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Part1 高兴
1.词汇和短语
①cheer n．& vi. 欢呼；喝彩
②delight n. 快乐；乐事
③pleasure n. 高兴，愉快
④happiness n. 幸福，愉快
⑤please vt. 使人高兴
⑥excited adj. 激动的
⑦thrilled adj. 兴奋的
⑧pleased adj. 高兴的
⑨merry adj. 愉快的
⑩be in high spirits 心情好
⑪burst int laughter 突然大笑起来
⑫be wild with jy 欣喜若狂
⑬culdn’t cntain his jy 抑制不住欣喜
⑭crack a smile 展颜微笑
⑮laugh a hearty laugh 开怀大笑
2.句子
①His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
②A smile f understanding flashed acrss his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③A ripple f excitement ran thrugh them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④Laughter lingered arund the rm.笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤The smile n her face shne like a diamnd.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
⑥A wild gaiety（快乐）tk hld f her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦Unfrgettable were her eyes that shne like diamnds and lips held in a steady smile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧Amusement gleamed in his eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
⑨I was pleased beynd descriptin.我高兴得难以形容。
⑩She wre a shining smile n her face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
⑪Her smile lit up the whle rm.她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
⑫She shed tears f jy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
⑬Her eyes were sparkling like diamnds.她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
⑭She was verflwing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
⑮Her flushed face was shining with excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
⑯Jy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
⑰I was flating n air.我漂浮在空中。
⑱His face beamed.他脸上露出了笑容。
⑲As my father helped me get n the tricycle, I burst int tears with great jy. “I am able t walk agaain!” I thught with great cheer.当我爸扶我上三轮车，我开心地哭了起来。“我重新可以行走了！”我开心地想到。
⑳I culdn’t believe what I had seen. My bdy began t shake with excitement.我简直难以相信我看到的一切。我的身体激动地颤抖了起来。
3.练习
①翻译：“当妈妈亲吻他时，小婴儿开心极了。”
1、用最基本的句型概括描述。
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2、请在此概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，使句子变得丰满。注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理性。
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②翻译：“当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动极了。”
1、用最基本的句型概括描述。
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2、请在概括描述的基础上增加细节描述，使句子变得丰满。注意逻辑关系以及语意的合理性。
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③填入漂亮的表达。
1)After what seemed a lng time, she culd hear a vice smewhere at a distance. _________(她两眼放光), she struggled t her feet and shuted, “I’m here!”
2)______________________(开心和放松的眼泪喷涌而出) as they finally held each ther tightly.
3)He rushed t her and hugged his wife firmly. _______________(他们那充满幸福的哭声)brke the silence in the frest.
4)With the dr pen, Tm ran ut. Seeing Jane, he was s excited and ___________(控制不住开心). He hugged Jane tightly.
参考答案：
1.When his mther kissed him, the baby was happy/delighted/full f jy.
2.1) When his mther kissed him n the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were n tp f the wrld. (非常开心)
2) When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek, his face beamed and his bright smile lit up the rm. (眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
3) When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek, his eyes danced with jy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)
1.When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, she felt thrilled.
2. 1) When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.（激动得两眼放光）
2) When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)
3) When the hst annunced that she wn the prize, a wide excitement tk hld f her. (兴奋不能自已)
With her eyes sparkling2) Tears f jy and relief welled up3) Their cry which was full f happiness4) culdn’t cntain his jy
Part 2 震惊犹豫
一、具体描写
脸部表情：
His eyes widened further and his muth pened. He tk a huge breath as if winded （喘 不过气） . He lked trtured –vulnerable. 他的眼睛瞪大了， 嘴巴张开。他深深地吸了一口气 仿佛呼吸困难，他看起来饱受折磨，非常脆弱。
His eyes spring pen(刷地一下睁开了).
肢体动作：
He std a few mments withut saying a wrd 无话可说地站在那里
The car was gne in secnds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief. 难以置信地摇头
Hearing the bad news, Mary fainted away n the spt and fell int uncnsciusness.(当场 晕倒，陷入昏迷)
Hearing the bad news, Mary frze with shck, as if rted n the grund. (僵住了，像扎根 在地上一样)
Press ne’s hand upn ne’s heart 用手压住胸口
His eyes lifted slwly, met Mariam’s, lingered （徘徊） fr a mment, then drpped. He pened
his muth, but all that came frth was a single, pained gran. 呻吟。 He crssed and uncrssed his arms.(手盘起来又放下)
One flight （一段楼梯） up Della ran, and paused fr a mment, panting. 气喘吁吁 She was wndering whether she shuld pen the dr .
She had pulled this pigtail arund her neck, and was biting the end f the ribbn, resting her elbws n the desk, as she stared wnderingly at the new pupil.
内心活动：
She tried n the rnaments befre the mirrr, hesitated and culd nt make up her mind t part with(分开) them, t give them back.
Then she asked, hesitating, filled with anxius dubt.
语言描写
Yu are pulling my leg, aren't yu? 你不是开玩笑吧?
I can't believe my eyes. 我简直不能相信自己的眼睛。
Incredible. 真不可思议。
It's t gd t be true. 哪有这等好事?
I dn't buy yur stry. 我才不信你的鬼话呢。
He is a dubting Thmas. 他是个疑心很重的人。
I feel puzzled. 我感到很茫然。
It's dubtful whether this will wrk. 我怀疑这会不会起作用
I'm really unsure abut what I want t d. 我真的不确定我想做什么。
It's up in the air. 还没确定。
I can't say fr sure. 我也说不准。
二、氛围渲染
I sensed a flash f\a flicker f\ a gust f surprise in his eyes. 我感觉到他眼里 的一丝惊讶。
The sky is vercast, darkened with glmy cluds ， (乌云密布、黑云压顶) and the whle wrld seemed t be envelped in a huge gray quilt. 整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。
三、俗语表达
jaw drp 表达大吃一惊，目瞪口呆
例： My jaw drpped when I heard that they were getting married three days after their first date.听说他们第一次约会三天后就要结婚了，我大吃一惊。
knck me dwn with a feather 表达对某事十分震惊
例： When I gt the news that my brther was admitted by Harvard University, yu culd have kncked me dwn with a feather. 得知弟弟被哈佛大学录取的消息， 我太震惊了。
a blt frmthe blue 一般用来表达意外事件，犹如晴天霹雳
例： Grandfather's death was really a blt frm the blue fr me. 祖父去世的消息对我来说简 直是晴天霹雳。
Part3 悲伤
必备好词
名词，动词 ：sadness , srrw ,grief,depressin , sink (vi.消沉)
形容词/副词：
sad , srrwful ,painful , frustrasted , depressed , heart-brken, sadly, painfully,
满分短语：
① sb/ weep with ne' s face hidden in ne' s hands掩面啜泣② cry ne's heart/ eyes ut悲痛欲绝
3.be dwn /lw in spirits 情绪低落
④ in a srrwful tne/vice伤心地说
⑤ be vercme with srrw悲伤不已
6. with a heavy/ sinking/ srrwful/ brken heart怀着沉重/沮丧/难过的心7.fight back tears抑制住泪水
必背好句：
肢体动作、语言描写+情感词汇
1.I felt s unhappy abut what he had said that I just sank
int the sfa and cried
他的话让我很不开心,我一屁股坐在沙发上哭了起来。
2. The expressin n her facc upset Mr. Smith deeply. With a
heavy heart, Mr. Smith walked hme
她脸上的表情让史密斯先生很难过,他心情沉重地走回家。
3. He paused, and cvered his face with his hands/buried/hid
his face in his hands, t upset t speak.
他将脸埋在手里,难过得说不下去了4.. She was numb with grief as she watched him g. Inside
cach, she cried the bitterest tears f her life
她看着他离去悲伤得失去知觉。马车内,她流下了一生中
最伤心的泪。
神态描写十情感词汇
1,She held the letter, her hands shaking/shivering and
her eyes shwing deep srrw f being ttally frgtten.
她拿着信,双手颤抖,眼晴流露出被完全遗忘的深深悲伤
2. He shk his head miserably/ sadly, tears puring/running/streamig/rlling dwn his cheeks/face
他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。
3.Her heart ached.She was seized by a burst f sadness and culdnt help crying/sbbing bitterly
她心好痛,她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。
借用修辞手法或无灵主语句
1.His last wrd went like a bullet t her heart. she burst int
tears and ran ut f the rm.(比喻)
他最后一句话太扎心了。她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间
2. As he lked at Katherine, great srrw/ sadness cluded his
eyes.(无灵主语句)
他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
3.I felt like I were flating in an cean f sadness, and wrds
culd nt express my srrw.(比喻)
我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。言语无法表达我的哀伤。
4. He felt as if a knife were cutting his heart.(拟人)
他觉得心如刀割。
5.Franklin's heart sank when Mr. Bragg said he wanted t cme back fr a send visit .
当布拉格先生说他想再来一次时,富兰克林的心都凉了。
6. A wave f sadness welled up inside her. Tears were beginning t gather in her eyes.(无灵主语句)
一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。她眼里涌上泪水。
7.When he heard the news f his friends accident, a frwn std n his face and his face cluded ver(无灵主语句)
当他听说他的朋友出了事故时,他眉头紧锁满脸愁容
8.Grief/Sadness/ Srrw came in waves. He sank nt the chair ,crying his eyes ut .
悲伤如潮水一般涌来。他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。
practise：
1.利用仿写效仿素材补全以下各句，并背诵。
他双手捂着脸悲伤的抽泣着。
He sbbed sadly, hiding/cvering her face in her hands
孤独和悲伤不断涌上心头，泪水模糊了他的眼睛。
The lneliness and grief/sadness/srrw came in waves. Tears half behind her.
听到这个消息，他绝望了借酒消愁。
Hearing the news ,s desperate was he that he drwned his sadness in wine
她伤心地低下头，努力忍住眼泪。
She hung her head in sadness ,and tried t fight back tears
我们告诉玛丽莎，不去迪士尼乐园了，她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
When we tld Mary that we wuld nt be ging t Disneyland , she burst int tears and ran ut f the rm
他非常沮丧，他的手颤抖着，满眼忧伤。
She was very upset. Her hands were shaking, and great srrw/
sadness cluded her eyes.
那条狗躺在他脚下，不时地抬起头来看看大大的眼睛里满是忧伤。
The dg lay at his feet,lking up frm time t time with bigsad eyes
2.按要求完成以下各题。
1.被告知那个坏消息，他悲伤不已。
1.先尝试用概括描述，将意思表达清楚。
1.(1)Infrmed f the bad news, she felt extremely bad.
在概括描述基础上增加细节，描述最逻辑关系注意逻辑的合理。
1.心痛倏然泪下。
Infrmed f the bad news, she felt her heart ached, tears
streaming/ rlling/flwing/running dwn her cheeks/ face.
2.悲恸欲绝，倒在椅上，哭得死去活来。
Infrmed f the bad news , she was seized by a burst f sadness and sank nt the chair
3.悲痛欲绝,漂浮在悲伤的海洋。
Infrmed f the bad news, she was
feeling like she were flating in an cean f sadness
4.悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话。
Infrmed f the bad news, she, numb with grief, had truble
speaking
请根据所给情节尝试续写一个王华考试失利之后难过的片段，通过动作神态和氛围描写。等表现人物的难过描写中可适当添加对情感的描写
Wang Hua failed t wrk ut the tw questins n the math paper ,
and the bell rang, signaling the ending f the exam.
WangHua dragged her heavy legs with a sinking heart and mved ut f the classrm. She drppe/hung her head in sadness, great srrw clunding her eyes .An air f sadness culd be sensed ten me
meters away. Sn, her eyes began t water. Definitely, she wuld
sadness cluding her eyes. An air f sadness culd be sensed ten meters away. Sn, her eyes began t water . Definitely she wuld fail the math exam!Disappintment and sadness came in waves and tears streamed dwn her cheeks. The nly thing she was desperae t d was rush back hme and thrw herself int her little bed and
weep, wildly!
Part4 紧张
一、短语积累
take a deep breath 深呼吸
in panic 恐慌地
can’t help trembling 情不自禁发抖
hld ne’s breath 屏住呼吸
pace back and frth 来回踱步
swallw hard 强咽口水
freeze with terrr 吓呆
heart sink 心头一沉
heart in ne’s muth 提心吊胆
n pins and needles 如坐针毡
写作语料
I. 通过面部表情表现紧张、害怕
1. The three bys were terrified. Their faces were pale, and their hearts were beating very fast.
2. Her eyes widened with hrrr.
3. He turned t me with his eyes full f hrrr.
4. A bright light flashed by, and the bys were s frightened that they screamed.
II. 通过动作表达紧张、害怕
1. Uneasily, she shuffled her feet.
2. Althugh it was summer, I wuld carefully lck my windws at night and then lie there and sweat in fear.
3. Linda swallwed hard when she thught f the pssibility that her lucky shes were gne frever.
4. With n sign f her lucky shes, she gt int such a panic that her thrat tightened, and her knees felt weak.
5. Her vice was shaking despite all her effrts t cntrl it.
6. Michael apprached the cunter, squeezing (紧捏) the lse bills in his hand nervusly.
7. As we walked tward the elevatrs, I began t feel anxius. The palms f my hands began t sweat.
8. She was terribly anxius abut the cmpetitin, s much s that she culdn’t even eat breakfast.
9. Lucy was very nervus. She had a swimming cmpetitin in the mrning and culd nt sleep. She tssed and turned (辗转反侧) all night.
III. 通过心理活动表现紧张、害怕
1. It gave me nightmares.
2. My heart was pumping.
3. Jbie picked up the pace, her heart punding luder the clser she gt.
4. When she reached the place she’d left them, her heart sank.
5. Jack frze with shck, unable t utter a single wrd.
6. A fit f dizziness came ver her, and she hardly had the strength t stand firm.
7. A fld f fear welled up in him.
8. He was seized/verwhelmed by a strng feeling f terrr.
IV. 通过习语表达紧张、害怕
1. Her heart missed/skipped a beat.
2. The sund f ftsteps in the dark made his bld run cld (毛骨悚然).
3. I was shaking like a leaf when I went up t deliver my speech in frnt f all thse peple.
4. I didn’t hear yu cme int the rm. Yu made me jump ut f my skin (吓一跳).
5. Tm had his heart in his muth because it was his first day being the chief.
6. As he held my hand tightly, I gt butterflies in my stmach (七上八下).
7. When the teacher asks her t read the text, she gets cld feet (害怕，胆怯).
总体氛围渲染
1. And suddenly everything went green, like right befre a trnad.（一切变得昏暗）
2. The September 11 terrrist attacks left many f us cnfusin and fear（让我们处于困扰和恐惧的状态）.
Part 5 愤怒
一 、具体身体部位感觉 脸部表情：
1. Charlie glwered(怒视) when I asked him t cme frward.
2. His face was red with anger/rage(愤怒)
3. My teacher’s eyes were shining with anger .
肢体动作
1. He stiffened(僵硬) fr secnds and then shuffled (拖曳、慢慢走) his feet frward, eyes red with fury(愤怒) but withut any fear r hesitatin.
2. The bss is up in arms abut the cmpany's pr sales recrd in the past few mnths. (举起双 臂，抖动两个拳头, 表示愤怒)
3. He clenched his fists. 他紧握拳头.
4. She shk her fist at him (i.e. as an angry threatening gesture). 她向他挥动拳头.
5. she stamped her ft in anger. 气得直跺脚
6. She threw the invitatin n the table with annyance, murmuring...
7. He ran ut f the rm in a burst f anger 怒气冲冲
8. My vice sunds like a grwling（咆哮） , angry bear.
内心活动
1. She culd feel the anger grwing, bubbling up inside her . (如气泡一般变大)
4. Anger engulfed 吞噬 him like a wild beast.
5. I had an undercurrent resentment （对...心怀不满） twards the new prpsal.
6. He was sweating and burning with rage.
7. His friend, whse patience had wrn thin(耐心被消磨光了), phned t cmplain.
8. His was biling with rage.
9. He was filled with fury （愤怒）
二、总体氛围渲染
1. The reply f the man again fueled the flish fficer’s anger(火上浇油、更加愤怒). 次要他人和周围环境
1. Everyne lked at me in hrrr. All f a sudden, deadly silence settled ver the crwd, and even the sft breeze seemed t becme distressing(令人烦闷的).
2. The nise was mre f a scream, building int a deep, rasping rar, and ending in a deafening hiss. 吵闹声更多的是尖叫声， 融入低沉的，令人心焦的咆哮，最后以震耳欲聋的嘶嘶声结 束。
3. A thughtless harshness (暴戾之气)culd be felt even 10 yards away.
4. The temperature in the rm seemed t have drpped, and every single man culd feel the chill brught by him.