Module 3 Journey to space话题作文 - 2023-2024学年八年级下册英语同步检测（外研版）

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Module 3 Journey to space话题作文1．假如你梦想着当一名宇航员去太空旅行。请你根据以下提示，以My dream为题写一篇英语短文，内容提示：1. 在很小的时候你就对各种飞机感兴趣。2. 从此之后，你经常在收看太空新闻，经常阅读关于太空旅行方面的书籍。3. 10岁时你开始做宇宙飞机模型，现在你已经做了2个飞机模型，大家都说你做的模型很独特，新颖，去年你还参加了飞机模型比赛并获了一等奖。可能用到的词汇：interested, news, space travel, make model planes, win the first prize要求： 1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。2.词数80词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）My dreamEveryone has a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut. 【答案】例文：My dreamEveryone has a dream. My dream is to be an astronaut in the future. When I was very young, I was interested in different kinds of planes. Then I often watched the news about the space travel on TV and on the Internet. I like the shows very much. Sometimes I also read some books about the space travel, too. At the age of ten, I began to make model planes alone. I have made two model planes so far. Many people say they are quite unique and new. I feel very proud. Last year, I also entered a model plane competition. I also won the first prize for it. I decided to study harder to be an astronaut in the future.I hope that my dream will come true soon.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，注意正确使用人称和时态。[写作步骤]第一步，概述自己的梦想；第二步，结合自己的经历具体介绍对太空的热爱；第三步，表达作者希望自己的梦想成真。[亮点词汇]①alone独自②so far到目前为止③different kinds of各种各样的……④begin to do sth开始做某事[高分句型]①I decided to study harder to be an astronaut in the future.（不定式结构“to be an astronaut”表达目的）②I hope that my dream will come true soon.（that引导的宾语从句）2．最近你们班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：是否应该太空探险？请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO?We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO?We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. Some of us thought it was important to research the outer space because, first of all, people could get a better understanding of the outer space. Second, we could find new resources for humans to use. Third, these explorations could possibly enlarge new living space for human beings. However, others thought very differently. They said this kind of exploration cost too much money. Besides, it was very dangerous for astronauts to do such work. In my opinion, people should research the outer space and such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“是否应该太空探险”为主题，根据表格提示，介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点，必要时可进行适当发挥。2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一、三人称和一般过去时为主来叙述，写作时承接开头，要写出同学们赞同或反对的理由，清楚地表明自己的看法，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。3．太空是浩瀚的、神秘的。人类对宇宙一直不断地探索，请根据你所学的太空知识，描述一下你心目中的宇宙。再结合你自己的感想，向同学们说说你未来的打算。可适当发挥。内容包括：(1) universe, galaxy, solar system, earth, moon;(2) scientists, do research about, Chinese space station;(3) astronaut, in the future.作文要求：(1)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。(2)语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Hello, everybody! It’s my turn to tell you something about the space. As you know, the universe is very large. There are many galaxies in the universe. For example, the galaxy has billions of stars. The sun is one of them in the solar system. The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.So far, scientists have done a lot of research about space. Especially, our Chinese astronauts have been to the space many times. We have built a great space station. Now, they are working in our own space station. I am very proud of our country. So I will study hard. I will be an astronaut in the future. What about you? Thanks.【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；③ 提示：文章的要点是通过关键词的形式给出，因此考生应注意围绕中心和关键词来对要点进行拓展，并符合逻辑结构，重点突出。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，可用“轮到我来给你讲一下太空”来引出主题，即关于宇宙的介绍；第二步，围绕关键词串联起科学家所做的事情，注意此处文章时态可以“现在完成时”为主；第三步，结尾总结，表明自己想成为宇航员的意原，去探索宇宙。[亮点词汇]① billions of上十亿的② one of其中之一③ so far到目前为止④ be proud of为……自豪[高分句型]① It’s my turn to tell you something about the space.（it’s ones turn to do sth表示轮到某人做某事）② The earth goes round the sun and the moon goes round the earth.（并列连词and连接的两个并列句子）4．假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。请根据上述材料，以An Exciting Trip为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅。要求表达准确，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥，词数在80左右。An Exciting Trip 【答案】例文：An Exciting TripToday is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago.We went to the Mars by spaceship. On Mars we visited everywhere. We found a lot of things different from our earth, such as big stones which can speak. It’s amazing.After that, we had a party. Many aliens took an active part in the party. Their songs were very nice.Finally, we made phone calls with aliens. We all have a good time on Mars.The trip was very interesting and I will never forget the trip. I hope to travel to the Mars again soon.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。要求以“An Exciting Trip”为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅；内容包括在火星上举行聚会，与外星人(alien)通电话，以及你的所见所闻等；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般过去时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。5．假如你是玛丽，现在是2104年，你生活在火星上，你的朋友吉姆生活在地球上，不久他也将来火星生活。请根据以下表格提示，写一封email告诉他你在火星上的生活情况。要求80词左右，文中不得出现真实人名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Jim，Now, I'm writing to you on Mars. It's really wonderful to live on Mars. I think life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting than that on Earth. We have online schools instead of real ones. Most of our housework is done by robots so that we can have more time for our hobbies. Mars is very beautiful. There are green trees and fresh flowers everywhere, and there is no pollution here. We have supermarkets in our neighborhood. They make our life more convenient.Hope to see you soon. Good luck!Yours,Mary【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要注意电子邮件格式，开头先顶格写问候；正文开始要注意段首空两格；最后不要忘记了祝愿和落款，落款写在邮件右下角。2.例文点评：例文采用两段式；用第一人称来叙述作者在火星的生活和感受；时态采用一般现在时为主；写作顺序是按照表格内容记叙，从总体感觉到学习到生活到再到环境最后到生活设施，让文章显得重点突出，条理清晰；最后结尾和收件人互动，增加读者代入感。3.高分亮点：短语：instead of；make sth. convenient；so that。句型：It’s + adj. + to do sth.；so that引导的结果状语从句。【点睛】书面表达是英语考试中占分比比较大的一个题目，同学们在做题时可以按照“审（审题，审人称、时态，审要点）——列（列单词、词组）——连（连词成句，连句成篇）——查（全文检查）”的步骤写作，避免考试中漏点，行文逻辑混乱，低级错误频出的现象。6． 书面表达 某英文杂志正在进行My space hero的征文活动，假如你是该杂志的热心读者，你心目中的英雄是三次进入太空的航天员景海鹏。请你根据下面有关景海鹏的资料写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，参加征文活动(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。1. 1966年出生在山西运城，在空中安全飞行1200多个小时；2. 2008年9月和翟志刚、刘伯明执行神舟七号飞行任务；3. 2012年6月和刘旺、刘洋执行神舟九号飞行任务；4. 2016年10月17日和陈冬执行神舟十一号飞行任务，在太空驻足33天。My space heroMy space hero is Jing Haipeng. _______________________________________【答案】My space heroMy space hero is Jing Haipeng. Jing was born in Yuncheng, Shanxi in 1966. Jing has done many exciting things. He has flown in the sky safely for more than 1,200 hours. He has been to space three times. In September 2008, he took the Shenzhou-7 spaceship into space with Zhai Zhigang and Liu Boming. In June 2012 he took the Shenzhou-9 spaceship into space with Liu Wang and Liu Yang. On 17th October 2016, Jing took the Shenzhou-11 spaceship into space for the third time. He and Chen Dong stayed in space for thirty-three days.【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下我的太空英雄。所提供的材料中列举了你心目中的英雄是三次进入太空的航天员景海鹏。根据所给的景海鹏的资料，主要从1. 1966年出生在山西运城，在空中安全飞行1200多个小时；2. 2008年9月和翟志刚、刘伯明执行神舟七号飞行任务；3. 2012年6月和刘旺、刘洋执行神舟九号飞行任务；4. 2016年10月17日和陈冬执行神舟十一号飞行任务，在太空驻足33天。这四个方面去介绍。时态以一般过去时为主，人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】He has flown in the sky safely for more than 1,200 hours. 他已安全地在空中飞行了1200多小时。more than=over超过。本句话的语感较好。【高分句型二】 In September 2008, he took the Shenzhou-7 spaceship into space with Zhai Zhigang and Liu Boming. 2008年9月，他和翟志刚、刘伯明一起将神舟7号宇宙飞船送入太空。句子In September 2008在句子中做时间状语。7．书面表达 假如你们学校正在举办以Life on Mars为题的英语作文比赛，请你根据下面的提示写一篇80词左右的短文，参加这次比赛。提示：1. 工作日；2. 周末；3. 假期Life on Mars____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Life on MarsIn the future, Mars will be a good place for people to live in because people will produce enough air and water on Mars.What will life be like on Mars? Just like they’re on the earth, people will be busy with working and studying on weekdays. At weekends, they will relax by going to the park. During a long holiday, they’ll return to the earth by spaceship to visit their families and friends. Life on Mars will be very interesting【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下火星上的生活。所提供的材料中列举了工作日；周末；假期。主要从工作日；周末；假期这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时，人称为第二人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】In the future, Mars will be a good place for people to live in because people will produce enough air and water on Mars. 在未来，火星将是人们居住的好地方，因为人们将在火星上生产足够的空气和水。句子because people will produce enough air and water on Mars.是由because引导的原因状语从句。【高分句型二】During a long holiday, they’ll return to the earth by spaceship to visit their families and friends. 在长假期间，他们将乘宇宙飞船返回地球去探望他们的家人和朋友。During a long holiday是时间状语从句。一些同学赞同一些同学反对你自己的观点获得新的知识耗资巨大……从太空取得新资源宇航员的安全问题扩大人类的生存空间……总体感觉比地球生活更舒适、更有趣学习方面没有学校，通过电脑在网上学校学习生活方面有机器人帮助做大部分家务，有更多闲暇时间环境方面环境优美，处处是绿树鲜花，没有污染生活设施住宅附近有大型的超市，生活很方便