩新把戏或者做鬼脸来取悦我。
And every day, my hme witnessed her playing a new trick r making faces t please me.
8. 她一看见陌生人，就不再像以前那样大声吠叫，好像为了不打扰我似的。
When catching sight f a stranger, she ceased t bark ludly as she used t, as if nt t disturb me.
9. 渐渐地，我的生活改变了，深深的悲伤变成了对这样一个好伴侣的依恋和感激。
Gradually, my life was changed with the deep srrw transfrmed int attachment t and gratitude fr such a nice cmpanin.
10. 贝基一家三口，米斯蒂和我，带着希望又活跃起来了。
The family f three—Becky, Misty and I, was lively again with hpe.
参考范文：
Paragraph1: As the mnths went by, I began t realize that I actually wanted t walk Misty. Befre I knew it, the mind meld between us had grwn strng enugh t keep me spellbund, always. In thse days, with mst f my time taken up attending t Jein hspital, little time was spared t take care f Becky, let alne Misty. But whenever I did manage t walk her fr a while, she wuld be the happiest girl in the wrld, ne secnd jumping abut me like mad, and anther dashing ahead befre rushing back like lightning. It was at this mment that I wuld feel a little relaxed.
After Je died in 2009, Misty slept n his pillw. At night, when I lay wide awake r wke up with a start, as was ften the case, Misty was always there keeping me cmpany. Fr a time, I felt the wrld was at an end, all f my hpes gne, which was sensed by Misty f curse. And every day, my hme witnessed her playing a new trick r making faces t please me. When catching sight f a stranger, she ceased t bark ludly as she used t, as if nt t disturb me. Gradually, my life was changed with the deep srrw transfrmed int attachment t and gratitude fr such a nice cmpanin. The family f three—Becky, Misty and I, was lively again with hpe.