Module 4 Seeing the doctor话题作文 - 2023-2024学年八年级下册英语同步检测（外研版）

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Module 4 Seeing the doctor话题作文1．某英文网站正在开展以“我和家长一起锻炼”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你和家长经常一起做什么锻炼，锻炼的时间和地点，以及这种锻炼给你们带来的好处。写作要点：1. What sports do you and your parent(s) often do together?2. When and where do you and your parent(s) exercise?3. What benefits have you got from doing so?要求：1.短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在班级的名称；3.词数 80 左右。A person who takes exercise regularly will have a healthy body and be full of energy. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文：A person who takes exercise regularly will have a healthy body and be full of energy. So my parents and I often exercise together. We run together around the neighborhood every morning on weekdays. I play basketball with my father on the weekend. Sometimes my parents and I go swimming together in the swimming pool in the evening.Exercising together improves our relationship and mutual understanding. Our family is becoming happier and happier. Exercise makes us healthier.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，根据提示，介绍和父母经常做的锻炼；第二步，根据提示，介绍锻炼的时间和地点；第三步，介绍锻炼的好处。[亮点词汇]①on weekdays在工作日②go swimming去游泳[高分句型]①Exercising together improves our relationship and mutual understanding. (and表并列)②Our family is becoming happier and happier. (比较级+and+比较级)2．书面表达假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jill给你发来电子邮件，说她最近总是头疼，看过医生但是并未好转。请你根据以下提示，给她回复邮件。提示：1.描述Jill的病情；2.分析病因；3.给出建议：保证充足的睡眠并做运动；多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃肉……(至少补充1条)要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件格式和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jill,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hope you will be better soon.Yours,Li HuaDear Jill,I’m sorry to hear that you are getting headaches these days. You said you went to the doctor, but you didn’t feel better. From what you told me, I think it is because you’re too tired.Here is my advice. First, you should get enough sleep every day. And you should do sports. Second, you should eat more fruit and vegetables. Try to eat less meat. Third, try putting your feet in hot water for an hour before going to bed.Hope you will be better soon.Yours,【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题。回复电子邮件时，作者第一句I’m sorry to hear that you are getting headaches these days.开门见山，对于听说经常头疼的消息表示抱歉。然后把出现的情况原因说明一下。描述一下：看医生，但是感觉不好。接着给出几条建议：首先，保证睡眠充足；其次多吃水果和蔬菜，尽量少吃肉。再者，睡觉前用热水泡脚。最后祝福对方早点好起来。【点睛】电子邮件是书信的一种，对于对方的不好事情，先表明感觉难过。给对方提建议时，要有条理：先重后轻，依次讲明。最后送上祝愿早日康复。3．由于学习生活紧张，现在许多学生饮食随便、不爱运动、不讲卫生，对身体有很大危害，假如你是学校的一名校医，请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇简短的发言稿，给同学们提出一些建议和忠告。注意：1.词数不少于60；2.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.书面表达写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。How to Keep HealthyHello, everyone! __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文：How to Keep HealthyHello, everyone! Now I will give you some advice on how to keep healthy. Firstly, never eat unhealthy food. Fast food and junk food are bad for our health. We should eat green food. Secondly, do more exercise. Exercise can help us keep strong and active all day. It’s also good for our study. Thirdly, keep your room clean and keep the air in your room fresh. Stay away from the crowded places. If you do these, you’ll be healthy. Thanks for your listening!【详解】[总体分析]① 题材：这是一篇话题作文，为说明文；② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；③ 提示：本文要求围绕“如何保持健康”，对于“许多学生饮食随便、不爱运动、不讲卫生”给出建议，考生可以从饮食、运动、卫生三方面展开描述。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍发言的主题；第二步，介绍饮食、运动和卫生三个方面的建议；第三步，总结发言。[亮点词汇]① be bad for对……有害② keep strong and active保持强壮和活跃③ stay away from远离[高分句型]① Firstly, never eat unhealthy food.（祈使句）② If you do these, you’ll be healthy.（if引导条件状语从句）4．请结合你了解的健康知识，写一篇题目为“The Ways to Keep Healthy”的短文。注意：1. 语言表达要准确，内容要客观；2. 词数60—80。参考词汇：balanced diet 饮食平衡； stay up 熬夜 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文The Ways to Keep HealthyHealth is very important to every one of us. So it is necessary to know the ways to keep healthy.We should have a balanced diet. Fruit and vegetables are good for health, so we should eat lots of fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat too much every meal. And we should exercise every day to keep strong. We should also sleep for about 8 hours at night. Remember, it’s not good to stay up too late.If we follow the advice, I am sure we can keep healthy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：题目已给出，围绕“保持健康”写一篇60—80字的文章。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，首先介绍健康的重要性；第二步，具体阐述保持健康的方法，从饮食及锻炼两方面展开；最后一步，总结全文。[亮点词汇]①keep healthy 保持健康②be good for 对……有好处③follow the advice遵循建议[高分句型]①So it is necessary to know the ways to keep healthy.（it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语）②If we follow the advice, I am sure we can keep healthy.（If引导条件状语从句）5．书面表达假如你是董老师，你的学生王蒙今天因病没来上学。请你根据提示和要求给她发一封email，以示关心。提示： 1.不要着急，遵照医嘱休息、吃药；2.以后多锻炼，必须吃早餐，少吃零食，饮食平衡(have a balanced diet)；3.词数70个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。Dear Wang Meng,Are you feeling better now?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Mr. Dong范文Dear Wang Meng,Are you feeling better now? All of us are worrying about you. Please don't worry. We'll help you with your lessons. You'd better have a good rest at home and take medicine as the doctor told you. When you feel better, you should do more exercise and eat breakfast every day. Breakfast is very important for your health. Try to eat fewer snacks. Have a balanced diet and you'll be strong and healthy.Yours,Mr. Dong【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写电子邮件询问王蒙的病情，属于书信类写作。写信人首先表达关心Are you feeling better now，然后从休息、吃药、运动和饮食等方面提出建议。2.例文点评：本文是书信类写作，格式正确；以第一、二人称为主展开讲述，主要用的是一般现在时；内容充实，建议合理，表达流畅，是一篇优秀的习作。3.高分亮点：高分短语：all of us, worry about, had better, help sb. with sth., have a good rest, at home, take medicine, try to do, do more exercise, every day.高分句型：1). Please don't worry.（否定祈使句）2). When you feel better, you should do more exercise and eat breakfast every day.（时间状语从句结构）3). Have a balanced diet and you'll be strong and healthy.（“祈使句+ and +陈述句”结构）【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。范文中多种祈使句结构的运用，如Please don't worry./Try to eat fewer snacks./Have a balanced diet and you'll be strong and healthy.，给本文加分不少。6．假如你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语演讲比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：（1）保持快乐的心情；（2）努力学习；（3）积极参加体育锻炼。注意：（1）词数80词左右；（2）可以适当发挥想象，增加细节，使行文连贯；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends, we all want to grow happily and healthily. So we have to do some things._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dear friends, we all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.First, we should keep ourselves happy. Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to deal with problems. Next, we must study hard. The more knowledge we have, the more confident we will be. Finally, we have to do sports to keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will grow happily and healthily.【详解】这是一篇假如你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语演讲比赛。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。重点句型和短语：keep +形容词  保持……状态，be in trouble处于困境中，enough足够的，放在形容词/副词后面，the+比较级……，the+比较级……   越……就越……7．现在，中学生在校内能保证一定时间的运动量，但在校外普遍缺少运动甚至不运动。请就此现象写一篇短文。1. 缺少运动甚至不运动的原因；2. 缺少运动甚至不运动对学生的影响；3. 针对这种现象提出合理的改善建议。要求：1. 词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。参考词汇：be short of 缺少Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文：Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now. What should we do? Now let me take our school for example.Students spend much time doing homework. Playing computer games takes up their free time that is should be used for physical activities.It is quite clear that they are short of exercise. I really hope that the society and school will do something to change it and encourage all the students to go out to do some sports. Students should take part in doing sports as much as possible because health is important than anything else.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。[写作步骤]①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“现在的学生缺少运动”来引出下文中对该现象的介绍；②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“原因、影响和建议”三方面入手，重点介绍该现象；③第三步，书写结语。建议学生们多运动。[亮点词汇]①take sth for example 以某事为例②spend time in doing sth 花费时间做某事③take up 占用④do harm to sth 对某事有害⑤try one’s best to do sth尽力做某事⑥take part in 参加⑦as…as possible尽可能的……[高分句型]①Playing computer games takes up their free time that is should be used for physical activities.（that引导的定语从句）②I really hope that the society and school will do something to change it and encourage all the students to go out to do some sports.（that引导的宾语从句）③Students should take part in doing sports as much as possible because health is important than anything else.（because引导的原因状语从句）